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    Overcoming and Preventing Gambling addiction

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    Table of Contents

    Introductions ..........................................................................................................................4

    1st Point .................... ..................... ..................... ..................... .................... ..................... ......4

    2nd Point ................... ..................... ..................... ..................... .................... ..................... ......5

    3rd Point..................................................................................................................................5

    Conclusion ................... ..................... .................... ..................... ..................... ..................... ..6

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    Outline

    I. Introduction

    II. 1st Point

    A. Preventing gambling through spreading awareness

    B. Countering addiction through basic examples of failing stories

    C. Exemplifying prone noticeable problems when you gamble

    III. 2nd Point

    IV. 3rd Point

    V. Conclusion

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    Chris Yoo

    Ms. Kolnik

    Oratory Speech

    26 January 2011

    Overcoming and Preventing Gambling addiction

    Introduction

    A young lady walked into a casino and stepped in front of a pop machine in the hall. She

    put $1.00 in and out came a Pepsi. She put another $1.00 in and another Pepsi came out. She

    repeated that a third time when a worker at the casino asked her What are you doing? The girl

    responded, Duh! Winning! (OK, maybe that wasnt so funny, but) I brought up this joke to talk

    about a serious issue among teenagers in todays society. Gambling Addiction. If you cannot

    stop yourself from repeatedly betting money for a hope of better income then outcome, then you

    are addicted to gambling. This obsession is as big as the ego of Tom Cruiseand Paris

    Hiltoncombined! In the U.S, one out of every eight addicted gamblers is a teenager.

    The reason why this topic is important is that teenagers are 2.5 times more likely to

    become addicted than adults, according to Durand Jacobs, a psychologist. Teenagers are

    generally more malleable or easily persuaded than adults, and their brains are not fully developed

    yet, which is a reason why it is harder for them to stop the addiction. Preventing this addiction on

    gambling is more important than curing the addiction. Several problems arouse when teenagers

    are immersed in gambling. The first and most important issue is suicide or major injuries to their

    own bodies or others. Think about the last time you were confident in an event turning in your

    favor, only to find out that the whole thing just blew up right in your face.

    A basic example for all students here can be that they studied excruciatingly hard to get a

    good grade for a test or quiz. On the test day, you feel good before taking the exam, having

    gotten rid of all body wastes and not feeling hungry (which is a serious distraction, by the way.)

    You see all the other students cramming information minutes before the teacher hands out the

    exam, and you softly laugh at yourself or in some cases, you boast aloud that you are more than

    ready. When you take the exam, all the problems just seem so easy and you finish it first even

    after checking answers over twice. You smile as bright as the sun when you hand the test in and

    you whistle your way out of the classroom, amid all the glares from fellow classmates. The next

    day, you receive your graded test expecting at the least a 99. However, the test you receive is full

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    of X marks and you get a C on the test. Disappointment and anger at yourself causes you to burst

    out and receive taunts from fellow classmates. You cannot seem to figure out why you received

    such bad marks, until you realize you read the directions very wrong on a few sections.

    1st

    Point

    This scenario isnt as serious as gambling because you can make up for a bad test by

    doing great on the next one. However, money lost in gambling can almost never be retrieved.

    Gamblers believe that further gambling will bring back the money they lost previously. This

    continuation causes bankruptcy and debt. In cases for teenagers, the money used for gambling

    usually isnt theirs. Thousands of dollars are wasted and teenagers get in huge trouble with

    severe consequences. The fear of such consequences, or the effect of the reprimand can cause

    young adults to commit crime or to become suicidal. Family life, which is very important, can be

    ruined if the teenagers continue their addiction and dont make an effort to stop.

    Pathological gambling, which is being unable to control yourself from gambling, is

    committed as a way to escape emotions of depression. The rave for money is a big factor that

    persuades teenagers to gamble. According to scientific studies by Patrick J. Hurley, a doctor of

    psychology, patients diagnosed with attention deficit hyperactivity disorder, commonly known as

    ADD or ADHD, are prone to gamble and to become addicted due to uncontrollable behavior.

    Despite popular belief, ADHD is also a serious problem, which affects about 5 percent of

    children and distracts them from performing a single task for a long period. This issue stretches

    out to college students in a huge excessively. One out of 20 college students are addicted to

    gambling, which is a huge problem in colleges because it is hard to catch and easy to access

    online. When a gambler cant stop thinking about the next time they will place a bet, it is called

    compulsive gambling.

    2nd

    Point

    The effects of gambling can be very detrimental to yourself and others. The most obvious

    effects would be bankruptcy, harming yourself, and harming your family. Crime committed from

    a compulsive gambler usually involves burglary, to gain more money to gamble yet another time.

    Teenagers need to recognize the harmful effects gambling causes to themselves and to others

    around them.

    Teenagers can, however, carry themselves out of the pit of gambling. The most important

    thing is for a gambler is to admit he or she has a problem. This is by far the toughest decision

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    anyone has to make. Almost everyone has favorite teams for sports, or at least supports their

    countries in international sporting events such as the Olympics or even better, enjoys watching

    YISS take on and beat other KAIAC and Far East teams. Rabid love for ones favorite team is

    something common, as many brawls happen among fans from rival teams. True fans adore their

    teams too much. Even if the team they love was last in the league, they would never admit that

    they are in fact terrible. Acknowledging what is obvious can be at times very hard. Gamblers

    have to recognize that this addiction isnt something you can turn off and on like a switch. Admit

    the fact you are addicted and find ways to solve the problem, such as rehabilitation. Teenage

    gamblers should avoid being in a situation where they can gamble, such as hanging around with

    friends who gamble. Take steps of precaution and protect yourself from temptation, such as

    blocking all gambling sites in your computer. Do not be secretive about your finances, as this can

    lead to serious debt. The most effective way is to keep tallies on how you spend your money and

    have another person help keep you accountable of where you spend your money.

    3rd

    Point

    Gambling ruins lives. Preventing teenage compulsory gambling is a major step forward

    for safety of families and individuals. Help others you know who are addicted to gambling. Most

    importantly, dont even think about gambling yourself. As Kin Hubbard, an American cartoonist,

    once said, The safest way to double your money is to fold it over once and put it in your

    pocket

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    References

    "Problem Gambling." Wikipedia, the Free Encyclopedia. 23 Jan. 2011. Web. 25 Jan. 2011.

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