Gabe’s Year 6 SpeechGabe’s Year 6 Speech

Self Assessment Self Assessment – writing – writing targetstargets

Target Mark Comment

Write with appropriate structure and organisation.

1 2 3 4 5

My speech was a good topic and had a good organization. The format of the speech was written well.

Use quality openings

1 2 3 4 5

I think the best part of my speech was my opening and it was the longest and the best.

Use paragraphs effectively

1 2 3 4 5

I think I used paragraphs effectively in my speech and I used Mr. Stanhope's format well. Although I didn’t put in some of the words in that he told me to I still used the paragraphs well.

Write with detail 1 2 3 4 5

I think I wrote with detail in my speech. Most of it, I think was wrote with detail.

Set out arguments and draw them to a conclusion effectively

1 2 3 4 5

I think it wasn’t a good way to enter my conclusion . I was talking about something in my speech and then strait away to my conclusion.

Self Assessment Self Assessment – Speech – Speech RubricRubric

Self Assessment Self Assessment – Questionnaire – Questionnaire

1. In what way(s) do you think you could have improved the delivery of your speech?

I think I could have learnt my speech more cause I skipped lots of the speech and I pause for too long.

2. After watching everyone’s speech, what were some things that stood out in your mind?

Some of the stuff that really stood out in my mind was the expression and most of them didn’t move. Most of them were brilliant, and some of them were quite bad. Some of them had a stage fright.

3. How did you prepare for the speech? I think I did not practice very well for the speech and it

didn’t turn out well. When II practiced I was going really well but on the day when we had to present it I was frightened and I missed too many parts of the speech.

Self Assessment Self Assessment - Questionnaire- Questionnaire

4. What were two things that you think were ‘fantastic’ about your speech?

The two best parts about my speech was probably the writing part and the 2nd paraghraph because I didn’t miss as many parts and pause for so long. 5. How do you feel about giving speeches?

I feel that the presenting of the speech was a bad start and bad for the whole way through. I lost were I was and paused for around 20 seconds. So I was very bad at presenting the speech.

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From Mr. StanhopeFrom Mr. Stanhope