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Imagine that you could give advice to someone—it could be someone you know personally, a historical figure, or a famous person living today.
Write an essay that identifies the person and explains the advice you would give. Choose a familiar subject so that you can provide details and elaboration that explain why this person needs your advice.
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Think about a person you would Think about a person you would give advice to and why.give advice to and why.
Think about a person you would Think about a person you would give advice to and why.give advice to and why.
Once you have gathered several ideas on both sides, decide which information is the strongest. Then, move on to develop your thesis statement.
Person Why?
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Use your ideas to develop a strong Use your ideas to develop a strong Thesis StatementThesis Statement..
Use your ideas to develop a strong Use your ideas to develop a strong Thesis StatementThesis Statement..
A person I would love to give advice to is ____________ because ____________, __________, and ___________.
Will an implied thesis work for
your style? Kick it up!
Kick it up!_______ would definitely benefit by
the valuable advice I could provide.Revise:Did you choose the best ideas?Are there any words you can replace with stronger word choices?
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