the essential tools poets use to make their writing amazing
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Take a deep breath. Relax. It’s going to be
okay. Poetry is a type of art that intimidates many
people. I understand: poetry can sometimes be challenging. If you give it a chance, however, it can also be funny, inspiring, and life-changing.
The purpose of this unit is to break down the essential elements of a poetry so that you can feel more confident in reading and writing poetry.
So, You’re About To Study Poetry…
There are five major types of “figurative
language” that we are going to study:
1) Simile 2) Metaphor 3) Hyperbole 4) Personification 5) Symbolism
#1: Figurative Language
Definition: A comparison between two things using
“like” or “as”.
“Let words grow tall like skyscrapers,let them glow like sunsets.“Let similes run wild, like an unsaddled horse across the plain.”
- “Gather Round” by Mr. Foley
“My soul has grown deep like the rivers”- “The Negro Speaks of Rivers” by Langston Hughes
Simile
Definition: A comparison between two things without using “like”
or “as”.
“All the world is a stage” – Shakespeare
“Bringing the gifts that my ancestors gave, I am the dream and hope of the slave. “Still I Rise” by Maya Angelou
You're not another fat jokeor last Sunday's horoscope.You're the prize catch, grandma's brownie batch.You're the idyllic rising sun, ultra-number one.- “Halitus” by Derek Berry (local Charleston poet)
Metaphor
Definition: Use of extreme exaggeration.
That was the easiest question in the world. I can smell pizza from a mile away. I went home and made the biggest sandwich of all
time.
“So I sit in a sea of ink stainsThen swim through an endless stream of inspiration”
- “The Spark” by Marcus Amaker
Hyperbole
Definition: When a non-human subject is given human
characteristics.
The drooping plant was begging for water. The sun touched me with its warmth.
“My money’s been acting funny latelyNow I don’t mean haha funnyNo, I’m talking strange, weird, different type funnyThis time money’s gone all outLeaving me, showing up, then leaving as quickly as she came”
- “Money” by Poetri
Personification
Definition: A thing that represents or stands for
something else. Everyday Examples: The American flag is a symbol of
the United States of America. A dove represents peace.
Poetic Example:Did you hear about the rose that grewfrom a crack on the concrete?Funny it seems, but by keeping it’s dreamsit learned to breathe fresh air.Long live the rose that grew from concretewhen no one else ever cared.
- Tupac Shakur
Symbolism
Definition: A writer’s attitude or emotions towards their subject.
Possible Tones: Scared, Excited, Worried, Solemn, Angry, Funny, Confident, Sarcastic, Lonely...
How would you describe the tone in this example?Yes, we are our fathers' sons and daughtersBut we are not their choicesFor despite their absences we are still hereStill alive, still breathingWith the power to change this worldOne little boy and girl at a timeKnock knockWho's there?We are- “Knock, Knock” by Daniel Beaty
#2: Tone
Definition: A writer’s choice of unique or
interesting words for a particular reason. Common reasons for unique word choice:
1) Alliteration 2) Repetition 3) Rhyme 4) Allusion
#3: Word Choice
Definition: The repetition of the same sound at the
beginning of a series of words.
“Her hardest hue to hold…” “So dawn goes down to day.”
- from “Nothing Gold Can Stay” by Robert Frost
We’ll take your spirit on a stretcherTo the Hip Hop HospitalAnd… CLEAR!!... Beat box you back to life.
- “What You Will Need in Class Today” by Mr. Foley
Alliteration
The act of repeating a word or phrase to create emphasis.
“Come lovers. Come enemies. Come mere acquaintances.” “Let a guitar be strummed, let a drum be hit,
let the turntables spit round and round.- from “Gather Round” by Mr. Foley
Knock knock down doors of racism and poverty that I could notKnock knock down doors of opportunityFor the lost brilliance of the black men who crowd these cellsKnock knock with diligence for the sake of your childrenKnock knock for me for as long as you are freeThese prison gates cannot contain my spirit - “Knock, Knock” by Daniel Beaty
Repetition
Definition: When two or more words have similar ending
sounds. A) End Rhymes: When the rhymes come at the end of the
line.“Stars hide your firesThese here are my desiresAnd I will give them up to you this time aroundAnd so I'll be foundWith my stake stuck in this ground”- “Roll Away Your Stone” by Mumford & Sons
B) Internal Rhymes: When the rhymes come in the middle of the line “I melted microphones instead of cones of ice cream.”
“Microphone Fiend” by Eric B & Rakim
Rhyme
Definition: When an author references another work
of literature, a story, a film, a famous character, etc.
“So Eden sank to grief” - Robert Frost Robert Frost is creating an allusion to the Biblical
story of the Garden of Eden.
“Let us hear Ginsberg and all the beats be-bopping” In Mr. Foley’s poem, he creates an allusion to the poet
Allen Ginsberg and the Beat Generation of poets from the 1950’s.
Allusion
Definition: Language that appeals to one of the five senses:
sight, hearing, touch, taste, or smell.
It was dark and dim in the forest at midnight. Grandma’s warm kitchen smelled of chocolate chip cookies. I licked the sticky sweet strawberry frosting from my fingers.
So pack your backpack full of sunrisesFirst kisses, your mother’s voice,Your father’s hands,The taste of your own breath on a cold morning,The sound of footsteps down a lonely street,The smell of a damp forest.”- “What You Will Need in Class Today” by Mr. Foley
#4: Imagery
Definition: The type of poem the poet chooses to write. The style of
the poem may determine the number of stanzas, the number of lines in each stanza, whether or not the poem rhymes, and the subject of the poem.
#5: Style
Lyric Poetry- Uses a rhyme scheme
- Use a regular meter (rhythm)- Typically express personal, highly
emotional feelings.
Free Verse Poetry- Does not use a rhyme scheme- Does not use a regular meter
- Based on the rhythm of natural speech (the way people actually
talk).
Spoken Word/Slam Poetry- Poetry written to be performed
aloud.- Uses modern language & slang.
- May incorporate elements of storytelling, comedy, or hip hop.
- Often focused on social issues.
Other Types- Haiku
- Epic Poetry- Ballads- Odes
Definition: The message, life lesson, or main
idea of a poem.
#6: Theme
Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,Old time is still a-flyingAnd this same flower that smiles todayTomorrow will be dying.
- “To The Virgins, To Make Much of Time”by Robert Herrick
Theme: Life is short. Therefore, live life to the fullest.
Leaving behind nights of terror and fearI riseInto a daybreak that's wondrously clearI riseBringing the gifts that my ancestors gave,I am the dream and the hope of the slave.I riseI riseI rise.
“ Still I Rise” by Maya Angelou
How would you summarize the theme of these closing lines?