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The Essay Roadmap Karen Y & Enzo Silvestri Fayetteville Technical Community College www.karenzo.wordpress.com 2010

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The Essay Roadmap. Karen Y & Enzo Silvestri Fayetteville Technical Community College www.karenzo.wordpress.com 2010. Get a plan!. Before writing an essay, you need to plan it out. This is called PREWRITING!. What is the topic?. Let’s choose a topic to write about. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation

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Page 1: The Essay Roadmap

The Essay RoadmapKaren Y & Enzo Silvestri

Fayetteville Technical Community Collegewww.karenzo.wordpress.com

2010

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Before writing an essay, you need to plan it out.

This is called PREWRITING!

Get a plan!

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Let’s choose a topic to write about.

The benefits of getting a college degree.

What is the topic?

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After some brainstorming about the benefits of getting a college degree, I narrow my topic down to:

Getting a college degree will help build a better life for me and my children.Remember that the Thesis Statement needs to be a

complete sentence!

The Thesis Statement

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In order to turn my Thesis Statement into a Triple Point Thesis Statement, I must first come up with the 3 points that I will be discussing in my essay.

1. Could get a better job2. Be a better parent3. Feel better about myself

I have to now add these points to my thesis statement.

The Triple Point Thesis Statement

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Getting a college degree will help build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

My Triple Point Thesis Statement

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

So far my Roadmap looks like this:

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Now that I have my Thesis Statement and my 3 Support Points for Paragraph 1, I am ready to plan my body paragraphs.

First I need to form a TOPIC SENTENCE for each of the 3 body paragraphs.

Remember, a paragraph starts out with a COMPLETE SENTENCE that expresses the main idea of the paragraph – this is your TOPIC SENTENCE.

Let’s look at Support #1….

What’s next?

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Support 1: Could get a better job

With a college degree, I can find a better job.

Notice that I took the support point “Could get a better job” and turned it into a COMPLETE SENTENCE.

This sentence now tells the reader the MAIN IDEA of Paragraph #2.

Support #1 = Paragraph 2

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree

will help me build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college

degree, I can find a better job.

Now my Roadmap looks like this:

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Support: Be a better parent

If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent.

Notice that the support point “Be a better parent” is now a COMPLETE SENTENCE!

This TOPIC SENTENCE tells the reader the MAIN IDEA of Paragraph 3.

Support #2 = Paragraph 3

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help build a

better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a

better job.Paragraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be

a better parent.

My Roadmap looks like this now:

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Support 3: Feel better about myself

Having a college degree helps me to feel better about myself.

Again – COMPLETE SENTENCE tells the MAIN IDEA of Paragraph 3.

Support #3 = Paragraph 4

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help build a

better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a

better job.Paragraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be

a better parent.Paragraph 4:Support 3 Topic Sentence: Having a college degree helps me

to feel better about myself.

Updated Roadmap!

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Now that you have your Triple Point Thesis Statement and your Topic Sentences, you need to provide some support points for each of your topic sentences.

Why? Because recall that PARAGRAPHS need to have a TOPIC SENTENCE and at least 3 support points!

What comes next?

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With a college degree, I can find a better job.

Add some details and examples to form your support points (which you will later turn into complete sentences!)

What 3 things could I say to support this sentence?

Topic Sentence 1 (Paragraph 2)

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1. Get a less boring job2. Have more options for jobs3. Make more money and

work one job, not two

Let’s add these points to the Roadmap!

Support Points for Paragraph 2

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help me build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a better job.

1. Get a less boring job2. Have more options for jobs3. Make more money and work one job, not

twoParagraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent.Paragraph 4:Support 3 Topic Sentence: Having a college degree helps me to feel better about myself.

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If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent. What 3 points will support this topic sentence?

1. Spend more time with them because I don’t have to work two jobs.

2. Get them some things they want3. Live in a better place4. Be a good role model for them

Remember, these points will be turned into COMPLETE SENTENCES later on in the writing process.

Topic Sentence 2 (Paragraph 3)

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help me build a better

life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.

Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a better job.

1. Get a less boring job2. Have more options for jobs3. Make more money and work one job, not two

Paragraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be a better

parent.4. Spend more time with them because I don’t have to work two jobs.5. Get them some things they want6. Live in a better place7. Be a good role model for them

Paragraph 4:Support 3 Topic Sentence: Having a college degree helps me to feel

better about myself.

My Roadmap Now!

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There were FOUR support points instead of only THREE!

You may have four, five, or even ten support points when you are prewriting.

When you go into your REVISION stage, you will choose only the most important points for your paragraph.

I recommend you choose 3-5 points at the most or your paragraph may become too cumbersome for your reader.

What did you notice about the last slide?

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Having a college degree helps me to feel better about myself.

What are at least 3 points that we can make to support this topic sentence?

1. Get respect from others2. Respect myself because I achieved an

important goal3. Go on to achieve other goals

Topic Sentence 3 (Paragraph 4)

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help me build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a better job.

1. Get a less boring job2. Have more options for jobs3. Make more money and work one job, not two

Paragraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent.

4. Spend more time with them because I don’t have to work two jobs.5. Get them some things they want6. Live in a better place7. Be a good role model for them

Paragraph 4:Support 3 Topic Sentence: Having a college degree helps me to feel

better about myself. 8. Get respect from others9. Respect myself because I achieved an important goal10. Go on to achieve other goals

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What is the final thing we need to

add to our roadmap?

Let’s finish up the Roadmap

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What are some good ways to conclude your essay?

Use a transition like: surely, as you can see, without a doubt, it is clear, certainly, clearly, obviously, indeed, most would agree that…

Summarize your essay and restate the thesis. Challenge your reader to take your

information and do something with it.

POSSIBLE POINT FOR CONCLUSION (paragraph 5): It won’t be easy, but worth the time and effort involved.

A CONCLUSION!

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The finished Essay Roadmap…..

Drum Roll please!

We did it!

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Paragraph 1: Thesis Statement: Getting a college degree will help me build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself.Paragraph 2:Support 1 Topic Sentence: With a college degree, I can find a better job.

1. Get a less boring job2. Have more options for jobs3. Make more money and work one job, not two

Paragraph 3: Support 2 Topic Sentence: If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent.

4. Spend more time with them because I don’t have to work two jobs.5. Get them some things they want6. Live in a better place7. Be a good role model for them

Paragraph 4:Support 3 Topic Sentence: Having a college degree helps me to feel better about myself.

8. Get respect from others9. Respect myself because I achieved an important goal10. Go on to achieve other goals

Paragraph 5:Most would agree that finishing my college degree will not be easy, but as you can see, it will be worth it.

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Now that you have a roadmap to guide you, writing the essay is a

SNAP!!

Just turn all your points into complete sentences, add some good specific details, sprinkle in a few examples, and you have an

ESSAY!

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Getting a college degree will help me build a better life for me and my children because I could get a better job, be a better parent, and feel better about myself. With a college degree, I can find a better job. A degree will help me find a less boring job. In addition, I will have more options when seeking employment. I will be able to work just one job instead of two or three, and I will make more money. If I had a college degree, I could be a better parent. I would be able to spend more time with my children because I do not have to work two jobs. I could also get them some things they want because I would have more money. Once I have a good job, we can live in a better place. Finally, my having a college degree makes me a a good role model for them. Having a college degree helps me to feel better about myself. When you get respect from others, it makes you feel good inside. Also, I will respect myself because I achieved an important goal, and it will encourage me to go on to achieve other goals. Most would agree that finishing my college degree will not be easy, but as you can see, it will be worth it. My children will be happier because I can provide for them and be a good role model for them. Most importantly, finishing this goal will make me feel good about myself which will reflect on my role as a parent. So, what are you waiting for? Look into getting a college degree today and start building a better future for you and your children!

This is an essay in progress. Notice that it still needs details added to the paragraphs. The final paragraph (#5) and Paragraph #3 are complete!