The Pitch

What did the feedback from the class tell us?

• In the first question we are asked whether one of us from the group is going to be Alex Turner (the lead singer from Arctic Monkeys) and initially we were but now it was suggested that we used someone external. This could be a good idea because it would give all three of us more control over the group

• Instead of doing the video as purely narrative the feedback told us that could be a bit boring, so we might try and maybe add some of us actually singing it into it

• We have also taken on board when the class thought of the idea to have the song in the music video. For example in the narrative have the main character listening to the song at the same point the audience are listening to it.

• The class have also asked about the band being recognised in the video. But as a group we’ve decided against that view as in other Arctic Monkey videos the band tend not to be in the music the video. As a group we believe if we carry that on it will work well in the final product of the video.