let’s talk about punctuation…. why is punctuation so important??? it adds clarity to your...
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Let’s talk about Let’s talk about punctuation…punctuation…
Why is punctuation so important??? It adds clarity to your writing. Sentences without punctuation are
confusing, lack order, and all thoughts and ideas run together.
Has the tiger been fed Bill?
Has the tiger been fed, Bill?
After we had finished raking the dog jumped into the pile of leaves.
After we had finished raking, the dog jumped into the pile of leaves.
Children, disabled and elderly are at risk of being scalded.
Children, disabled, and elderly are at risk of being scalded.
The yellow dress made her skin look pale she wore it anyway.
The yellow dress made her skin look pale, but she wore it anyway.
When you learn to correctly vary your sentence style and structure.
When you learn to correctly vary
your sentence style and structure, your writing will immediately improve.
What writing error occurs when we end a sentence too early and we’ve not written a complete thought?
In your text, read pages 446-447
Stop when your get to Oral Practice
Avoid FRAGMENTS! A fragment is an incomplete thought…
it’s just a piecepiece of a sentence.
Looking out the
window.
Because of the
rainy weather.
Since you are here.
Taking time out
of his busy
schedule.
How do I know if I have a fragment?
Say“It is true that”
before your sentence.If it doesn’t make sense,
it’s a fragment!
It is true that
Looking out the
window.
Because of the
rainy weather.
Since you are here.
Taking time out
of his busy
schedule.
I am tired.
The movie and the book. Waiting for the phone to ring.Because of the rain.He was exhausted.Going to the store. When I was walking my dog.
It is true that…
Write FF for fragmentfragment and SS for sentencesentence. Rewrite each fragment so that it is a complete sentence. You may make up necessary information.1. Many of the radium experiments done by Marie
Smith.
2. Believing that she was right.
3. Mr. Thomson felt that he was right.
4. Mr. Jones continued to argue the point.
5. George, having been on vacation last week.
6. The staff was on vacation last week.
7. The team that won all the games in Oklahoma City last year.
8. That team won all the games in Philadelphia last year.
9. That have hazardous products.
10. Because there were inadequate safety measures at the plant.
Stand Up, Hand Up, Pair UpNote Card Activity…
So, what happens So, what happens when we combine when we combine
two complete two complete sentences and do sentences and do
not use not use punctuation? punctuation? Read pages
454 – 455 in your text.
Stop at Exercise 5
Sticks and stones may break my bones words may never harm me.
Sticks and stones may break my bones words may never harm me.
Sticks and stones may break my bones. Words may never harm me.
The indicted police chief submitted his resignation the mayor accepted it.
The indicted police chief submitted his resignation the mayor accepted it.
The indicted police chief submitted his resignation. The mayor accepted it.
Business is part of our society there is no escape. Business is part of our society there is no escape. Business is part of our society. There is no escape.
I know it’s crazy, but I want you to now write three run-on sentences! This will be the last time you may legally do this!
So, what’s a So, what’s a Comma Comma SpliceSplice??
Two sentences joined with ONLY a comma.
DO NOT DO THAT!
Sticks and stones may break my bones, words may never harm me.
The indicted police chief submitted his resignation, the mayor accepted it.
Business is part of our society, there is no escape.
What is SENTENCE COMBINING and why should
we learn to incorporate this concept into our writing? Read Combining Sentences on pages
464-465 in the text. In your own words, explain why it is
essential to combine sentences & vary your sentence structure.
And another really bad paragraph:
Jane loves living in the city. She doesn’t like the noise at night. Her neighbors are always slamming doors. She is never able to catch them in the act. She has thought about moving. That would be a logical solution. Jane may eventually do so. It would be expensive.
Coordination Coordination - - joins two closely related sentences with a comma and a coordinating conjunction.
The Coordinating Conjunctions
FanboysFanboysForForAndAndNorNorButButOrOrYetYetSoSo
Sticks and stones may break my bones words may never harm me.
Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words may never harm me.
How can we combine these sentences using COORDINATION?
All of Mrs. Gibson’s students are brilliant. They love to combine sentences using coordination.
All of Mrs. Gibson’s students are brilliant, and they love to combine sentences using coordination.
In your notes, combine correctly combine this run-on sentence using COORDINATION:
Business is part of our society there is no escape.
Business is part of our society, and there is no escape.
Using COORDINATION, combine sentences in this paragraph to make it more effective. I love living downtown. and I have a
wonderful view. I have an apartment. I can see the Golden Gate Bridge. I can see many cargo ships pass under the bridge each day. I like the restaurants in San Francisco. I can find wonderful food from just about every country. I don’t like the traffic in the city.
Next Rule:
Subordination joins two sentences together with a subordinating conjunction, making one idea dependent on the other.
Some common Subordinating Conjunctions:
after, although, as, as if, because, before, even if, even though, if, in order to, since, though, unless, until, whatever, when, whenever, whether, and while.
Two Important Rules…Two Important Rules…
1. When the sentence BEGINSBEGINS with the subordinating conjunction, put the comma after the dependent clause. (Just like this sentence!)
Example:
Whenever you actively participate in class, you receive points.
2. When the subordinating conjunction is placed between two sentences, no comma is needed.
Example:
You receive points whenever you actively participate in class.
BecauseBecause they could paint with their hands, the class was fun for the children.
The class was fun for the children becausebecause they could paint with their hands.
WhenWhen their grades arrived in the mail,
the students discovered they passed the test.
The students discovered they passed the test whenwhen their grades arrived in the mail.
IfIf Patricia manages it, the new branch office will be successful
The new branch office will be successful ifif Patricia manages it.
Complete Handout!
Combine into two sentences: one using coordinationone using subordination
Do not leave out any details!!! She was our Latin teacher. We were in high school. She was tiny. She was a birdlike woman. She was swarthy. She had dark eyes. Her eyes were sparkling. Her hair was graying.
Let’s get REALLY Let’s get REALLY basic for a bit…basic for a bit…
What’s a subject?What’s a predicate?
Read bottom of page 37 and write the definition of each in
your notes.
Who is the subject?
What is the predicate?
Subject Predicate
Ashley walks to the park
She takes a friend with her
Ashley and her friend climb a tree
Ashley walks to the park.She takes a friend with her.Ashley and her friend climb a tree.
A helpful tip when finding subjects:A subject is never in a
prepositional phrase. A preposition is a word used to show
the relationship of a noun to something else, usually a location or a space in time.
Above
In front
Behind
BelowBeyond
Inside
between
Under
Among
With
In
Through
Where are the PREPOSITIONS?
In the morning, you need to help me with the laundry.
He was seeing images among the shadows.
Jake walked his dog with his friends last night.
So…where are the Prepositional Phrases?
In the morning, you need to help me with the laundry.
He was seeing images among the shadows.
Jake walked his dog with his friends last night.
With your table partners, make up a song that utilizes at least 12 of the prepositions. You have TEN
minutes!Prize to the best & most creative
team!
Back to finding subjects & predicates!
Quick Review…What’s a subject?What’s a predicate?Where are they never located?
The world wide disappearance of frogs disturbs and worries me.
The world wide disappearance of
frogs disturbs and worries me.
My partner and I want to know the truth.
My partner and I want to know the truth.
Complete Exercise 3 on page 41 AND exercise 4 on 42.
Now write three sentences & complete the following:
* UNDERLINE the subject* the verb/predicate* Put a around the prepositional phrase
Circle
box
Locate the following in the sentence below:– Subject– Predicate– Simple Predicate– Preposition– Prepositional Phrase
A bouquet of yellow roses will lend color and fragrance to the room.
1. The actor danced across the stage.2. The tiny flowers looked beautiful in the
garden.3. George and his friends played football in the
field.4. The bulldog snored all night long.5. The tiny brown acorn fell off the tall oak tree.6. Jesse's mother baked cookies.7. The television in the living room was
unplugged.8. Marvin put on his working boots.9. Patricia went to the bakery to pick up a loaf of
bread.11. A gray wolf snuck into the barn last night.12. The rain was coming down.13. The busy beaver gnawed the tree trunk.
Complete multiple choice worksheet
Eliminate Wordy Eliminate Wordy Sentence Sentence
Constructions!Constructions!
#1 Avoid Pretentious Language!
Implementation of the new, unique, and illustrious procedure will be accomplished on the administrative level prior to its implementation at the student level. Administrators will implement the procedure before students.
The audience was lachrymose at the termination of the drama, especially expressing the predilection for the heroine’s experienced reunification with her long-lost progeny.
The audience was tearful at the
end of the play. They especially liked when the heroine was reunited with her long-lost children.
Eliminating WEliminating WORDINESS…ORDINESS…
#2 Avoid Redundancy – don’t be repetitive#2 Avoid Redundancy – don’t be repetitive
– I, personally, would like the answer.
– It is very unusual to find a politician who has never told a deliberate lie on purpose.
– cooperate together
– basic essentials
– "9 a.m. in the morning
– 6 p.m. in the evening
– In today's world of the present
Complete Handout
Independently…
To eliminate wordiness…To eliminate wordiness…
Use the Use the Active VoiceActive Voice: Make the
subject perform the action..
– The child was bitten by the dog.
• The dog bit the child.
– The research will be presented by a health care professional.
• A health care professional will present the research.
– There is an unequal amount of power between the rich and the poor.• The rich have more power than the poor.
Passive Voice Active Voice
Let’s change these to the PASSIVE voice:John collects money. Anna opened the window. We have done our homework. I will ask a question. He can cut out the picture. The sheep ate a lot. We do not clean our rooms. William will not repair the car. Did Sue draw this circle? Could you feed the dog?