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2. Background

3. Sentence that tells what paper is about

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• Humorous or inspirational anecdote

• Strong statement

• Interesting quote

• Compelling statistics or surprising fact

• Startling question

• Fascinating example

IntroductionHook Examples

• Interesting quote

Stephen King, creator of such stories as Carrie and Pet Sematary, stated that the Edgar Allan Poe stories he read as a child gave him the inspiration and instruction he needed to become the writer that he is.

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• Surprising fact The pentagon has twice as many bathrooms as are

necessary. The famous government building was constructed in the 1940s, when segregation laws required that separate bathrooms be installed for people of African descent. This building isn’t the only American icon that harkens back to this embarrassing and hurtful time in our history. Across the United States there are many examples of leftover laws and customs that reflect the racism that once permeated American society. .

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• Humorous or inspirational anecdote When my older brother substituted fresh eggs for our

hard-boiled Easter eggs, he didn’t realize our father would take the first crack at hiding them. My brother’s holiday ended early that particular day in 1991, but the rest of the family enjoyed the warm April weather, outside on the lawn, until late into the evening. Perhaps it was the warmth of the day and the joy of eating Easter roast while Tommy contemplated his actions that make my memories of Easter so sweet. Whatever the true reason, the fact is that my favorite holiday of the year is Easter Sunday.

IntroductionHook Examples

• Surprising fact

A duck’s quack doesn’t echo. Some people might find a deep and mysterious meaning in this fact …

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• Humorous or inspirational anecdote

Yesterday morning I watched as my older sister left for school with a bright white glob of toothpaste gleaming on her chin. I felt no regret at all until she stepped onto the bus …

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Thesis example: Example of an expository (explanatory) thesis statement:

The life of the typical college student is characterized by time spent studying, attending class, and socializing with peers.

The paper that follows should explain how students spend their time studying, attending class, and socializing with peers

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Arguable:

It is not enough to simply state a fact like “Barack Obama is the first African-American President of the United States.” While that is a true statement, this straightforward fact leaves little room for exploration and further explication.

As the first African-American President, Barack Obama is in a unique position to impact international relations as well as domestic policy.”

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3. Impact statement

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2. Summarize your arguments and why readers should share your opinion

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Conclusion

Thesis Statement: Many Americans are buying the Toyota Corolla because of its competitive price, fuel economy, and high resale value.

Restated thesis: Reasonable pricing, low miles per gallon, and an attractive resale value have all contributed to the popularity of the Toyota Corolla in today's market.

Conclusion

Thesis Statement: San Francisco is a stimulating place to visit because of its magnificent location, its theaters and art galleries, and its many fine restaurants.

Restated Thesis: If you love beautiful surroundings, world class theater and art, and an exquisite meal, then San Francisco is the place for you.

2. Impact Statement

• Complete the anecdote

• Make a prediction or recommendation

• Ask a final rhetorical question

• Use a new quotation or refer back to the opening quotation

• Continue original description of character, setting, object, or topic

Conclusion

The problem of teen gang violence can be eliminated. It will, however, take time, money, and a combined effort on the part of many people. Organized, free, after-school programs such as: sports teams and games; art, music, and drama activities; internships in local area businesses and professional organizations; and interesting volunteer activities in the community would help engage teens in worthwhile pursuits outside of school hours.  More job opportunities for teens, especially those funded by state and local programs, would offer income for teens as well as productive work for the community. Outreach to families through schools, community organizations, and places of worship would help promote inter-generational activities that could improve family closeness, helping teens to work on their problems at the family level, instead of taking them to the streets. If these programs can be implemented, we will surely see a decrease in teen gang activity and safer streets and neighborhoods for us all.

Introduction1. Hook: 2 second rule

2. Background

3. Sentence that tells what paper is about

Conclusion

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5. Summarize

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