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The Lonesome West Leaving Certificate Notes & Study Guide (O)
CONTENTS
1) Summary& Plot
2) Characters & Relationships
3) Key Moments
4) Key Themes
5) Stage & Setting
6) Language
7) Sample Exam Questions
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ChARACTERS & RELATIONSHIPS
COMMENT ON:
What characters: DO, SAY AND THINK
How other characters describe them
How other characters act around and towards them
Valene and Coleman seem to hate each other, but also have many things in
common. They share a similar sense of black humour, along with many other traits:
They argue over very trivial matters, such as a bag of Tayto crisps
They lack women in their lives and this frustration leads to bitterness and the threat of violence
Both brothers have a negative attitue towards the rest of the villagers (“a pack of vultures”)
They can be very disrespectful to Father Welsh
They are both unhappy with their lives
They are very unpolitically correct (homophobic etc.) “virgin feckin‟
gayboy”, “darkies”
They are both spiteful and seem to enjoy antagonsing (provoking) each other
Both brothers lack empathy (the ability to understand others‟
feelings), especially in regard to the suffering of others e.g. they
don‟t seem overly upset at Father Welsh‟s death, and are more
concerned with what food was served at funerals than the sadness of death.
Valene clearly has the upper hand in their relationship. He manipulated the
circumstances of his father‟s murder to make sure that Coleman would give
him his half of his father‟s money (he promised not to tell the police that
Coleman murdered him). He is also very mean when it comes to his
possessions and money (He marks everything with a „V‟ ... “he‟d steal the shite
from a burning pig”). He seems, on the surface at least to be religious (he
buys a lot of figurines). Is this backed up in any way by his own behaviour?
Religious?
Valene
Petty
Manipulative
Miserly
Lonely
Coleman
Murderer/ Hot-headed
Immoral?
Bitter
Lonely
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CHARACTERISATION
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Coleman is, as a result of Valene‟s blackmail, under Valene‟s power.
This leads to further tension and bitterness. For instance, he melts Valene‟s
figurines in the stove. However, we hear of a softer side to Coleman when he
tells of how he “did love Alison O‟ Hoolihan”. His opportunity to marry her was
scuppered when Valene shoved a pencil down her mouth (She went to hospital
and ended up marrying the doctor). Valene says he did this on purpose. Was
this out of spite or because Valene could not sand to be alone?
Towards the end of the play both brothers try to reconcile by
confessing to how they have wronged each other in the past. This was a
suggestion of Father Welsh‟s and they seem to want to do something „good‟ in
his memory. However, they once again fall into fighting. It seems that it is
impossible for them to forgive and get on.
Points To Ponder
Do you agree that despite all their fighting Valene and Coleman need,
and depend on, each other? (In other words, they have nothing else in
their lives worth living for and would be lonely without each other).
Which brother does most of the provoking?
Girleen is the only female in the play (the brothers‟ mother is, significantly,
never even mentioned). This highlights the extent to which the area of
Leenane, like many rural areas in Ireland areas, is such a „lonely‟ place.
Valene‟s and Coleman‟s sexual desires focus solely on her. However, her
liveliness and sexuality light up an otherwise drab stage and setting.
She also appears to be the only character with dreams and hopes in
the play. She believes in the possibility of happiness. In scene four she
consoles Fr. Welsh: “At least when you‟re still here (alive) there‟s the
possivbility of happiness...” Maybe this is because she is also the youngest
character in the play. Her life is still ahead of her, whereas the others are
older and seem to have given up on their dreams.
Girleen seems to be in love with a priest, Fr. Welsh. What does
girleen see in Fr. Welsh? Is he a way to escape the misery of life in Leenane?
The fact that she focuses, unrealistically, her affections on a priest suggests
that there are very limited options open to Girleen in Leenane, in terms of
suitable partners. Fr. Welsh stands out against the immoral and rough Valene
and Coleman.
Girleen
Clever / Shrewd
Flirtatious
Manipulative
Naive Dreamer? Wild Irish Cailín
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Girleen is also a very entrepreneurial and shrewd character. She uses
her sexuality as a weapon to take advantage of Valene and Coleman – she
makes money by selling them Poteen (although she reveals later she wanted to
use this money to buy Fr. Welsh a present). So, there is a purpose to her
flirting – she is not simply “the village slut”.
Points To Ponder
Is Girleen the „strongest‟ character in the play?
Did you sympathise with her when she reacted badly to Father
Welsh‟s letter and suicide?
Fr. Welsh is a priest who has lost his way, and he is keenly aware of this. He
feels a strong sense of guilt that he has been powerless to stop any of the
murders in Leenane. Worse, he isn‟t respected by his parishoners (Valene and
Coleman swear around him and can never seem to remember if his name is
„Walsh‟ or „Welsh‟). Does this represent the dwindling respect for the
Catholic Church in Ireland?
Fr. Welsh clearly does act „professionaly‟ in his role as a priest. He
tells the others of confessions he has heard, and he also drinks and curses.
He seems to have been driven to drink. Was he always this way or did
Leenane do this to him? He seems to have lost hope and has many „crises of
faith‟ – when it is his role as priest to offer comfort and consolation to those
around him. His influence is minimal. Again, it could be argued that this is a
reflection of a changing Ireland.
He seems to have made it his mission in life to reconcile Valene and
Coleman. In his letter / „suicide note‟ he hopes that if this happens he will in
some way feel that he has done something useful in his life. Does he see
himself as a Jesus Christ figure here, suffering and dying for the sins of
others? Of course, suicide is seen as a sin by the Church, so he also trying to
„balance the books‟ by doing one good deed.
Fr. Welsh is also, in some ways, very self-absorbed (too oncerned with
his own problems). He cannot seem to see that Girleen cared for him, or that
she was attracted to him. Earlier in the play he comments on Tom Hanlon‟s
suicide that he killed himself because he had no one to tell him that his life
was worth living: “Where were his friends when he needed them in this this
decent world?” He later kills himself, blind to the fact that, unlike Tom
Hanlon, he actually had someone in the shape of Girleen to support and
reassure him.
Points To Ponder
Does Fr. Welsh blame Leenane for his own faults?
Is Fr. Welsh a good Christian but a bad priest?
Fr. Welsh
Pathetic Priest or a Martyr?
Corrupted By His Surroundings?
Unfit To Be A Priest?
Self-absorbed
Stereotype or Reality?
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Key Moments
Fr. Welsh’s Soliliquy (Scene 5)
Soliloquy: a dramatic speech by one character speaking aloud while on
stage alone. This dramatic device allows the character to reveal his or
her inner thoughts to the audience.
Fr. Welsh‟s solioquy allows to see us to see inside the heart and mind of
Fr.Welsh. He reads out his letter and seems to want to „make a difference‟ in
the lives of his parishoners by persuading Valene and Coleman to confess and
forgive each others‟s sins against each other. Do you think he really believes
he can reconcile the brothers? Towards the end of the letter he says “ ... I
have faith in ye. You woudn‟t be letting me down now, would ye?” How would
the brothers be letting him down? Is he trying to save his own soul by
reconciling the two brothers? Suicide is seen as „wrong‟ by the Church, so is
he trying to balance things out with one last throw of the dice, or is he
genuinely concerned? Significantly, he does not mention Girleen in what is
essentially a suicide note. Does this show that he does not see Girleen as an
important part of his life?
Points To Ponder
If Coleman, Valene or Girleen had a soliloquy in the play, what would
they have said, do you think?
Reaction To Fr. Welsh’s Death
All of the characters react diffently to Fr. Welsh‟s letter and death.
The two brothers‟ immediate reaction to news of Fr. Welsh‟s
death (relayed to them by Girleen) is notable in that they do not seem
very upset. In fact, the scene closes with them laughing that his real
name is Roderick! Does this tell us that they are heartless human
beings or that they do not have the emotional maturity to deal with
such a serious matter i.e. they joke about it because, as men, sensitive
issues make them feel uncomfortable?
They do, however, decide to take Fr. Welsh‟s advice and
„confess‟ all their wrongs to each other. Does this show that they had
some regard for him after all? Or do they do this out of guilt for how
they treated him in life? Or do they genuinely want to reconcile their
differences? As we see, this initial sense of goodwill soon turns into a
fight, where they try to compete to see who has done the worst things
to each other!
Girleen, on the other hand, is clearly distressed at Fr. Welsh‟s
death and hurt that she was not even mentioned in the letter. She
cuts heart pendant and chain (that she bought Fr. Welsh) in two to
show her anger and pain. Valene and Coleman predict that she will end
up in a mental hospital, but again, neither of them seem to show much
understanding for what she is going through.
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KEY Themes
Theme:
Basically, what the work (poetry, novel, play, film etc.) is about. The theme is
the main abstract idea. While the main action of the work is described in
concrete terms (e.g. „A poor boy goes to the city and becomes rich‟) the theme
of the work will be described in more abstract terms (e.g. love, death,
suffering, the transience of life, hope, friendship etc). The author may
state the theme directly, but it usually emerges indirectly through recurring
ideas, metaphors, symbols, characters and action. A work will usually have
more than one theme. Adj. Thematic.
Appearance V Reality:
Our first impression from the props (the objects on the stage) would be that
Valene and Coleman are religious. For instance, we see a religious figurines
and a crucifix. However, their words and actions show is the very unchristian
reality: fighting, swearing, murder, meanness. Do you think McDonagh is
commenting on certain parts of Irish society as a whole? i.e. we like to appear
„Christian‟ but the reality is much uglier. If so, do you think this is fair?
Girleen, at the beginning, appears to be flirtatious and tough but we
soon discover that she is a shrewd person with real feelings (e.g. her reaction
to Fr. Welsh‟s death).
In terms of the setting of rural Ireland we could say that for many it
is seen as peaceful paradise – the opposite to the noise and crime of the city.
However, in The Lonesome West Mcdonagh shows us that the reality is much
different. It is a lonely, depressing and violent place.
Points to Ponder
Which is worse: to be completely isolated or to live with someone you
despise?
Do the brothers have any real point to their lives i.e. why bother going
on living if the world is full of violence and despair
What consolation, if any, does religion offer in the play?
Why do we often laugh at terrible scenes in the play? Is life a tragedy
or a comedy to McDonagh, or a mixture of both?
The Lonesome
West
Isolation / Loneliness
Sibling Rivalry Appearance V Reality
Violence Death / Suicide
Religion Suffering
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Stage & Setting
The stage is the kitchen/living room of Valene and Coleman‟s old farmhouse in
Leenane, Galway. It reflects a bachelor‟s existence: it is basic and untidy with
no feminine touches to light up the room. There is also a shotgun, some
religious figurines, a crucifix, a stove and a photo of a dog. Even before we
meet them we discover much about the characters of Valene and Coleman
(violent, religious?) and are introduced to objects which will have a further
significance later in the play. In many ways the poverty of the stage
represents the deeper poverty of their existence.
The setting of Leenane in Co. Galway (“The murder capital of Europe”)
is important. The title of the play describes it as a “lonesome” place, not
beautiful or wild as we might expect from a tourist brochure. Thus,
straightaway, we see the west of Ireland in a negative rather than a positive
light. Late we discover that it has no opportunities and has few women. It is
a lonely, depressing place where violence and suicide are common. It is not a
place where one can find happiness.
Points to Ponder
At the close of the play the light fades from the room and finally
lingers on the crucifix and the letters. Comment on the significance
of this.
Language
The characters in The Lonesome West speak with a west of Ireland dialect
and accent. They sprinkle their conversation with Irish words such as „feck‟.
They also swear a lot, often inventing their own curses – “ya bitch-feck”!
They say outrageous things and do not seem to care who they offend.
Points to Ponder
Did you find the way the characters spoke amusing?
How much did the language of the play contribute to your enjoyment
of The Lonesome West as a whole?
Do you think some people would find the language of the play offensive
e.g. calling people from Pakistan „Pakis‟?
Do you think the language is realistic or over the top?
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Sample exam questions
1. (a) Having studied the play The Lonesome West, do you think Fr. Welsh was
a hero or a coward? Explain your answer.
(10)
(b) What is your opinion of Girleen? Explain your answer.
(10)
2. “Coleman and Valene may not get on, but neither can live without the other.”
Do you agree with this statement? Explain your answer.
(10)
3. Answer ONE of the following: (Each part carries 30 marks)
(i) “The Lonesome West shows us the true side of Ireland.”
What do you think of this view of the play? Give reasons
for your answer, supporting them by reference to the text.
OR
(ii) What character would you like to play in The Lonesome West?
Say how you would play the part, and how you would like the
audience to react to your character.
1. (a) From your reading of the play, what do you think Girleen sees in Fr.
Welsh? (10)
(b) Did you feel any sympathy for Valene and/ or Coleman at any
time during the play? Give reasons for your answer, based on
your knowledge of the text.
(10)
(c) Describe one comic scene from the play and say why, in
your opinion, it was so funny. (10)
2. Answer ONE of the following: (Each part carries 30 marks)
(i) Write a piece about the play, The Lonesome West, beginning
with one of the following statements:
– I enjoyed studying this play because ...
– I did not enjoy studying this play because
OR
(ii) “The language used in The Lonesome West is so vulgar
that it is unsuitable for study by Leaving Certificate
students.”
Discuss this view, referring to the language of the play
in your answer.
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1. (a) How does the relationship between Valene and Coleman change
after their father‟s „death‟?
(10)
(b) Write a brief description of an event in the play that shows
clearly the type of person Valene is.
(10)
2. Describe and comment on how Valene , Coleman, and Girleen
each react to Fr. Welsh‟s letter and death.
(10)
3. Answer ONE of the following: (Each part carries 30 marks)
(i) Imagine that you are a journalist. Write a short
newspaper article describing the events surrounding
Fr. Welsh‟s death.
OR
(ii) “The Lonesome West is more depressing than it is
funny.”
To what extent to you agree with the above statement?
Support your answer by reference to the play.
1. (a) Describe how Valene and Coleman respond to Fr. Welsh‟s death. (10)
(b) Do you think that McDonagh represents people from the west of Ireland fairly
in the play? Explain your answer. (10)
2. Do you like Girleen? Explain your answer with reference to the text. (10)
3. Answer ONE of the following: [Each part carries 30 marks]
(i) Write a piece beginning with one of the following statements:
– I feel sorry for Valene and Coleman because ...
– I never really liked Fr. Welsh because ...
Your response should be based on your understanding of the play.
OR
(ii) Choose the word you think best describes this play:
– Tragic
– Comic
– Tragi-comic (a mixture of the above)
Explain your answer, based on your knowledge of the play.
OR
(iii) Imagine that Coleman decides to move away to a different country and stops speaking to Valene. Write the letter he might write to Valene in Leenane years
later.