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A simple step-by-step approach to writing
the IELTS Academic Task 1 essay
IELTS
Academic
Writing Task
1 Workout Graphs/Tables/Charts
Pearl Kempton, MA English/TESOL
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Overview of Task 1
You are presented with data in one or more graphs/ tables/ charts/ diagrams and are
asked to describe and summarize the information by selecting and reporting the
main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Remember, you are not
just describing what you see in the graph. You are analyzing and explaining
meaningful information from the data you see in the graph.
You must write at least 150 words. Aim for completing this task in 20 minutes.
You are scored in 4 areas:
Task Achievement
Do you address all points of the question? Do you present a clear overview of the main trends or features and compare relevant information?
Coherence & Cohesion
Do your ideas flow logically and are they linked together? Are your main ideas supported well?
Lexical Resources
Do you use a range of vocabulary for the topic and for describing patterns and trends?
Grammatical Structure & Accuracy
Do you write a variety of sentence structures?
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4- Paragraph Structure to follow for any graph/chart/table:
Write 150 words minimum. Aim for about 7 – 10 sentences.
NOTE: You do not need a concluding paragraph since your overview paragraph (2nd
paragraph) already summarizes the main points. Why do we put this as the 2nd
paragraph?
Because it’s central to your answer and essay, it helps you organize your
ideas right away when you’re planning your essay. It also makes it much
easier to write the last two detail paragraphs because you already know what
you have to write.
It explains things clearly for your reader and gives them an overview
understanding straight away of the data.
Strategically for time, you will have written the most important part of the
essay, just in case you were to run out of time. If you were to leave it for the
last paragraph and not finish it, you would cut out the most crucial part of this
essay.
•1 sentence that paraphrases the title of the graph/chart/table
1st Paragraph: Introduction
•2 - 3 sentences that state 2 main features/trends/patterns
2nd Paragraph: Overview/Summary
•2 - 4 sentences that state relevant and important data to support 1st main feature
3rd Paragraph: Detail Paragraph #1
•2 - 4 sentences that state relevant and important data to support 2nd main feature
4th Paragraph: Detail Paragraph #2
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7 Step Approach:
1. Read the task question carefully and underline key words. Look carefully
at the graph/chart/table, taking note of the labels and making sure you
understand the data and units of measurement.
2. Identify TWO main features/trends/patterns that are significant and jump
out at you.
You will highlight these two features. Think of how you can divide your
information by these two features. Look at data that show:
a. highs/lows; smallest/largest; peaks/lowest points
b. similar or different trends/patterns
c. contrasting (opposite) trends/patterns
d. slowest vs. fastest; steady vs. fluctuations in growth/decline
e. cross-overs; data surpassing other data
3. Choose the most relevant data and details to highlight for each main
feature/trend. You do not have to write about every point/data in the graph or
chart if there is a lot of data given, but you should probably start with
beginning numbers, the middle or peak/dip, cross-over points, and the ending
numbers.
4. Write a quick introduction. This is one sentence that paraphrases the Task
question and title/labels of the graph. Avoid copying the task question word for
word – you will lose points for this.
5. Write your overview/summary paragraph. This clearly highlights the main
trends/features/patterns of the chart or graph. This is especially important in
getting a high score band because it shows that you can explain meaningful
information from the graph, rather than just describing the data.
6. Write your first detail paragraph of the first feature.
7. Write your second detail paragraph of the second feature.
Write detail paragraphs (5 mins
each)
Write overview/summary paragraph (3 mins)
Write introduction (2 mins)
Read Task & Identify 2 main
features - Planning (5 mins)
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Example with One Graph/Chart/Table
Task 1
Spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The following chart shows the average house prices in Auckland by suburb in 2007
and 2012.
Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
House Prices in Auckland by Suburbs 2007 & 2012
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7 Step Approach:
1) Underline key words and read carefully. Look at labels carefully.
Here’s the task question again:
The following chart shows the average house prices in Auckland by suburb in 2007
and 2012.
2) Look for 2 main trends or features that stand out to you
Straight away I look at the highs and lows. I’ll divide the suburbs based on high
value suburbs (over 500K) and low value suburbs (under 500K). It’s a quick and
easy way to divide the information. The main trends that I’ve noticed are:
The high value suburbs that are above the $500,000 mark (Auckland North –
Albany & Birkenhead, Auckland Central – Eastern Suburbs, Auckland Central-
Mt Eden/Epsom) have dropped significantly in the 5 years
The low value suburbs well below the 500K level (Auckland Central City,
Auckland West, and Auckland South) have dropped in value only slightly in
comparison. In fact, I notice one low value suburb (Auckland Central City)
actually increased in value.
3) Choose the most relevant details to include. In particular I will write about
the huge drop in the Auckland Central - Eastern Suburbs and Mt Eden/Epsom
suburbs. I’ll also take note of the only rise in value for City Central.
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4) Write a quick introduction. This is a paraphrase of the graph labels and task
question. Indicate time periods and key labels. Have a look again:
Question:
The following chart shows the average house prices in Auckland by
suburb in 2007 and 2012.
House Prices in Auckland by Suburbs 2007 & 2012
I’ll paraphrase the task question and the title/labels that I circled in blue and write
one sentence:
The bar chart compares the changes in average house prices for the
North, Central, West and South suburbs of Auckland in 2007 and 2012.
Take note: I’ve added the larger suburb names to be more descriptive and specific
in the introduction, but I didn’t use all the small sub-names – I’ll save those for the
detail paragraphs. I’ve also indicated that there is a comparison between the two
years.
Good synonyms to use in the introduction for Task 1:
Chart / graph/ table/ bar chart
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Shows/ illustrates/ compares/provides information/ represents/ provides data
5) Write the overview/summary paragraph.
This should be 2 – 3 sentences. For the first sentence, I’ll write about the overall
trend of prices that I see as they have mostly declined from 2007 to 2012. I’ll then
write about the two trends that I identified about the high value and low value
suburbs and what the patterns are for each one.
(1) Overall, average house prices declined from 2007 to 2012. (2) Prices
in higher value suburbs of averages well above 500K dropped
significantly, whereas prices in lower value areas decreased
comparatively little, with the exception of one that rose slightly.
As you can see, I only wrote 2 sentences. Take note of the highlighted cohesive
devices that hold it together and clearly show the relationship of the 2 trends I
identified (they are different).
6) Write your detail paragraph for the first trend. Clearly state the most
significant numbers (biggest drop in value).
The affluent Auckland-North and Auckland-Central suburbs experienced
the most significant drops in prices. In particular, Eastern Suburbs lost
the most value of nearly 100K from 829K to 730,500 by 2012. Following
close behind was Mt Eden/Epsom, which lost roughly 150K to reach
577K in 2012, and Albany which lost around 70K ending at 590,000.
I wrote 3 sentences here. Note the vocabulary for describing movement (p.15):
Experienced significant drops = lost
Note some other vocabulary used here:
Affluent = wealthy
Following closed behind = introductory participial phrase
In particular, = specifically
Roughly, around = use approximations when you’re not using exact numbers
7) Write your detail paragraph for the second trend. Combine trends if
possible so include the suburb that actually rose in value with the low
value suburbs.
(1)In comparison, averages in low value suburbs declined only slightly.
(2)Auckland-West and Auckland-South, which were valued in the mid to
high 300Ks dipped about 30 – 40 K respectively. (3) Conversely,
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Auckland Central City, which had the lowest house value in 2007 at
312K, was the only suburb to actually increase in value, reaching 356,
250 in 2012.
I wrote 3 sentences here. The first sentence states a clear overall contrast
with high value suburbs. The second sentence gives data. The third sentence
gives details/data about the only suburb that increased in value. Take note of
vocabulary & cohesive devices I used here:
In comparison – to show its relationship to the other trend
Dipped – to lower or decline
Conversely - an adverb that introduces a statement that shows the
contrary
Respectively – this refers to the order of information previously given
to be the same order as information following
Final Essay:
The bar chart compares the changes in average house prices for the North, Central,
West and South suburbs of Auckland in 2007 and 2012.
Overall, average house prices declined from 2007 to 2012. Prices in higher value
suburbs of averages well above 500K dropped significantly, whereas prices in lower
value areas decreased comparatively little, with the exception of one that rose
slightly.
The affluent Auckland-North and Auckland-Central suburbs experienced the most
significant drop in prices. In particular, Eastern Suburbs lost the most value of nearly
100K from 829,000 to 730,500 by 2012. Following close behind were Mt Eden/
Epsom, which lost roughly 150K to reach 577,000 in 2012, and Albany which lost
roughly 70K ending at 590,000.
In comparison, averages in low value suburbs declined only slightly. Auckland-West
and Auckland-South, which were valued in the mid to high 300Ks dipped about 30 –
40 K respectively. Conversely, Auckland Central City, which had the lowest house
value in 2007 at 312,000, was the only suburb to actually increase in value, reaching
356,250 in 2012.
(172 words; 8 sentences)
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Example with 2 or more Graphs / Charts / Tables
Spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The following show the world traffic volume measured in passenger-kilometres by
mode of transport. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main
features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
World Traffic Volume
53% 29%
9%
9%
1990 - 23.4 trillion pkm
Automobiles
Buses
Railways
High-speed Transport
43%
26%
6%
25%
2020 - 53 trillion pkm
Automobiles
Buses
Railways
High-speed Transport
35%
20%
4%
41%
2050 - 103 trillion pkm
Automobiles
Buses
Railways
High-speed Transport
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7 Step Approach:
1) Underline key words and read carefully. Look at labels carefully.
2) Look for 2 main trends or features that stand out to you. Here’s what I see
straight away:
Green circles: Straight away I can see that the total volume nearly doubles
every 30 years.
Pink circles: I can see these modes of transport (automobiles, buses, and
railways) are projected to decrease.
Yellow circles: I can see this mode of transport (high-speed transport) is
projected to increase.
Take note of labels: pkm = passenger-kilometres
I’ll combine the information that increases together (circled in green & yellow) as one
trend, so I’ll have two trends to write about.
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3) Choose the most relevant details to include. As there are only 4
categories, I’ll include all of them. Since there is only one category that
increases, I’ll combine that information with the overall traffic increasing into
one detail paragraph. The other paragraph will be about the other modes of
transport that decrease.
4) Write a quick introduction. This is a paraphrase of the graph labels and task
question. Indicate time periods and key labels. Have a look at the question:
The following show the world traffic volume measured in passenger-
kilometres by mode of transport. Write a summary of the information.
Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
I’ll paraphrase the task question and the title/labels and write one sentence:
The pie charts show the volume of global traffic measured in passenger-
kilometres based on 4 major modes of transportation from 1990 to projections
for 2020 and 2050.
Take note:
I paraphrased “volume of global traffic” for “world traffic volume”
I added that the charts are based on 4 modes of transportation (that I got
from the labels)
I indicated the years. I also specified there are projections all in one
sentence.
5) Write the Overview/Summary Paragraph
This should be 2 – 3 sentences. I’ll start with the overall trend of the passenger-
kilometres. Then I’ll contrast the different modes of transportation that increase and
decrease.
Overall, it is clear that the total traffic volume is estimated to balloon in the
next 40 years. In particular, higher speed transport will increase in popularity,
while traditional modes of transportation are projected to decline significantly.
I wrote 2 sentences. Take note of the highlighted cohesive devices that hold it
together and clearly show the relationship of the 2 trends I identified (they are
different). Some vocabulary to show the future:
To be projected to (verb) (i.e. projected to decline)
To be estimated to (verb) (i.e. estimated to balloon)
To be expected to (verb) (i.e. estimated to nearly double)
Will (verb) (i.e. will increase)
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6) Write your detail paragraph for the first trend. Clearly state the most
significant numbers (biggest drop in value).
Traffic volume is estimated to nearly double every 30 years, from 23.4
trillion pkm in 1990, to 53 trillion in 2020, reaching 103 trillion by 2050. High-
speed transport, which had only 9% market share in 1990, will become the
most used mode of transport at 41% by 2050.
I wrote 2 sentences - one to talk about the overall trend and the second one to
address the growth of high-speed transportation. I included most of the data
numbers, making sure I included the numbers for the beginning of the period
(1990) and the final period (2050).
7) Write your detail paragraph for the second trend. Clearly state the
numbers in terms of how much they have dropped and vary how you
state it.
On the other hand, traditional modes are projected to decline, with the most
noticeable drop in use of automobiles, which will lose roughly 20% market
share from 53% in 1990 to 35% in 2050. Similarly, buses will lose about half
its share from 9% to a scant 4%. Railways will also drop from 29% to 20% in
2050.
Take note:
Use of prepositional phrases as adverbs: “with the most noticeable drop in
use of automobiles”
Scant (adj) = slight, barely sufficient in amount or quantity
Vocabulary to deal with percentages = “about half”
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My Final Essay:
The pie charts show the volume of global traffic measured in passenger-kilometres
based on 4 major modes of transportation from 1990 to projections for 2020 and
2050.
Overall, it is clear that the total traffic volume will balloon by 2050. In particular, high
speed transport will greatly increase in popularity, while traditional modes of
transportation are expected to decline significantly.
Traffic volume is estimated to nearly double every 30 years, from 23.4 trillion pkm in
1990, to 53 trillion in 2020, reaching 103 trillion by 2050. High-speed transport, which
had only 9% market share in 1990, will become the most used mode of transport at
41% by 2050.
On the other hand, traditional modes are projected to decline, with the most
noticeable drop in use of automobiles, which will lose roughly 20% market share
from 53% in 1990 to 35% in 2050. Similarly, buses will lose about half its share from
9% to a scant 4%. Railways will also lose nearly 10% from 29% to 20% in 2050.
(168 words; 8 sentences)
Assessment:
Task achievement
I gave a clear overview of meaningful information and supported it with accurate details.
Coherence and cohesion
Because I planned out my essay, it flows logically and each paragraph is clearly centred around a main topic. I used cohesive devices appropriately (not too many and not too little).
Lexical Range
I used a range of high-level vocabulary – both in describing movements & trends as well as topical vocabulary regarding transportation.
Grammatical Structure &
Accuracy
I used complex sentence structures and wrote a variety of sentences.
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Additional Resources on Vocabulary
Transitional Words/Cohesive Devices useful for Task 1 essays
Meaning
Useful Vocabulary
Adding
Also, and, in addition, furthermore, moreover, what is more, not only . . . but also, as well as
Comparing and contrasting
In comparison, whereas, while, meanwhile, however, but, although, on the other hand, in contrast, on the contrary, conversely
Highlight Significance
In particular, particularly, especially, specifically
Ordering/time/sequence
First, second (etc.), next, then, finally, before, after, when, during, from that point, from then on, from there, until then, until that point, initially, following this, while, meanwhile
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Useful words that describe movement, patterns or trends
Meaning of a Movement/Trend
Synonyms
Nouns
Verbs
Go up/ to become a great number (upwards trend)
rise increase; growth; swell; jump; peak spike a high of ;
rose increased grew; swelled; jumped peaked; reached/hit a peak soared, surged, spiked skyrocketed doubled (2x) tripled (3x) ballooned
Go down/ to become lesser in number (downwards trend)
decline decrease dip drop fall
declined decreased dipped; took a dip dropped fell plunged plummeted hit a low bottomed out
Stay the same
stability plateau
stabilized remained stable/steady plateaued levelled out/off
Go up and down
fluctuation; varied
fluctuated, varied
To pass another level/point
surpassed overtook exceeded
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Words that describe the extent and manner of the
movement or trend
Large extent of movement
Small extent of movement
Adverbs
Adjectives
Adverbs
Adjectives
significantly significant slightly slight
dramatically dramatic Insignificantly insignificant
considerably considerable small; little; minor; scant
notably notable negligibly negligible
markedly marked slowly slow
sharply sharp
hugely; massively huge; massive
massively massive
rapidly; quickly rapid; quick/fast
Manner of movement
Adjective
Adverb
steady steadily
constant constantly
consistent consistently
moderate moderately
regular regularly
frequent frequently
sporadic sporadically