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No register! Using punctuation, modality and phraseology to
teach email
Alistair McNairEnglish Language Tutor
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• Student emails
• Is teaching of email important?
• What makes email difficult to write?
• Context of study
• Systemic functional grammar
• Analysis of email length, openings, closings, punctuation, modality, phrases
• How can we teach email?
• Conclusions
Outline
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I'm so sorry. I forgot check the mail again. I wii come to see you next week.
Hello sir.You dont stay in Sheffield at this moment?I would like to see you..because i have something want to discuss
HII am so sorry about missing you an appiontment.because I have to go to manchester with my friends.
Student emails
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• Most work places and education environments use email.
• Email helps learners interact with other people and build relationships using a variety of function e.g. requests; advice; demands
• Impressions of student ability can be based on writing in emails
• Email could provide a means of improving proofreading skills
Is teaching email important?
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• Email is ‘a strange blend of writing and talking’ (Naughton 2002: 143).
• Louhiala-Salminen concurs: ‘the conventions of business letters are well-established, those of fax, and in particular email, are not as stabilized. Therefore one finds more variation in the language used in faxes and emails.’ (1999 cited in Koester 2004: 34)
What makes email difficult for students to write (and difficult for teachers to teach)?
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• Danet (2002) raises the issue of ‘style leakage’ (ibid.: 24), that is writers write email in the style they have first or most frequently encountered e.g. academics write email in a more business-like fashion, and the students in a more conversational style.
• ‘public or business email practice was drifting towards [a] more “oral” style…than traditional letter-writing’ (ibid.: 11)
What makes email difficult for students to write (and difficult for teachers to teach)?
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• Baron (2001) might agree with Danet’s argument, but explains it from a longitudinal perspective, and sees the informality of email, in her opinion, as a result of the loss of ‘public face’ (ibid.: 8): ‘OK NAOMI…if you know something…tell me’
• Baron points out that this candour may be lessening as email ‘increasingly emulates pen-and-paper formats’ and people realize that ‘real people are reading their messages’ (ibid.).
What makes email difficult for students to write (and difficult for teachers to teach)?
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•‘there is no real accepted style for writing emails’,
•‘No difference between letters and emails.’
•‘English language course books provide good examples of emails’
•Emails in course books are ‘too generalized.’
Teacher opinions
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Hiya - he's the one we don't have the certificate for, unfortunately! C…….'s chasing but we're unlikely to have it very soon unless T……….. gets back or we get through to the (currently ringing off) IELTS test centre. Sorry!P…….
Hallo,Found this and will add to shared drive. Anything else needed? Presumably a guide as to how to make an appeal or regulations..etc..?!
A……….,Would it be possible to let students have copies of some of the student's posters as models? Or would we need to get permission?Regards,C………
Emails from a college
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Market Leader
Pre-Intermediate
Market Leader
Intermediate
Market Leader
Upper Intermediate
Business Benchmark
Pre-Intermediate
Business Benchmark
Upper-Intermediate
Semi-
formal
Informal Semi-
formal
Informal Semi-
formal
Informal Formal Informal
Internal
Sender
Internal
Reply
Dear
Hi
Hello
Name only
Apostrophes
Exclamations
Abbreviations
Best wishes
Regards
Thanks
First name
Both names
Emails in Business English Course Books
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Market Leader
Intermediate
2010
Language Leader
Intermediate
2010
Language Leader Upper
Intermediate
2010
First Certificate Expert
2010
Internal External Informal Formal Informal Formal Informal Formal
Dear
Hi
Name only
Apostrophes
Exclamations
Yours sincerely
Best wishes
Best
Love
Nothing
First name
Both names
Can
Will
Would
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Two sample emails
TomJust to confirm that we will be able to attend the meeting next Friday. I’ll be with our Sales Director, Mary Fowler.Harry (Cotton et al, 2010, p.127)
Dear LouiseGot your email on Friday. Thank you for the invitation. Sorry, but I can’t make it as we have a teambuilding seminar that weekend. Please let Mark know about the new products. Please feel free to call/mail me again if you need any more help.Speak to you soonDenise (Cotton et al, 2010, p.67)
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• There are too few emails in course books.
• Emails in course books are too simple or too similar to traditional letters compared with emails in the work environment.
• Once students go to work or university they may find how to write appropriate emails challenging.
• Students need to realise that emails are complex and need to be appropriate for the reader.
• By analysing systematically types of email, punctuation, phrases and modality learners can begin to see what language is expected in emails.
Thesis
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Context of study
British Council Ukraine Large organisation with over 100 staff Established in 1990s 160 emails 2 senior teachers 3 teachers 2 information assistants (Ukrainian)
University of Brighton's International CollegeSmall school with around 14 staff Established since 2011185 emails3 managers3 teachers3 administrative staff
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• Although there are over 300 emails, the study only examines emails of 16 people.
• Email style could have been affected by individual relationships, different nationalities and genders.
• Unequal balance between the different occupations.
• English not everybody’s first language
Limitations of study
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Systemic functional grammar
• The textual (Mode) metafunction: ‘we organise our messages in ways that indicate how they fit in with other messages around them’ (Thomson 2004: 30).
• The interpersonal (Tenor) metafunction: ‘to interact with other people, to establish and maintain relations with them’ (ibid.: 30)
• The experiential (Field) metafunction: ‘talk about our experience of the world [and] to describe events and states and the entities involved in them’ (ibid.: 30).
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•Mode: length, openings and closings
•Tenor: punctuation and modality
•Field: types of email and phraseology
Features of email examined in this study
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Tenor: punctuation
Dear G…………..,
So far I have not used CEF for purposes of
assessment. I wasn’t sure if I absolutely had to or
not. However, I plan to do so with some groups,
particularly with my Advanced group who have
specified that they don’t want a test. Some (such as
my level 6 group) have said they want a test, so I
may have to do both.
Best regards,
B………….
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• Gains: ‘in commercial use…e-mail messages are heavily employed to disseminate information (45%) and to make requests (32%)’ (ibid.), while 11% were directives.
• Gimenez (2000: 240): 51 out of 63 messages ‘were sent to either request or provide information.’
• In the British Council Ukraine 89.1% of all the emails were either informative, requestive or both.
Field: types of email
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Field: types of email
Please find attached the supplementary questionnaire you requested. Could you please return it to me by next Wednesday?
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Information Assistants
Teachers Managers
Could you please confirm
Could you please remind who of
Could you please meet tomorrow
Could you please let me know if
Could you please let us know
Regarding the flight to Rome, please do not book it for Monday
If it is possible, can we go by train?
Perhaps we should try train tickets?
I’m not sure if it’s too late, but I wouldn’t mind
Please order the key from FOSCan you pleas check if there isPlease print out this job offerCan you please translate this messagePlease reserve a place forPlease write your self-assessmentsPlease call the waiting list of young learners
Field: phrases (British Council Ukraine)
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Administration Teachers Managers
Is this still on?Did sales ever chase this for us?Anything else needed?Can you advise on this?Can you make it look goodWhat do you think?
I wonder if you know off the top of your headWould you be able to confirm by the end of todayJust wondering if you had any materialsCan I book room 303 on Friday…please?
Can we have a word about her Could you also have a look atDid you do the ER trainingPlease could you complete the attachedWould you please drop me an email Did you get a name and if so could you
Field: phrases: (Brighton)
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• Use your own emails to elicit features of email English, phrases and punctuation.
• Students compare your or colleagues’ emails with emails in course books.
• Encourage learners to use email as part of their learning process e.g. sending homework by email; writing emails to each other.
• Respond to learners by email.
• Ask learners to look at sample learner email to elicit mistakes.
How can email be taught?
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• Between 75% and 89% of emails are 4 lines long or shorter
• Openings and closings are much more varied than course books and previous research suggests.
• Most frequent types of email are informative and requestive or a mixture of both
• At the British Council Ukraine, each work position uses punctuation and modality very carefully, but differently, to maintain face: managers use can; information assistants use could
Summary of findings
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• At University of Brighton’s International College, administration tend to ask short, direct questions
• Teachers use most complex, cautious language when asking questions in both schools
Summary of findings
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Conclusions
• Emails in course books are much simpler than in practice
• Emails can be simplified by examining punctuation, modality and phraseology
• By providing learners with a context, they can begin to understand why emails are written as they are
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Thank you for listening!
Any questions?
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