peace and quiet
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Peace and quietStephen Quinn
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Friday. The word spoke slowly inside his head. He said it to himself a few
more times just to sense its happy flavour over again. With each repetition however
his mind focused with decreasing sharpness on the pleasure, it became increasingly
distracted by his environment and external stimuli.
The bus he was on was old. It had that smell a vehicle gets when a mass ofpeople have came and gone, leaving behind a tiny portion of themselves; skin
particles, sweat, stale breath, dirt. Some people believe thats what ghosts are
simply a little bit of someone left behind at a scene. Of course ghosts are usually left
when something traumatic happens and a lot, or all, of a persons energy is used up
and left behind at the scene. Murder for example.
On this bus nothing traumatic had happened, it was just the sheer numbers of
passengers, on and off, each leaving behind and contributing to some account of spirit
that gave this sense. The bus was old. The springs in the seats had lost their spring.
The fabric was threadbare in the expected places, the pattern dull and patchy,
embossed here and there with smooth, black dirt from a million hands. Even thedriver, visible in the scratched mirror at the front, looked old and weary.
He began to think about what he was actually going to do with his day and
weekend, the first hes had off in over a month. Quickly he decided, knowing he
already knew: Absolutely nothing. Well, maybe some peoples idea of nothing, he
was going to sit, and read. Not answer the phone, not answer the door, not turn on the
television to listen to the outside world, not call his friends, parents or girlfriend.
Nothing.
This line of thought was interrupted as the bus decelerated, old brakes
squealed, the chassis shuddered and the spring-less springs gave him no cushion. He
glanced at the stop and knew what he would see. Thirty or so teenagers in school
uniforms carrying sports bags containing muddy, sweaty kits. The two bus doors
peeled themselves apart and the noise entered first. Soon though the order lost
meaning as voices, noise, smell and temperature, increased and mingled.
Every Friday the same, the small pleasure of the end of the week, even with
working weekends, was eroded little by little. The cumulative affect was taking its toll
on him subconsciously, and almost imperceptibly. Almost.
If he stayed on the bus until his stop, he would have no choice but to endure.He pressed the stop bell and stood. Slowly he struggled and excused himself through
the crowd of children. Each one paid him as much attention as the next and the
previous. Schoolbags jostled and tripped him. Small impenetrable groups hampered
his advance to the front. Skirting around and occasionally forcing his way through to
half shouted abuse and stares of an indolent youth.
The bus driver, he realised, was staring at him also. Reflected by the mirror,
the image juddered and vibrated as the bus slowed. It was a stare perfected and
polished over many years, over many people. Unwavering, devoid of emotion, like a
shadow at night. He lurched the final steps, struggling to maintain his balance.
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The queue of people at the shelter began to board the bus as soon as the doors
opened. Once more he struggled through as best as possible, this time with no
excuses. He turned to stare irritably at the new passengers as the doors closed. His
reflection stared back at him, fractured and divided by the centre line of the two
halves of the door. The driver, his gaze now transfixed directly ahead, accelerated
away.
Alone now. He exhaled a breath, as if surfacing from depth.
The walk home was not far but the streets were busy. Traffic moved in fits and
starts and the pedestrians meandered blindly around one another. He inhaled and
began to move.
The weight in his bag felt good, light but firm. A bundle of paperwork, some
pens in the small front pocket, an empty lunch box gave volume to nothing, and,
snuggled, nestling like a sleeping dog lay a compacted story within its cover. Just
waiting for the key, to begin to unfold and expand. Just waiting to take him away,make him forget, to start again.
His eyes were downcast as he progressed, pleased to be outside and breathing
easier. Even the other people walking had stopped irritating at least a little. Maybe
this weekend will work out as planned he dared to think.
Henry!
Something inside him seized, like an overused but under-oiled cog it jarred
and threw his sensitive clock-work. His eyes fixed now, his feet still moving.
Henry! Hey!
No choice. He did his best looking around blindly expression, mixed with
his second best double-take. He couldnt tell if it looked sincere and spontaneous. He
couldnt even tell if she thought it looked sincere and spontaneous. He couldnt even
tell if she thought it looked sincere and spontaneous.
Marie! Hey, hows things?
Oh its so good to see you, I cant tell you the type of day Ive had.
He knew when she said that, that she most certainly could and would tell him
not only the sort of day shed had but also every minute, consciousness sapping, life
draining, soul-sucking iota of inconsequential shit that had gone on in yet another
worst day ever!
As he thought it, she said it. He smiled, suppressing everything else. She saw
his smile and took comfort from it. His bag grew heavier by the second. Before he
knew it her arm was slipped through his and he knew the weekend was lost.
Goddammit!
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He screamed inside his head as they slowly clicked and plodded their way in
the direction of his flat. The empty sound of his futile scream flared and died, like so
many others, leaving charred synapses and corrupted pathways in its wake.
The key turned too easily in its lock. He could feel the tumblers falling into
place, releasing the bolt. Gone.
She had barely ceased speaking the entire journey, breathing was coincided
with natural rhythms, without thought he responded with the appropriate positive or
negative inflection.
Uh-huh.
No.
He was used to this and sometimes played a game, swapping answers at
inappropriate times. The response was always the same: no response. What the hell
was he doing? Why couldnt she see he wanted peace? He wanted quiet. Today. Nogames.
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He was halfway to the bathroom when he hesitated. Above her chatter his
mind still moved, still turned. Reaching into his bag he blindly grasped the book. The
thickness and density felt good, like an orthopaedic mattress, almost to firm, but
necessary.
In the last sanctuary now, in his own flat. How many retreats today? How
many defeats? Sitting, prone, he tentatively opened the almost entirely white cover,
his fingers touching the roughly textured cover, reminding him of cardboard as a
child. Eyes moving slowly he began to savour each word, rolling them around his
mind occasionally allowing himself to silently mouth. Feeling his lips peel apart, his
mouth forming the shape of their sound, tongue polishing their syllables.
The movement in his peripheral vision alarmed his flow. Ancient instincts of
not seeing, but detecting movement fed him the truth. No escape. The door handle
moved downwards as if in a horror film only at full speed. No pause button here, no
hiding behind a cushion, or better the couch. Nothing.
Henry?
A long, long pause.
Is everything alright? Youve been in there a long time.
No more periphery. Seated weight shifting to the balls of his feet. Toes curled,
gripping the floor mat and deforming it. Slowly and with calculation he turned his
head to the left, cocking it slightly. Staring straight at the door now, his focus sharp.
Slicing through the air impacting on the door, cleaving it in two effortlessly,
penetrating her flesh without pause or delay, racing onwards through the old suite,through the glass doors of the balcony, cutting vertically and leaving not a single
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wayward crack. His focus refracted through this line, prism-like, throwing light onto
the darkened balcony and below.
The balcony
Im fine.
She had began to cook by the time he came out; the immediate and harsh rattle
of pans and pots, the clatter of plates and cutlery, the machine gun staccato of slicing
and dicing, the increasing pitch of the kettles steam forcing its way through the
narrow neck and mushrooming into a misty cloud. She loved it. He didnt speak.
Are you sure youre ok? Youre acting kinda weird.
The machine gun stopped shooting for a few seconds, her finger poised over
the trigger.
Weird?
Another long pause. A strange look in her eyes. An even stranger one in his.
Her trigger finger was itchy, hostilities resumed as quickly as they had ceased. Like
cease-fires around the world it had been tentative, conditional and temporary. Unlike
other cease-fires though, only one side knew there was a war, raging.
He sat down on the old suite with his back to the kitchen. The book, clutched
in his hand, rested by his side. He could feel his pulse at the tip of each finger and
thumb, throbbing slowly and methodically through the surface. He opened it and
looked blankly at the pages, not reading but waiting and savouring the wait until he
knew he would read uninterrupted. Amidst the sounds of war he sat, a thin, manic
smile set on his face. Like a shell-shocked soldier he sat, wanting to flee but knowing
his duty. After all, this was war.
Turning the pages occasionally, killing time, he knew soon he would stand and
move out onto the balcony; the balcony with the low railing marking out its limit, the
balcony with the occasional spot of slippery algae he had been meaning to clean since
he had moved in almost a year ago. One year. The time stood in his head as a long,
narrow corridor with no doors along its cramped sides. A single door stood at the
beginning, closed and locked. It was impossible to return that way. In fact the corridorwas so cramped it was difficult to even turn your head and look back, even if you
wanted to. Ahead was a second door. It too was closed, but not locked. Through its
keyhole shone a near perfect white light, the only light in the corridor. As he moved
forwards his shoulders constantly brushed the bare walls and he could tell his
knuckles were raw and lightly bleeding from many abrasions with the walls. Here and
there along their sides were splotches of caked, dark blood. His long shadow cast
from the keyhole light, stretched the entire length of the hallway. His heads shadow
was cast on the faraway locked door creeping slowly downwards. He knew that when
he reached the door in front, his shadow would be completely detached. Falling
straight out behind him and, with the source of the light directly in front of him,
would appear huge.
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The light from the moon rising outside illuminated his hand as he reached for
and slid open the balcony door. Her voice reached him from the kitchen but he did not
respond. The two steps from door to railing felt perfect. Left. Right. His hands
gripped the cold metal as he stood, alone with the moon.
Laying the table neatly she cast her eyes outwards. He must have had a badday at work she thought. Hed been having a lot of bad days at work though. A nice
meal, a few cold beers, watch the football highlights, without complaint from her she
vowed, and he might cheer up. They had the whole weekend together, their first in
months. A late night followed by a lazy morning in bed will be just what he needs.
Smiling a small determined smile she walked out onto the balcony. She placed her
hand on his shoulder and squeezed lightly. She began to speak as he placed his
opposite hand on top of hers and squeezed back. Squeezed back tightly. Too tightly.
The railing impacted her stomach and the world flipped. A snatched view of
an upside down flat, a questioning and pained glance at his impassionate moonlit face.
Her hands flailed, grasping air, already knowing it was too late. The fear increasedwith acceleration, until both abruptly stopped. It was dark. The moon, still rising, shed
no second hand light into the shadows of the street. Slowly a pool formed, a black
pool, growing agonisingly, slowly, inching its way into the cracks and crevices of the
street.
He exhaled.
Looking downwards he had followed her journey. He had seen the start. He
had known the end. The sound was muted as he recalled it now. She hadnt even
screamed as she fell, as she passed into the shadows and almost disappeared. The end
itself? A dull thud as of a large paper sack of potatoes impacting and tearing open. He
had felt nothing at all.
Sitting reading now: a different book. He stared around his small room. His
small cell. A thin fixed smile on his face. Returning to his book now, eyes moving
slowly from left to right and down. From page to page. Peace and quiet,
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