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2-SIDED OPINION ESSAY

also called

______________ and _____________ essay

WORKSHEETS & Writing TasksPROJECT ASSESSMENT

In-class project: 8% - Assessment criteria are located on the checklist and the rubric

There will also be portfolio and Worksheet assignments

GUIDELINES & TROUBLESHOOTING

Absences: Avoid absences during this project. If you must be absent, please keep documentation and

make every effort to visit your instructor’s office hours and complete the work there.

Outside help. Bring your worksheets and ipads with you every day. EVERY DAY. You will need them

during the drafting. On the day of the final draft, you may use only your first draft and a checklist. Please

take the drafting process seriously.

Materials

iBook project book – please download

Websites

Articles on Different topics: https://writingthemes.wordpress.com/

Blog Page:

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https://writingthemes.wordpress.com/

PROJECT STEPS

Writing Process

Step 1: Get Ideas: Brainstorming TechniqueStep 2: Write the IntroductionStep 3: Make an Idea Map Step 4: Write Body Sentences -Topic / Reason SentencesStep 5: Write the Body Sentences – Supporting SentencesStep 6: Write the ConclusionStep 7: First DraftStep 8: Final Draft

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Example Topic - Mobile phones are the most common form of technology seen anywhere in the world. Many people think

they are a good thing, but some believe they are a bad thing. What is your opinion of

them?

Discuss this topic.

Did many people use them in the past? Your parents or grandparents.

Do many people use mobiles NOW? Who uses them?

Do you use them? When did you get your first mobile? Is your mobile important to you? Do you have more than one? Explain this.

Who does NOT use mobile and why? How does this affect them?

Can mobiles be a problem sometimes? Who doesn’t like them? Why? When? Give examples and explain. Have you ever been annoyed by them?

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Example Essay

INTRO

Body 1

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BODY 2

Conclusion

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Introductiona) In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give several examples. b) Our world has changed much since the days of our parents, and one of the biggest developments is the way in which we communicate with mobile phones. c) However, some people believe that mobile phones are not always used in a good way. d) In my opinion, mobile phones have both pros and cons to their use. e) Many people agree that mobile phones are important in our life. Body paragraph 1 f) Another benefit is that mobile phones can help people in dangerous situations. g) The most important one is that they help to bring people together more. h) On one hand, there are many benefits to using mobile phones. i) As a result, mobile phones have made the world a smaller place. j) For instance, people can talk to each other wherever they are in the world. k) For example, if tourists have car problems in the desert, they can use their mobile phones to call for assistance, so mobile phones are very useful.l) An example is that people who work abroad can still talk to their families back home any time they like.

Body paragraph 2m) For instance, a pop tune can be annoying when it is very loud and coming from someone’s mobile phone next to you. n) Because of this, movie theatres ask their customers to turn off their phones. o) As a result, many people have been disturbed by a loud mobile phone. p) The main problem is that they are very noisy in public places, such as in restaurants or movie theatres. q) Another problem with mobile phones is that some people do not show respect when they are in a private building, such as a hospital or mosque. r) Consequently, mobile phones cause more stress in society.s) On the other hand, mobile phones can cause problems. Conclusiont) In my opinion, we cannot avoid the changes that technology brings, but we must learn to use such technology in a sensible way and respect the wishes of others.u) In conclusion, I agree to a certain extent that while mobile phones play a positive role in today’s society, they also have their negative effects. v) This is because although mobile phones help to bring people together more and are useful in emergency situations, they can be a problem because they disturb other people and make society more stressful.

MODEL ESSAY ANALYSIS

6Look at the model essay and answer the following questions.

1. What is the TOPIC of the essay?

a) Benefits of mobile phones

b) Problems with mobiles

c) Problem and solution

d) Pros and cons

2. How many PARAGRAPHS are there? _____ How many words? _____

3. Does the writer give an opinion about the topic? What is it?

4. What is the topic of each paragraph? (highlight/circle these on your paper)

5. What are the TWO MAIN ADVANTAGES TO MOBILE PHONES? (Highlight / box these)

a)

b)

6. What are the TWO MAIN REASONS that the writer uses to support the opinion that mobile phones

are NOT a good thing? (Highlight / box these)

7. After each reason, the writer adds more SUPPORT. What are the different kinds of support the

writer uses? (highlight/underline these)

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Writing Process

Step 1: Get Ideas: Brainstorming TechniqueStep 2: Draft the IntroductionStep 3: Make an Idea Map Step 4: Draft Body Sentences –

Topic SentencesSupporting Sentences

Step 5: The ConclusionEdit/RewriteFinal Draft

Step 1: Brainstorming Explanation of BrainstormingWHY is this IMPORTANT? (answer one or more of these questions

Is it new? (change from past to present) Is it happening everywhere? Is it very important for a certain group of people?

What is your opinion? (choose one that matches your real opinion)

Partly agree Agree, but can see two sides Disagree, but can see the other side

benefits dangers

Example Brainstorm

PRACTICE TOPIC – MOBILE PHONES Why is this topic important? In the past no one had them. Now everyone has

them. What is your REAL OPINION ABOUT THIS? ………………………………………….

benefits dangerseveryone has themparents can use to connect with childrenemergenciesteachers can use them in classnon stop communication

distractingdangerous while drivingbad relationshipswaste timealways alone

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connect to internetgood for business

noisy in publiccheating

Practice Brainstorming:

1. (Tips: you can see both sides. This is a 2-sided essay. Just write notes, no sentences needed. Use the organization below. Write at least 50 words for each topic

Questions: How many sections are in the Brainstorm? Why? Practice below:

Topic #1: Today, many students live in university accommodation (hotels). What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a university hostel?

Background/importance: _____________________________________________

your real opinion: ________________________________________________________

Topic #2: These days education is a hot topic and everyone is interested. There are both benefits and dangers of working in groups in school

Background/importance: _____________________________________________

your opinion: ________________________________________________________

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Topic #3: There are both advantages and disadvantages of homework

Background/importance: _____________________________________________ your opinion: ________________________________________________________

Topic #4: There are both positive and negative aspects of early marriage


Topic #5: There are both advantages and disadvantages of watching TV for children

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Topic #6: There are both advantages and disadvantages of Social Media programs like Facebook Instagram, etc.


YOUR TOPIC:

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Research

Score (10 points)9-10: You have excellent ideas for all topics8 – Very Good6-7 Pass

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Writing Project – Research/Brainstorm

Can you think of some reasons for and against women having jobs?Women in the Workplace

For Against

Put the correct word/phrase in the correct column above:

have a career/profession stay at home enter the workplace go out to work employed unemployed

Have a job Don’t have a job

Pre – reading – skim the articles and complete the chart below.

Women in the Workplace

Put a in the correct box beneficial (+) harmful (-)

Reading 1 (page 4)

Reading 2 (page 6)

Reading 3 (page 8)

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Women in the Workplace

Written by Isla Wight

Over the last 60 years, more and more women have chosen to enter the workplace and take paid employment. They wish to have a career or profession, instead of staying at home, and so they are now getting jobs in many different areas, such as government, business and education.

There are good educational reasons why women should enter the workplace. Many women in the UAE are well-educated. For example, more women than men graduate from universities in the UAE – see Figure 1. However, many of these women do not get jobs after they leave university. Instead, they stay at home. Some people say that this is a waste of government resources (money), as these women are not really using what they have learned at university.

There is another reason why women should enter the workplace. It will be good for both government and society. As more and more well-educated women get important jobs in business and government, they will have a stronger influence on important decision-making in their country. Not only men but also women will be responsible for making important decisions in government and business. This will make a more balanced society, where both men and women have power and are equally important. It will also provide a good example for younger generations of women. If young women see other women doing important jobs in the working world, they will want to follow them and do the same.

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75%

25%

UAE University Graduates - UAE nationals 2003

women

men

Figure 1 - Dr Fatima Shamsi (2009)

Reading 1

Ibtisam Badwawi – Dubai's first female judge

Questions for Reading 1write the least number of words for each answer. Use paraphrasing. Highlight

the answers in the readings, and

1) What are the educational reasons for women going to work?

2) Why is it good for government and society if women go out to work?

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Written by John Smith

Many Arab women today do not want to stay at home. They want to go out

and work. However, not everyone thinks this is a good thing. Some people think it will be bad for both Arab society and the family.

Firstly, there is Arab society to look at. Traditionally, Arab men and women have had separate roles in work. Women have stayed at home, cleaning the house, cooking and looking after the children. Men have gone out to work. However, some people feel if more women go out to work, these traditions will be lost and there will no longer be separate roles or positions for men and women in Arab society. They believe that such changes are not progress, if they cause the loss of important traditions that people have believed in for hundreds of years.

There are also some practical reasons why women should stay at home. It is too difficult for married women with children to look after their families and also to go out to work. Firstly, time is a problem. If women go out and work, they cannot spend enough time with their children, because they will not be at home during the day. They will be out working instead. Secondly, having a paid job and also being a mother is too tiring

for many women. When these women come home after working hard all day, they will be very tired and maybe they will not have enough energy to play with their children. Therefore, mothers who do not have jobs are better mothers, for these reasons: 1) they can spend more time with their children because they don’t go out to work, and 2) they will also have more energy to play with them each day.

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Reading 2

Women carpet-making at home

Women making bread

Questions for Reading 2

1) Why is it harmful to Arab society if women have careers outside the home?

2) Give two practical reasons why women should stay at home and not go out to work?

(i)

(ii)

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Written by David Brown

Today, more and more Arab women want to have careers outside the home, as well as having families. This can have important economic benefits to a country and it can also help these women’s families.

Firstly, there are economic benefits. Today, the UAE has a large number of foreign (non-national) workers doing jobs – see Figure 2. The UAE Government plans to reduce the number of foreign workers in the UAE by giving more jobs to UAE nationals. This policy is called “Emiratization.” One way to do this is to get more UAE women nationals to enter the workplace and begin careers. Currently, many UAE women do not have jobs – see Figure 3. If more UAE women nationals get jobs, there will be less need for the government to bring foreign workers (non-nationals) into the country. Therefore, more money will stay in the country, and this will be good for the UAE economy as a whole.

There are also financial benefits to the family if more women go out to work. If both the husband and the wife are in paid employment, then the parents will bring home more money. As a result, the family will have a more comfortable lifestyle because they will have more money to spend. In other words, they will have a higher standard of living.

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80%

20%

UAE Population (2003)

Non-Nationals Nationals

92%

8%

UAE Workforce (2003)

Non-Nationals Nationals

Figure 2 – Tanmia (2003)

Reading 3

87%

13%

Employment of UAE Women (2006)

unemployedemployed

Figure 3 – The Muthabara Foundation (2006)

Questions for Reading 3

1) What is Emiratization?

2) How can women help Emiratization?

3) How can working women help their families?

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Website Research: Women in the Workplace

Part A. Directions: Find some info in each article to help you support your essay. Do not copy exact words.

1. Read the short page on this website: womenintheworkforce.pdf

Make notes on some of the statistics given.

What are some of the problems that face women in the workplace?

2. Read these words from His Highness Sheikh Mohammed bin Rashed Al Maktoum's website. http://www.sheikhmohammed.ae/vgn-ext-templating/v/index.jsp?vgnextoid=7d3c4c8631cb4110VgnVCM100000b0140a0aRCRD

Find some good ideas or quotations from Sheikh Mohammed, and write them here.

3. The National An article from The National on how Salma became the UAE's first female pilot for Etihad. Etihad's First UAE Female Pilot

Find some good ideas or quotations from Sheikh Mohammed

1. Find another link to a video or article about women that you find interesting. Share it with your classmates, and write the title and short description here.

These articles can also be found at this website: : https://writingthemes.wordpress.com/2014/11/11/women-in-the-workplace/

For easy articles on OTHER Topics, go here: https://writingthemes.wordpress.com/

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https://writingthemes.wordpress.com/2014/11/11/women-in-the-workplace/

Journal Topic: A Woman that you Admire

Write at least 250 words about a women that you know and admire. Include the following and please DOUBLE SPACE. Count the words

1. ______ A brief introduction – give her name, who is she, where is she from

2. ______ Describe her in detail3. ______ Explain your relationship and why you admire her.

and Any other info you would like to include.

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WORD COUNT:

Step 2 - Writing Your INTRODUCTION

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Example Essay question: Many people enjoy _________ ____________. However, some people

think they are too harmful and they should be illegal. Discuss the _________ and ______________of

extreme sports.

Example Introduction: Read the paragraph below and answer the questions about the paragraph.

Sports are a popular form of entertainment all over the world. However, some people believe

that they are unsafe and the government should not allow them. I partly agree with this view

although I can see both sides. In the following essay, I will explain the pros and cons of this issue, and

give my opinion.

QuestionsHow many sentences? How many words? Does it give an opinion? (where?) Does the opinion give 1 side or two sides of the topic? Does it repeat the essay question? (where?) What does the first sentence do?____ What does the last sentence do?

The Intro has 3 main parts

1. Background Information – Helps the reader understand why it is interesting/important, and helps them connect the topic in the world

2. Essay Topic –helps the reader focus (often includes both sides)3. Thesis - your personal view (mention 2 sides, and if you agree more strongly with 1 side)

a. Give YOUR IDEA about the topic – which side will you takeb. Explain how your essay will be organized

Think about this (Consider)

Which parts of the intro are the same for ANY essay -- you can prepare practice? Which do you need to think of on exam day? Which parts are found on the exam paper itself?

Practice: Essay Topic: University is an excellent opportunity for UAEU students. Those who live far from the university are offered housing in the hostels. However, there are some problems with this. Discuss the benefits and issues with the hostels and give your opinion.

Directions: Put the sentences of the introduction in the correct order. Write the number of each piece next to the letter:

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Introductiona) ______ In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give several examples. b) ______ Nowadays, students all over the UAE have the chance to study at university. c) _______ Unfortunately, there are some problems with this program. d) _______ In my opinion, the hostels are important, but there are both pros and cons to their use. e) _______ Students outside of Al Ain can stay in the hostels. Answer

Copy the intro above in the correct order. yOU can paraphrase some of the words.

Introduction – Sentence #1 – BACKGROUND INFORMATION

Explanation: In the first part (1-2 sentences) of the Intro, you Give BACKGROUND INFORMATION. This means you introduce the topic and show why it is important.

(Background - Styles & Language ideas)Style A: (Past/present ) “In the past, nobody Xed, but nowadays, everyone Xes”Style B: (affects everyone): “These days, everyone has X” or “X affects everyone”Style C: (affects some people a lot) “If you are affected by X, your life will change dramatically”

Practice with Background Information: Look at the 1st sentences in the introductions below. Do they show style A, B, or C?

1. _____ In the past, most women stayed at home, and the men went out to work. These days, however, many women are working too. There are many benefits to women in the workplace, but some people are against the idea. I mostly support women who want to work, but in this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of this issue and give examples.

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1. (b). 2. (e) 3. (c) 4. (d) 5. (a)

2. _____ These days, everyone is very busy and we don’t have time to eat! Fast food restaurants are everywhere. There are some advantages to fast food, but there are some dangers also. Overall, I do not support the popularity of fast food, but I can see both sides. In this essay, I will explain the positive and negative aspects of fast food and give several examples.

3. _______ If you are a student, homework has a big effect on your life because it takes so much of your time. I agree that homework is a very important aspect of school life, but sometimes it is not helpful. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative aspects of homework and give several examples.

More examplesIn our ever changing world, we are today faced with many issues in society. One of these issues is …………………..

All of us face issues with positive or negative effects on our lives. One of these issues is …………………..

Introduction – Part #2 – EXAM TOPIC Explanation: In Part 2 of your Introduction, re-state the topic of the exam. You will find this in the exam!! However, be sure to change the words. Don’t just copy the same words.

Example Exam question: Many people enjoy playing or watching extreme sports. However, some people think they are too harmful and they should be illegal. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of extreme sports.

Practice 1 Re-stating the Exam topic: Match the words in Column A with words in Column B that have the same meanings. (There may be more than one correct answer.

Column A (from the exam paper) Column B (for my essay paper)1. dangerous a) dangers2. Many people enjoy X. b) Should be banned3. X should be illegal. c) X is very popular.4. advantages d) Benefits5. disadvantages e) unsafe6. X is very common. f) Extreme7. more and more people are Xing g) We see X everywhere.

h) Xing is becoming very common.

Example Essay Introduction with re-stated ideas :

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These days, _________________ sports are quite _____________ and we see them

_________________ . However, they are very _______________ and some people believe

they __________ ________ _________. Of course, I believe that people should play

sports, but I can see the other side. In this essay, I will discuss the __________ and

__________ of dangerous sports and give several examples.

Introduction – Part 3 – THESIS

The THESIS is the heart of your introduction and the heart of your essay!! In general, a THESIS means YOUR IDEA, and HOW you will present it. It has two main parts:

a. Thesis, part A - YOUR Opinion about the TOPIC – you agree, disagree, partly agree, can see both sides, etc.Examples: (i) I partly agree that women with children should not work outside the home.(ii) I mostly agree that women should be able to choose, but I can see both sides of the

issue(iii) I agree that women with children need to consider their families first, but I believe

they deserve to have meaningful careers.

b. Thesis Part B - How you will organize your essay – Examples:

(i) “In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and give several examples.” (ii) “This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of X and give several

examples.”

More examples –

There are many positives and negatives to the use of ……, and in this essay, I will illustrate my opinion with several examples.

I believe there are many pros and cons to the issue of …………………., and in this essay, I will support my view with several examples.

With regards to the issue of …………., I believe there are both advantages and disadvantages, and in this essay, I will illustrate my ideas.

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INTRODUCTION REVIEW

Practice - Use what you have learned. Each intro below is missing one of the main parts of the introduction. Use what you learned to complete the intros.

1 Background (everyone/extreme exceptions/big change from past)2. Restate the Exam Topic (Some people….)3. THESIS: opinion + plan (essay organization)

Exam topic #1: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of Social media and Teenagers

Social Media is extremely popular among teens, and most of them have several different

accounts. ________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________. Like

most teens, I enjoy social media, but there are some negative aspects to consider. In this essay, I

will discuss the pros and cons of social media, and give several examples.

Exam topic #2: 75% of the workers in UAE are foreigners. Some people believe that more Emirati nationals should be in the workforce. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue and give your opinion.

_____________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________

While some foreigners are needed to help with the work of the country, there are some dangers to

this. I partly agree that more jobs should go to Emirati citizens. In this essay, I will examine both

sides of this issue and give examples.

Exam Topic #3: Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of iPads in the classroom.

Technology is everywhere these days. At UAE all students use iPads in their classrooms. While it is clear that technology brings us many benefits, there are some disadvantages as well.

___________________________________________________________________________________

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TASK 2 Practice: Steps 1 & 2 Brainstorming Writing the Intro – ORIGINAL TOPIC (YOU CAN DO THIS by yourself or with a partner)

Directions: Spend 10-15 minutes for each topic. 1. Brainstorm ideas (for Intro + Body) 2. Write the Introduction, 3. Check your Intro using the Checklist.

Topic: Expensive Weddings

(Ideas for Introduction) Why important? What is your opinion??

Body 1 ideas (ads) Body 2 ideas (disads)

Step 2 - Write the Introduction – double space

Introduction Checklist 1. __ General Background – why topic is important – these days/in the past/all over the world2. __ The Essay topic “some people ….” (tip: repeat the topic, but NOT SAME WORDS)3. __ THESIS A - your opinion (I partly / mostly agree that…..)4. __ THESIS B – your organization. (In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give examples)5. __ clear language

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Topic: Separate campuses for men and women

(Ideas for Introduction) Why important? What is your opinion??

Body 1 ideas (ads) Body 2 ideas (disads)

Step 2 - Write the Introduction – double space

Introduction Checklist 6. __ General Background – why topic is important – these days/in the past/all over the world7. __ The Essay topic “some people ….” (tip: repeat the topic, but NOT SAME WORDS)8. __ THESIS A - your opinion (I partly / mostly agree that…..)9. __ THESIS B – your organization. (In this essay, I will discuss both sides and give examples)10. __ clear language

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In most parts of the world, cities are becoming larger because people are moving there from the countryside. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in cities.

Put the pieces of each paragraph in order. Write the number next to each piece.Introduction

_____ I believe that it can be beneficial but it may also cause problems.

_____ The following essay will discuss the pros and cons of living in cities.

_____ Because of this, many people have moved from small towns and villages to live in major urban areas.

_____ Nowadays, the world’s population is increasing rapidly and people want a higher standard of living.

Advantages paragraph

_____ so people who want to get a high-level job in a big company need to live in a city.

_____ The other main advantage of living in cities is that cities have more facilities for people to use,

_____ For example, all major companies are based in big cities,

_____ On one hand, living in a city has some important benefits.

_____ because they need good healthcare and education for their children.

_____ Firstly, the opportunities for work and promotion are much better than in the countryside.

_____ As a result, many families live in major cities

_____ such as good hospitals and schools.

Disadvantages paragraph

_____ Consequently, cities can be dangerous places for the people who live there.

_____ Because of this, cities can be unhealthy places to live.

_____ On the other hand, city life may also have some negative effects.

_____ In addition, crime is a serious problem in most major cities.

_____ there is usually more pollution in big cities than in small towns.

_____ For instance, many big cities have problems with noise and air pollution from traffic.

_____ The main one is that the environment is often not clean.

_____ Because so many people live so close together,

_____ This is because criminals have many more places to hide in large cities than in small towns.

Conclusion

_____ careful to keep their families healthy and safe.

_____ but they are often polluted and dangerous.

_____ In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to living in a city.

_____ Therefore, I believe that people who want to live in cities should be

_____ Cities give people the chance to find a good career and have the facilities that most families

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Linking words Practice: Put the linking words from the boxes into the gaps in the essay below.

Watching television is a very popular activity all over the world because it provides information and

entertainment to billions of people. Some people think that children can watch television for as long as they

want to. I partly agree that parents should let children choose how much television they watch, but I can see

both sides. In the following essay I will examine both sides of the argument and give several examples.

So because of this for example as a result on one hand therefore

1) ____________________________, watching too much television can be bad for children. The

most important reason is that television can have a negative effect on children’s health. This is because

nowadays most kids watch TV for at least an hour a day and many spend several hours just sitting in front of the

television. 2)_________________, they have less time for doing sports or just playing outside with their friends.

3) ____________________________, more children are overweight and this can lead to more serious health

problems as they grow up. Another reason is that television shows children an unreal picture of society. 4)

____________________________, television programs may be violent or show behaviour that is not

acceptable in real life. This is a problem because children now spend less time communicating with their

families. 5) _________________________, they learn more about society from television programs, 6) __ __if

they watch the wrong programs, they may copy bad behaviour.

for example / so / in addition / on the other hand / if for instance / consequently / however

7) _______________________ , watching television may be beneficial. The main benefit is that

children can learn a lot about the world by watching educational television programs. 8) ________________,

the American television program Sesame Street teaches children how to spell and do simple maths.

9)______________________, children who watch Sesame Street for a few hours each day may do better at

school. 10) __________________, children who are watching television are usually quiet and well behaved.

11) ________________, many small boys can be noisy and very active. 12) ____________, when they watch

television, they sit quietly in one place. This is good because parents now have less time to spend looking after

their children, 13) _____________ allowing children to watch television is a useful way for parents to manage

the stress of family life. 14) __________ the parents are less stressed, that is good for the children.

therefore although and because

In conclusion, I agree to some extent that children should not watch television any time they like. This

is 15) ______________________16) ______________________spending time watching television can harm

children’s health and they may learn bad behaviour, it can also be educational for children 17)

_____________help their parents to be less stressed. 18) ________________, I believe that parents should

control the amount of television and the programs that children watch to avoid the negative effects and enjoy the

benefits of television.

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Step 3 – Body PARAGRAPHS - IdeasSupport for each reason can be an example, an explanation, a condition and result and/ or a result. Just remember, each reason should have 2 – 3 sentences of support and the support

should end with a result. Complete this example idea map for the essay about mobile phones

Body 1:

There are some …………………. aspects

Body 2 : NEGATIVE aspects

Advantage #1 IDEA: Disad #1 IDEA:

Bring people together ……………………………………………..

Advantage #1 SUPPORT (explain, example) Reason #1 SUPPORT (explain, example)

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Practice – IDEA MAP- Make an idea map for the essay about CITIES

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Two-sided Opinion Essay Structure Introduction1) Watching television is a very popular activity all over the world because it provides information and entertainment to billions of people. 2) Some people think that children can watch television for as long as they want to. 3) I partly agree that parents should let children choose how much television they watch. In the following essay I will examine both sides of the argument and give several examples.

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Body Paragraph 14) On one hand, watching too much television can be bad for children. 5) The most important reason is that television can have a negative effect on children’s health. 6) This is because nowadays most kids watch TV for at least an hour a day and many spend several hours just sitting in front of the television. 7) Because of this, they have less time for doing sports or just playing outside with their friends. 8) As a result, more children are overweight and this can lead to more serious health problems as they grow up. 9) Another reason is that television shows children an unreal picture of society. 10) For example, television programs may be violent or show behaviour that is not acceptable in real life. 11) This is a problem because children now spend less time communicating with their families. 12) Therefore, they learn more about society from television programs, so if they watch the wrong programs, they may copy bad behaviour

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Step 4. BODY PARAGRAPH SENTENCES (part 1)Topic Sentences – Reasons –

Example/Explanation Sentences – Result Sentences

Part A. Topic SentencesTASK: Study different styles for Body #1 topic sentences. Then, write sentences with different styles and vocabulary for Body 2 ().

Topic : Some people feel that women should not be in the military. Others disagree. To what extent do you agree?

Vocab Practice – sort the words in to the table. The first one is done for you.advantages – benefits – concerns – dangers – on the other hand - disadvantages – issues - negative aspects - positive aspects – risks – on one hand

Body #1 Body #2

AdvantagesBenefitsPositive aspects

ConcernsDangersIssuesNegative aspectsOn the other hand

Body #1:

Topic Sentences – 3 styles: Style 1: On one hand, there are some advantages to women in the military Style 2: On one hand, I can see some positive aspects to this idea. Style 3: On one hand, some people believe that women should be in the military. Other: ________________________________________________________________

Body #2: Write Sentence for Body #2, using the styles above

1: On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to women in the military 2: On one hand, I can see some negative aspects to this idea.

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3: On one hand, some people believe that women should not be in the military.

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Part B. Reason sentences

For each BODY Paragraph, you should give two (or more) reasons/advantages/disadvantages

TOPIC: Some people believe that we should encourage women to join the workplace. Others disagree. To what extent do you agree?Task #1: Styles Underline the clauses in the topic sentence below. (a clause is a group of words with a subject + verb) Use the patterns to write similar sentences for Reason 2 Style 1 - example: (Reason 1 – develop themselves) Firstly, working women can develop themselves. (Reason 2 – help their families) Secondly , women in the workplace can help their families.

Style 2: The first major reason is working women can develop themselves.(Reason 2 –support their families)The second major reason is working women can support their families

Style 3: The first reason for this view is working women can develop themselves.(Reason 2 – encourage more balance in society) The second reason for this view is working women can encourage more balance in society

Style 4: The first positive aspect of working women is they can develop themselves

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(Reason 2 – use their education) The second positive aspect of working women is they can use their education

Can you think of another style? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Grammar Tip on FORM (F) –GERUNDS (verb + ing) can be used as NOUNS (subject of sentences must be NOUNs. After preopositions, we use NOUNs).

Step #4: Practice 1. Body topic: There are advantages to using Social Media

Reason #1: can help in education Reason #2: fun

The first reason is that Social Media can help in education.

The Second reason is that Social Media is fun.

2. Body Topic: There are some disadvantages to letting children watch TV. Reason #1: __bad for health___________ Reason #2: _affect their behavior

The first negative aspect is that letting children watch TV is bad for their health.

Secondly, it can affect their behavior.

3. Body topic: (choose your own) __________________ ___ _______________________.

Reason #1: __________________ Reason #2: ________________________

Reason #1 Sentence: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Reason #2 Sentence: ___________________________________________________________________________

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Part C: Example/Explanation/Experience SentencesTASK: Write support sentences for the Body paragraphs below.

Topic: Living in a City.

BODY 1 – (Part II)Topic Sentence: On one hand, there are some very negative views about living in a city. Reason #1: The first negative view is that cities have a lot of crime.

Explanation/Example/Experience (“This is because…” / “This means….” / “For example…”): ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Result: Therefore / As a result/ , so / This is why / a lot of people think cities are dangerous.

Reason #2: Another important disadvantage is that the environment is damaged.


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Part. D: Body Paragraph - Result SentencesThe result sentence can be a re-statement of the reason sentences.

Practice #1: Choose a suitable word to complete the result sentence .

(TS:) One on hand, cities have many benefits. (R1) The first benefit is that cities are more fun. (SS1) This is because there are many activities, famous people, and place to enjoy. (SS2) For example, Dubai has world famous hotels, and millions of people go to the beaches every year. (SS3) In addition, there are plays, movies, and restaurants. ( Result:) As you can see, in a city, there are many ways to ___________ your time. (R2) Secondly, cities have great facilities. ( SS1 ) For instance there are many hospitals, schools, jobs. ( SS2 ) You can’t find these things in small towns, but in a city, there are places for everything you need. ( Result:) As a result, if you need something for your family, there are many __________

Practice #2: Review Question: Which LW (linking words) were used for the result sentences? ________________________ / ____________________Practice #3: Practice Re-stating ideas: Match Column A with Column B

A B1. a waste of time a) may distract you from important things2. there are criminals b) accessible3. entertaining c) stay informed about events in the world4. convenient d) fun5. connect with people e) easy to use6. make different kinds of friends f) you may be the victim of theft7. learn news quickly g) meet new people8. available h) stay in touch with friends and family

Practice #4: Below are reason sentences. Write result sentences.

1. Reason (disad): The first problem with social media is that some people waste time. Example: For example, my sister always says that she will only be on the computer “for like five minutes, but then she takes five hours.Result:____________________________________________________________________________________

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2. Reason (adv): Secondly, social media is available to everyone. Explanation: Because of this, anyone can open a business. For example, if you want to sell cars, you can design a facebook page and share it with everyone. In addition, you can get on Instagram, Twitter, WhatsApp, and a lot of other programs.Result: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

3. Reason: Firstly, some people on social media are criminals. For example, because of this….Result:___________________________________________________________________

Linking words – Review and Expand

Topic Sentences

On one hand, ….. The first advantage is ….

Reason Sentences

The first reason is that ….Another reason is …….

Supporting Sentences (Explanation / Examples)ExamplesFor example, For instance,

Explaining the Cause of somethingThis is because [clause giving the reason]This is because of [noun]This means that [clause]

AdditionAdditionally, Also, Besides, Furthermore, Moreover,

Result Sentences

As a result, [result clause] Because of this, [result clause] Consequently, [result clause] Therefore, [result clause]Because of this, [result clause], so [result clause]

Comparison/Contrast

AlthoughIn contrast, On the other hand, Similarly,

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Conclusion

In conclusion, In summary, To conclude,

Review Reason Sentences A. Check the Grammar in these “Reason Sentences”. The topic is “ Dangerous Sports”

1. Which supporting sentence(s) are OK / NOT OK?a) [ OK / NOT] The first major disadvantage is dangerous sports teach children to be violent.b) [ OK / NOT] Firstly, dangerous sports teach kids to be violent.c) [ OK / NOT] The first disadvantage dangerous sports teach children to be violent.d) [ OK / NOT] The first reason that dangerous sports teach children to be violent.

2. Which supporting sentence(s) are OK / NOT OK?a) [ OK / NOT] Another important reason that dangerous sports hurt poor people.b) [ OK / NOT] Another disadvantage is hurt poor people.c) [ OK / NOT] Secondly, dangerous sports hurt poor people.d) [ OK / NOT] Another reason my opinion is dangerous sports hurt poor people.

B. Write “reason” sentences for the Body paragraphs below. Topic: Women in the workplace.

There are several advantages to women in the workplace. (1) ________________________________

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_______________________________________________. This is because things are very expensive these

days. If only men are working, it is very difficult to support a large family. If women are also working, they can

share their salary and the family will have a better life.

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_______________________________________________________________________________. This is

because some women do not have children, so they should take some time to develop their own goals in life.

Even if a women has children, she can continue with her own career because her kids will see her as a model. If

her children see her as a busy and productive person, they will develop independence and learn to work hard

for themselves. As you can see, working women can develop themselves and also help their families.

Review LINKING WORDS: Choose the correct linking words

#1 - The first major advantage is that Arabic is easier for students. _____________________ Arabic is their

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a. Because of thisb. This is becausec. For example

#2 - Most students know Arabic very well because it was the main language in their schools before they came to university. ____________________________, they don’t know English very well.

a. Because of thisb. This is becausec. For example

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The ConclusionExplanation

What is the conclusion? __________________________________________________Why is it important? _____________________________________________________ How do I write the conclusion?

1. Repeat your opinion (the same opinion as your thesis in the introduction) again in different words (remember, this is a 2-sided essay, so it should have both sides).

2. Summarize all of your reasons for both sides of the essay.3. Give a final thought (advice, suggestion, or prediction)

Practice 1. Find and highlight the three parts in the conclusion below

Practice 2: Complete the conclusion with the words givencons – However – Nowadays – positive – beneficial -

– These days – wonderful – advantages – disadvantages - pros –

__________________, many students all over the UAE have the opportunity to study at

university. __________________, for many students, travelling a long way to study can be a major

problem, so they choose to stay in university hostels. Living in a hostel can be difficult while at the

same time, it can be a __________________experience. I believe that, overall, hostel life is very

__________________, but I can see the other side of this issue. In this essay, I will discuss the

__________________and __________________of living in the university hostels.

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In conclusion, I agree to a certain extent that children should not watch television any time they like. This is because although spending time watching television can harm children’s health and they may learn bad behaviour, it can also be educational for children and help their parents to be less stressed. Therefore, I believe that parents should control the amount of television and the programs that children watch to avoid the negative effects and enjoy the benefits of television.

1 st sentence (repeating your opinion) – some example language that you can use

Throughout this essay, we have seen there are both positives and negatives to the issue of ……………Although there are benefits to ………… there are most certainly negatives.During this essay, I have illustrated that the pros and cons of …………….

2nd part (repeating the reasons for both sides)

Advanced technique (for the second sentence) for showing 2 sides: Use “although”a. Start with although to show differences are coming, and the give the topic.b. Start with the idea that you agree with LESS. c. Give your reasons in just a few key words, separated with and. d. End with the idea that you agree with MORE, and want the reader to accept.

Here is the summary sentence from the example, with all of the parts identified:

3rd part (your advice) example language:

I advise that …………….My advice is …………….

Practice 3: Write the the conclusion about the advantanges and disadvantages of cities. Use “although” (“Whereas” or “while” can be used in the same way, especially if you agree equally with both sides.)

advantages: R1: they have great facilities and R2: they are fun disadvantages: R1: they are dangerous and R2: polluted

In conclusion, I mostly agree that cities are excellent places to live. This is because

although cities can be dangerous and dirty, there are good work opportunities and

Excellent services.

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This is because although spending time watching television can harm children’s health

and they may learn bad behaviour, it can also be educational for children and help their

main topic (less important side) reason 1

(less important side) reason 2

(more important side) reason 1

(more important side) reason 2

The Internet is a powerful tool for communication and for distributing information. It is often seen as being only beneficial.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet.

These days, technology is changing the world. One change is that the Internet is now a big part of modern life. It can be beneficial, bit it may also cause some problems. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons of the Internet.

On one hand, the Internet has some important benefits. Firstly, it has made a lot of information available to anyone with a computer and a connection. For example, school children now have online access to much more information than is held in their school libraries. Another example is that universities are now creating online learning courses. Because of this, more people can study from home. The other main advantage of the Internet is that it has made communication cheaper and more convenient. For instance, email and online chat programmes have made it easy to keep in touch with people almost anywhere, and international calls are much cheaper on the Internet than on the phone. Consequently, there is now more communication between people in different countries.

On the other hand, the Internet may also have some negative effects. The most important one is that a lot of dangerous information can be found there. For instance, people can learn how to make bombs or drugs, which is bad for society. In addition, social networking sites can be dangerous for innocent young people, because if they reveal personal details to strangers, criminals might steal their identity. As a result, those young people could lose control of their bank accounts or credit cards.

Find the two unsuitable conclusions in the following examples:

In conclusion, there are advantages and disadvantages to the Internet. It has given the world great improvements in sharing information and communicating with people, but there are also Internet criminals and dangerous information. I believe that to some extent the Internet is beneficial, but in order to safely enjoy the benefits that it brings us, we need to learn how to avoid its dangers. I advise all Internet users to be careful about how much personal information they share online.

To sum up, the main advantages of the Internet are that communicating with people in other countries and advertising are much easier now that we have the Internet, while the disadvantages are that there are dangerous criminals online and using computers too much can hurt people’s eyes. Therefore I believe that although the Internet is extremely useful, people need to be careful about how they use it.

In conclusion, the Internet can have both positive and negative effects. Although it is now much easier to find information and communicate with people in different countries, it is also a place where criminal activity happens and which contains a great deal of dangerous information. Therefore, although I partly agree that the Internet is beneficial, users must be cautious about trusting information and people that they find on the Internet.

In conclusion, because of these reasons, I believe that using the Internet can be dangerous and that people who use the net need to be careful about who and what they trust there.

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Vocab Practice Exercises

Part A:

1. We can’t live without technology in the 21st ___________.

2. Technology has made our society more ___________.

3. The Internet has ___________ all over the world.

4. Our life today is more dependent on the Internet than past ___________.

5. Today, we can ___________more information, more quickly because of the Internet.

handle generations century spread advanced

6. Using the internet to communicate is more ___________ than talking on the phone.7. Social networks have ___________ us to connect with people in other countries.

8. Social networks are ___________ and easy to use.

9. People ___________ use Facebook to connect with people in other countries.

10. ___________ the phone, social networks are free.

efficient uncomplicated enabled unlike regularly

11. Online social networking is an __________ way to communicate with others.

12. It is ________ that 75% of the students at UAEU use Facebook or Instagram.

13. Facebook __________ in the US but spread quickly to other countries.

14. Many people are not ________ of the problems caused by giving out personal information.15. You can use Facebook on any _________ that gets Internet.

excellent device aware originated estimated

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Part B1. Use the words in the box to improve the INTRODUCTION

discoveries – manage – achieve – goals – aspects – positive – risks – most popular tool

The 21st century is advanced in many ways, and communication is spreading farther and faster.

These new 1) things enable us to 2) do more and more 3) things. Social networking is the 4) big thing

we use nowadays. It has many 5) good 6) things but it also has some 6) negative points. In the

following essay, I will mention the reasons that I agree and disagree that online social networking is a

great way to communicate with people.

2. Improve Body 1. Suggestions in the box. You may change some grammar:

common – located – uncomplicated – enable - suitable – require – conveniently – available – common - convenient

The first reason I agree is that it helps you to connect with the world. It is everywhere today

for family members to be all over around the world. Writing letters or talking on the phone can waste

time and money. Using online social network is an easy way to communicate with family and friends

who live in other countries. It is easy even for workers who don’t have much time or money. Imagine

that you can easily talk to your family or friends for free! You just need are a computer and the

Internet.

3. Body 2 - Improve Body 2 Vocab. Suggestions below but you can use others. You may have

to change some grammar:

– negative – aspects – details – hackers – unaware – suffer – contains – negative – comments –

unsuitable - pretend

On the other hand, online social networking has some bad things. Firstly, there are some bad

people on the internet, and they can use social media to steal money from you. For example, they

might tell you they are from your bank, so you give them your information. Secondly, there is no

privacy. This is because most people do not know that everyone can see the information that they

share. As a result, someone may show bad pictures of you where everyone can see.

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Worksheet pages

INTRO 19-22

TOPIC SENTENCES 34

REASON SENTENCES 35

LINKING WORDS & SUPPORTING SENTENCES (examples, explanation)

36-37, 39

RESULT SENTENCES 38

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Error Correction and Revision - Tips

TIP #1 – AVOID unneeded extreme language USE MODALSInstead of “One one hand using Social Media is very good for us.”Try this: Using Social Media can be very good for us.”

Instead of: On the other hand, social networks will be very bad for us.Try this: On the other hand, social networks can be very bad for us.OR: On the other hand, social networks can be very bad for us in some ways.

Tip #2 – BE SPECIFICGive names of speci0fic networks.

OK: Anther reason is that with social networks, we can shared photos.BETTER: With social networks such as instagram, we can share photos.

Put the codes in the suitable place in the table.

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OMMON ERRORS

P-CS Frag SVA v #

Punctuation – comma splice

1. There are several advantages, the first benefit is education.

2. On the other hand, social media can be dangerous, this is because it is not controlled.

Fragment Incomplete idea (usu. missing a subject, or a verb, or both)

3. And enables anyone to see beautiful places through images.

4. This is because a tool for business and information.5. For example, when someone lies.6. In addition, face problems like loneliness.

Subject verb agreement

7. For example, there is many educational programs to download.

8. Social media make it easy for hackers to steal information.

Verb Missing

extra, wrong

9. Another reason is social media fun.

Singular / plural

10. There are many applications for cooking. It can help you learn to cook.

voc 11.For example, people can use social

media to find the best hotels and

sites.

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Can/will/should/may

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12.Social media can be danger.

13.It is easy for hackers to seeing my

information.

14.Some people get eye problems

because they watching the

computer all the time.

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Name _____________________ ID _____________________ Section

Lab Lesson, November 2, 2015

1. Go to Blackboard and take one Grammar Quiz. Steps: Blackboard Organizations UAEU Independent Learning Center CEPA “present simple”

Your score _________________________ (give to instructor)

2. Internet Quiz - When you Finish, find a partner and complete the worksheet below (10 points)

3. HW – complete CEPA quiz for Past Simple. Score _________________________

– Write two original internet questions and answers:

– i. Q: ______________________________ A: ________________________

– ii. Q: ______________________________ A: ________________________

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Research a Topic (GETTING IDEAS)

Writing Process Step ONE: IDEAS. Practice on your own. Now that we have done a few topics together, choose a topic and practice on your own. If you are having trouble finding something, you can use some of the topics typed on the next page.

1. Find an article from the internet. Mark it and print it. Please attach a printout of one article from the internet. Highlight ideas that you plan to use

2. Write notes of the new ideas you want to use in the “after researching” section.

Topics for Opinion Essays

General topic Specific Topic

Art 1. We should include some artistic projects in English class.

Children 2. Small boys should not have long hair3. Parents should limit the hours that children watch TV.

Culture/ 4. Arabic should be the main language at the university

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Language

Education 5. Teachers should not give homework.6. Teachers should not take attendance.7. We should stop using Ipads in class.

Environment 8. People should not own more than 1 car9. The government should raise the price of water.10.Small towns are better than big cities.

Health 11.Shisha should be illegal for everyone.12.Families should stop eating red meat

lifestyle 13.Women should wait until 30 before they have children

Shopping 14.Shopping malls are a waste of time.

UAE life 15.UAE should have less tourism.16.The UAEU hostels are not good places to live17.Male and females students should study together at

UAEU.

Women in UAE 18.Women should not be in the military.

Fashion 19.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of expensive wedding dresses

20.People should buy their clothes

Crime 21.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in the large city.

At the end of your Brainstorming and Research, you should Understand your topic – circle the key words: Have a plan

Ideas for Intro (Background + your opinion) Body 1: Main idea (advantages) + 2 reasons Body 2: Main idea (disadvantages) + 2 reasons

Go Back to your model essay about Mobile phones, and complete the plan below.

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TOPIC:


Reason #1 Reason #1

Reason #2 Reason #2

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p. 41 Error correction 2

V problems (V = ……………..) Missing – extra - wrong

1. The verb is …………………………. Example:

a. Some people not believe that.

2. The verb is extra Examples:

b. I am also like social media.

c. In addition, it is distract s your brain.

3. The verb is wrong ( Not matching the subject; SVA = subject-verb Examples:

d. Social media make s our life easier.

e. I believe s that social media is useful.

f. Online social networks has have a few disadvantages.

g. Social networks is are a great way to communicate

Punctuation problems (CS = comma splice)h. People around the world use a lot of social media , in fact, everyone uses

it .

i. Social media can affect your health , for example, you may hurt your eyes .

j. As a result, your eyes may be destroyed , this is because of the computer.

k. On one hand, using social media is risky , the first main danger is hackers.

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n. In most parts of the world, cities are becoming larger because people are moving there from the countryside.

o. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of living in cities.p.q. Put the capital letters, commas and full stops back into the essay below.r.s. nowadays the world’s population is increasing rapidly and people want a higher

standard of living because of this many people have moved from small towns and

villages to live in major urban areas i believe that it can be beneficial but it may also

cause problems the following essay will discuss the pros and cons of living in cities

t. on one hand living in a city has some important benefits firstly the opportunities for

work and promotion are much better than in the countryside for example all major

companies are based in big cities so people who want to get a high-level job in a big

company need to live in a city the other main advantage of living in cities is that cities

have more facilities for people to use such as good hospitals and schools as a result

many families live in major cities because they need good healthcare and education for

their children

u. on the other hand city life may also have some negative effects the main one is that the

environment is often not clean because so many people live so close together there is

usually more pollution in big cities than in small towns

for instance many big cities have problems with noise

and air pollution from traffic because of this cities can

be unhealthy places to live in addition crime is a

serious problem in most major cities this is because

criminals have many more places to hide in large cities

than in small towns consequently cities can be

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w. in conclusion there are advantages and disadvantages to living in a city cities give

people the chance to find a good career and have the facilities that most families need

but they are often polluted and dangerous therefore I believe that people who want to

live in cities should be careful to keep their families healthy and safe

# problems

a. Social network is very creative

TASK – IDEA MAP Complete the idea map for the essay about living in the hostels

(review the topic of living in the hostels. What reasons couldyou give in each paragraph?)

(Body 1)

The first and most important advantage is that it can be easy for students to form study groups

with new friends. As a consequence of this, students can learn ideas from other students and better

develop their knowledge. Another advantage is that students can learn to become independent. For

example, students learn to be organized in how they live and how to take on responsibility. As a result,

students learn a variety of skills because they live in hostels.

(Body 2)

On the other hand, living in a hostel can be a disadvantage since many students miss their

families very much. To illustrate, students can become depressed, and they can suffer from health

problems. Furthermore, many students often eat junk food, and therefore, they can develop other

health problems such as obesity. In short, if students have to live in hostels, they must be careful of

their lifestyle.

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Website Research

The following websites offer more information on this writing topic.

http://writingprojecttourism.webs.com/englishatuniversity.htm

1. Arabic's future. You need only read the first 9 paragraphs of this article (they are small paragraphs).

http://www.findingdulcinea.com/news/international/2010/mar/Arabic-s-Uncertain-Future-has-Troubling-Cultural-Implications.html

2. UNESCO interactive map of endangered world languages. This is an interesting site to find areas in the world that have endangered languages.

http://www.unesco.org/culture/ich/index.php?pg=00206

3. Is Arabic endangered? At the end of the first web-page is a link to the next page.

http://www.globalpost.com/dispatch/middle-east/100216/arabic-endangered-language

4. This website looks at a number of issues concerning endangered Languages. (This website also has a number of links within the text.)

http://www.findingdulcinea.com/news/international/2009/april/Map-Shows-Thousands-of-Dead-or-Dying-Languages.htm

5. Qatari professor urges massive effort to prevent the death of Arabic. This is an article from The National newspaper.

http://www.thenational.ae/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20100326/FOREIGN/703259843/1002/rss

6. Why we should learn and speak Arabic. This is an article from the Gulf News.

http://gulfnews.com/opinions/columnists/why-we-should-learn-and-speak-arabic-1.5211

7. Positive Aspects of Learning English. A very short web-page with some important points about the advantages of learning English.

http://www.gifu-net.ed.jp/kyoka/eigo/CommunicativeEnglish/05-7%20Positive%20Aspects%20of%20Learning%20English.htm

8. What Are the Benefits of Learning English? This website gives a list of benefits for learning ESL.

http://www.ehow.com/about_5042474_benefits-learning-english.html

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http://www.ehow.com/about_5042474_benefits-learning-english.html



http://gulfnews.com/opinions/columnists/why-we

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http://www.globalpost.com/dispatch/middle-east/100216/arabic-endangered-language



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