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IMPROVING THE STUDENTS’ WRITING SKILLS USING
SOMATIC AUDITORY VISUAL INTELLECTUAL (SAVI)
METHOD IN DESCRIPTIVE TEXT (A Classroom Action
Research at the First Grade Students of SMK SARASWATI
Salatiga in the Academic Year of 2018/2019)
A GRADUATING PAPER
Submitted to the Board of Examiners as a Partial Fulfillment of the
Requirements for the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan (S.Pd.)
By:
LAELA ULYANINGRUM
NIM.11314048
ENGLISH EDUCATION DEPARTMENT
TEACHER TRAINING AND EDUCATION FACULTY
STATE INSTITUTE FOR ISLAMIC STUDIES (IAIN)
SALATIGA
2018
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MOTTO
―For indeed, with hardship (will be) ease. Indeed, with hardship (will be) ease.‖
(The Holy Quran, Al-Insyirah: 5-6)
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DEDICATION
This graduating paper is dedicated to:
1. My Lord, Allah SWT who always bless me and listen to all my wishes.
2. My beloved parents, my father (Mundirin) and my mother (Laras
Ristiyani) who always pray, guide and give me support to finish this
graduating paper.
3. Thanks for my honorable consultant (Mr. Hammam Ph.D) who always
guides me patiently and suggests in accomplishing thesis.
4. All of lectures of Education Faculty State Institute for Islamic Studies
(IAIN) Salatiga.
5. All of big family of SMK Saraswati Salatiga, all of the teachers especially
Mrs. Desyta Setyaningrum S.Pd. and the students of X LI.
6. My lovely best friends ‗HETTI‘ (Hanik, Shintiya, Tari, Ira) and Isna
Anisa. Thank you so much for support.
7. My big family of TBI 2014.
8. All of my beloved people who can not be mentioned one by one.
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ACKNOWLEDMENT
Assalamualaikum Wr. Wb
In the name of Allah SWT, the Most Gracious and the Most Merciful.
Thank you to Allah because the researcher could complete this graduating paper
as one of requirement to for the Degree of Sarjana Pendidikan (S.Pd.) in English
Department of States for Institute Islamic Studies (IAIN) Salatiga. Shalawat is
also devoted to Prophet Muhammad SAW who has guided us from the darkness
into the lightness.
The researcher relizes that this graduating paper will not be able to be
finished without support, guidance, advice, help and encouragement from some
people and institution. Therefore, the researcher would like to express special
thanks to :
1. Dr. Rahmat Haryadi, M.Pd. as the Rector of State Institute for Islamic
Studies (IAIN) of Salatiga.
2. Suwardi, M.Pd. as the Dean of Teacher Training and Education Faculty of
State Institute for Islamic Studies (IAIN) Salatiga.
3. Noor Malihah, Ph.D. as the Head of English Education Department of
State Institute for Islamic Studies (IAIN) Salatiga.
4. Hammam, Ph.D. as the counselor who gives great attenttion, support,
correction, advice, suggestion and guidance for this graduating paper from
beginning until the end. Thanks your patience and care.
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ABSTRACT
Ulyaningrum, Laela. 2018. Improving the Students’ Writing Skills Using Somatic
Auditory Visual Intellectual (SAVI) Method in Descriptive Text
(A Classroom Action Research at the First Grade Students of
SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the Academic Year of 2018/2019). A
Graduating Paper, English Education Department, Teacher
Training and Education Faculty, State Institute for Islamic
Studies (IAIN) Salatiga. Counselor: Hammam Ph.D.
Keywords: writing, SAVI method, descriptive text.
The objectives of the study are: (1) To find out the use of Somatic
Auditory Visual Intellectual (SAVI) method to improve students‘ writing skill in
descriptive text. (2) To find out the result of Somatic Auditory Visual Intellectual
(SAVI) method to improve students‘ writing skill in descriptive text at the first
grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the academic year of 2018/2019.
The methodology of this research was Classroom Action Research (CAR).
The research consisted of two cycles and each cycle consisted of four steps, they
were: planning, acting, observing, and reflecting. The subject of this research was
X LI class, which consists of 36 students. The technique of collecting data was the
observation, test and documentation.
The result of this research shows that (1) the implementation of SAVI
method to improve the students‘ writing skills in descriptive text is succesful. It is
shown from the teacher implemented Somatic, Auditory, Visual, Intellectual in
teaching learning process. The students give good responses and do all the
instructions during teaching learning process. (2) The result of using SAVI method
can improve writing skills in descriptive text for the first grade students of SMK
Saraswati Salatiga. It can be seen from the students‘ mean of pre-test, post-test
and the calculation of t-test in two cycles. The students‘ mean of pre-test and post-
test cycle I are 57,694 and 76,027. The students‘ mean of pre-test and post-test
cycle II are 63,027 and 81,138. The mean of post-test is higher than the mean of
pre-test. It means that there is an improvement between pre-test and post-test in
cycle I and cycle II. The researcher uses the significant level as many 5%. The
value of T-table with N-1 is 2,030. After calculating the students‘ score, the
researcher find that the value of T-test cycle I and cycle II are 12,722 and 14,231.
In cycle I, the value of T-test is higher than the value of T-table, it is 12,722 >
2,030. In cycle II, the value of T-test is higher than value of T-table, it is 14,231 >
2,030. In addition, the precentage of students who pass the passing grade (KKM)
in cycle I is 78% and in cycle II is 88,9%. From the result, the researcher
concluded that using SAVI method can improve writing skills in descriptive text
for first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga.
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TABLE OF CONTENS
TITLE .................................................................................................................... i
DECLARATION ................................................................................................... ii
ATTENTIVE COUNSELOR NOTES ............................................................... iii
BOARD OF EXAMINERS ................................................................................. iv
MOTTO .................................................................................................................. v
DEDICATION ..................................................................................................... vi
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT .................................................................................. vii
ABSTRACT .......................................................................................................... ix
TABLE OF CONTENTS ....................................................................................... x
LIST OF FIGURES ........................................................................................... xiv
LIST OF TABLES ............................................................................................... xv
CHAPTER I: INTRODUCTION
A. Background of the Research .................................................................. 1
B. Research Questions ................................................................................ 4
C. Objectives of the Research ..................................................................... 4
D. Significances of the Research ................................................................ 4
E. Hypothesis and Succes Indicator............................................................ 5
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F. Research Methodology ........................................................................... 6
1. Research Design ............................................................................... 6
2. Subject of the Research .................................................................... 8
3. Steps of the Research ...................................................................... 10
4. Technique of Data Collection and Research Instrument ................ 11
5. Data Analyis ................................................................................... 13
G. Graduating Paper Outline .................................................................... 17
CHAPTER II: LITERATURE REVIEW
A. Theoretical Framework ........................................................................ 19
1. Writing ............................................................................................ 19
a. Definition of Writing ................................................................ 19
b. Process of Writing Writing ...................................................... 20
c. Notion of Good Writing ........................................................... 22
d. Teaching Writing ..................................................................... 23
2. Descriptive Text .............................................................................. 24
a. Definition of Descriptive Text ................................................. 24
b. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text ..................................... 25
c. Grammatical Features of Descriptive Text .............................. 26
d. Types of Descriptive Text ........................................................ 26
e. The Example of Descriptive Text ............................................ 28
3. SAVI Method .................................................................................. 28
a. Definition of SAVI Method ..................................................... 28
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b. Components of SAVI Method ................................................. 29
c. The Implementation of SAVI Method ..................................... 30
B. Previous Researches ............................................................................. 31
CHAPTER III: IMPLEMENTATION OF RESERCH
A. Procedures of the Research .................................................................. 35
1. Cycle I ............................................................................................. 35
a. Planning .................................................................................... 35
b. Acting ....................................................................................... 36
c. Observing ................................................................................. 37
d. Reflecting ................................................................................. 37
2. Cycle II ............................................................................................ 37
a. Planning .................................................................................... 37
b. Acting ....................................................................................... 38
c. Observing ................................................................................. 39
d. Reflecting ................................................................................. 39
CHAPTER IV: RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DATA ANLYSIS
A. Result of the Research......................................................................... 40
1. Research Findings ........................................................................... 40
a. Cycle I ...................................................................................... 40
b. Cycle II ..................................................................................... 54
2. Discussions ...................................................................................... 67
CHAPTER V: CLOSURE
A. Conclussion ......................................................................................... 69
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B. Suggestion ........................................................................................... 70
1. For the Teacher................................................................................ 70
2. For the Students ............................................................................... 71
3. For the Feature Researcher .............................................................. 66
REFERENCES
CURRICULUM VITAE
APPENDICES
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LIST OF FIGURES
Figure 1.1 Steps of Classroom Action Research Model by Kemmis Mc Taggart...7
Figure 2.1 Harmer‘s Writing Process.....................................................................20
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LIST OF TABLES
Table 1.1 List of Students Name of XLI Class of SMK Saraswati Salatiga ............ 8
Table 1.2 Research Schedule ................................................................................. 10
Table 1.3 Students‘ Observation Checklist ............................................................ 11
Table 1.4 Teacher‘ Observaton Checklist .............................................................. 11
Table 1.5 Analytical Scoring of Writing ................................................................ 16
Table 2.1 Example of Descriptive Text ................................................................. 28
Table 4.1 Form of Result Students‘ Observation Checklist Cycle I ...................... 44
Table 4.2 Form of Result Teacher Observation Checklist Cycle I ........................ 45
Table 4.3 Students‘ Score of Pre-test Cycle I ........................................................ 45
Table 4.4 The Precentages of Students Score Pre-test in Cycle I .......................... 47
Table 4.5 Students‘ Score of Post-test Cycle I ....................................................... 47
Table 4.6 The Students‘ Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle I ........................... 48
Table 4.7 The Differences Between Students‘ Score of Pre-test and Post-test
Cycle I.................................................................................................... 49
Table 4.8 Form of Result Students Observation Checklist Cycle II ...................... 58
Table 4.9 Form of Result Teacher‘s Observation Checklist Cycle II .................... 58
Table 4.10 Students‘ Score of Pre-test Cycle II ..................................................... 60
Table 4.11 The Precentages of Students Score Post-test in Cycle I ....................... 60
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Table 4.12 Students‘ Score of Pre-test Cycle II ..................................................... 61
Table 4.13 The Precentages of Students Score Pre-test in Cycle II ....................... 62
Table 4.14 The Differences Between Students‘ Score of Pre-test and Post-test
Cycle II ............................................................................................... 62
Table 4.8 The Students‘ Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle II .......................... 55
Table 4.10 The Precentages of Students Score Post-test in Cycle II ..................... 60
Table 4.11 Table of Data Analysis ......................................................................... 68
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
In this chapter, the researcher presents the background of the research,
research questions, objectives of the research, significances of the research,
hypothesis and success indicator, research methodology and graduating paper
outlines.
A. Background of the Research
English is very important to be learned, because it becomes
international language. Many people in the world use English to communicate
with each other. English is not only for education, but it is also for
occupation, travel, bussiness and etc. English helps the people to get new
knowledges and experiences. Most of people use technology to communicate
to other and share their ideas. So, they will be easier to get informations from
the world. In Indonesia, English is as a foreign language. Therefore, the
people should be dilligent to learn English in order to master it well. It is also
taught in the school as one of important lesson.
Nowadays, the students are taught English from Elementary School up
to University level. It will help the students to master English. Talking about
English, it has four components of English skills, they are writing, reading,
listening and speaking that must be mastered.
According to Richard and Renandya (2002:303), stated that writing is
the most difficult skills for learners to master. It is caused by the fact that
writing needs to organize ideas using vocabulary, language use and
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mechanics. It is also needs to translate the ideas into a readable text for
foreign language students. Writing is one of the English skills that must be
learned by Senior High School students. In writing, the students can express
their ideas, feelings and experiences. The students can create a composition
from their written. Through writing, it helps the students to focus on the
grammatical structure, improve the students‘ vocabulary, and assist other
language skills such as reading, listening and speaking. Writing helps
students to understand a text.
Based on the interview with English teacher of X LI class Mrs. Desita,
the researcher asked some questions. The first question is about the most
difficult skills in English lesson for students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga. The
teacher said that writing is the most difficult skills to be learned.
The second question is about the difficulties are faced by the students in
writing. The teacher gave explanation that the students don‘t have an idea to
write, they get difficulty to compose a sentence, they have lack on
vocabularies, and low ability in grammar. The students are also not active in
teaching learning process.
The third question is about Standardized of Minimum Score (KKM) of
English subject and the Curriculum that is used for first grade students of
SMK Saraswati Salatiga. The teacher said that Standard of Minimum Score
(KKM) of English subject is 72, and the curriculum uses 2013 Curriculum.
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The conclusion of the interview that, the students are poor in writing
skill. Many students have problems in organizing ideas into paragraph, lack
vocabularies, grammatical function and they don‘t be active in teaching
learning. The students need a suitable method to organize learning process. A
good method will help the students understand the lesson easier.
Based on the problems of writing above, every teacher should practice
appropriate method in teaching English to solve the problems. The students
have to active and collaborate in teaching learning process. Teaching learning
process is influenced by the situation. Interaction between teacher and
students is core of teaching learning process. The researcher applies SAVI
method as a solution to teach writing skill. According to Dave Meier
(2000:42), SAVI learning is not only stand up and move around, but
combining physical movement with intellectual activity and the use of all the
senses that will get a profound effect on learning. The researcher expects that
SAVI method will make teaching and learning activities become enjoy, so the
students are able get the material easily.
In this research the researcher focuses on the material of descriptive
text. Descriptive text is a text that presents the characteristics of something in
order to make clear a person, animal, event and place. Descriptive text is a
kind of text that describes something.
Based on the explanation above, the researcher decided to conduct a
research entitled ―IMPROVING THE STUDENTS’ WRITING SKILLS
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USING SAVI METHOD IN DESCRIPTIVE TEXT” (A classroom Action
Research at the First Grade Students of SMK SARASWATI Salatiga in the
Academic Year of 2018/2019).
B. Research Questions
1. How is the use of SAVI method to improve students‘ writing skill in
descriptive text at the first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the
academic year of 2018/2019?
2. What is the result of SAVI method to improve students‘ writing skill in
descriptive text at the first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the
academic year of 2018/2019?
C. Objectives of the Research
1. To find out the use of SAVI method to the improve students‘ writing skill
in descriptive text at the first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga
in the academic year of 2018/2019.
2. To find out the result of SAVI method to improve the students‘ writing
skill in descriptive text at the first grade students of SMK Saraswati
Salatiga in the academic year of 2018/2019.
D. Significance of the Research
Through this classroom action research, the researcher expects that SAVI
method be useful for some points in teaching learning English process. The
significance of the research will be useful for teachers, the students, the
reseacher, and the other reseracher.
1. For the teachers
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The result of this research is useful for English teachers at Senior
High School level to get information about teaching writing descriptive
text using SAVI method.
2. For the students
This research can help the students to solve the problems in writing
descriptive text and improve their skills in writing.
3. For the researcher
This research can be used as one of the references in conducting
the research on English language teaching, especially in the
implementation of SAVI method.
4. For the other researcher
The researcher hopes that the result of this research can be used as
a reference for other researchers. The researcher wishes this research can
motivate them to do other research.
E. Hypothesis and Success Indicator
Based on the interview with English teacher of SMK Saraswati Salatiga
especially first grade, the students have problems of writing in organizing
ideas into the paragraph, difficulty to translate the meaning, and grammatical
function. The researcher tries to overcome those problems by implementing
SAVI method. By conducting the research, the researcher proposes a
hypothesis: using SAVI method can improve writing skills in descriptive text.
The success indicator of this research is taken from the students‘ Basic
Competence that is shown in Lesson Plan (RPP). The students‘ success and
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failure in doing the activities in cycle I and II will be assessed by referring to
the criterion of the passing grade (KKM). The Passing grade of English
lesson of descriptive text in SMK Saraswati Salatiga is 72. The teacher and
the researcher expect that there are at least 85% of the students who pass the
passing grade.
F. Research Methodology
1. Research Design
This research is Classroom Action Research (CAR). Classroom
Action Research is a research to solve the problem in the class. This
research is inquiry in the context of focused efforts to improve the quality
and the performance of students. Action Research aims to identify a
problematic situation or issue that the participants are teachers, students,
managers, administrator, or even parents (Burns, 2010 : 2). The researcher
uses Classroom Action Research because the researcher wants to know
the improvement and the influence of using SAVI method in improving
writing skills in descriptive text. This sresearch uses model proposed by
Kemmis and Mc Taggart in Burn (2010: 8), which consists of four steps,
namely,planning, acting, observing, and reflecting.
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Figure 1.1 Steps of Classroom Action Research Model by Kemmis Mc Taggart as
cited by Burn (2010: 8)
Action research consists of cycles. There are four steps process
in each cycle for doing classroom action research. Those steps can be
explained as follows:
a. Planning
In this step, planning is a plan before the researcher does the
research. The researcher formulates some procedural acts how to
improve writing skills in descriptive text using SAVI method. The
procedures are put in two lesson plans.
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b. Acting
In this step, the teaching method will be applied in learning
process.
c. Observing
The researcher observes the teaching and learning process. In
this stage, the researcher prepares the observation checklist to
know the class condition when the action is done.
d. Reflecting
Reflecting means to analyze the result based on the data that
has been collected to determine the next action in the next cycle.
2. The Subject of the Research
The subject of this research is X LI class of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in
the academic year of 2018/2019. It consists of 36 students and Mrs. Desita
is as the teacher in this class.
Table 1.1 List of the Students’ Name of X LI Class of SMK Saraswati Salatiga
No Students’ Name
1. AM
2. AR
3. AAR
4. ASM
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5. AA
6. AEP
7. DBS
8. DSN
9. DPP
10. DJ
11. FATK
12. FAA
13. HAFI
14. HI
15. HIP
16. JFEP
17. KAP
18. LUW
19. MFN
20. MP
21. MQ
22. NS
23. NAR
24. PA
25. RDS
26. RSK
27. RMS
28. RDS
29. R
30. SE
31. S
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32. TAW
33. VDETA
34. WEP
35. WSA
36. YJAP
3. Steps of the Research
In conducting the research, the researcher carries out the steps which
summarize in the following research schedule. The table of research schedule is
written below:
Table 1.2 Research Schedule
No Date and Time Activities Place and Time
1. April 07th
2018 Observation Teacher room SMK
Saraswati Salatiga
2. July 17th
2018 Giving the letter
Teacher room SMK
Saraswati Salatiga
3. July 28th
2018 Meet the English teacher to do
consult the lesson plan.
Teacher room SMK
Saraswati Salatiga
4. August 1th
2018 Doing action in the class (cycle 1)
Pre-test, treatment
In the classroom
XLI
5. August 4th
2018 Doing action in the class (cycle 1)
treatment, post-test
In the classroom
XLI
6. August 8th
2018 Doing action in the class (cycle 2)
Pre-test, treatment
In the classroom
XLI
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7. August 9th
2018 Doing action in the class (cycle 2)
treatment, post-test
In the classroom
XLI
4. Technique of Data Collection and Research Instrument
a. Observation
In this research, the researcher observes the learning process. The
students are taught by the teacher and the researcher just observes the
learning process. The observation consists of two cycle. The
researcher uses the observation checklist which consists of students
and teacher. The researcher uses mark ―√‖ to fill the observation
checklist. The students‘ observation checklist is written below:
Tabel 1.3 Students’ Observation Checklist
No The Students‘ Activity Yes No Description
1. Paying Attantion
2. Asking Question
3. Responding to Question
4. Accomplishing Task
5. Being enthusiastic in
Implementation of SAVI
methode
The next is teachers‘ observation checklist that is used to observe
the teacher activity in the learning process. The teachers‘ observation
checklist is written below:
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Table 1.4 Teachers’ Observation Checklist
No The Teacher‘s Activity Yes No Description
1. Preparing the material well
2. Greeting students before the
lesson begin
3. The teacher checking
students‘ attendant
4. Giving motivation
5. Reminding previous material
6. Giving an explanation of the
material
7. Using SAVI method to teach
writing descriptive text
8. Giving opportunity for
asking the question
9. Help the students‘
difficulties in learning
10. Giving feedback after the
lesson
b. Test
In this research, the researcher uses pre-test and post-test. Both
of test will be explained as follows:
1) Pre-test
The pre-test is given to the students before the teacher uses the
SAVI method in teaching learning process. The aim of pre-test is
to know the students writing skills before treatment.
2) Post-test
Post-test is given to the students after the SAVI method is
implemented. The aim of the post-test is to know the
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improvement of writing skills in descriptive text after they get a
treatment.
c. Documentation
The researher uses documentation which relate with this research.
The researcher needs documentations of teaching learning process and
the list of students‘ name. In this research, the research uses photos as
the documentation of the research.
5. Data Analysis
In this research, the researcher uses quantitative and qualitative for
analyzing data.
a. Qualitative Data
According to Kothari (2004: 3), qualitative research is especially
important in the behavioral sciences where the aim is to discover the
underlying motives of human behavior. In this research, the data of
observation checklist is analyzed by qualitative such as the interaction
of the students and the teacher, students‘ response, students‘ activities
and teacher‘ activities.
b. Quantitative Data
According to Kothari (2004: 3), quantitative research is process
based on the measurement of quantity or amount. The researcher uses
quantitative to process the data. In processing the data, there are
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calculating and scoring the test. The process will be presented as
follows:
1) Calculating the Data
According to Sudijono (2010: 86), to calculate the mean of pre-
test and post-test, the researcher uses the following formula:
a) Mean of Pre-test and Post-test
M =
Explanation:
M = Mean of the students‘ score
= Sum of the students‘ score
= Number of students
According to Sudijono (2010: 305-307), to calculate t-test,
the researcher used the following formula:
b) Calculating Mean of Difference
MD =
Explanation:
M = Mean of Difference
∑D = Total of difference between pre-test of post-test
N = Number of students
b) Calculating Standard Deviataion
SDD = )2
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Explanation:
SDD = Standard Deviation
D = Defference between pre-test and post-test
N = Number of students
c) Standard Error Mean Difference
SEMD =
Explanation:
SEMD = Standard Error Mean Difference
SDD = Standard Deviation
N = Number of students
d) T-test Calculation
The reseracher used t-test to know wether any significant
differences between pre-test and post-test. The formula is:
T0 =
Explanation:
T0 = t-value of observation
MD = Mean of difference
SEMD = Standard error of mean difference
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2) Score the Students‘ Test
The researcher uses an analytical rubric scoring to analyze the
data. There are five components in the analytical scoring rubric for
writing. They are content, organization, vocabulary, language use,
and mechanics (Jacob in Weigle 2002: 116) (see appendix 2).
Table 1.5 Analytical Scoring of Writing Addapted by H. Jacob in Weigle,S.C (2002:
116)
Aspects of
Writing
Quality Level Criteria Score
Content Excellent to
very good
30-27 Good development of students‘
writing and relevant to assigned
topic
Good to
average
26-22 Limited development of
students‘ writing, most relevant
to the topic but lacks detail
Fair to poor 21-17 Limited knowledge of subject
and minimally focused on the
topic
Very poor 16-13 Ideas are unclear
Organization/
Form
Excellent to
very good
20-18 Ideas clearly stated and well
organized, satisfactory use of
cohesion
Good to
average
17-14 Loosely organized but main idea
stand out, somewhat copy
Fair to poor 13-10 Lack of logical sequencing and
development of ideas
Very poor 9-7 Does not communicate, no
organization
Style/
Vocabulary
Excellent to
very good
20-18 Use variety of vocabulary and
idiomatic expression
Good to
average
17-14 Varies vocabulary and
expression, but makes occasional
errors in word choice
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Fair to poor 13-10 Use limited vocabulary with
frequent errors
Very poor 9-7 Have many errors in vocabulary
usage, even at the baisc level
Language
Use
Excellent to
very good
25-22 Use effective complex grammar
structures with few errors of
agreement
Good to
average
21-18 Use effective complex sentences
with several errors of agreement
Fair to poor 17-11 Use simple sentence in frequent
errors in tense, agreement and
meaning is confused
Very poor 10-5 Use simple sentences dominated
with errors
Mechanics Excellent to
very good
5 Use good accuracy in
punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Good to
average
4 Occasionally errors in
punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Fair to poor 3 Frequentt errors in punctuation,
capitalization, and spelling
Very poor 2 Dominated errors in punctuation,
capitalization, and spelling
Total Score
G. Organization of the Graduating Paper
This graduating paper outline is composed systematically into five
chapters as follows:
Chapter I is an Introduction. This chapter consists of the background of the
research, research question, objectives of the research, significances of the
research, hypothesis and success indicator, research methodology, and
graduating paper outlines.
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Chapter II is the Theoretical Framework. This chapter consists of
supporting theories and the review of previous research.
Chapter III is the Implementation of the Research.This chapter consists of
procedure of the research.
Chapter IV is Research Findings and Data Analysis. This chapter consists
the result of the research about the improvement and the significant influence
of writing skills in descriptive text using SAVI method for first grade students
of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the academic year of 2018/2019.
Chapter V is Closure. This chapter consists of the conclusions and
suggestions of the research based on the analysis in chapter four. The
conclusions state the answer to the research questions about the
implementation and the result of writing skills in descriptive text using SAVI
method. After that, it is followed by Bibliography and Appendices.
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CHAPTER II
LITERATURE REVIEW
In this chapter consists of theoritical framework and previous research.
Supporting theories describe some information involving: writing, descriptive
text, and SAVI method.
A. Theoretical Framework
1. Writing
a. Definition of Writing
According to Brown (2001:336), writing is a thinking process. It
means that writing is a process of putting ideas on a paper. Other
opinion according to Raimes (1983:76), writing is a skill to express
ideas, feeling which is to be arranged in words, sentences and
paragraph. So, writing is an activity which putting an idea, opinion
and argument to express someone feeling. Writing has a purpose to
express about something and to communicate with other. Jeremy
Harmer (2004:31), said that ―writing as one of the four skills of
listening, speaking, reading and writing has always formed part of
the syllabus in the teaching of English.‖ It means that every students
will get writing lesson in their school. They can create a composition
through writing. In addition to express about ideas, writing also
reinforces grammar and vocabulary. The students learn grammar and
vocabulary from writing lesson.
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b. Process of Writing
Writing is not only oriented on product, but it is also on the
process. There are four steps of writing process which is stated by
Harmer (2004 : 4) ―planning, drafting, editing (reflecting and
revising) and final draft.‖ The steps of process writing are explained
as follows:
Figure 2.1 Harmer’s Writing Process
1) Planning
Before starting to write or type, the writers try and decide
what is they are going to say. For some writers, perhaps they
have to make detail note.
When planning, the writers have to think about three
main issues. In the first, they have to consider the purpose of the
writing. Secondly, the writers think of the audience. They
choose of language (formal or informal). Thirdly, the writers
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have to consider the content structure of the piece. They decided
the facts, ideas, arguments that will be included.
2) Drafting
The next step is drafting. The writer can refer to the first
version of a piece of paper as a draft. This draft at a text is often
done in the assumption that it will be amended later. As the
writing process proceeds into ediitng, a number of drafts may be
produced on the way to final version.
3) Editing (Reflecting and revising)
The written that has been produced by writer, it will be
revised if the information is not clear, ambiguous or confusing.
The writer check for good form, organization, grammar,
punctuation and spelling. The writer will be helped by reader
who comment and make suggestions.
4) Final Version
The writers have edited their draft, making the changes
what they needed. They produce their final version. Perhaps it
looks considerably different from both the original plan and the
first draft, because things have changed in the editing process.
However, the writers are now ready to send the written text to
audience. The writers might decide to represent these stages in
the following way: ―planning- drafting – editing – final draft‖.
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Brown (2001: 335-336) stated that the process appropriate to
writing instruction. The instructions are mentioned as follows:
1. Focus on the process of writing that leads to final written
product.
2. Help student writers to understand their own composing process.
3. Help them to build repertoires of strategies for prewriting,
drafting, and rewriting.
4. Give students time to write and rewrite.
5. Place central importance on the process of revision.
6. Let students discover what they want to say as they write.
7. Give students feedback throughout the composing process (not
just on the final product) as they attempt to bring their
expression closer and closer to intention.
8. Encourage feedback from both the instructor and peers.
9. Include individual conferences between teacher and student
during the process of composition.
From the explanation above, it can be concluded that the writer
needs a process to achieve a good result.
c. Notion of Good Writing
Writing is said as a good writing if a writer composes a text with
consider the content, organization, grammar, style and
mechanics(Brown, 2001: 335).
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According to Haris (1996 : 68), there are five general components
in a good writing, as follows :
1. Content : the content of the writing, the ideas that is expressed.
Content is good or not development of students‘ idea in writing.
The topic is relevant or not.
2. Form : writing should contain logical connection and transition.
3. Grammar : grammar is important in a good writing. Grammar
means the rules which structure a language. The writer should use
the rules of grammar to produce a good writing.
4. Style : the choice of structures and uses language effectively create
a beautiful written and good to be read.
5. Mechanics: writing should use a good accuracy in spelling,
punctuation and capitalization.
Based on the explanation above, the writers should write
clearly in order the reader understand about the text.
d. Teaching Writing
According to Harmer (2004: 31), said that writing
encourages students to focus on accurate language use and it will
provoke language development as they resolve problems which the
writing puts into their minds. By teaching writing it will give an
influence for the students to communicate through writtten. In
Indonesia, teaching writing is still can be found in many school,
because it is a part of curriculum in the school. However the students
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are still difficulty in writing. According to Ariyanti (2016: 263),
stated that teaching writing has its own challenges because there are
some steps and requirements that teachers should prepare to teach in
the classroom. In teaching writing the teachers have to prepare a
lesson plan. Based on the syllabus in Senior High School at the first
grade, the students are taught some kinds of text. One of texts is
descriptive text.
2. Descriptive Text
a. Definition of Descriptive Text
According to Gerot and Wignell (1995:208), ―descriptive text
is kind of text which is aimed to describe a particular person, place
or things‖. Kane (2005:352), stated that ―description is about sensory
experience how something looks, sounds, tastes‖. Whorter (2010:
234), also stated that description is information in a way that appeals
to one or more of the five senses. The five senses are sight, sound,
smell, taste, and touch usually creating an overall impression or
feeling.
The explanation of the senses above are explained as follows:
1) Sight : Describing what something looks like. It is about
physical appearance.
2) Sound: Sound becomes a tool to support in describing an
object.
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3) Smell: Smell can also be a descriptive tool, although it doesn‘t
have many adjectives for smell.
4) Taste: The sense of taste can be a descriptive tool especially for
food.
5) Touch: Describing texture and temperature. It means that the
writers have experiences in touch something that will be
described to know the texture or temperature of an object.
Based on the explanation above, it can be concluded that
descriptive text is a text to describe person, place or a thing by
experience. It is used to create an image of people, animal, place,
even of time days or season.
b. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text
Gerot and Wignell (1994:208), stated that ―the generic structure
of descriptive writing are identification and description‖. The generic
structure of descriptive text are explained as follows:
1) Identification : an introduction to identifiy phenomenon that will
be describe.
2) Description : describing parts, characteristics of something or
someone in detail. For examples: the color, the
size, the smell, the taste, etc.
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c. Grammatical Features of Descriptive Text
Knapp and Watkins (2005:98-99), stated that there are several
grammatical features of descriptive writing. The grammatical features
are showed as follows:
1) The verb is simple present tense.
For examples: he wears red shoes, she has round face.
2) Using adjectives.
For example: beautiful, handsome, black, brown.
3) Using nouns.
For examples: nose, eyes, lips.
4) Using pronouns.
For examples: he, she, it.
5) Using action verbs.
For examples: Ants live in colonies.
6) Using mental verbs.
For examples: like, feel.
7) Focus on specific participant.
For examples: My best friend, Borobudur temple, Mr. Jhon.
d. Types of Descriptive Text
There are some types of descriptive text. According to Jolly
cited in Sumarsih and Sanjaya (2013:4), there are five types of
descriptive writing paragraph as follows:
1) Describing Process
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Describing a process not only explains how something is
done, but also explains why it is done what is needed to complete
the process.
2) Describing an event
A writer should be remember what happened in the event
will be described. For example the event of vulcanic eruption. He
or she has to explain in details which is related to the event.
3) Describing personality
In describing a person, a writer has to understand about the
physical appearances, characteristics, mannerisms and emotions
based on the person who will be described. It will be easy to
compose a sentence.
4) Describing a Place
Presenting something concrete is the way to describe a
place. For example: describing historical places, tourist
destinations, and so on.
5) Describing an Object
To describe an object, it provides physical characteristic of
the object such as the color, shape, and so on.
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e. The Example of Descriptive Text
Table 2.1 Example of Descriptive Text Addapted by (Pardiyono : 2016 p.23)
MY BEST FRIEND
GENERIC
STRUCTURE
EXAMPLE
Identification I have many friends at school. But, my best
friend is Vitun. His full name is Vitun Zaujien. He is
smart and has a great sense of humor. I like him very
much.
Description Zaujein was born on June 1st
from an ordinary
family. He has one brother and one sister. His father is
a carpenter and his mother is a house wife. His father
is a wise man. His father never forgets teaching him to
have a good manner to everybody and always asks him
to be diligent in studying, and must be the best at
school. His parents have a dream that one day Vitun
Zaujien can be a teacher of a university, a director of
his own businesses and great book writer.
Zaujien is a generous boy. At school, he likes to
help his classmates. He doesn‘t mind to help friends do
their homework. He likes lending or giving things to
his friends. When a friend has not eaten breakfast, he
takes him to canteen to have it. He often gives home
rides to friends.
What I like most about him is that he is smart and
he has a great sense of humor. He makes the class
warm with his humor and pleasant personalities. In
addition, he never comes late and always does his
school tasks on time.
3. SAVI Method
a. Definition of SAVI Method
According to Brown (2001:14), method is a plan which is used
to achieve a goal based on a selected approach. In teaching learning
process, a teacher needs a method to teach students in order the
material is received easily by students. One of method which is
implemented in teaching learning process is SAVI method.
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According to Siregal & Gaol (2014) ―SAVI method is one of the
learning method that says learning have to use the students‘ senses
and the best learning occurs when all parts of the brain-mindbody
connection are used simultaneously‖. According to David Meier
(2000:42 ), through SAVI learning is not only stand up and move
around, but combining physical movement with intellectual activity
and the use of all the senses that will get a profound effect on
learning. It means that in teaching learning English process the
students involve all of the senses to absorb and get information of
the material. The students are not only sit on the chair without doing
something, but the students do activities based on SAVI method.
SAVI method trains students to interact with their friends in order to
create more active.
b. Components of SAVI method
Meier (2000:43), stated that there are four components of SAVI
method. The components are presented as follows:
1) Somatic is learning by moving and doing. "Somatic" is from the
Greek word for body— soma (as in Psychosomatic). Somatic is
learning that using and moving the body when the students learn.
Somatic learning consists of some activities, such as simulation
and game. It can create the learning atmosphere of students
active physically.
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2) Auditory is learning by talking and hearing. Auditory means
learn by sense of hearing. The students learn by talking and
hearing. The teacher should take students discuss what are they
learned, translating with a voice. The teacher can use students
voice as source of learning for another students or using another
medium of learning.
3) Visual is learning by observing and picturing. Visual means learn
by sight sense. The students learn by observing and picturing.
Every students who use their visual will be more easy to learn if
they see what is being talked by a teacher. The teacher can also
use colour, picture, and paper as medium to support visual
learning. The teacher has to encourage students to create the
lesson through assigment, taking note, mind mapping and etc.
4) Intellectual is learning by problem solving and reflecting.
Intellectual means learn by problem solving and reflecting. The
students acting to do something in their minds internally. They
use intelligence to create and solve a problem.
c. Implementation of SAVI method
According to Meier (2000: 45-50) there are some ways to
implement SAVI method. The implementation of SAVI method in
teaching learning can be done as follows:
1) Somatic
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Doing an active learning exercise (a simulation, a learning
game, etc). In this research, the teacher implements somatic by
playing a game and warming up based on the material.
2) Auditory
Asking learners to create their own audio tape of key
words, processes, definitions, or procedures. In this research, the
teacher asks to students to rewrite what they have heard from the
teacher.
3) Visual
People can learn something by watching a presentation.
The teacher gives a picture to be observed by students and takes a
note.
4) Intellectual
The students learn by problem solving. The teacher uses a
picture to help the students to compose a descriptive text.
Based on the explanation above, SAVI method is easy to be
implemented in teaching learning process.
B. Previous Researches
In this research the writer takes three researches as comparison in this
research.
1. Sholihin (2015), conducted on his research entitled ―The Using Of
Savi (Somatic, Auditory, Visual And Intellectual) Technique In
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Improving The Students’ Vocabulary At The Seventh Grade Of Smpn
01 Monta Bima”. This research was experimental method. The
population of this research was the seventh Grade student of SMPN 01
Monta Bima which consisted of 168 students‘. The researcher used
purposive sampling technique which took the seventh grade as sample
consists of two classes for VII B as control class and VII C as
experimental class. The result of this research showed that the seventh
grade students had fair score in pre-test. After treatment using SAVI in
experimental class, their vocabulary aspect significantly improved. The
data analyzed using t-test showed that the value of t-test was higher
than the value of t-table (2.244>2.021). It can be said that SAVI
(Somatic, Auditory, Visual, and Intellectual) was effective to improve
the students‘ vocabulary.
2. Sholihatin Ni‘mah (2016), conducted on her research entitled ― The
Use Of Savi Approach To Improve Students’ Writing Skill Of
Descriptive Text (A Classroom Action Research at the Seventh Grade
of SMP Negeri 23 Semarang in the Academic Year of 2015/2016)”.
The researcher aimed to elaborate classroom action research as one of
research types used in this research. She used quantitative form to
analyze the data. The data was collected from documentation,
observation, and test. Documentation such as students name list,
students English score, and lesson schedule. Observation was aimed to
see and know the condition of class and students during learning
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process. Test was used to know students achievement, so the
researcher can know the students improvement and achievement in
mastering descriptive text. The approach used by the researcher in this
study is SAVI approach that belong‘s to Dave Meier. The results of
this research indicate that SAVI approach can improve the students
writing skill of descriptive text at VII grade students of SMP Negeri 23
Semarang in the academic year of 2015/2016 based on the result of the
research was done two cycles (cycle 1 and cycle 2). It can be taken the
conclusions that there was good significance. The students writing skill
of descriptive text improved after being taught by using SAVI
approach.
3. Nurul Fazilah (2017), conducted on her research entitled ― The
Application Of Savi Strategy To Improve Students’ Writing Skill At
Second Grade Of Sma N 3 Langsa”. This research, the writer applied
experimental study. The problem of study does students‘ improve in
writing skill after applying SAVI strategy. She taught two classes.
They are; the experimental class, was taught writing by using SAVI
strategy, and the control class, was taught by using non SAVI strategy.
She gave both classes the pre-test, applied the treatments and gave the
post-test to obtain the data. The data collected and analyzed by using t-
test formula. According to the result of statistical calculation, the
Mpre-test of experiment class was 57.70, Mpost-test was 71.66, and
Mgained score was 13.6. While, the Mpre-test of control was 59.26,
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Mpost-test was 67.83, and Mgained score was 8.5. Besides, t-
observation (to) was 5.520 and t-table (tt) at significance level of 5% is
2.000. So that, it shows that t-observation (to) was higher than t-table
(tt) or 5.520 > 2.000. The result means that there were significant
difference between students‘ score in learning writing by using SAVI
strategy and without using SAVI strategy. In conclusion, using SAVI
strategy were effective and applicable for teaching writing at the
second grade students of students‘ SMAN 3 Langsa.
The differences between the previous researches and this
research are they used SAVI as a strategy, approach and technique.
Meanwhile, the researcher uses SAVI as a method and collaborates the
method with scientific approach in 2013 curriculum. The researcher
focuses on writing skill of descriptive text.
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CHAPTER III
IMPLEMENTATION OF RESEARCH
A. Procedures of the Research
The researcher uses Classroom Action Research (CAR) in
collecting the data. There are four steps in each cycle for doing action
research those are planning, acting, observing and reflecting. In this
research, the researcher conducts two cycles, cycle I and cycle II. The
activities in each cycle are explained as follows:
1. Cycle I
The researcher uses SAVI method to improve the students‘
understanding in writing descriptive text. The procedures of the cycle I
will be presented as below:
a. Planning
In this stage, the researcher plans what action will be done in
using and applying SAVI method in teaching writing descriptive
text. The activities in the planning are showed as follows:
1) Selecting the materials based on the syllabus.
2) Preparing the material for teaching learning process.
3) Arranging the lesson plan using SAVI method.
4) Preparing list of students‘ name and scoring.
5) Preparing students‘ and teacher‘s observation checklist of the
cycle I (to know the situation of the teaching-learning process
when the methode is applied).
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6) Preparing the material for test.
b. Acting
After the preparation finish, the teacher applies the lesson
plan and the researcher observes the teaching learning process. The
researcher presents it as below:
1) The teacher greets and check the students‘ attendance.
2) Giving pre-test for students.
3) The teacher explains the material descriptive text based on
SAVI method. The method is presented as follows:
a) The teacher implements Somatic by playing a game and
warming up.
b) The teacher implements Auditory by reading and writing.
The first meeting in cycle I, the students read an example
of descriptive text. The second meeting, the students
rewrite a text what they have heard from the teacher.
c) The teacher implements Visual by explanation and
picturing. The first meeting in cycle I, the teacher explains
the material of descriptive text and the students observes
and hear the teacher‘s explanation. The second meeting,
the students observe a picture to be analysed.
d) The teacher implements Intellectual by using a text and
picture. The first meeting in cycle I, the students analyse a
text based on the grammatical features of descriptive text.
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The second meeting, the students compose a descriptive
text based on the picture.
4) Presenting the result of occasion in front of the class.
5) Giving post-test for students.
c. Observing
When the teacher applies the action, the reseacher observes
the teaching learning process. The researcher observes the
students‘ and teacher‘s activities by using observation checklist.
d. Reflecting
At this point, the researcher evaluates the activities that
have been done in cycle I. The researcher analyzed the data from
the observation checklist and result of test to find out the
improvement of writing skill of descriptive text.
2. Cycle II
The second cycle is conducted based on the result of reflection
from the cycle I. If the result from observation showed that quality of
the students still low, it is needed another action in order to make
improvement of the quality for the next cycle. The procedures are
presented as follows:
a. Planning
In the planning of second cycle, the procedures are almost
similar to the cycle I. The procedures are showed as follows:
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1) Preparing the material for teaching learning process.
2) Making the lesson plan using SAVI method and designing the
steps in doing action.
3) Preparing list of students‘ name and scoring.
4) Preparing students‘ and teachers‘ observation checklist of the
cycle II (to know the situation of the teaching-learning process
when the method is applied).
5) Preparing the material for test.
b. Acting
In cycle II, acting is similar to the acting of cycle I. In this
section, the researcher observes the teaching learning process who
is taught by teacher. The activities are explained as follows:
1) The teacher greets and checks the students‘ attendance.
2) Giving pre-test for students.
3) The teacher explains the material of descriptive text based on
SAVI method. The method is presented as follows:
a) The teacher implements Somatic by playing a game and
warming up.
b) The teacher implements Auditory by reading and writing.
The first meeting in cycle II, the students read an example of
descriptive text. The second meeting, the students rewrite a
text what they have heard from the teacher.
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c) The teacher implements Visual by explanation and picturing.
The first meeting in cycle II, the teacher explains the material
of descriptive text and the students observes and hear the
teacher‘s explanation. The second meeting, the students
observe a picture to be analysed.
d) The teacher implements Intellectual by using a text and
picture. The first meeting in cycle II, the students cyrcle a
correct word based on the grammatical features and language
use of descriptive text. The second meeting, the students
compose a descriptive text based on the picture.
4) Presenting the result of occasion in front of the class.
5) Giving post-test for students.
c. Observing
The activities of observing in cycle II is similar with cycle
I. using observtion checklist.
d. Reflecting
At this stage, the researcher evaluates the activities that
have been done in cycle II. The researcher analyzed the data from
the observation checklist and result of test to find out the
improvement of writing skill of descriptive text.
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CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDINGS AND DATA ANALYSIS
This chapter focuses on analyse the collecting data. The researcher collects
the data from the first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga. The researcher
gives the details of the findings. It displays the finding of the collects data since in
the beginning until the end of the reserach. The findings consist of the result of the
cycle I and cycle II. The two cycles are the treatment of the implementation in
using SAVI method to improve writing skills in descriptive text.
A. Result of the Research
The research consists of two cycles. Each cycle consists of planning,
acting, observing, and reflecting. The steps of this reserach would be explained
in the description below:
1. Research Finding
a. Cycle I
1) Planning
The researcher prepared several instruments, as follows:
a) Lesson Plan
The lesson plan was used as a guide to manage a time and
activities during teaching and learning process in the class (see
appendix 3).
b) Observation Checklist
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Observation checklist was prepared to know the students‘
and teacher‘s activities during the teaching and learning process.
c) Material
The material of descriptive text consists of the definition,
purpose, generic structure. and language feature.
d) Pre-test and post-test
The researcher used pre-test and post-test. The pre-test was
done before using SAVI method to know the understanding of
students in writing descriptive text. Post-test was done after
using SAVI method to see the result of the study before and after
using SAVI method.
2) Acting
The action of cycle I was done on August 1th
, 2018 and August
4th
, 2018. The teacher was Mrs. Desyta and the researcher as an
observer.
On Wednesday, July 1th
, 2018 the teacher started the lesson by
greeted ―Good afternoon‖ and asked the condition of the students by
―How are you ?‖ The students answered, ―I‘m fine thank you, and
you ?‖The teacher answered ―I‘m fine too thank you‖. Before the
teacher continued the teaching process, the teacher informed to the
students that ―We have a guest‖, and introduced the researcer to the
students. After that, the teacher checked the students‘ attendance list.
After checked the attendance list the teacher started the lesson about
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descriptive text. She asked the students ―Do yo know, what is
descriptive text ?‖ One of the students answered ―Descriptive text is
a text to describe something‖.
After giving a little explanation about descriptive text, the
teacher gave a pre-test and the students were given the time only 20
minutes (see appendix 5). The task of the pre-test was describing
people. The students described their fellow friend. After doing a pre-
test, the teacher implemented SAVI method during learning process.
The process of implementation of SAVI method consists of four
steps.
First, the teacher implemented Somatic by using a game. All of
the students stand up and they did the instructions from the teacher
to touch parts of body that related about the material.
Second, the teacher implemented Auditory by using a text. The
students read an example of descriptive text and they tried to find
main idea about that text.
Third, the teacher implemented Visual by using explanation.
The teacher explained the material of descriptive text and the
students heard the teacher explanation.
The last, the teacher implemented Intellectual by using a text.
The students analysed of generic structures and language features of
a descriptive text based on a text.
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On August 4th
, 2018 the teacaher entered the class, and greeted
―Good Afternoon class‖ and asking the condition of the students by
―How are you today ?‖. The students answered ―I am fine thank you,
and you ?‖ The teacher answered ―I am very well too thank you‖.
After the teacher asked the condition of the students and checked the
students‘ attendance list, the teacher implemented SAVI method
during learning process. The process of implementation of SAVI
method consists of four steps.
First, the teacher explained the previous material about
descriptive text. The students did a warming up. All of the students
stand up. The students answered the questions from the teacher
about the material. The students would sit down if they answered the
teacher‘s question correctly. (S)
Second, the students rewrite a text what they have heard from
the teacher. (A)
Third, the students were divided into some of groups. Each
groups consists of four students and the teacher gave a picture to be
observed and analysed (taking note). (V)
The last, each groups discussed to solve the problem then
composed a descriptive text based on the picture and shared their
work in front of the class. (I)
After the teacher implemented SAVI method, the teacher gave
post test. The students wrote a descriptive text for about 20 minutes
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(see appendix 7). The teacher asked the students, ―Well students‖
what about the exercise? It‘s easy right?‖ ―Yes‖ answered the
students. The teacher concluded the material, and then the teacher
said ―Students, time was up. We will continue to the next meeting
―See you next week‖ the students answered ―See you‖.
3) Observing
The teacher observed students‘ and teacher‘s activity, class
situation, and the students‘ responses by using observation checklist
in the learning process. The purpose of this activity was to evaluate
the teaching and learning process, collected the data and monitored
the class.
Table 4.1 Form of Result Students’ Observation Checklist Cycle I
No The Student‘s Activity Yes No Description
1 Paying Attention √ All of the students pay
attention to answer the
greeting and teacher‘s
explanation.
2 Asking Question √ A student who asking.
AE asked about the
meaning of physical
appearance.
3 Responding to question √ A student answered the
teacher question.
R answered about
definition of
descriptive text.
4 Being enthusiastic in
implementation SAVI method
√ All of students did the
instructions from the
teacher.
5 Accomplishing task √ All of students did the
task.
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Table 4.2 Form of Result Teachers’ Observation Checklist Cycle I
No The Teacher‘s Activity Yes No Description
1 Preparing the material √ The teacher prepared
the material well.
2 Greeting the students before
the lesson begin
√ The teacher greeted te
students.
3 The teacher checked the
students attendance
√ The teacher called the
students one by one.
4 Implementing SAVI method √ The teacher
implemented SAVI
method.
5 Giving explanation of the
material
√ The teacher explained
the material in Bahasa
and English language.
6 Giving opportunity for asking
the question
√ The teacher gave time
to the students to ask
about material.
7 Help the students‘ difficulties
in learning descriptive text.
√ The teacher helped the
students to solve the
difficulties.
The researcher got the data from pre-test and post-test of
cycle 1. The analyzed of data based on rubric writing assessment
(see appendix 2). There are five aspects in scoring such as content,
organization, vocabulary, language use and mechanic. The
researcher analyzed the data of pre-test and post-test. The
calculation of pre-test and post-test were presented as follows:
a) Score of Pre-test Cycle 1
Table 4.3 Students’ Score of Pre-test Cycle I
No Student's Name Score Pre-test I (X)
1 AM 51
2 AR 62
3 AAR 64
4 ASM 49
5 AA 59
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6 AEP 60
7 DBS 57
8 DSN 56
9 DPP 48
10 DJ 63
11 FATK 60
12 FAA 68
13 HAFI 54
14 HI 56
15 HIP 53
16 JFEP 54
17 KAP 46
18 LUW 69
19 MFN 55
20 MP 71
21 MQ 57
22 NS 66
23 NAR 54
24 PA 49
25 RDS 70
26 RSK 58
27 RMS 58
28 RDS 59
29 R 51
30 SE 55
31 S 55
32 TAW 55
33 VDETA 60
34 WEP 57
35 WSA 63
36 YJAP 55
From the score of pre-test in the cycle I, the precentages of
the students score would be presented as follows:
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Table 4.4 The Precentages of Students’ Score pre-test in Cycle I
Creteria Number of Students Precentages
>72 - 0%
72 - 0%
<72 36 100%
Total 36 100%
From the table above the students who pass the passing
grade was 0%. The passing grade of descriptive text in SMK
Saraswati Salatiga is 72. The teacher and the researcher expecxted
that the students who pass the passing grade at least 85%.
Therefore, the target was not achieved.
b) Score of Post-test Cycle I
Table 4.5 Students’ Score of Post-test Cycle I
No Student's Name Score Post-test I (Y)
1 AM 80
2 AR 79
3 AAR 80
4 ASM 81
5 AA 78
6 AEP 81
7 DBS 81
8 DSN 58
9 DPP 68
10 DJ 76
11 FATK 75
12 FAA 76
13 HAFI 72
14 HI 76
15 HIP 83
16 JFEP 72
17 KAP 76
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18 LUW 72
19 MFN 74
20 MP 75
21 MQ 79
22 NS 72
23 NAR 76
24 PA 80
25 RDS 75
26 RSK 73
27 RMS 85
28 RDS 75
29 R 87
30 SE 81
31 S 70
32 TAW 74
33 VDETA 75
34 WEP 77
35 WSA 70
36 YJAP 75
From the score of post-test in the cycle I, the precentages of
the students score would be presented as follows:
Table 4.6 The Precentages of Students’ Score post-test in Cycle I
Creteria Number of Students Precentages
>72 28 78%
72 4 11%
<72 4 11%
Total 36 100%
Based on the table above, it can be seen that there was 78% who
pass the passing grade. It was higher than pre-test cycle I.
However, the teacher and researcher expected that there was at
least 85% of the students pass the passsing grade.
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c) The Differences Between Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle I
Table 4.7 The Defferences Between Students’ Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle I
No Student's
Name
Score Pre-test I
(X)
Score Post-test I
(Y) D D2
1 AM 51 80 29 841
2 AR 62 79 17 289
3 AAR 64 80 16 256
4 ASM 49 81 32 1024
5 AA 59 78 19 361
6 AEP 60 81 21 441
7 DBS 57 81 24 576
8 DSN 56 58 2 4
9 DPP 48 68 20 400
10 DJ 63 76 13 169
11 FATK 60 75 15 225
12 FAA 68 76 8 64
13 HAFI 54 72 18 324
14 HI 56 76 20 400
15 HIP 53 83 30 900
16 JFEP 54 72 18 324
17 KAP 46 76 30 900
18 LUW 69 72 3 9
19 MFN 55 74 19 361
20 MP 71 75 4 16
21 MQ 57 79 22 484
22 NS 66 72 6 36
23 NAR 54 76 22 484
24 PA 49 80 31 961
25 RDS 70 75 5 25
26 RSK 58 73 15 225
27 RMS 58 85 27 729
28 RDS 59 75 16 256
29 R 51 87 36 1296
30 SE 55 81 26 676
31 S 55 70 15 225
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32 TAW 55 74 19 361
33 VDETA 60 75 15 225
34 WEP 57 77 20 400
35 WSA 63 70 7 49
36 YJAP 55 75 20 400
Total 2077 2737 660 14716
d) The calculation of mean and standard deviation
1) Calculating Mean of Pre-test cycle I
M =
Explanation:
M = Mean of the students‘ score
= Sum of the students‘ score
= Number of students
M =
M = 57,694
Mean of pre-test cycle I was 57,694.
2) Calculating Mean of Post-test 1
M =
Explanation:
M = Mean of the students‘ score
= Sum of the students‘ score
= Number of students
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M =
M =
M = 76,027
Mean of post-test cycle I was 76,027.
Based on the calculating above, it could be seen that
mean of post-test cycle I was higher than pre-test cycle I. It
could be concluded that there was an improvement of
students‘ writing skills in descriptive text by using SAVI
method.
3) Calculating of Standard Deviation
SD = )2
Explanation:
SDD = Standard Deviation
D = Defference between pre-test and post-test score
N = Number of students
SD = )2
SD = )2
SD = 2
SD =
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SD =
SD =
Standar Deviation of cycle I was 8,525.
4) Standard Error Mean Difference
SEMD =
Explanation:
SEMD = Standard Error Mean Difference
SDD = Standard Deviation
N = Number of students
SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD = 1,441
Standar Error Mean Difference of cycle I was 1,441.
5) T-test Calculation
T0 =
Explanation:
T0 = t-value of observation
MD = Mean of difference
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SEMD = Standard error of mean difference
T0 =
T0 =
T0 = 12,722
T0 of cycle I was 12,722.
Based on the calculating above it can be seen that mean of
pre-test cycle I was 56,05 and mean of post-test cycle I was 74,38.
The researcher found that T-test cycle I was 12,722. It used the
significance level of 5% and the T-table with the quantity (N-1) =
35. The table was 2,030. The quantity (N) of the students is 36.
From the data, the researcher concluded that the score of T-test was
higher than T-table.
4) Reflecting
Based on the result of the cycle I, there were some
problems that were faced by students. They were confused to
organize the sentence well and still low in grammar. So, they still
felt difficult to compose a good descriptive text. In the score of
post-test cycle I, the students who pass the passing grade was 78%.
However, the teacher and the researcher expected that there were
85% students who pass the passing grade (KKM). Therefore, the
researcher conducted the cycle II.
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b. Cycle II
1. Planning
In the planning of second cycle, the procedures were almost
similar to the cycle I. The researcher prepared several instruments, as
follows:
a) Lesson Plan
Prepared the lesson plan to control the teaching learning
process and as a guidance when the teacher taught (see appendix
4).
b) Observation Checklist
Prepared the students‘ and teacher‘s observation checklist
to know the condition of teaching learning process.
c) Material
The material was descriptive text. It consists of the
meaning, purpose, generic structure, example and language
feature of descriptive text.
d) Teaching Aid
The researcher prepared board marker, hand out for
students and picture (people).
e) Pre-test and post-test
The researcher used pre-test and post-test in her action. The
pre-test was done before using SAVI method to know the
competence of students in writing descriptive text. Then, the
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researcher used post-test. Post-test was done after using SAVI
method to know whether students‘ writing skill in descriptive
text improve or not.
2. Acting
The action of cycle II was conducted on August 8th
, 2018
and August 9th
, 2018.
On August 8th
, 2018 before started the lesson, the teacher
started the lesson by greeted ―Good afternoon class‖ and the
students answered ―Good afternoon mom‖. Then, the teacher asked
about the condition of the students by ―How are you today?‖ and
the students answered ―I am fine thank you, and you?‖ the teacher
answered ―I am fine to thank you‖. The teacher checked the
students‘ attendance. After that, the teacher review about the last
meeting. The tecaher asked to students about definition of
descriptive text. One of students answered ―Linggar‖ answered that
―descriptive text is text to describe something such as people,
animal, place and etc.‖
After the teacher gave a little explanation, the teacher gave a
pre-test and the students was given the time only 20 minutes (see
appendices 8). Before pre-test was started, the teacher gave an
instruction in order every students describe another friend‖. After
doing a pre-test, the teacher implemented SAVI method during
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learning process. The process of implementation of SAVI method
consists of four steps.
First, the teacher implemented Somatic by using a warming up.
All of the students wrote a word on the whiteboard and the other
students continued to write a word from the last letter.
Second, the teacher implemented Auditory by using a text. The
students read an example of descriptive text and they tried to find
main idea about that text.
Third, the teacher implemented Visual by using explanation.
The teacher explained the material of descriptive text and the
students heard the teacher explanation.
The last, the teacher implemented Intellectual by using a text.
The students cyrcled of the correct word based on the generic
structures and language features of a descriptive text.
On August 9th
, 2018 the teacher entered the class as usual and
greeted the students by ―Good afternoon class‖ and asked the
condition of the students ―How is life ?‖. The students answered ―I
am very well thank you, and you ?‖ the teacher answered ―I am very
well too thank you‖. The teacher checked the students‘ attendance
and implemented SAVI method during learning process. The process
of implementation of SAVI method consists of four steps.
First, the teacher explained the previous material about
descriptive text. The students did a warming up. All of the students
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stand up. The students answered the questions from the teacher
about the material. The students would sit down if they answered the
teacher‘s question correctly. (S)
Second, the students rewrite a text what they have heard from
the teacher. (A)
Third, the students were divided into some of groups. Each
groups consist of four students and the teacher gave a picture to
observed and analysed (taking note). (V)
The last, each groups discussed to solve the problem then
composed a descriptive text based on the picture and shared their
work in front of the class. (I)
After the teacher implemented SAVI method, the teacher gave
post test for about 20 minutes (see appendix 10). The teacher
monitored the students‘ activities. After post-test was done, the
teacher collected the students‘ worksheet. The teacher asked the
students, ―Well students,‖do you still difficulty to compose a
descriptive text?‖. Some of students answered ―No‖ and some of
students answered ―not bad‖. The teacher concluded the material,
and then the teacher said ―Students, time was up. We will continue
to the next meeting ―See you next week‖ the students answered ―See
you‖.
3. Observing
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In Cycle II, the researcher also observed the teaching
learning process in the class.
Table 4.8 Form of Result Students’ Observation Checklist Cycle II
No The Student‘s Activity Yes No Description
1 Paying Attention √ All of the students pay
attention to answer the
greeting and teacher‘s
explanation.
2 Asking Question √ A student who asking.
FA asked about the
defferences between
adjective and adverb.
3 Responding to question √ A student answered the
teacher question. LUW
answered the definition
of descriptive text.
4 Being enthusiastic in
Implementation of SAVI
method
√ All of thhe students did
the instructions from
the teacher.
5 Accomplishing task √ All of the students did
the task.
Table 4.9 Form of Result Teachers’ Observation Checklist Cycle II
No The Teacher‘s Activity Yes No Description
1 Preparing the material √ The teacher prepared
the material well.
2 Greeting the students before
the lesson begin
√ The teacher greeted te
students.
3 The teacher checked the
students attendance
√ The teacher called the
students one by one.
4 Implementing SAVI method √ The teacher
implemented SAVI
method.
5 Giving explanation of the
material
√ The teacher explained
the material in Bahasa
and English language.
6 Giving opportunity for asking
the question
√ The teacher gave time
to the students to ask
about material.
7 Help the students‘ difficulties
in learning descriptive text.
√ The teacher helped the
students to solve the
difficulties
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The researcher got the data from pre-test and post-test of cycle
II. The analyzed of data based on rubric writing assessment (see
appendix 2). There are five aspects in scoring such as content,
organization, vocabulary, language use and mechanic. The
researcher analyzed the data of pre-test and post-test. The calculation
and result of pre-test and post-test as follows:
a) Score of Students‘ Pre-test Cycle II
Table 4.10 Students’s Score of Pre-test Cycle II
No Student's Name Score Pre-test II (X)
1 AM 56
2 AR 64
3 AAR 56
4 ASM 66
5 AA 67
6 AEP 65
7 DBS 63
8 DSN 57
9 DPP 53
10 DJ 74
11 FATK 73
12 FAA 69
13 HAFI 60
14 HI 58
15 HIP 55
16 JFEP 82
17 KAP 71
18 LUW 67
19 MFN 58
20 MP 63
21 MQ 60
22 NS 73
23 NAR 57
60
24 PA 60
25 RDS 60
26 RSK 63
27 RMS 55
28 RDS 65
29 R 55
30 SE 57
31 S 64
32 TAW 58
33 VDETA 70
34 WEP 64
35 WSA 74
36 YJAP 57
From the score of pre-test in the cycle II, the precentages
of the students score would be presented as follows:
Table 4.11 The Precentages of Students’ Score pre-test in Cycle II
Creteria Number of Students Precentages
>72 5 14%
72 - 0%
<72 31 86%
Total 36 100%
From the table above the students who pass the passing
grade was 13%. The passing grade of descriptive text in SMK
Saraswati Salatiga is 72. The teacher and the researcher
expected that the students who pass the passing grade at least
85%. Therefore, the target was not achieved.
b) Score of Post-test Cycle II
Table 4.12 Students’s Score of Pre-test Cycle II
No Student's Name Score Post-test II (Y)
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1 AM 81
2 AR 84
3 AAR 86
4 ASM 84
5 AA 86
6 AEP 85
7 DBS 86
8 DSN 72
9 DPP 72
10 DJ 86
11 FATK 77
12 FAA 90
13 HAFI 80
14 HI 82
15 HIP 80
16 JFEP 83
17 KAP 71
18 LUW 81
19 MFN 74
20 MP 85
21 MQ 85
22 NS 84
23 NAR 80
24 PA 86
25 RDS 76
26 RSK 75
27 RMS 90
28 RDS 85
29 R 83
30 SE 72
31 S 82
32 TAW 77
33 VDETA 79
34 WEP 78
35 WSA 84
36 YJAP 80
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From the score of post-test in cycle II, the precentages of
the students score would be presented as follows:
Table 4.13 The Precentages of Students’ Score post-test in Cycle II
Creteria Number of Students Precentages
>72 32 89%
72 3 8%
<72 1 3%
Total 36 100%
Based on the table above, it can be seen that there was 89%
who pass the passing grade. It was higher than pre-test cycle I.
It meant that the goal was achieved.
c) The Differences Between Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle
II
Table 4.14 The Students’ Score of Pre-test and Post-test Cycle II
No Student's Name
Score Pre-test II
(X)
Score Post-test II
(Y) D D2
1 AM 56 81 25 625
2 AR 64 84 20 400
3 AAR 56 86 30 900
4 ASM 66 84 18 324
5 AA 67 86 19 361
6 AEP 65 85 20 400
7 DBS 63 86 23 529
8 DSN 57 72 15 225
9 DPP 53 72 19 361
10 DJ 74 86 22 484
11 FATK 73 77 4 16
12 FAA 69 90 21 441
13 HAFI 60 80 20 400
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14 HI 58 82 24 576
15 HIP 55 80 25 625
16 JFEP 82 83 1 1
17 KAP 71 71 0 0
18 LUW 67 81 14 196
19 MFN 58 74 16 256
20 MP 63 85 22 484
21 MQ 60 85 25 625
22 NS 73 84 11 121
23 NAR 57 80 23 529
24 PA 60 86 26 676
25 RDS 60 76 16 256
26 RSK 63 75 12 144
27 RMS 55 90 35 1225
28 RDS 65 85 18 324
29 R 55 83 33 1089
30 SE 57 72 15 225
31 S 64 82 18 324
32 TAW 58 77 19 361
33 VDETA 70 79 9 81
34 WEP 64 78 14 196
35 WSA 74 84 10 100
36 YJAP 57 80 23 529
Jumlah 2269 2921 665 14409
d) The calculation of mean and standard deviation
1) Calculating Mean of Pre-test cycle II
M =
Explanation:
M = Mean of the students‘ score
= Sum of the students‘ score
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= Number of students
M =
M =
M = 63,027
Mean of pre-test cycle II was 63,027.
2) Calculating Mean of Post-test Cycle II
M =
Explanation:
M = Mean of the students‘ score
= Sum of the students‘ score
= Number of students
M =
M =
M = 81,138
Mean of post-test cycle II was 81,138.
Based on the calculating above, mean of pre-test
was 63,027 and mean of post-test was 81,138. It can be
seen that mean of post-test cycle II was higher than mean of
pre-test cycle I. There was an improvement of students‘
writing skill in descriptive text using SAVI method.
3) Calculating of Standard Deviation
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SD = )2
Explanation:
SDD = Standard Deviation
D = Defference between pre-test and post-test score
N = Number of students
SD = )2
SD = )2
SD = 2
SD =
SD =
SD =
Standard Deviation of cycle II was 7,682.
4) Standard Error Mean Difference
SEMD =
Explanation:
SEMD = Standard Error Mean Difference
SDD = Standard Deviation
N = Number of students
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SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD =
SEMD = 1,298
Standard Error Mean Difference of cycle II was 1,298.
5) T-test Calculation
T0 =
Explanation:
T0 = t-value of observation
MD = Mean of difference
SEMD = Standard error of mean difference
T0 =
T0 =
T0 = 14,231
T0 of cycle II was 14,231.
Based on the calculating above it can be seen that
mean of pre-test cycle II was 63,027 and mean of post-test
cycle II was 81,138. The researcher found that T-test cycle II
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was 14,231. It used the significance level of 5% and the T-
table with the quantity (N-1) = 35. The table was 2,030. The
quantity (N) of the students is 36. From the data, the
researcher concluded that the score of T-test was higher than
T-table.
6) Reflecting
After analyzing the result of cycle I and cycle II, it can be
concluded that the use of SAVI method could improve the students‘
writing skill. The students were more active and easy to compose a
descriptive text. Mean of pre-test cycle I was 63,027 and mean of
post-test cycle II was 81,138. The precentages of students in cycle II
who pass the passing grade (KKM) was 89%. It had passed the
teacher‘ expectation. So, the teacher and the researcher decided to
stop this cycle, because the students‘ ability in writing descriptive
text had improved from cycle I until cycle II.
2. Discussions
After analysing the students‘ score in cycle I and cycle II, the
researcher concluded that there was a significant improvement of the writing
skills in descriptive text after being taught by using SAVI method. The
improvement can be seen as follows:
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Table 4.15 Table of Data Analysis
No Analysis Cycle I Cycle II
1. Mean of Pre-test
Mean of Post-test
57,694
76,027
63,027
81,138
2. Total of the students who pass
the passing grade (72)
Pre-test
Post-test
0%
78%
13%
89%
3. T-table
(N = 36-1=35)
ɑ = 0.050
2,030
2,030
T-test 12,722 14,231
From the table above, it could be seen that in the cycle I, mean of
post-test was higher than mean of pre-test. The mean of post-test was
76,027 and pre-test was 57,694. In cycle II, mean of post-test was higher
than mean of pre-test. The mean of post-test was 81,138 and pre-test was
63,027. The T-test of cycle I and cycle II was higher than T-table. T-table
with N-1 was 2,030 and the significant level was 5%. The result of t-test in
cycle I was 12,722 and T-test cycle II was 14,231. It means that there was
an improvement of writing skills in descriptive text after using SAVI
method.
Based on the explanation above, the researcher concluded that using
SAVI method could improve students‘ writing skills in descriptive text.
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CHAPTER V
CLOSURE
This chapter consists of the conclusion and suggestion. After completing
this research, the researcher provides some conclusions and suggestions of the
research.
A. Conclusion
The researcher gives to several conclusions to answer the problems of the
research as follows:
1. The implementation of using SAVI method to improve the students‘
writing skills in descriptive text for the first grade students of SMK
Saraswati Salatiga is successful. The teaching learning uses SAVI method
get good responses from students. The teacher implements Somatic,
Auditory, Visual and Intellectual (SAVI) in teaching writing of descriptive
text. The students feel enjoy, more active and easy to compose a
descriptive text. They do all of instructions from the teacher. It is started
from play a game, warming up, group discussion, do all the task and
presentation. The teaching learning is not boring, because there are always
activities in each teaching learning. The researcher concludes that the SAVI
method is able to improve the students‘ writing skill.
2. The result of using SAVI method can improve writing skills in descriptive
text for the first grade students of SMK Saraswati Salatiga. It can be seen
from the students‘ mean of pre-test, post-test and the calculation of t-test in
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two cycles. The students‘ mean of pre-test and post-test cycle I are 57,694
and 76,027. The students‘ mean of pre-test and post-test cycle II are
63,027 and 81,138. The mean of post-test is higher than the mean of pre-
test. It means that there is an improvement between pre-test and post-test
in cycle I and cycle II. The researcher uses the significant level as many
5%. The value of T-table with N-1 is 2,030. After calculating the students‘
score, the researcher find that the value of T-test cycle I and cycle II are
12,722 and 14,231. In cycle I, the value of T-test is higher than the value
of T-table, it is 12,722 > 2,030. In cycle II, the value of T-test is higher
than value of T-table, it is 14,231 > 2,030.
In addition, the precentage of students who pass the passing grade (KKM)
in cycle I is 78% and in cycle II is 89%.Therefore, the researcher concludes that
SAVI method can improve the students‘ writing skills in descriptive text for first
grade of SMK Saraswati Salatiga in the academic year of 2018/2019.
B. Suggestion
Based on the research findings and discussion, the following suggestions
are addressed to the teacher, the students and the future researcher as follows:
1. For the Teacher
SAVI method is one of method that can be applied on teaching writing.
The teacher can provide an atrractive instrument in the implementation of
SAVI method so that the students can master the subject well. Using SAVI
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method as a method in teaching learning English process is an enjoyable
activity for students.
2. For the Students
The students should study hard to get a good writing skill. The
students
should also have high motivation to learn writing English and practice
what they have learned from their teacher. The students can apply and
practice the SAVI method. It will help the students to solve their problems
in writing and to improve their writing skills.
3. For the Future Researcher
The researcher suggests the future researcher to conducted Classroom
Action Research in using SAVI method to improve students‘ writing skills
especially in writing descriptive text. The future researcher can also
examine the effectiveness of using SAVI method in the teaching learning
English process if it is applied in Senior High School.
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APPENDICES
CURRICULUM VITAE
Name : Laela Ulyaningrum
Student Number : 113-14-048
Gender : Female
Place and Date of Birth : Kabupaten Semarang, January 4th
1997
Address : Gedangan RT 2 RW 6 Kecamatan Tuntang,
Kabupaten Semarang
E-mail Address : [email protected]
Phone Number : 085842925743
Educational Background : - Kindergarten (TK) RA Masithoh Gedangan
- Elementary School (SD) MI Ma‘arif Gedangan
- Junior High School (SMP) N 6 Salatiga
- Vocational High School (SMK) Saraswati
Salatiga
- State Institute for Islamic Studies (IAIN) Salatiga
LIST OF APPENDICES
1. Syllabus of First Grade Student of Senior High School
2. Analytical Scoring Rubric adapted By Weigle, S.C (2002: 116)
3. Lesson plan Cycle I
4. Lesson Plan Cycle II
5. The Pre-Test Cycle I
6. The Material of Descriptive Text Cycle I
7. The Post-Test Cycle I
8. The Pre-Test Cycle II
9. The Material of Descriptive Text Cycle II
10. The Post-Test Cycle II
11. Photos Documentation of Cycle I and Cycle II
12. Certification For Graduating Paper Counselor
13. Letter For Research Permission
14. Consultation sheet of Graduating Paper
15. Proof of Conducted Research
16. Satuan Keterangan Kegiatan (SKK)
1. Syllabus of First Grade Student of Senior High School
Kompetensi Dasar Materi Pokok Pembelajaran Penilaian Alokasi Waktu
1.1 Mensyukuri
kesempatan
dapat
mempelajari
bahasa Inggris
sebagai bahasa
pengantar
komunikasi
internasional
yang diwujudkan
dalam semangat
belajar
2.3 Menunjukkankan perilaku tanggung jawab, peduli, kerjasama, dan cinta damai, dalam melaksanakan komunikasi fungsional
3.7. Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.8. Menangkap makna dalam teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis sederhana.
Teks deskriptif
lisan dan tulis,
sederhana,
tentang orang,
tempat wisata, dan
bangunan
bersejarah
terkenal
Fungsi sosial
Membanggakan, mengenalkan, mengidentifikasi, memuji, mengritik, mempromosikan, dsb.
Struktur text
(1) Penyebutan nama orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal dan nama bagian-bagiannya yang dipilih untuk dideskripsikan
(2) Penyebutan sifat orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal dan bagiannya, dan
(3) Penyebutan tindakan dari atau terkait dengan orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal.
yang semuanya sesuai
dengan fungsi sosial yang
hendak dicapai.
Unsur kebahasaan
(1) Kata benda yang terkait dengan orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
Mengamati
Siswa memperhatikan / menonton beberapa contoh teks/ film tentang penggambaran orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah.
Siswa menirukan contoh secara terbimbing.
Siswa belajar menemukan gagasan pokok, informasi rinci dan informasi tertentu dari teks
Mempertanyakan
(questioning)
Dengan bimbingan dan arahan guru, siswa mempertanyakan antara lain perbedaan antar berbagai teks deskripsi yang ada dalam bahasa Inggris, perbedaan teks dalam bahasa Inggris dengan yang ada dalam bahasa Indonesia
Siswa mempertanyakan gagasan pokok, informasi rinci dan informasi tertentu dari teks deskriptif
Mengeksplorasi
Siswa secara kelompok membacakan teks deskriptif lain dari berbagai sumber dengan pengucapan, tekanan kata dan intonasi yang tepat
Siswa berpasangan menemukan gagasan pokok, informasi rinci dan
Kriteria penilaian:
Pencapaian fungsi sosial
Kelengkapan dan keruntutan struktur teks deskriptif
Ketepatan unsur kebahasaan: tata bahasa, kosa kata, ucapan, tekanan kata, intonasi, ejaan, dan tulisan tangan
Kesesuaian format penulisan/ penyampaian
Unjuk kerja
Melakukan monolog tentang deskripsi orang, tempat wisata, bangunan bersejarah terkenal di depan kelas / berpasangan
Ketepatan dan kesesuaian dalam menggunakan struktur teks dan unsur kebahasaan dalam membuat teks deskriptif
Pengamatan
(observations):
Bukan penilaian formal seperti tes, tetapi untuk tujuan memberi balikan. Sasaran penilaian
Perilaku tanggung jawab, peduli, kerjasama, dan cinta damai, dalam melaksanakan Komunikasi
Ketepatan dan kesesuaian dalam menyampaikan dan menulis teks deskriptif
6 x 3
JP
4.9. Menyunting teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis, sederhana, tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, dengan memperhatikan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan yang benar dan sesuai konteks.
4.10. Menyusun teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, dengan memperhatikan tujuan, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan, secara benar dan sesuai dengan konteks.
.
bersejarah terkenal
(2) Kata sifat yang terkait dengan orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal
(3) Ejaan dan tulisan tangan dan c etak yang jelas dan rapi
(4) Ucapan, tekanan kata, intonasi, ketika mempresentasikan secara lisan.
(5) Rujukan kata
Topik
Keteladanan tentang
perilaku toleran,
kewirausahaan,
nasionalisme, percaya diri.
informasi tertentu serta fungsi sosial dari teks deskripsi yang dibaca/didengar.
Siswa menyunting teks deskripsi yang diberikan guru dari segi struktur dan kebahasaan
Berkelompok, siswa menggambarkan tempat wisata lain dalam konteks penyampaian informasi yang wajar terkait dengan tujuan yang hendak dicapai dari model yang dipelajari
Mengasosiasi
Dalam kerja kelompok terbimbing siswa menganalisis dengan membandingkan berbagai teks yang menggambarkan orang, tempat wisata, bangunanan bersejarah terkenal dengan fokus pada struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan.
Siswa mengelompokkan teks deskripsi sesuai dengan fungsi sosialnya.
Siswa memperoleh balikan (feedback) dari guru dan teman tentang setiap yang dia sampaikan dalam kerja kelompok.
Mengkomunikasika
n
Berkelompok, siswa menyusun teks deskripsi tentang orang/ tempat wisata/ bangunan bersejarah sesuai dengan fungsi sosial tujuan, struktur dan unsur
Kesungguhan siswa dalam proses pembelajaran dalam setiap tahapan
Ketepatan dan kesesuaian menggunakan strategi dalam membaca
Portofolio
Kumpulan catatan kemajuan belajar berupa catatan atau rekaman monolog teks deskriptif.
Kumpulan karya siswa yang mendukung proses penulisan teks diskriptif berupa: draft, revisi, editing sampai hasil terbaik untuk dipublikasi
Kumpulan hasil tes dan latihan.
Catatan atau rekaman penilaian diri dan penilaian sejawat, berupa komentar atau cara penilaian lainnya
Penilaian Diri dan
Penilaian Sejawat
Bentuk: diary, jurnal,
format khusus,
komentar, atau
bentuk penilaian lain
kebahasaannya
Siswa menyunting deskripsi yang dibuat teman.
Siswa menyampaikan deskripsinya didepan guru dan teman dan mempublikasikannya di mading.
Siswa membuat kliping deskripsi tentang orang, tempat wisata atau bangunan bersejarah yang mereka sukai.
Siswa membuat laporan evaluasi diri secara tertulis tentang pengalaman dalam menggambarkan tempat wisata dan bangunan termasuk menyebutkan dukungan dan kendala yang dialami.
Siswa dapat
menggunakan
‘learning journal’
2. Analytical Scale for ESL Writing
Figure by H. Jacob in Weigle,S.C (2002: 116) adapted to criteria of a descriptive
text
Aspects of
Writing
Quality Level Criteria Score
Con
ten
t
Excellent to
very good
30-27 Good development of students‘
writing and relevant to assigned
topic
Good to
average
26-22 Limited development of students‘
writing, most relevant to the topic
but lacks detail
Fair to poor 21-17 Limited knowledge of subject and
minimally focused on the topic
Very poor 16-13 Ideas are unclear
Org
an
iza
tio
n/
Fo
rm
Excellent to
very good
20-18 Ideas clearly stated and well
organized, satisfactory use of
cohesion
Good to
average
17-14 Loosely organized but main idea
stand out, somewhat copy
Fair to poor 13-10 Lack of logical sequencing and
development of ideas
Very poor 9-7 Does not communicate, no
organization
Sty
le/
Vo
cab
ula
ry
Excellent to
very good
20-18 Use variety of vocabulary and
idiomatic expression
Good to
average
17-14 Varies vocabulary and expression,
but makes occasional errors in
word choice
Fair to poor 13-10 Use limited vocabulary with
frequent errors
Very poor 9-7 Have many errors in vocabulary
usage, even at the baisc level
La
ng
uag
e U
se
Excellent to
very good
25-22 Use effective complex grammar
structures with few errors of
agreement
Good to
average
21-18 Use effective complex sentences
with several errors of agreement
Fair to poor 17-11 Use simple sentence in frequent
errors in tense, agreement and
meaning is confused
Very poor 10-5 Use simple sentences dominated
with errors
Mec
ha
nic
s
Excellent to
very good
5 Use good accuracy in
punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Good to
average
4 Occasionally errors in
punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Fair to poor 3 Frequentt errors in punctuation,
capitalization, and spelling
Very poor 2 Dominated errors in punctuation,
capitalization, and spelling
Total Score
3. RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN (RPP) CYCLE I
Nama Sekolah : SMK SARASWATI Salatiga
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Progaram Studi Keahlian : Semua Program
Paket Keahlian : Semua Keahlian
Kelas/Semester : X / I
Materi Pokok : Descriptive Text
Alokasi waktu : 6 x 45 menit (2 x pertemuan)
A. Kompetensi Inti
1. Menghayati dan mengamalkan ajaran agama yang dianutnya.
2. Menghayati dan mengamalkan perilaku jujur, disiplin, tanggungjawab,
peduli (gotong royong, kerjasama, toleran, damai), santun, responsif dan
pro-aktif dan menunjukan sikap sebagai bagian dari solusi atas berbagai
permasalahan dalam berinteraksi secara efektif dengan lingkungan sosial
dan alam serta dalam menempatkan diri sebagai cerminan bangsa dalam
pergaulan dunia.
3. Memahami, menerapkan, menganalisis pengetahuan faktual, konseptual,
prosedural dan metakognitif berdasarkan rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu
pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya, dan humaniora dengan wawasan
kemanusiaan, kebangsaan, kenegaraan, dan peradaban terkait penyebab
fenomena dan kejadian, serta menerapkan pengetahuan prosedural pada
bidang kajian yang spesifik sesuai dengan bakat dan minatnya untuk
memecahkan masalah.
4. Mengolah, menalar, dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret dan ranah abstrak
terkait dengan pengembangan dari yang dipelajarinya di sekolah secara
mandiri, bertindak secara efektif dan kreatif, serta mampu menggunakan
metoda sesuai kaidah keilmuan.
B. Kompetensi Dasar
3.7 Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.10 Menyusun teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis sederhana tentang orang,
tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, dengan
memperhatikan tujuan, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan, secara
benar dan sesuai dengan konteks.
C. Indikator Pencapaian Kompetensi
3.7.1 Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
3.7.2 Membedakan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.7.1 Menyusun teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan
bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.7.2 Mendemonstrasikan teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat
wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya.
D. Tujuan Pembelajaran
1. Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada teks
deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
2. Membedakan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada teks
deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
3. Menyusun teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan
bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4. Mendemonstrasikan teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat
wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya.
E. Materi Pembelajaran
Terlampir.
F. Metode
1. Pendekatan : Scientific Approach
2. Strategi : Group Discussion
3. Metode : SAVI (Somatic, Audio, Visual, Intellectual)
G. Media dan Alat Pembelajran
1. Media : Printed material, picture.
2. Alat : Whiteboard, boardmarker.
3. Sumber :
- Gerrot, Linda., & Wignell Peter. (1995). Making Sense of
Functional Grammar. Sydney: Antepodean Educational
Enterprises.
- Pardiyono. 2016. Genre: Mastering English Through Context.
Yogyakarta: Penerbit Andi.
- Buku paket ―Bahasa Inggris‖ untuk SMA/SMK/MA kelas X
2014.
H. Langkah-langkah Pembelajaran
No. Kegiatan Waktu
I Pendahuluan
1. Guru memberi salam kepada siswa
2. Guru mengajak siswa berdoa
3. Guru mengecek kehadiran siswa
4. Guru membacakan Indikator Pencapaian Kompetensi (IPK)
15 menit
Pertemuan ke-1
Pre-test 20 menit
II Kegiatan Inti
a. Mengamati
- Guru memberikan sebuah game untuk menambah kosa kata
menyangkut materi yang akan di pelajari. (S)
- Guru membagi peserta didik dalam kelompok. Satu kelompok
terdiri dari 2 peserta didik.
- Guru membagi contoh teks deskriptif pada setiap kelompok.
- Peserta didik membaca/mendengarkan contoh teks yang
diberikan oleh guru. (A)
- Peserta didik belajar menentukan gagasan pokok mengenai teks
deskriptif.
85 menit
No. Kegiatan Waktu
b. Menanya
- Guru membimbing peserta didik untuk mempertanyakan
informasi yang terdapat dalam teks deskriptif tersebut.
- Peserta didik merespon pertanyaan yang berkaitan dengan teks
secara lisan.
c. Mengumpulkan Informasi/Mencoba
- Guru menjelaskan materi tentang teks deskriptif.
- Peserta didik mendengarkan dan mengamati paparan dari guru.
(V)
d. Mengasosiasi
- Dalam kerja kelompok, peserta didik menganalisis teks deskriptif
yang sudah diberikan dengan fokus pada struktur teks dan unsur
kebahasaan. (I)
e. Mengomunikasikan
- Peserta didik menyampaikan hasil kerja kelompok di depan guru
dan teman.
- Peserta didik memperoleh umpan balik dari guru dan teman
tentang teks deskriptif yang disampaikan.
Pertemuan ke-2
II Kegiatan Inti
1. Mengamati
- Siswa melakukan warming up bersama guru untuk mengingat
kosa kata yang sudah di pelajari pertemuan sebelumnya. (S)
- Guru me review materi yang sudah dipelajari sebelumnya.
2. Menanya
- Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai fungsi sosial dan struktur
teks, pada teks deskriptif yang belum dipahami.
3. Mengumpulkan Informasi/Mencoba
- Siswa menulis teks deskriptif yang di bacakan oleh guru. (A)
- Guru membagi siswa dalam kelompok. Satu kelompok terdiri dari
4 orang.
- Guru membagi gambar kepada setiap kelompok untuk diamati
dan di analisis (taking note). (V)
4. Mengasosiasi
- Dalam kerja kelompok, siswa menyusun teks deskriptif
berdasarkan gambar dan instruksi dari guru. (I)
- Guru mengamati dan menilai siswa dari aspek sikap dan
85 menit
No. Kegiatan Waktu
ketrampilan.
5. Mengomunikasikan
- Siswa menyampaikan hasil kerja kelompok di depan guru dan
teman.
- Siswa memperoleh balikan dari guru dan teman tentang teks
deskriptif yang disampaikan.
Post-test 20 menit
Lampiran 1
Materi Pembelajaran
1. Definition of Descriptive Text
Descriptive text is kind of text which is aimed to describe a particular
person, place or things (Gerot and Wignell, 1995:208).
2. Social Function of Descriptive: To describe a particular person, place or
thing.
3. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text
Identification Identifies phenomenon that will be
describe.
Description Describe parts, qualities, or
characteristics of something or
someone in detail.
3. Language Features of Descriptive Text
1. The use of simple present tense.
The Pattern:
A: S + Verb 1 + (s/es) + O.
B: S + To be (is, am, are) + O
Affirmative (+) Negative (-) Interogative (?)
S + Verb 1 + s/es S + Do not / Does not +
Verb 1
Do / Does + S + Verb 1 +
?
I + Verb 1
You + Verb 1
We + Verb 1
They + Verb 1
He + Verb 1 + s/es
She + Verb 1+ s/es
It + Verb 1 + s/es
I + do+ not+ Verb 1
You + do+ not+ Verb 1
We + do+ not+ Verb 1
They + do+ not+ Verb 1
He + does+ not+ Verb 1
She + does+ not+ Verb 1
It + does+ not+ Verb 1
Do + I + Verb 1 + ?
Do + You + Verb 1 + ?
Do + We + Verb 1 + ?
Do + They + Verb 1 + ?
Does + He + Verb 1 + ?
Does + She + Verb 1 + ?
Does + It + Verb 1 + ?
For Examples:
Positive : (I, You, We, They) work, have
(He, She, It) works, has
Negative : (I, You, We, They) do not work, do not have
(He, She, It) does not work, does not have
a. I have fair skin.
S V1 O
b. She wears blackshoes.
S V1+S O
c. He is my idol.
S To be O
2. The use of adjectives
For Examples: beautiful, handsome, smart, dilligent, kind, funny, fair,
dark, etc.
She is a beautiful girl.
She has fair skin.
3. The use of noun and pronoun
For Examples: I, you, we, they, he, she, it, my brother.
He has black hair.
I have a pointed nose.
4. Focus on specific participant.
Examples: My mother, Borobudur temple, Mr. Jhon, etc.
Example of describing people of descriptive text
My Best Friend
I have a lot of friends in my school, but Dinda has been my best
friend since junior high school. We don‘t study in the same class, but we
meet at school everyday during recess and after school. I first met her at
junior high school orientation and we‘ve been friends ever since.
Dinda is good-looking. She‘s not too tall, with fair skin and
wavy black hair that she often puts in a ponytail. At school, she wears
the uniform. Other than that, she likes to wear jeans, casual t-shirts and
sneakers. Her favourite t-shirts are those in bright colors like pink, light green
and orange. She is always cheerful. She is also very friendly and likes to
make friends with anyone. Like many other girls, she is also talkative.
She likes to share her thoughts and feelings to her friends. I think that‘s
why many friends enjoy her company. However, she can be a bit
childish sometimes. For example, when she doesn‘t get what she wants,
she acts like a child and stamps her feet.
Dinda loves drawing, especially the manga characters. She
always has a sketchbook with her everywhere she goes. She would spend
some time to draw the manga characters from her imagination. Her sketches
are amazingly great. I‘m really glad to have a best friend like Dinda.
Buku paket “Bahasa Inggris” untuk SMA/SMK/MA kelas X 2014 halaman 58.
Identification
Generic
Structure
Description
Description
Lampiran 2
Penilaian Hail Belajar
1. Penilaian Sikap
Penilaian sikap terhadap peserta didik dilakukan selama proses
pembelajaran berlangsung. Penilaian dilakukan dengan observasi,
misalnya dilihat dari aktivitas dan tingkat perhatian peserta didik pada
saat proses pembelajaran.
2. Penilaian Pengetahuan
Penilaian pengetahuan dilakukan dalam bentuk penugasan, peserta
didik diminta untuk menganalisis dan mengidentifikasi fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan dari teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis
dengan memberi dan meminta informasi terkait peristiwa/pengalaman
sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya
3. Penilaian Keterampilan
Penilaian keterampilan dilakukan guru dengan meminta peserta didik
untuk berlatih membuat kalimat dan menyusun menjadi teks deskriptif
berdasarkan gambar.
Instrumen Penilaian
1. Instrumen Penilaian Pengetahuan
Latihan 1
Group Work
1. Group work, each group consists of 4 members.
2. Analyze and Underline the generic structure, and language feature of
the text.
3. Share in front of the class.
MY BEST FRIEND
I have many friends at school. But, my best friend is Vitun. His full
name is Vitun Zaujien. He is smart and has a great sense of humor. I
like him very much.
Zaujein was born on June 1st from an ordinary family. He has one
brother and one sister. His father is a carpenter and his mother is a
house wife. His father is a wise man. His father never forgets teaching
him to have a good manner to everybody and always asks him to be
diligent in studying, and must be the best at school. His parents have a
dream that one day Vitun Zaujien can be a teacher of a university, a
director of his own businesses and great book writer.
Zaujien is a generous boy. At school, he likes to help his
classmates. He doesn‘t mind to help friends do their homework. He
likes lending or giving things to his friends. When a friend has not
eaten breakfast, he takes him to canteen to have it. He often gives
home rides to friends.
What I like most about him is that he is smart and he has a great
sense of humor. He makes the class warm with his humor and pleasant
personalities. In addition, he never comes late and always does his
school tasks on time.
Addapted by (Pardiyono, 2016, p.23)
2. Instrumen Penilaian Keterampilan
Latihan 2
Group Work
1. Group work, each group consists of 4 members.
2. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture at least 20
sentences !
3. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (use of simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun) !
4. Share in front of the class !
Latihan 3 (Pre-test)
Assignment :
Do the instructions below!
a. Please compose a descriptive text about your fellow next to you!
b. Write 2 paragraphs (at least 10 sentences)!
c. Give a good title!
Latihan 4 (Post-test)
1. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture (at least 20
sentences) !
2. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (use of simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun)
Pre test cycle 1
Do the instructios below!
a. Please compose a descriptive text about your fellow next to you.
b. Write 2 paragraphs (at least 10 sentences)
c. Give a good title
Name :
Class :
Number :
Score :
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Post test cycle 1
Do the instructions below!
1. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture (at least 20
sentences) !
2. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (use of simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun)
Table Analytical Scale for ESL Writing
Figure by H. Jacob in Weigle,S.C (2002: 116) adapted to criteria of a descriptive
Aspects of Quality Level Criteria Score
Writing
Co
nte
nt
Excellent to Very 30-27 Good development of students‘ writing and relevant to assigned topic
Good Good to Average 26-22
Limited development of students‘ writing, most relevant to the topic but lacks detail
Fair to Poor 21-17
Limited knowledge of subject and minimally focused on the topic
Very Poor 16-13
Ideas are unclear
Org
an
izati
on
/ fo
rm
Excellent to Very 20-18 Ideas clearly stated and well organized, satisfactory
use of cohesion
Good
Good to Average 17-14
Loosely organized but main ideas stand out,
somewhat copy
Fair to Poor 13-10 Lack of logical sequencing and development of ideas
Very Poor 9-7 Does not communicate, no organization
Sty
le/
Voca
bu
lary
Excellent to Very 20-18 Use a variety of vocabulary and idiomatic expression
Good Good to Average 17-14 Varies vocabulary and expression, but makes
occasional errors in word choice
Fair to Poor 13-10 Use limited vocabulary with frequent errors
Very Poor 9-7 Have many errors in vocabulary usage, even at the basic level
La
ng
ua
ge
Use
Excellent to Very 25-22 Use some effective complex grammar structures
with few errors of agreement
Good Good to Average 21-18 Use effective complex sentences with several
errors of agreement
Fair to Poor 17-11
Use simple sentence in frequent errors in tense,
agreement and meaning is confused
Very Poor 10-5 Use simple sentences dominated with errors
Mec
ha
nic
s
Excellent to Very 5 Use good accuracy in punctuation, capitalization, and spelling
Good Good to Average 4 Occasionally errors in punctuation, capitalization,
and spelling
Fair to Poor 3 Frequent errors in punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Very Poor 2
Dominated errors in punctuation, capitalization, and spelling
Total score :
4.RENCANA PELAKSANAAN PEMBELAJARAN (RPP) CYCLE II
Nama Sekolah : SMK SARASWATI Salatiga
Mata Pelajaran : Bahasa Inggris
Progaram Studi Keahlian : Semua Program
Paket Keahlian : Semua Keahlian
Kelas/Semester : X / I
Materi Pokok : Descriptive Text
Alokasi waktu : 6 x 45 menit (2 x pertemuan)
A. Kompetensi Inti
1. Menghayati dan mengamalkan ajaran agama yang dianutnya.
2. Menghayati dan mengamalkan perilaku jujur, disiplin, tanggungjawab,
peduli (gotong royong, kerjasama, toleran, damai), santun, responsif dan
pro-aktif dan menunjukan sikap sebagai bagian dari solusi atas berbagai
permasalahan dalam berinteraksi secara efektif dengan lingkungan sosial
dan alam serta dalam menempatkan diri sebagai cerminan bangsa dalam
pergaulan dunia.
3. Memahami, menerapkan, menganalisis pengetahuan faktual, konseptual,
prosedural dan metakognitif berdasarkan rasa ingin tahunya tentang ilmu
pengetahuan, teknologi, seni, budaya, dan humaniora dengan wawasan
kemanusiaan, kebangsaan, kenegaraan, dan peradaban terkait penyebab
fenomena dan kejadian, serta menerapkan pengetahuan prosedural pada
bidang kajian yang spesifik sesuai dengan bakat dan minatnya untuk
memecahkan masalah.
4. Mengolah, menalar, dan menyaji dalam ranah konkret dan ranah abstrak
terkait dengan pengembangan dari yang dipelajarinya di sekolah secara
mandiri, bertindak secara efektif dan kreatif, serta mampu menggunakan
metoda sesuai kaidah keilmuan.
B. Kompetensi Dasar
3.7 Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.10 Menyusun teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis sederhana tentang orang,
tempat wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, dengan
memperhatikan tujuan, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan, secara
benar dan sesuai dengan konteks.
C. Indikator Pencapaian Kompetensi
3.7.1 Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
3.7.2 Membedakan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada
teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.7.1 Menyusun teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan
bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4.7.2 Mendemonstrasikan teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat
wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya.
D. Tujuan Pembelajaran
1. Menganalisis fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada teks
deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
2. Membedakan fungsi sosial, struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan pada teks
deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan bangunan
bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
3. Menyusun teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat wisata, dan
bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya.
4. Mendemonstrasikan teks deskriptif sederhana tentang orang, tempat
wisata, dan bangunan bersejarah terkenal, sesuai dengan konteks
penggunaannya.
E. Materi Pembelajaran
Terlampir.
F. Metode
1. Pendekatan : Scientific Approach
2. Strategi : Group Discussion
3. Metode : SAVI (Somatic, Audio, Visual, Intellectual)
G. Media dan Alat Pembelajran
1. Media : Printed material, picture.
2. Alat : Whiteboard, boardmarker.
3. Sumber :
- Gerrot, Linda., & Wignell Peter. (1995). Making Sense of
Functional Grammar. Sydney: Antepodean Educational
Enterprises.
- Pardiyono. 2016. Genre: Mastering English Through Context.
Yogyakarta: Penerbit Andi.
- Buku paket ―Bahasa Inggris‖ untuk SMA/SMK/MA kelas X
2014.
H. Langkah-langkah Pembelajaran
No. Kegiatan Waktu
I Pendahuluan
1. Guru memberi salam kepada siswa
2. Guru mengajak siswa berdoa
3. Guru mengecek kehadiran siswa
4. Guru membacakan Indikator Pencapaian Kompetensi (IPK)
15 menit
Pertemuan ke-1
Pre-test 20 menit
II Kegiatan Inti
a. Mengamati
- Guru memberikan sebuah game untuk menambah kosa kata
menyangkut materi yang akan di pelajari. (S)
- Guru membagi peserta didik dalam kelompok. Satu kelompok
terdiri dari 2 peserta didik.
- Guru membagi contoh teks deskriptif pada setiap kelompok.
- Peserta didik membaca/mendengarkan contoh teks yang
diberikan oleh guru. (A)
- Peserta didik belajar menentukan gagasan pokok mengenai teks
deskriptif.
b. Menanya
- Guru membimbing peserta didik untuk mempertanyakan
informasi yang terdapat dalam teks deskriptif tersebut.
- Peserta didik merespon pertanyaan yang berkaitan dengan teks
secara lisan.
85 menit
No. Kegiatan Waktu
c. Mengumpulkan Informasi/Mencoba
- Guru menjelaskan materi tentang teks deskriptif.
- Peserta didik mendengarkan dan mengamati paparan dari guru.
(V)
d. Mengasosiasi
- Dalam kerja kelompok, peserta didik menganalisis teks deskriptif
yang sudah diberikan dengan fokus pada struktur teks dan unsur
kebahasaan. (I)
e. Mengomunikasikan
- Peserta didik menyampaikan hasil kerja kelompok di depan guru
dan teman.
- Peserta didik memperoleh umpan balik dari guru dan teman
tentang teks deskriptif yang disampaikan.
Pertemuan ke-2
II Kegiatan Inti
1. Mengamati
- Siswa melakukan warming up bersama guru untuk mengingat
kosa kata yang sudah di pelajari pertemuan sebelumnya. (S)
- Guru me review materi yang sudah dipelajari sebelumnya.
2. Menanya
- Guru bertanya kepada siswa mengenai fungsi sosial dan struktur
teks, pada teks deskriptif yang belum dipahami.
3. Mengumpulkan Informasi/Mencoba
- Siswa menulis teks deskriptif yang di bacakan oleh guru. (A)
- Guru membagi siswa dalam kelompok. Satu kelompok terdiri dari
4 orang.
- Guru membagi gambar kepada setiap kelompok untuk diamati
dan di analisis (taking note). (V)
4. Mengasosiasi
- Dalam kerja kelompok, siswa menyusun teks deskriptif
berdasarkan gambar dan instruksi dari guru. (I)
- Guru mengamati dan menilai siswa dari aspek sikap dan
ketrampilan.
5. Mengomunikasikan
- Siswa menyampaikan hasil kerja kelompok di depan guru dan
teman.
- Siswa memperoleh balikan dari guru dan teman tentang teks
85 menit
No. Kegiatan Waktu
deskriptif yang disampaikan.
Post-test 20 menit
Lampiran 1
Materi Pembelajaran
1. Definition of Descriptive Text
Descriptive text is kind of text which is aimed to describe a particular
person, place or things (Gerot and Wignell, 1995:208).
2. Social Function of Descriptive: To describe a particular person, place or
thing.
3. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text
Identification Identifies phenomenon that will be
describe.
Description Describe parts, qualities, or
characteristics of something or
someone in detail.
3. Language Features of Descriptive Text
a. The use of simple present tense.
The Pattern:
A: S + Verb 1 + (s/es) + O.
B: S + To be (is, am, are) + O
Affirmative (+) Negative (-) Interogative (?)
S + Verb 1 + s/es S + Do not / Does not +
Verb 1
Do / Does + S + Verb 1 +
?
I + Verb 1
You + Verb 1
We + Verb 1
They + Verb 1
He + Verb 1 + s/es
She + Verb 1+ s/es
It + Verb 1 + s/es
I + do+ not+ Verb 1
You + do+ not+ Verb 1
We + do+ not+ Verb 1
They + do+ not+ Verb 1
He + does+ not+ Verb 1
She + does+ not+ Verb 1
It + does+ not+ Verb 1
Do + I + Verb 1 + ?
Do + You + Verb 1 + ?
Do + We + Verb 1 + ?
Do + They + Verb 1 + ?
Does + He + Verb 1 + ?
Does + She + Verb 1 + ?
Does + It + Verb 1 + ?
For Examples:
Positive : (I, You, We, They) work, have
(He, She, It) works, has
Negative : (I, You, We, They) do not work, do not have
(He, She, It) does not work, does not have
d. I have fair skin.
S V1 O
e. She wears blackshoes.
S V1+S O
f. He is my idol.
S To be O
5. The use of adjectives
For Examples: beautiful, handsome, smart, dilligent, kind, funny, fair,
dark, etc.
She is a beautiful girl.
She has fair skin.
6. The use of noun and pronoun
For Examples: I, you, we, they, he, she, it, my brother.
He has black hair.
I have a pointed nose.
7. Focus on specific participant.
Examples: My mother, Borobudur temple, Mr. Jhon, etc.
Example of Descriptive Text
MY BEST FRIEND
I have many friends at school. But, my best friend is Vitun. His full
name is Vitun Zaujien. He is smart and has a great sense of humor. I
like him very much.
Zaujein was born on June 1st from an ordinary family. He has one
brother and one sister. His father is a carpenter and his mother is a
house wife. His father is a wise man. His father never forgets teaching
him to have a good manner to everybody and always asks him to be
diligent in studying, and must be the best at school. His parents have a
dream that one day Vitun Zaujien can be a teacher of a university, a
director of his own businesses and great book writer.
Zaujien is a generous boy. At school, he likes to help his
classmates. He doesn‘t mind to help friends do their homework. He
likes lending or giving things to his friends. When a friend has not
eaten breakfast, he takes him to canteen to have it. He often gives
home rides to friends.
What I like most about him is that he is smart and he has a great
sense of humor. He makes the class warm with his humor and pleasant
personalities. In addition, he never comes late and always does his
school tasks on time.
Addapted by (Pardiyono, 2016, p.23)
Lampiran 2
Penilaian Hail Belajar
1. Penilaian Sikap
Penilaian sikap terhadap peserta didik dilakukan selama proses
pembelajaran berlangsung. Penilaian dilakukan dengan observasi,
misalnya dilihat dari aktivitas dan tingkat perhatian peserta didik pada
saat proses pembelajaran.
2. Penilaian Pengetahuan
Penilaian pengetahuan dilakukan dalam bentuk penugasan, peserta
didik diminta untuk menganalisis dan mengidentifikasi fungsi sosial,
struktur teks, dan unsur kebahasaan dari teks deskriptif lisan dan tulis
dengan memberi dan meminta informasi terkait peristiwa/pengalaman
sesuai dengan konteks penggunaannya
3. Penilaian Keterampilan
Penilaian keterampilan dilakukan guru dengan meminta peserta didik
untuk berlatih membuat kalimat dan menyusun menjadi teks deskriptif
berdasarkan gambar.
Latihan 1
Group Work
1. Gruop work, Each group consists of 4 members.
2. Circle the best answer for the paragraph below
3. Share in front of the class.
BEST FRIEND
I (have/has) a best friend, her name is Ayu. She is my classmate. She
(lives/ live) in Panumbangan. (She/ he) has a happy family, her parents and a
sister. She is the second daughter in her family.
Ayu is fourteen years old. (She/ he) is beautiful. She (has/ have) white
skin. She (have/ has) a long black hair. (Her/ his) hair is straight. She (has/ have)
brown eyes. (She/ he) has sharp nose and thin lips. Her height (is/ are) 155 cm,
she (is/ are) taller than me. She (is/ are) slim because (her/ his) weight is only 40
kg.
More over, Ayu is a kind person, because she always (help/ helps) me and
all her friend to do homework. She (is/ has) very smart and she is the first rank in
the classroom.
In addition, she (has/ have) some hobbies. They are writing and singing.
She (likes/ like) to write a short story. Her short story is very interesting. She
always practice in writing everyday. So, she is good in writing. Furthermore, she
also like singing. Her favorite song is Just The Way You Are and her favorite
singer is Bruno Mars. (Her/ his) voice is very melodious, I like (her/ his) voice.
I am happy to be friend with (her/ him).
http://widiairsani.blogspot.com/2014/04/my-best-friend.html
Latihan 2
Group Work
1. Group work, each group consists of 4 members.
2. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture at least 20
sentences !
3. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (using simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun) !
4. Share in front of the class !
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Pre test cycle 1
Do the instructios below!
a. Please compose a descriptive text about your fellow next to you.
b. Write 2 paragraphs (at least 10 sentences)
c. Give a good title
Name :
Class :
Number :
Score :
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Post test cycle 2
Do the instructions below!
1. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture (at least 20
sentences)!
2. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (using simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun) !
3. Give a good title !
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Table Analytical Scale for ESL Writing
Figure by H. Jacob in Weigle,S.C (2002: 116) adapted to criteria of a descriptive
Aspects of Quality Level Criteria Score
Writing
Co
nte
nt
Excellent to Very 30-27 Good development of students‘ writing and relevant to assigned topic
Good Good to Average 26-22
Limited development of students‘ writing, most relevant to the topic but lacks detail
Fair to Poor 21-17
Limited knowledge of subject and minimally focused on the topic
Very Poor 16-13
Ideas are unclear
Org
an
izati
on
/ fo
rm
Excellent to Very 20-18 Ideas clearly stated and well organized, satisfactory
use of cohesion
Good
Good to Average 17-14
Loosely organized but main ideas stand out,
somewhat copy
Fair to Poor 13-10 Lack of logical sequencing and development of ideas
Very Poor 9-7 Does not communicate, no organization
Sty
le/
Voca
bu
lary
Excellent to Very 20-18 Use a variety of vocabulary and idiomatic expression
Good Good to Average 17-14 Varies vocabulary and expression, but makes
occasional errors in word choice
Fair to Poor 13-10 Use limited vocabulary with frequent errors
Very Poor 9-7 Have many errors in vocabulary usage, even at the basic level
La
ng
ua
ge
Use
Excellent to Very 25-22 Use some effective complex grammar structures
with few errors of agreement
Good Good to Average 21-18 Use effective complex sentences with several
errors of agreement
Fair to Poor 17-11
Use simple sentence in frequent errors in tense,
agreement and meaning is confused
Very Poor 10-5 Use simple sentences dominated with errors
Mec
ha
nic
s
Excellent to Very 5 Use good accuracy in punctuation, capitalization, and spelling
Good Good to Average 4 Occasionally errors in punctuation, capitalization,
and spelling
Fair to Poor 3 Frequent errors in punctuation, capitalization, and
spelling
Very Poor 2
Dominated errors in punctuation, capitalization, and spelling
Total score :
5. The Pre-test Cycle I
Pre test cycle 1
Do the instructions below!
a. Please compose a descriptive text about your fellow next to you!
b. Write 2 paragraphs (at least 10 sentences)!
c. Give a good title !
Name :
Class :
Number :
Score :
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6. Material of Descriptive Text
1. Definition of Descriptive Text
Descriptive text is kind of text which is aimed to describe a particular
person, place or things (Gerot and Wignell, 1995:208).
2. Social Function of Descriptive: To describe a particular person, place
or thing.
3. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text
Identification Identifies phenomenon that will be
describe.
Description Describe parts, qualities, or
characteristics of something or
someone in detail.
3. Language Features of Descriptive Text
8. The use of simple present tense.
The Pattern:
A: S + Verb 1 + (s/es) + O.
B: S + To be (is, am, are) + O
Affirmative (+) Negative (-) Interogative (?)
S + Verb 1 + s/es S + Do not / Does not +
Verb 1
Do / Does + S + Verb 1 +
?
I + Verb 1
You + Verb 1
We + Verb 1
They + Verb 1
He + Verb 1 + s/es
She + Verb 1+ s/es
It + Verb 1 + s/es
I + do+ not+ Verb 1
You + do+ not+ Verb 1
We + do+ not+ Verb 1
They + do+ not+ Verb 1
He + does+ not+ Verb 1
She + does+ not+ Verb 1
It + does+ not+ Verb 1
Do + I + Verb 1 + ?
Do + You + Verb 1 + ?
Do + We + Verb 1 + ?
Do + They + Verb 1 + ?
Does + He + Verb 1 + ?
Does + She + Verb 1 + ?
Does + It + Verb 1 + ?
For Examples:
Positive : (I, You, We, They) work, have
(He, She, It) works, has
Negative : (I, You, We, They) do not work, do not have
(He, She, It) does not work, does not have
g. I have fair skin.
S V1 O
h. She wears blackshoes.
S V1+S O
i. He is my idol.
S To be O
9. The use of adjectives
For Examples: beautiful, handsome, smart, dilligent, kind, funny, fair,
dark, etc.
She is a beautiful girl.
She has fair skin.
10. The use of noun and pronoun
For Examples: I, you, we, they, he, she, it, my brother.
He has black hair.
I have a pointed nose.
11. Focus on specific participant.
Examples: My mother, Borobudur temple, Mr. Jhon, etc.
Example of describing people of descriptive text
My Best Friend
I have a lot of friends in my school, but Dinda has been my best
friend since junior high school. We don‘t study in the same class, but we
meet at school everyday during recess and after school. I first met her at
junior high school orientation and we‘ve been friends ever since.
Dinda is good-looking. She‘s not too tall, with fair skin and
wavy black hair that she often puts in a ponytail. At school, she wears
the uniform. Other than that, she likes to wear jeans, casual t-shirts and
sneakers. Her favourite t-shirts are those in bright colors like pink, light green
and orange. She is always cheerful. She is also very friendly and likes to
make friends with anyone. Like many other girls, she is also talkative.
She likes to share her thoughts and feelings to her friends. I think that‘s
why many friends enjoy her company. However, she can be a bit
childish sometimes. For example, when she doesn‘t get what she wants,
she acts like a child and stamps her feet.
Dinda loves drawing, especially the manga characters. She
always has a sketchbook with her everywhere she goes. She would spend
some time to draw the manga characters from her imagination. Her sketches
are amazingly great. I‘m really glad to have a best friend like Dinda.
Buku paket “Bahasa Inggris” untuk SMA/SMK/MA kelas X 2014 halaman 58.
Identification
Generic
Structure
Description
Description
7. The Post-test Cycle I
Post test cycle 1
Do the instructions below!
1. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture (at least 20
sentences)!
2. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure (
identification and description) and language features (using simple
present tense, adjective, noun and pronoun) !
3. Give a good title !
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8. The Pre-test Cycle II
Pre test cycle 2
Do the instructions below!
a. Please compose a descriptive text about your fellow next to you!
b. Write 2 paragraphs (at least 10 sentences)!
c. Give a good title !
Name :
Class :
Number :
Score :
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9.Material of Descriptive Text
1. Definition of Descriptive Text
Descriptive text is kind of text which is aimed to describe a particular
person, place or things (Gerot and Wignell, 1995:208).
2. Social Function of Descriptive: To describe a particular person, place
or thing.
3. Generic Structure of Descriptive Text
Identification Identifies phenomenon that will be
describe.
Description Describe parts, qualities, or
characteristics of something or
someone in detail.
3. Language Features of Descriptive Text
12. The use of simple present tense.
The Pattern:
A: S + Verb 1 + (s/es) + O.
B: S + To be (is, am, are) + O
Affirmative (+) Negative (-) Interogative (?)
S + Verb 1 + s/es S + Do not / Does not +
Verb 1
Do / Does + S + Verb 1 +
?
I + Verb 1
You + Verb 1
We + Verb 1
They + Verb 1
He + Verb 1 + s/es
She + Verb 1+ s/es
It + Verb 1 + s/es
I + do+ not+ Verb 1
You + do+ not+ Verb 1
We + do+ not+ Verb 1
They + do+ not+ Verb 1
He + does+ not+ Verb 1
She + does+ not+ Verb 1
It + does+ not+ Verb 1
Do + I + Verb 1 + ?
Do + You + Verb 1 + ?
Do + We + Verb 1 + ?
Do + They + Verb 1 + ?
Does + He + Verb 1 + ?
Does + She + Verb 1 + ?
Does + It + Verb 1 + ?
For Examples:
Positive : (I, You, We, They) work, have
(He, She, It) works, has
Negative : (I, You, We, They) do not work, do not have
(He, She, It) does not work, does not have
j. I have fair skin.
S V1 O
k. She wears blackshoes.
S V1+S O
l. He is my idol.
S To be O
13. The use of adjectives
For Examples: beautiful, handsome, smart, dilligent, kind, funny, fair, dark, etc.
She is a beautiful girl.
She has fair skin.
14. The use of noun and pronoun
For Examples: I, you, we, they, he, she, it, my brother.
He has black hair.
I have a pointed nose.
15. Focus on specific participant.
Examples: My mother, Borobudur temple, Mr. Jhon, etc.
Example of describing people of descriptive text
My Best Friend
I have a lot of friends in my school, but Dinda has been my best friend since
junior high school. We don‘t study in the same class, but we meet at school
everyday during recess and after school. I first met her at junior high school
orientation and we‘ve been friends ever since.
Dinda is good-looking. She‘s not too tall, with fair skin and wavy black hair
that she often puts in a ponytail. At school, she wears the uniform. Other than that,
she likes to wear jeans, casual t-shirts and sneakers. Her favourite t-shirts are those
in bright colors like pink, light green and orange. She is always cheerful. She
is also very friendly and likes to make friends with anyone. Like many other
girls, she is also talkative. She likes to share her thoughts and feelings to her
friends. I think that‘s why many friends enjoy her company. However, she can be a
bit childish sometimes. For example, when she doesn‘t get what she wants, she acts
like a child and stamps her feet.
Dinda loves drawing, especially the manga characters. She always has a
sketchbook with her everywhere she goes. She would spend some time to
draw the manga characters from her imagination. Her sketches are amazingly
great. I‘m really glad to have a best friend like Dinda.
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Identification
Generic
Structure
Description
Description
10. The Post-test Cycle 2
Post test cycle 2
Do the instructions below!
4. Please compose a descriptive text based on the picture (at least 20 sentences)!
5. Write down your text consisting of the generic structure ( identification and
description) and language features (using simple present tense, adjective, noun
and pronoun) !
6. Give a good title !
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11. Photos Documentation in Teaching Learning Process
The students are doing a pre-test
The students listen to the teacher’s explanation
The students are discussing the task
The students are discussing the task
The students are doing a presentation
The students are doing a post-test
12. Certification For Graduating Paper Counselor
13. Letter For Research Permission
14. Consultation Sheet of Graduating Paper
15. Proof of Conducted Research
16. Satuan Keterangan Kegiatan
SATUAN KETERANGAN KEGIATAN
Nama : Laela Ulyaningrum Jurusan : Tadris Bahasa Inggris
NIM : 113-14-048 Dosen Pembimbing Akademik: Dra. Nur Hasanah, M.Pd.
No Nama Kegiatan Pelaksanaan Sebagai Nilai
1. OPAK STAIN SALATIGA
2014 ―Aktualisasi Gerakan
Mahasiswa yang Beretika,
Disiplin dan Berfikir
Terbuka‖
18-19 Agustus
2014
Peserta 3
2. OPAK JURUSAN
TARBIYAH STAIN
SALATIGA 2014
―Aktualisasi Pendidikan
Karakter Sebagai Pembentuk
Generasi Yang Religius,
Educative, dan Humanis‖
20-21 Agustus
2014
Peserta 3
3. WORKSHOP
ENTREORENEURSHIP ―
Menanamkan Nilai-nilai Jiwa
Kewirausahaan Mahasiswa
yang Kreatif dan Inovatif‖
22 Agustus
2014
Peserta 2
4. SEMINAR NASIONAL
―Perlindungan Hukum
Terhadap Usaha Mikro
Menghadapi Pasar Bebas
ASEAN‖
2014 Peserta 8
5. SEMINAR NASIONAL ―
Peran Mahasiswa Dalam
Mengawal Masa Depan
Indonesia Pasca Pilpres
2014‖
25 September
2014
Peserta 8
6. ―Achievement Motivation
Training (AMT), dengan
tema: DENGAN AMT
SEMANGAT
MENYONGSONG
PRESTASI‖
12 Agustus
2014
Peserta 2
7. ORIENTASI DASAR
KEISLAMAN (ODK)
dengan tema
―PEMAHAMAN ISLAM
RAHMATAN LIL
‗ALAMIN SEBAGAI
LANGKAH AWAL
MENJADI MAHASISWA
BERKARAKTER‖
21 Agustus
2014
Peserta 2
8. UPT PERPUSTAKAAN
(Library User Education)
28 Agustus
2014
Peserta 2
9. Simposium Nasional
―Tantangan Modernitas Umat
Islam dalam Himpitan Assean
Economic Community
(AEC)‖
1 Mei 2015 Panitia 8
10. SEMINAR NASIONAL
―Islam dan Diskursus
Kebangsaan‖
24 Januari 2015 Peserta 8
11. Training Kepemimpinan
Tingkat Nasional dengan
tema ―Membumikan
Kepemimpinan Profetik,
Transformasi Spirit
Kenabian‖
7-9 September
2015
Peserta 3
12. SEMINAR NASIONAL
―Pemberdayaan Perempuan,
Mengembalikan Peran
Permpuan dalam Ranah
Domestik dan Publik‖
5 Januari 2015 Peserta 8
13. SEMINAR NASIONAL
―Aktualisasi Peran
Mahasiswa di Era
Globalisasi‖
27 Mei 2015 Peserta 8
14. ―Kegiatan DIANPIRU 31 Agustus Pendamping 4
(Gladian Pimpinan Regu)‖ 2017
15. Kegiatan LDK (Latihan
Dasar Kepemimpinan)
24-26 Agustus
2017
Pendamping 4
16. ―Workshop Peningkatan
Kinerja Pendidik dan Tenaga
Kependidikan dalam
Memantapkan Pelaksanaan
Kurikulum 2013 Tahun
2017‖
25, 31 Juli, 1, 2,
3, dan 5
Agustus 2017
Peserta 6
17. ―Kegiatan Kemah Bakti
Pelantikan Anggota GUDEP
04.126-127‖
7-9 September
2017
Pendamping 4
18. ―Kegiatan Karnaval
Peringatan Hari
Kemerdekaan RI Tingkat
Kota Salatiga yang ke 72‖
3 September
2017
Pendamping 4
19. ―Kegiatan PHBI (Peringatan
Hari Besar Islam) Idul Adha
1438 H‖
2 September
2017
Pendamping 4
20. Apresiasi dan Talkshow
Literasi ―Baca Saja Dulu
Nanti Juga Paham‖
12 Oktober
2017
Peserta 2
21. SEMINAR
INTERNASIONAL
―Menjadi Mobilepreneur
dalam Era E-commerce‖
25 April 2017 Peserta 8
22. Art and Language Exhibition
2018 Entitled ―Sumpah
Abimanyu‖
25 April 2018 Peserta 2
23. SEMINAR NASIONAL
―Peringatan Hari Bumi 22
April‖
29 April 2017 Peserta 8
24. Art and Language Exhibition
2017 ―Kidung Katresnan
Dewi Arimbi‖
26 April 2017 Peserta 2
25. NATIONAL SEMINAR
―Unlocking Students
Potential to Deal with
Globaliation‖
6 Mei 2017 Peserta 8
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