make sentences parallel in structure and meaning 句子結構需有一致性
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(Original) The temperature rose to boiling point and the height was controlled by fluctuation of the variables. ◦ In the sentence, putting the first part in active voice and the second part in passive voice creates an unbalanced feeling.TRANSCRIPT
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Make Sentences Parallel in Structure and Meaning句子結構需有一致性
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Parallelism in technical writing means that all parts of a sentence must have a similar construction.
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(Original) The temperature rose to boiling point and the height was controlled by fluctuation of the variables.◦ In the sentence, putting the first part in active voice and the
second part in passive voice creates an unbalanced feeling.
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(Revised) The temperature rose to boiling point and fluctuation of the variables controlled the height.
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(Original) Department managers must either assume sole responsibility for the success of a project or authority must be delegated to subordinates.◦ In the sentence, the correlative expression of either…or does
not have a parallel structure.
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(Revised) Department managers must either assume sole responsibility for the success of a project or delegate authority to subordinates. The committee should decide what to do immediately.
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(Original) Success in school depends on the following◦ Preparing for class assignments,◦Consulting the teacher during office hours,◦All textbook materials must be thoroughly read,◦Getting at least seven hours of sleep daily, and ◦All appointments must be kept.
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Sentences containing lists must be parallel in structure. Success in school depends on the following:◦ Preparing for class assignments,◦Consulting the teacher during office hours,◦Thoroughly reading all textbook materials,◦Getting at least seven hours of sleep daily, and ◦Keeping all appointments.