p3 magazine pages- before and after feedback
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P3- Magazine pages- Before and after feedback
Front Cover
Used the clipping mask tool to resolve this problem.
Feedback
Improvements
Made Smaller.
Main Image made brighter and bigger and teeth were whitened.
White strip made smaller.
Masthead changed.
Removed unnecessary cover lines.
Added main cover line/ name of band.
Double Page Spread
Feedback
Improvements Questions put in bold
Made bigger
More sweets in the background
Quotes fitted exactly inside the wrapper
Drop capital made a different colour