journal 10/31 (happy halloween!!!) this journal has multiple parts so make sure you answer all...
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Journal 10/31 (HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!)This journal has multiple parts so make sure you answer all
parts!In regards to your Ind. Reading novel: What was your favorite part of the novel? What was your least favorite part? Would
you recommend it to a friend? To a teacher? To a class?In regards to this class: Some of you have lower grades than I
think you were expecting (and lower than I know you are capable of); reflect and write upon how you think you did this
quarter. Why did you do as you did? What do you plan to chance, if anything, for next quarter?
In regards to Halloween- had to put it in here somewhere ;-): What are your family traditions, if any, for Halloween? OR
what is your fondest memory of Halloween?
Active vs. Passive Voice
Active Voice
In an active sentence the subject is doing the action (this is how we normally write).
I love my cat. I am going trick or treating tonight
Passive Voice
In a passive sentence the target of the action gets promoted to the subject position.
The homework isdone by you
My cat is Your papers areloved by me. graded by me.
Is passive voice “wrong”?
No! It just isn’t usually the way you want to present your
thoughts.
However…In most formal writings it is best to avoid passive voice when possible for many reasons.
It can make sentences
awkward or vague.
It is also usually wordy.
It will also be more assertive
and better if you do not use passive
sentences.
Why should you avoid passive?
What information does it leave out?
Emmilee is loved.
Amy was driven to the
airport.
Who would use passive voice?Politicians
“Mistakes were made”—Ronald
Reagan (after the Iran-Contra scandal)
“Bombs were dropped”
“Shots were fired”
Who else would use passive voice?
JournalistsScientists
Who else?
When should you use passive voiceIf you don’t know who is taking the
action and are unable to name
the person. When would this
be an issue?
If you are trying to create a
suspenseful or mysterious effect in fiction writing
Passive voice is also recommended in science writing
to help create a sense of objectivity (they are, in a sense,
taking themselves out of the experiments and making it more
universal)
Work Cited
Fogarty, Mignon. "Active Voice Versus Passive Voice." Grammar Girl. N.p., 22 2010. Web. 18 Oct 2012.