Persuasive Essay November 2012 Page 1

The First Animal

Valeria B. Pallares

8th

of November 2012

Pets are good for children because it teaches kids to be responsible for future things. I

believe I am old enough to handle having a bunny. I would spend more time outside and I

would have a connection with nature. I would also prove that I am responsible enough to

have more responsibility like taking care of a dog.

I would put up the bunny’s cage in the backyard which means that I wold be outside

more. When I play with it I would sit outside on the grass for a long time. Around 58% of my

time at home I would be sitting, playing with my bunny. I would be more eco-friendly too.

Having a bunny would show my real, honest and animal responsibility. A part of

being responsible is cleaning the cage. Cleaning an animal’s cage takes time and patience and

I have that. I would clean the cage whenever it’s needed and when it rains I will take it inside

to the T.V. room or any other place that you propose.

I know that your dream house would have lots of trees and plants. I also know that

you would like me and my brother to be outside more and having a bunny I know that I

would definitely spend more time outside. Also, animals are nature so I would have a

connection with nature. I often wonder how it would be to have a living animal so having a

bunny I could experience how it would feel. Then T.V. would also be boring for me.

Some people say that they will do something and they end up not doing it. Can you

imagine how happy I would be to have a bunny? I would be more eco-friendly by being

outside and I would show my responsibility. I would also have a connection with nature

because I would put the bunny outside. Remember: RESPONSIBILITY MATTERS!!!!!