the second city writing i final scene
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Final assignment for Writing I was to develop the rough draft of a 3-5 page scene. This version includes edits that the teacher suggested post-table read.TRANSCRIPT
Stageplay
Limp Biscuit
Slightly run-down theater stage. Brian seated in
audience when Josh enters onstage.
JOSH
(overly excited)
Thanks again for letting me audition last minute, bro.
Sorry for bringing these dbags along ...
(Points to under-eye bags, thinks this
joke is hilarious)
... but I stayed up all night watching Usher videos on
YouTube for inspiration.
BRIAN
What kind of Sig Ep Phi brother would I be if I didn’t
use my newfound director power for good?
JOSH
SIG SIG SIG / EP EP EP / OHHHHHH PHI
BRIAN
heh. Nepotism, thy name is theater.
(Josh laughs too hard)
You don’t know what nepotism means, do you?
JOSH
(Ignores) Did you know that Usher Raymond is the IV,
which means there are THREE other Ushers out there,
probably just as awesome at dancing and singing as he
is! That’s some crazy shit, man.
BRIAN
(slightly sarcastically)
Certainly is. Almost as crazy as this situation.
JOSH
What?
BRIAN
What have you got for me?
(Josh rubs hands together as if
preparing dinner)
JOSH
So I couldn’t find much information about this "Avenue
Q" play -- Google kept redirecting me to some queer
website for The Muppet Babies -- but Googling did teach
me that Green Day wrote a musical ... which, in
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 2.
JOSH (cont’d)addition to being bad ass is what I will be singing and
dancing to.
BRIAN
Whenever you’re ready.
JOSH
(clears throat, affects British accent
for intro)
The medley I selected comes from my favorite 90s CD,
"Dookie," and also the more recent "American Idiot."
(clears throat)
I walk a lonely road / The only one that I have ever
known. (Robot dances) Don’t know where it goes / But
it’s home to me and I walk alone
BRIAN
(clears throat)
JOSH
(makes Sarah Palin pistol fingers)
One, 21 guns / Lay down your arms, give up the fight
BRIAN
Josh ...
JOSH
(starts bounce jumping)
I did it all for the Dookie / yeah / the dookie / yeah
/ so you can take that cookie / and stick it up your
...
BRIAN
(interjects)
THANK YOU. That last song was Limp Bizkit, not Green
Day. And he did it all for the nookie.
JOSH
Who doesn’t do it all for that? (chuckles) Gotta pour
some out for my homie, Fred Durst sometimes.
(pantomimes pouring on the floor)
BRIAN
I don’t think what you just did qualifies as "pouring
some out." Josh, is this a joke to you?
JOSH
What?!
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
BRIAN
I’ve worked two-and-a-half years to get the chance to
direct my first mainstage show, and you choose an
audition song by someone who selected the adjective
"limp" as a descriptor for himself?
JOSH
Not himself, the biscuit.
BRIAN
Whatever, Josh. This is stupid. I have a calc exam
tomorrow and no time for this.
JOSH
I know my calculus. It says you plus me equals us.
BRIAN
I want to punch you in the face so much right now but
I’m auditing "Peaceful Protest 101" this semester.
(Rises from chair to leave)
JOSH
Dude, ok. I’ll stop. I just really need this part, Bri.
My Dad is threatening to stop tuition since I’m
failing.
BRIAN
(sighs)
I can’t have this show become a joke.
JOSH
(Thinks for a minute)
I swear to you on the keg of our founding brothers that
I will not do anything onstage to embarass you or
"Avenue Q."
BRIAN
Did you prepare a monologue?
JOSH
I have "The Vagina Monologues."
BRIAN
(sighs)
JOSH
Totally kidding. I memorized something from "Good Will
Hunting."
BRIAN
Okay, let’s hear it.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
JOSH
(clears throat, pauses then begins)
Look, you’re my best friend so don’t take this the
wrong way. In 20 years, if you’re still living here,
coming over to my house to watch the Patriots game,
still working construction, I’ll f*cking kill you.
That’s not a threat; that’s a fact. I’ll f*cking kill
you. Look, you got something none of us have. You don’t
owe it to yourself. You owe it to me. Cause tomorrow,
I’m gonna wake up and I’ll be 50. And I’ll still be
doing this shit. And that’s alright, that’s fine.
You’re sitting on a winning lottery ticket, and you’re
too much of a pussy to cash it in. And that’s bullsh*t.
Cause I’d do anything to have what you got. So would
any of these f*cking guys. It will be an insult to us
if you’re still here in 20 years.
BRIAN
(Long pause, trying to process the
surprise of Josh’s incredible monologue)
That ... That was really good, Josh.
JOSH
Thanks, dude. Ben Hoofleck did it better.
BRIAN
No seriously. I mean ... this is a puppet musical. That
was ...
JOSH
For realzie? Oh, almost forgot the puppet routine!
(Starts pantomiming puppets)
BRIAN
Josh, Josh. That’s ok. You got the part. (Pause) If you
try anything on stage though, I will line up the
fraternity paddle wall.
JOSH
(relieved)
Brosep, you’re the greatest. I owe you. Which part?
BRIAN
(Thinks) Dookie Monster, Kate Monster’s
annoying-but-lovable friend.(smirks) Typecasting is
only fair.