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Presenting yourself positively . . .
From Reading to Writing Le Morte d’Arthur and
Sir Gawain and the Green Knight reflect the ideal
medieval virtues of honor, courage, and loyalty.
Although the characters in these legends do not
always achieve their goals, they are generally
portrayed in a positive light.
Application Essay
Presenting yourself positively . . .
One way to present yourself in a positive way is through an application essay, often part of applying to college or for a job. Writing an application essay gives you an opportunity to reflect on the meaning of a significant experience in your life and to reveal your interests, achievements, and abilities for others to judge.
Application Essay
B a s i c s i n a B o x
Application Essay at a Glance
• Tells about your significant experience
• Reveals your qualities, interests, and abilities
• Shows that you can organize thoughts and express yourself
Body
ConclusionSummarizes the
effects of the experience
on your life
ConclusionSummarizes the
effects of the experience
on your life
IntroductionBegins with a hook, or
attention-grabbingdetail
IntroductionBegins with a hook, or
attention-grabbingdetail
RUBRIC Standards for Writing
A successful application essay should
• reflect a thoughtful response to the application prompt
• identify and describe a significant experience or achievement
• explain what the experience or achievement means to you
• be written honestly in your own voice and from your personal experience
• have an engaging introduction
• reflect careful attention to grammar, style, and organization
Writing Your Application Essay 1 Prewriting
One writes out of one thing only—one’s own experience.
James Baldwin
One writes out of one thing only—one’s own experience.
James Baldwin
Begin with the directions on your application.
Many college-essay prompts invite you to tell
about how something or someone affected your
life. Try listing turning points in your life and
people who have influenced you along the way.
Writing Your Application Essay 1 Prewriting
Choose a topic that you truly care about, then
consider how you can best use it to represent
yourself to the application committee. The
important thing is to write about your
experiences meaningfully and demonstrate
how they contributed to your personal growth.
You are more likely to write a forceful,
engaging essay if you stay true to your
interests and experience.
Planning Your Application Essay
1. Carefully consider the prompt. What information should be included in the response? You should reflect on the significance of an important experience—not just retell it.
2. Examine your strengths. What personal qualities, talents, and accomplishments are you most proud of? What experiences have had special meanings for you?
Planning Your Application Essay
3. Think about your experience. Why is it
important to you? What meaning or
significance can you draw from it?
4. Determine a focus. What is the overall point
you want to make? Which of your
achievements or experiences best supports
your reflection on your own learning and
growth?
Writing Your Application Essay 2 Drafting
There are many approaches you can take
in writing a reflective essay. You could
focus on a particular event and use it to
reveal an aspect of yourself. Or, you could
show how several similar events have
influenced you in significant ways.
Whatever the approach, keep it focused—
don’t try to tell everything about yourself.
Writing Your Application Essay 2 Drafting
As you draft your essay, include details,
description, and dialogue, if appropriate,
to engage the readers. Give extra attention
to writing a strong beginning. The opening
should be engaging and informative without
sounding contrived. It needs to catch the
interest of an admissions officer who has to
read a stack of applications.
Writing Your Application Essay3 Revising
Target Skill USING THE ACTIVE VOICE
Writing sentences in the active voice produces a more lively and engaging style, which helps draw readers in. It also helps place the focus on you as the main achiever in your story. While the passive voice is sometimes necessary, choosing the active voice can make your writing stronger and more fluid.
Writing Your Application Essay4 Editing and Proofreading
Target SkillSUBJECT-VERB AGREEMENT
When rewriting from passive to active voice, be sure to check that your subjects and verbs agree, particularly when a word or phrase separates the subject from the verb. Also, keep in mind that a college essay should be a polished piece of work—so edit and proofread everything carefully.