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cohesion and coherence 2TRANSCRIPT
Let’s analyse this text
Taken from How to fly a kite, Catch a fish, Grow a flower and cited in Bloor and Bloor, The functional Analysis of English, (1995).
o What does language mean in this text?o Language has a meaning functions or a
metafunctiono Metafunction - A function that realizes other
function.
Metafunction of language (Halliday, 1974)
1. Ideational metafunction = language is used to organize, understand and express our perceptions of the world and our awareness of the world.
2. Logical - relationship between ideas and content
1. Experiential – convey human experience (content or ideas)
of reason between the two main ideas
Metafunction of language (Halliday, 1976)2. Interpersonal metafunction = language allows us
to participate in communicative acts with other people. (to take on roles, to express and understand feelings, attitudes and judgments
o Reveals authors attitude and opinion with use of modality.
o advising parents / target audience
A suggestion / reader may or may not reject this
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Textual metafunction = the aspect of language that allows what is said or written to be related to the rest of what is said or written.Language has a function of organizing itself ways in which texts ‘hang together’ as texts.
o This function is realized through the Word order of the sentences.
o Message is sequenced and text is very coherent and cohesive.
o When a text hang together it has ‘textuality’. o So what is a text?
Metafunction of language (Halliday, 1976)
What is a text?
o A text is ‘any passage( of language) , spoken or written , of whatever length that forms a unified whole’ (Halliday and Hassan, 1976)
o What provides the unity is texture – a text (as opposed to a non text) has texture
What is Texture?
A: What time is it, love?B: Julie left her car at the station today.
o Language is essentially tied to linear sequences whereby one part of a text (sentence or turn at talk) must follow another part of the text (the next sentence or turn at talk).
o Each part of the text creates the context within which the next bit of the next text is interpreted.
o We construct relationships between what is said/ written NOW and what was said/written a moment ago.
o TEXTURE IS SEQUENTIAL IMPLICATIVENESSo Therefore if texts are to make sense to readers the
links between the parts have to be easily recoverable.
o What scenarios can you think of to link these two utterances?
Text or non- text?
I’m from EnglandI’ve been here 20 years now. I really like it here.
I’m from EnglandCabbages are green.Is there a doctor in the house?
o Each sentence is grammatically incorrect.
o This is a non-text. Because for a text to be a text, it has to be grammatically coherent.
o Not a meaningful whole.o Only commonality
between the sentences is grammatical
parallelism.o ( A subject, a present
continuous perfect aspect verbal group,
either a direct object or an expression of
location, followed by a prepositional phrase
expressing duration.
o Both texts has no communicative function and are therefore no texts.
o Missing: contextual or situational coherence.
Text or non- text?
COHERENCE
2 types of coherence
A text has situation coherence when we can think of one situation in which all the clauses of the text could occur, i.e. when we can specify a field, a mode, and tenor for the entire collection of clause.
A text has generic coherence when we can recognize the text as an example of a particular genre, i.e. when can identify a schematic structure, with each part of the text expressing one element in the unfolding, staged organization of the language event.
TEXT OR NON TEXT
o What is lacking in this text?o Situational coherence – all of the instances
mentioned in the text are unlikely to occur together. o Coherence of field- from mice, to Paris, to a race and
to chocolate crackles.o Coherence of mode: Both written language and
spoken. (Spoken parts do not cohere with the written parts)
o Coherence of tenor: The speaker or the writer’s role in the text is not clear.
Orientation: a narrative is about to be told.
Setting: the time and place.
Complication: events leading up to a climax
Climax: a pivotal momentResolution: how things get resolvedEvaluation: judgments and commentary on the story
Coda: wrapping things up and pointing out a moral purpose.
o Text has generic coherence but lacks situational coherence.
o Is not one story but a number of them. (it’s not one context upon which the story is built upon
o Some cohesiveness between conjunctions; (that, so)o Participants keep change.
TEXT OR NON TEXT
o Coherence refers to a paragraph’s external contextual properties.
o Cohesion refers to the a paragraph’s internal properties.
o Lack of contextual coherence is reflected in and is a reflection of , its accompanying lack of internal organization, i.e. its lack of cohesion.
o IMPLICATIVE SEQUENTIALNESS: The key idea in cohesion is that there is a semantic tie between an item at one point in a text and an item at another point.
Cohesion
Cohesion
Text is numbered but is to be read as one piece
o This is a non text.o Kinds of activities
change from sentence to sentence
o White mice (1) to weather (2) races starting (3) don’t know what 4 is about (5) cookery
o Participantso Tiptoe is introduced but
never referred to again.o (2) Pariso (3) Race is new and
presented as though we knew which one but no prior mention has been made
o (4) What is ‘it’ and ‘so’?
Cohesion
o Does have some aspects of texture
o Lexical links between words in different sentences
o Cheese is repeated in sentence 1 and 2.
o Cheese is a type of dairy product mentioned in 3.
o Dairy product link with milko Milk with calciumo Calcium with vitamin
deficiency
o Participants keep changingo Generic coherence is
lackingo Each sentence seem to be
drawn from a different genre.
Cohesion
o It has limited internal cohesion.o It (2) refers to the book o He (3) refers to Michael.o She (4) refers to Jane o Together (5) refers to Michael
and Jane.o This text has referential
cohesion.o It is a recount. Each sentence
reports what occurs next.
o But it does not have lexical cohesiveness.
o 1. book, glove compartment, take, give
o Smell, terribleo Coughed, saido Asked, prettyo cook
o Without lexical cohesiveness it is difficult to construct a context with which a text is concerned.
Cohesion
This ilooks like a rcountTelling of personal experience Schematic structure – orientation (1) Sequence of events (2 -7)paragraphs have consistency in lexical items (Paris, sightseeing, Lourve, weather terms, referntial cohesion ( I and we )
Cohesion
o The logical relationship (conjunctions) between sentences are used incorrectly.
o Therefore there is a problem with it’s conjunctive cohesion.
o Instead of a relation of cause/ consequence we are confronted with a concessive relationship (however(
o Instead of a relationship of contrast between what we had hoped to do and what we actually do, we actually get a relationship of addition created (and)
o Meanwhile expresses temporal simultaneity, yet there is no other action for this one to be simultaneous with; prior to that is totally confusing.
o Instead of the conclusion be presented because of the prior events, the writer uses ‘in addition’ which is not logical,
o Has a recount structureo Shows Consistency of participants - referential
cohesion .o Shows Consistency of lexical choice. o Has conjunctive cohesion.o No use is made of devices for avoiding
retrievable and redundant information.
o Reference ties make the Mark of (1) retrievable as the identity of the he used later. Lisa is retrievable for she
o Lexical ties link the processes of offering chocolates …taking chocolates ….eating chocolates.
o Conjunctive cohesion – the logical relations we expect in a recount are also observed, with the clauses linked both causally (so) and temporally (then).
o Substitution and ellipsis create ties – another must be related to one of the chocolates.