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Revisio n Nothing’s ever perfect….

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Page 1: Lesson Plan: Revise revise revise

Revision

Nothing’s ever perfect….

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What is revision?

Re-seeingRe-shaping

The Writing Process– Invention– Drafting– Revision

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Revision’s Two Parts

Higher Order

(Content)

Lower Order

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Higher Order Revising

Thesis Evidence Development Arrangement

Know your audience AND the “so what?”

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Techniques

Peer ReviewSelf as AudienceRead AloudToulmin AnalysisTake a Break

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Lower Order Revising

Transitions Spelling (beware the checker) Word Choice Correct Punctuation! Subject-Verb Agreement

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Techniques

Peer Review Read Aloud Backwards paper reading

use your resources

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Group Activity

In groups of two, revise a short

paragraph.

What and how did we revise?

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Assignment

For next class complete Toulmin Analysis

of your drafts.

Be prepared to discuss next time.