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Page 1: THINGS I - Creative Writing Blog - E.A. Deverell
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THINGS ILOVE INSTORIES

PLOT ELEMENTS I LOVE:

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SETTINGS I LOVE:

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NARRATIVE DEVICES I LOVE:

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CHARACTERISTICS I LOVEIN A HERO:

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CHARACTERISTICS I LOVEIN A HEROINE:

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CHARACTERISTICS I LOVEIN AN ANTAGONIST:

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WORDS I LOVE:

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CONFLICTS I LOVE:

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RELATIONSHIPS I LOVE:

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OTHER THINGS I LOVE:

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CONVERSATION I LOVE:

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MYSTERIES I LOVE:

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THINGS I LOVE TO DESCRIBE:

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OBJECTS I LOVE:

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STYLISTIC ELEMENTS I LOVE:

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SUBJECTS I LOVE:

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IMAGERY I LOVE:

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CHARACTERQUIRKS

CHARACTER NAME: _________________________STORY: ____________________________________

Develop character from a character quirk.

WHAT PROBLEMS DOES THIS QUIRK CAUSE?

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IS THE CHARACTER HAPPY WITH THIS QUIRK OR DO THEY WANT TO CHANGE?

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WHEN & HOW DOES THIS QUIRK MANIFEST?

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WHY DOES THE CHARACTER ENGAGEIN THIS QUIRK?

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HOW DID THE CHARACTER DEVELOP THIS QUIRK?

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HOW DOES THIS QUIRK SHAPE THE CHARACTERʼS DAILY LIFE?

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WHO IS ATTRACTED TO THIS QUIRK?

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WHOM DOES THIS QUIRK IRRITATE?

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WHAT CHARACTER TRAITS DOES THIS QUIRK IMPLY?

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CHARACTER QUIRKSI’VE ENCOUNTERED:

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CITYBUILDING

WHAT DEFINES THE SETTLEMENT AS A CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________WHO LIVES HERE AND WHAT ARE THEY CALLED?_______________________________________________________________________________WHY DO THEY LIVE HERE?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT DO THE INHABITANTS DO?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT ARE THE CITYʼS RESOURCES?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT RESOURCES NEED TO BE IMPORTED?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT IS THE MAIN SOURCE OF INCOME?_______________________________________________________________________________WHERE IS THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________WHO ARE ITS CLOSEST NEIGHBOURS?_______________________________________________________________________________WHY WAS THE CITY BUILT HERE?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW LARGE IS THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT DO THE DWELLINGS LOOK LIKE?_______________________________________________________________________________WHY DO THEY LOOK THE WAY THEY DO?_______________________________________________________________________________ARE THERE THREATS TO THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________IF YES, HOW HAS THE CITY ADAPTED?_______________________________________________________________________________

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STORY: _________________________________________CITY NAME: _____________________________________COUNTRY / KINGDOM: ____________________________

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WHAT IS THE PREVALENT ARCHITECTURAL STYLE?_______________________________________________________________________________WHO ARE THE CITY LEADERS?_______________________________________________________________________________WHO ARE THE OUTSIDERS?_______________________________________________________________________________WHERE DO THEY LIVE?_______________________________________________________________________________IS THERE CRIME?_______________________________________________________________________________IF YES, WHAT DO THE CRIMINALS WANT?_______________________________________________________________________________IS THERE A LARGE RICH-POOR GAP?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW ARE THE THOROUGHFARES ARRANGED?_______________________________________________________________________________WHERE DO THE INHABITANTS WORK?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT ARE THE MODES OF TRAVEL?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW HAS TRANSPORTATION SHAPED THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________IS IT EASY TO LEAVE & RE-ENTER THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________ARE THERE MANY FOREIGNERS?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW ARE RELIGIONS AND RITES ACCOMMODATED?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT ARE THE MAIN DISTRICTS?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT OTHER FACTORS MIGHT HAVE AFFECTED THE CITYʼS DEVELOPMENT?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT ARE ITS LANDMARKS?_______________________________________________________________________________

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WHAT IS THE AIR LIKE?_______________________________________________________________________________DOES THE CITY CREATE ITS OWN MICROCLIMATE?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW IS THE CITY REGARDED BY ITS INHABITANTS?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW IS THE CITY REGARDED BY OUTSIDERS?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW OLD IS THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________HAVE PARTS BEEN REDEVELOPED?_______________________________________________________________________________HAS THE CITY BEEN PLANNED?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW ARE RESOURCES DISTRIBUTED?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW ARE DWELLINGS LAID OUT?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT MATERIALS ARE USED IN CONSTRUCTION?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT FLORA AND FAUNA LIVE IN THE CITY?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT IS CHARACTERISTIC OF THE CITIZENS?_______________________________________________________________________________HOW DOES THE CITY REFLECT THE TASTES OF ITS INHABITANTS?_______________________________________________________________________________IS THE CITY FAMOUS FOR ANYTHING?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT IS THE CITYʼS EMBLEM / MASCOT / COAT OF ARMS?_______________________________________________________________________________WHAT LANGUAGE IS SPOKEN?_______________________________________________________________________________DO THE CITIZENS HAVE A DISTINCT DIALECT / ACCENT?_______________________________________________________________________________

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KILL YOURCHARACTER

WHY IS THE CHARACTERʼS DEATH IMPORTANT?

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LOCATIONS (ASSOCIATED WITH THE CHARACTER):

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OBJECTS (ASSOCIATEDWITH THE CHARACTER):

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THEMES (ASSOCIATEDWITH THE CHARACTER):

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WAYS TO DIE:

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EFFECTS OF DEATH ON OTHER CHARACTERS:

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EFFECTS OF DEATH ON THE STORY:

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WHO IS THERE WITH THE CHARACTER?

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WHAT IS THE CHARACTERʼS REACTION TO IMMINENT DEATH?

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WHAT EMOTION IS EVOKED IN THE READER?

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WHEN DOES IT OCCUR? ______________________________________________________WHY THEN?_________________________________________________________________HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE?____________________________________________________

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ESCAPING A TIGHT SPOT

ITEMS AVAILABLE:

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CONSTITUENTS OF ITEMS:

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ITEMS YOUR CHARACTERNEEDS TO ESCAPE:

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ESCAPE ROUTES:

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HOW ARE THEY BLOCKED?

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ACTIONS YOUR CHARACTERCAN TAKE:

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IDEAL OUTCOME: _________________________________________

SACRIFICES/COMPROMISES YOUR CHARACTER CAN MAKE:

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REASON YOUʼRE IN A TIGHT SPOT: __________________________

If youʼve written your character into a corner, this is the worksheet for you!

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YOUR CHARACTERʼSTALENTS/POWERS:

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Also works in real life situations!

Can rescue come from outside?

Are the escape routes really blocked?

Does your character have a hidden talent?

Breaking something apart can help.

The sacrifice can be:An objectA way of thinkingA false beliefA sense of security...A goalA person...

Still stuck? Maybe you need to backtrack...

If your character is stuck mentally, have them use their body, and vice versa.

Can any items or item parts substitute for what your character needs?

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PLOT HOLEGAPPING

DESCRIBE THE PLOT HOLE: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTERS WHO ARE AFFECTED:

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SCENES THAT ARE AFFECTED:

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Add a new scene:

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BRAINSTORM SOME SOLUTIONS, THEN TICK YOUR FAVOURITES:

Have a character explain away the problem:

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Add something to a previous scene:

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Turn the plot hole into a plot twist:

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ERROR IN… TIMING / CHARACTER CONTINUITY / LOGIC / OTHER: _________________

CHANGES TO CHARACTERS:

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CHANGES TO THE TIMELINE:

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CHANGES TO SCENES:

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KEEPWRITING!

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LICENCETO WRITE

THINGS FAMOUS AUTHORS HAVE SAID / DONE THATYOU FIND SILLY / TASTELESS / MORALLY DUBIOUS:

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A CHARACTER IN A FAMOUS NOVEL WHOʼS FLAT & BORING:

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SOMETHING REALLY SILLY THAT HAPPENS IN A FAMOUS NOVEL:

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AN AWFUL MISUSE OF LANGUAGE BY A FAMOUS AUTHOR:

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A PLOT POINT IN A FAMOUS NOVEL THAT STRETCHES BELIEF:

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A FAMOUS NOVEL WITH AN UNSATISFACTORY BEGINNING / OPENING:

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A FAMOUS NOVEL WITH AN UNSATISFACTORY ENDING:

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A SPURIOUS PLOT TWIST IN A FAMOUS NOVEL:

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I, _______________________, hereby give myself permission to produce imperfect writing, and promise not to be too harsh on myself for making mistakes.

Signed,

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PLOTTWIST

HOW DOES IT CHANGE CHARACTERS:

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HOW DOES IT CHANGE THE STORY:

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SOMEONE'S IDENTITY IS MISTAKEN:

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SOMEONE HAS ANOTHER MOTIVATION:

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INFORMATION IS MISSING:

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AN EVENT IS MISINTERPRETED:

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HOW DOES THE TWIST SURPRISE THE READER?

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HOW DOES THE TWIST SURPRISE THE CHARACTERS?

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BRAINSTORM…

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GO THROUGH EACH OF YOUR PLOT POINTS:

I assume __________ (who?) does __________ (what?), at __________ (where?), by __________ (how?), with __________ (whom?), because __________ (why?)…

… but what if one of those is not what it seems?it's the opposite?someone's lying?some vital information is being withheld?

I ASSUME…(WHO?)______________________________(WHAT?)_____________________________(WHERE? )___________________________(HOW?)______________________________(WHOM?) ____________________________(WHY?)______________________________

BUT WHAT IF…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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PLOTTWIST

I ASSUME…(WHO?)______________________________(WHAT?)_____________________________(WHERE? )___________________________(HOW?)______________________________(WHOM?) ____________________________(WHY?)______________________________

BUT WHAT IF…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I ASSUME…(WHO?)______________________________(WHAT?)_____________________________(WHERE? )___________________________(HOW?)______________________________(WHOM?) ____________________________(WHY?)______________________________

BUT WHAT IF…___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IF ALL ELSE FAILS:

Resurrect a character.Bring in help from an unexpected source.Give ulterior motive to a minor character.

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MOTIVATION:PERSON

HOW DID THIS PERSON INFLUENCE THE CHARACTER?

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WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO BE MOTIVATED TO DO?

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WHAT CHARACTER TRAITS/KNOWLEDGE / SKILLS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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WHO MIGHT LACK THESE TRAITS/KNOWLEDGE/SKILLS/VALUES/BELIEFS?

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WHAT VALUES / BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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WHY DID THIS PERSON INFLUENCE THE CHARACTER IN THE WAY THEY DID?

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HOW / WHERE MIGHT THEY HAVE MET?

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WHO MIGHT HAVE THESE TRAITS/KNOWLEDGE/SKILLS/VALUES/BELIEFS?

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CHARACTER: ___________________________

STORY: ________________________________

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MOTIVATION:EVENT

WHY DID THE CHARACTER INTERPRET THIS EVENT THE WAY THEY DID?

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WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO BE MOTIVATED TO DO?

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WHAT CHARACTER TRAITS /KNOWLEDGE / SKILLS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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HOW DID THE CHARACTER COME TO BE INVOLVED IN THIS EVENT?

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WHAT VALUES / BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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IS THE CHARACTER CONSCIOUSLY AWARE OF THIS MOTIVATION?

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WHY WAS THIS EVENT SO IMPORTANT/MEMORABLE TO THE CHARACTER?

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WHAT EVENT WOULD BRING OUT THESE TRAITS / KNOWLEDGE/ SKILLS / VALUES / BELIEFS?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTER: ___________________________

STORY: ________________________________

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MOTIVATION: ENVIRONMENT

WHY DID THIS ENVIRONMENT HAVE AN IMPACT ON THE CHARACTER?

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IS THE CHARACTER CONSCIOUSLY AWARE OF THIS MOTIVATION?

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WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO BE MOTIVATED TO DO?

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WHAT CHARACTER TRAITS /KNOWLEDGE / SKILLS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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WHAT SORT OF ENVIRONMENT MIGHT CREATE THESE TRAITS / KNOWLEDGE/ SKILLS / VALUES /BELIEFS?

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WHAT VALUES / BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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WHAT SORT OF ENVIRONMENT MIGHT SUPPRESS THESE TRAITS / KNOWLEDGE/ SKILLS / VALUES /BELIEFS?

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WHY WAS THE CHARACTER IN THIS ENVIRONMENT?

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CHARACTER: _______________________

STORY: ____________________________

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MOTIVATION:BELIEFS

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CHARACTER: ___________________________

STORY: ________________________________

WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO BE MOTIVATED TO DO?

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WHAT BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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WHAT EMPOWERING BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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HOW DOES THE CHARACTER JUSTIFY THESE BELIEFS TO THEMSELVES & TO OTHERS?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT DISEMPOWERING BELIEFS DOES THIS ACTION REQUIRE?

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HOW DOES THE CHARACTER JUSTIFY THESE BELIEFS TO THEMSELVES & TO OTHERS?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MOVING-TOWARD VALUES

LoveSuccessFreedomIntimacySecurityAdventurePowerPassionComfortHealth

MOVING-AWAY-FROM VALUES

RejectionAngerFrustrationLonelinessDepressionFailureHumiliationGuilt

RANK THE CHARACTER'S VALUES:

1. _________________________________2. _________________________________3. _________________________________4. _________________________________5. _________________________________

(Value lists excepted from Awaken the Giant Within by Anthony Robbins)

VALUES

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TICKINGCLOCK

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WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO ACHIEVE?

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PROOF OF SUCCESS:

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WHAT DOES THE CHARACTER NEED TO DO TO STOP THE CLOCK?

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CONSEQUENCES OF FAILURE:

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WHAT ARE THE OBSTACLES?WHAT GOES WRONG?

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A DEADLINE TO SUIT YOUR TIMEFRAME:

__ years__ months__ days

__ hours__ minutes__ seconds

HOW LONG WILL EACH OBSTACLE TAKE TO OVERCOME?

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WHAT IS AN UNREASONABLY SHORT TIMEFRAME IN WHICH TO ACHIEVE IT?

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HOW DOES THE SUSPENSE ESCALATE AS THE DEADLINE DRAWS NEAR?

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DOES THE DEADLINE TRIGGER ANOTHER TICKING CLOCK?

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HOW DOES FEAR OF THE DEADLINE AFFECT THE CHARACTER?

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MAKE TROUBLECHARACTER'S STRENGTHS:

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CHARACTER'S WEAKNESSES:

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HARROWING EVENTS YOU'VE EXPERIENCED:

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DIFFICULTIES YOU'VE OVERCOME:

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The problem will be caused / compounded by the character's weaknesses but eventually overcome by their strengths.

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WHAT SHOULD THE PROBLEMS REVEAL ABOUT THE CHARACTER?

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WHAT CHRONIC PROBLEMS DOES THE CHARACTER ALREADY FACE?

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WHAT ARE SOME ISSUES THE CHARACTER IS AVOIDING?

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HOW CAN THESE EXISTING PROBLEMS CAUSE / COMPOUND OTHER PROBLEMS?

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HOW MIGHT THESE BECOME UNAVOIDABLE?

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WHAT IS YOUR MAIN PURPOSE IN PUTTING YOUR CHARACTER IN TROUBLE? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW SHOULD OVERCOMING THEPROBLEMS CHANGE THE CHARACTER?

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MAKE TROUBLE

Health_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Environment_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Work_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Technology_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Family_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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Politics_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wellbeing_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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BRAINSTORM PROBLEMS THE CHARACTER MIGHT FACE IN THE FOLLOWING AREAS:

PICK 3-4 PROBLEMS FOR THE CHARACTER TO STRUGGLE WITH SIMULTANEOUSLY:

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SOLVING AMYSTERYMYSTERY:

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CLUE #1 CLUE #2 CLUE #3

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STORY: ____________________________________________

CHARACTERS INVOLVED IN CREATING THE MYSTERY:

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CHARACTERS INVOLVED IN DISCOVERING THE MYSTERY:

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HOW IS IT DISCOVERED?ACCIDENTALLY OR ON PURPOSE?

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HOW IS IT DISCOVERED?ACCIDENTALLY OR ON PURPOSE?

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HOW IS IT DISCOVERED?ACCIDENTALLY OR ON PURPOSE?

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BY WHOM?

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BY WHOM?

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WHERE?

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HOW DOES THE FINAL CLUE LEAD TO THE MYSTERY BEING UNCOVERED?

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HOW DOES THE CLUE DEEPEN THE MYSTERY?

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HOW DOES THE CLUE INTRODUCE THE MYSTERY?

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HIDE IT IN UNIMPORTANT INFORMATION:

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HAVE IT MISINTERPRETED:

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LEAVE IT UNDISCOVEREDUNTIL:

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DISGUISE THE CLUE...

HIDE IT IN UNIMPORTANT INFORMATION:

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HAVE IT MISINTERPRETED:

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LEAVE IT UNDISCOVEREDUNTIL:

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HIDE IT IN UNIMPORTANT INFORMATION:

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HAVE IT MISINTERPRETED:

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LEAVE IT UNDISCOVEREDUNTIL:

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RED HERRING__________________________________________________________________________

HOW IS IT DISCOVERED?ACCIDENTALLY OR ON PURPOSE?

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BY WHOM?

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HOW DOES IT CAUSE THE CHARACTERS TO REINTERPRET THE OTHER CLUES?

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HOW DOES IT CAUSE THE CHARACTERS TO REINTERPRET THE MYSTERY?

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HOW IS IT FOUND OUT TO BE A FALSE CLUE?

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OPENINGSCENE MAIN CHARACTER: ____________________________________

STORY: ______________________________________________

MAIN CHARACTER'S BEST TRAITS:

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WHAT CAN THE CHARACTER DO TO QUICKLY CAPTURE THE READER'S ATTENTION / SYMPATHY?

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WAYS TO DEMONSTRATE THESE TRAITS:

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IN WHAT WAYS WILL THE CHARACTER DEVELOP THROUGH THE STORY?

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WAYS TO DEMONSTRATE THE CHARACTER'S INITIAL STATE:

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WHAT MYSTERY IS POSED / SOLVED?

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WHAT IS THE MOOD / ATMOSPHERE?

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A SETTING THAT SUPPORTS THE CHARACTER AND ACTS AS A GATEWAYINTO THE STORY:

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WHAT HAPPENS JUST BEFORE THE SCENE BEGINS?

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WHAT WILL BE THE OUTCOME OF THIS SCENE?

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MINIQUEST

WHAT ARE SOME OBSTACLES THEY FACE ALONG THE WAY?

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ITEMS THE CHARACTER MAY NEED:

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INFORMATION THE CHARACTER MAY NEED:

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SKILLS / BELIEFS THE CHARACTER MAY NEED:

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WHERE / FROM WHOM CAN THEY ACQUIRE THESE?

WHAT ARE THE CHARACTER'S MAIN GOALS?

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WHO ARE THE GATEKEEPERS?

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HOW CAN YOU USE THIS MINI-QUEST TO REVEAL SOMETHING ABOUT THE CHARACTER?

WHO CAN HELP THE CHARACTER?

HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO ACQUIRE THESE?

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HOW DO THEY TRY TO STOP THE CHARACTER?

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WHAT NEXT?

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THWART THE READER'S EXPECTATIONS?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

FURTHER DEVELOP ONE OF THE MAIN THEMES?

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GIVE NEW MEANING OR IMPORTANCE TO A PAST SCENE?

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FURTHER CEMENT A RELATIONSHIP?

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FURTHER DISPLAY THE ABILITIES OF A CHARACTER?

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PLACE A CHARACTER IN MORE TROUBLE?

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WHAT WOULD BE A COOL WAY TO…

RETURN TO A PREVIOUS SETTING?

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DEEPEN A MYSTERY?

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ALLUDE TO SOMETHING YOU LOVE?

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REINTRODUCE A MINOR CHARACTER?

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CREATINGMOOD

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SMELLS THAT EVOKE THESE EMOTIONS:

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SIGHTS THAT EVOKE THESE EMOTIONS:

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SOUNDS THAT EVOKE THESE EMOTIONS:

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WHAT EMOTIONS ARE YOU TRYING TO EVOKEIN THE READER?

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WHAT CONTRASTS HELP CREATE THE MOOD?

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TEXTURES THAT EVOKE THESE EMOTIONS:

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TASTES THAT EVOKE THESE EMOTIONS:

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WHAT REMAINS HIDDEN IN THE SETTING?

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LIST SOME OBJECTS FOUND IN YOUR SETTING:

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HOW DOES THE MOOD TRANSFORM THESE OBJECTS?

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WHAT ARE THE NARRATOR'S EMOTIONS?

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HOW DO THEY TRANSFORM THE SETTING?

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HOW DO THEY TRANSFORM THE MOOD?

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TECHNOLOGY

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HOW DOES TECHNOLOGY AFFECT THE EVERYDAY?

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DOES THE WORLD / CHARACTER EMBRACE NEW TECHNOLOGY? WHY OR WHY NOT?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES TECHNOLOGY DIVIDE PEOPLE?

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HOW DOES TECHNOLOGY BRING PEOPLE TOGETHER?

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WHAT PREVIOUS TECHNOLOGIES HAVE BECOME OBSOLETE?

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HOW QUICKLY DO NEW TECHNOLOGIES DEVELOP?

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HOW HAS TECHNOLOGY DEVELOPED IN A WAY THAT IS ILLOGICAL OR INEFFICIENT IN HINDSIGHT?

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WHAT TECHNOLOGICAL DISCOVERY HAS SHAPED THE WORLD?

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WHAT IS THE DRIVING FORCE BEHIND NEW DEVELOPMENTS?

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MAGIC OR SCIENCE?

WHAT IS THE EARLIEST RECORDED TECHNOLOGY?

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WHO USES NEW TECHNOLOGIES?

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WHO HOLDS ONTO OLD TECHNOLOGIES?

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WHO INVENTS NEW TECHNOLOGIES?

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METAPHORS& SIMILES

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LIST SOME WORDS THAT RELATE TO THIS IMPLICATION:

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WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO (RE)DESCRIBE?

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LIST SOME THEMES USED IN THE REST OF YOUR PIECE:

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WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO IMPLY ABOUT IT? IS IT POSITIVE, NEGATIVE OR NEUTRAL?

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LIST SOME IDEAS YOUR AUDIENCE IS ATTUNED TO:

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CHOOSE RANDOM ITEMS FROM THE LISTS AND FILL IN THE SENTENCES BELOW…

___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.___________ is like ___________ because ___________________________________________.

ONCE YOU'VE FOUND A METAPHOR OR SIMILE THAT WORKS, THINK OF WAYS YOU CAN MAKE IT MORE SPECIFIC…

BRING IN A THIRD CONCEPT TO ADD MORE MEANING TO THE COMPARISON:

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QUALIFY THE ORIGINAL IDEA:

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QUALIFY THE THING BEING COMPARED TO:

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TITLING

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LIST SOME WORDS THAT ARE EVOCATIVE OF YOUR GENRE:

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LIST SOME OF THE CENTRAL THEMES AND IDEAS OF YOUR PIECE:

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IMPORTANT CHARACTERS:________________________________________________________________________________________________

LIST SOME WORDS THAT MIGHT APPEAL TO YOUR TARGET AUDIENCE:

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IMPORTANT PLACES:________________________________________________________________________________________________

IMPORTANT EVENTS:________________________________________________________________________________________________

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DO THESE HAVE ANY OTHER NAMES, MEANINGS OR CONNOTATIONS?

DO THESE HAVE ANY OTHER NAMES, MEANINGS OR CONNOTATIONS?

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TITLING

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ALLUSIONS RELATED TO YOUR PIECE:

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QUOTATIONS RELATED TO YOUR PIECE:

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COMBINE SOME OF THESE WORDS TO FORM POSSIBLE TITLES…

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OTHER WORDS YOU LIKE:

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PARTNERS IN LOVE

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HOW DO THEY SOLVE PROBLEMS TOGETHER THAT THEY COULDN'T SOLVE ALONE?

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HOW IS IT MORE DIFFICULT FOR THEM TO WORK TOGETHER?

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STRENGTHS OF A:

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HOW IS IT EASIER FOR THEM TO WORK TOGETHER?

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WEAKNESSES OF B:

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HOW DO THEY COMPENSATE FOR EACH OTHER?

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CHARACTER A: ____________________CHARACTER B: ____________________

WEAKNESSES OF A:

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STRENGTHS OF B:

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HOW DO THEY COMPENSATE FOR EACH OTHER?

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RECONNECT WITH YOUR STORY

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WHAT ARE YOU DREADING WRITING?

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WHY?

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LIST 3 WAYS YOU CAN OVERCOME YOUR DREAD:

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2. _____________________________________________________________________

3. _____________________________________________________________________

HOW DO YOU FEEL WHEN YOU SIT DOWN TO WRITE?

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WHY?

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LIST 3 WAYS YOU CAN FEEL BETTER ABOUT WRITING:

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2. _____________________________________________________________________

3. _____________________________________________________________________

WHAT PROBLEMS DO YOU HAVE WITH YOURSELF?

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WHAT PROBLEMS DO YOU HAVE WITH YOUR STORY?

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LIST 3 REASONS WHY THE PROBLEMS AREN'T VALID:

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2. _____________________________________________________________________

3. _____________________________________________________________________

WHY ARE YOU FINDING IT DIFFICULT TO START?

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WHY DO YOU REALLY WANT TO FINISH THIS STORY?

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LIST 3 SCENES YOU WANT TO WRITE RIGHT NOW:

1. _____________________________________________________________________

2. _____________________________________________________________________

3. _____________________________________________________________________

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WHAT FIRST ATTRACTED YOU TO THIS STORY?

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RECONNECT WITH YOUR STORY

WHAT WAS THE LAST SENTENCE YOU WROTE?

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WHAT'S YOUR FAVOURITE SCENE?

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WHAT'S THE BEST LINE OF DIALOGUE YOU WROTE?

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WHO'S YOUR FAVOURITE CHARACTER?

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WHAT'S YOUR FAVOURITE IMAGERY?

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WHY DID YOU DECIDE TO RELATE EVENTS IN THIS ORDER?

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HOW DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR CHARACTER NAMES?

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HOW DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR TITLE?

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3 WRITING TECHNIQUES YOU WANT TO TRY:

1. _____________________________________________________________________

2. _____________________________________________________________________

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3 DARING NEW IDEAS YOU WANT TO INCLUDE:

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2. _____________________________________________________________________

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3 THINGS YOU NEED TO RESEARCH FURTHER:

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WHAT WERE SOME TURNING POINTS IN YOUR LIFE?

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WHAT DID YOU LEARN FROM THESE EXPERIENCES?

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WHAT DICHOTOMIES DO YOU FIND YOURSELF FREQUENTLY CAUGHT BETWEEN?

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WHAT DO YOU LOVE READING ABOUT?

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WHAT DO YOU LOVE TALKING ABOUT?

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WHAT MISTAKES DO YOU FEEL YOU'VE MADE REPEATEDLY?

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YOUR LIFE THEMES

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YOUR LIFE THEMES

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WHAT DO YOU SPEND A LOT OF TIME THINKING ABOUT?

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WHAT IS THE SOURCE OF YOUR GREATEST SUFFERING?

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WHAT IS THE SOURCE OF YOUR GREATEST JOY/CONSOLATION?

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YOUR RELATIONSHIPS?

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YOUR ENVIRONMENT?

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YOUR WORK?

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WHAT PROBLEMS DO YOU FACE REPEATEDLY IN...

CAN YOU PUT THESE IDEAS INTO A FEW GENERAL CATEGORIES?WHAT IS THEIR "COMMON DENOMINATOR"?

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CREATING SUSPENSE

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WHAT IS THE ACTUAL OUTCOME?

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WHAT IS THE WORST POSSIBLE OUTCOME?

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WHY IS THE CHARACTER WORRIED?

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WHAT IS THE CHARACTER SENSING THAT INCREASES THEIR ANXIETY?

HOW CAN YOU MAKE THE AUDIENCE EXPECT THE WORST?

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HOW CAN YOU MAKE THE OUTCOME MORE UNCERTAIN?

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HOW CAN YOU SHOW THE CONSEQUENCES OF FAILURE?

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CREATING SUSPENSE

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WHAT INFORMATION IS THE READER MISSING?

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HOW CAN YOU DIVIDE IT UP & REVEAL IT BIT BY BIT?

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WHAT NEW CLUES ARE FOUND THAT DEEPEN THE MYSTERY?

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HOW CAN YOU INCREASE THE HOPE FOR SUCCESS?

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WHY IS THE READER ROOTING FOR THE CHARACTER?

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HOW ELSE CAN YOU (PLEASURABLY) DELAY THE READER?

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WHY IS THE GOAL IMPORTANT?

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HOW CAN YOU MAKE IT EVEN MORE IMPORTANT?

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HOW CAN THE SITUATION BECOME EVEN WORSE?

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HOW CAN YOU USE SCENE & CHAPTER BREAKS TO INCREASE SUSPENSE?

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HOW CAN YOU USE DIALOGUE TO INCREASE SUSPENSE?

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HOW CAN YOU USE DESCRIPTION TO INCREASE SUSPENSE?

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MAGIC

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WHAT ARE PEOPLE CALLED WHO PRACTICE IT?

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IS EVERYONE BORN WITH IT?

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THROUGH RITUAL OR TRAINING?

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IS IT CONSIDERED "NORMAL"?

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IS EVERYONE BORN WITH AN EQUAL SHARE OF IT?

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HOW LONG DOES IT TAKE TO ACQUIRE?

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IS THERE A MAGICAL ELITE?

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DOES IT MANIFEST FROM BIRTH?

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WHY DO PEOPLE WISH TO ACQUIRE IT?

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RACE?

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OR GENDER?

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DOES IT CHANGE IN ANY WAY DEPENDING ON…

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MAGIC

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HOW IS IT SUMMONED?

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DOES IT REQUIRE ADDITIONAL RESOURCES?

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ARE THERE LIMITS TO ITS USE?

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WHY IS IT NECESSARY TO THE WORLD?

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WHAT IS ITS SOURCE?

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WHAT ARE THE CONSEQUENCES OF USING IT?

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IS THERE A LIMITED AMOUNT OF IT IN THE WORLD?

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ARE THERE DANGERS TO USING IT?

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DOES IT CHANGE ACCORDING TO LOCATION?

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WHAT IS IT CALLED?

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WHAT DOES IT MAKE EASIER?

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WHAT DOES IT MAKE MORE DIFFICULT?

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(mechanics)

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MAGIC

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HAS IT ALWAYS BEEN IN THE WORLD?

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WHAT EVENTS LED TO ITS DISCOVERY?

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WHAT LORE HAS GROWN UP AROUND ITS USE?

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WHY IS IT CONSIDERED MAGICAL?

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IS IT "GOOD" OR "EVIL" OR BOTH?

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ARE THERE INSTITUTIONS THAT REGULATE ITS USE?

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WHAT OBJECTS OR SYMBOLS ARE ASSOCIATED WITH IT?

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DOES IT HAVE A SPIRITUAL ASPECT?

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HOW DOES IT SHIFT THE BALANCE OF POWER?

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HOW DOES IT INFLUENCE POLITICS?

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HOW DOES IT INFLUENCE HUMAN RELATIONSHIPS?

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HOW DOES IT INFLUENCE THE ENVIRONMENT?

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WHO KNOWS WHAT WHEN CHAPTER: _____________________________

STORY: _______________________________

TIME CHARACTER WHATTHEY LEARN

HOW THEYLEARN IT

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POLITICS

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How do aspects of the story world define the political system?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What are some of the historic events that have defined the development of the system?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What are the main parties/factions?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What divides them?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How is power distributed?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Who decides who is in power?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Is there a monarch? If yes, how much power do they have?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are there checks in place to ensure that power isn't abused?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are there different "houses" within the governing body? If so, what are the tensions between them?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What specifically is the purpose of the political system?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _______________________________________________

INVENTING A POLITICAL SYSTEM The two main sources of conflict in politics:

- Gaining power- Keeping power

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POLITICS

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How do debates take place?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How are differences of opinion resolved?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Where do the politicians meet & how often?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Is the political system part of a larger alliance? If so, what affect does it have?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Can more than one party/faction rule at once?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What privileges do politicians enjoy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What are the disadvantages of being a politician?____________________________________________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How often are the leaders changed?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How are politicians regarded by civilians?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are politicians chosen on personal merit or by some other criteria?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are politicians representative of the people?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Are politicians in touch with the people?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How do politicians advance their careers?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _______________________________________________

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POLITICS

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INVENTING PARTIES / FACTIONS

PARTY: _______________________________

What do they stand for?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Who do they appeal to?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Who do they actually represent?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Who are their leaders?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What do they want to change?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How are they funded?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What are some landmarks in their history?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How do they spread their message?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What defines their domestic policy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What defines their foreign policy?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Where do they fall on the following scales:

STORY: _______________________________________________

Natural Artificial

Individual

State

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POLITICS

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What resources (or lack of) affect the balance of power?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How are resources transferred? Who has power over these trade routes?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Which community is the most powerful? Why?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How do they keep in power?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Who is interested in usurping their power?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How can communities become more powerful?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What are the main political axes or allegiances?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How does economy affect politics?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Where, when, how, and among whom do political meetings take place?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How are conflicts resolved?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How has history shaped the current political processes?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How is political news disseminated?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _______________________________________________

WORLD POLITICS

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RITES &RITUALS

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WHERE DOES IT TAKE PLACE?

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WHAT HAPPENS IF IT SUCCEEDS?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT HAPPENS IF IT FAILS?

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THE RITE OR RITUAL MANDATORY?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHO OFFICIATES?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHO UNDERGOES THE TRANSFORMATION?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS THE NATURE OF THIS RITE OR RITUAL?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS IT PUBLIC OR PRIVATE?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES IT CHANGE THE INDIVIDUAL'S STATUS IN SOCIETY?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW LONG DOES THE IT LAST?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT TRANSITION DOES THIS RITE OR RITUAL MARK?

________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES IT INVOLVE A SACRIFICE?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS IT DANGEROUS?

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IS THERE A FORMAL CEREMONY?

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IS THERE A PRIZE?

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IS IT POSSIBLE TO DISTINGUISH THOSE WHO HAVE PASSED?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: __________________________________________________

NAME OF RITE / RITUAL: ___________________________________

IS IT DIFFICULT OR PAINFUL?

__________________________________________________________

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WORLD HISTORY

MAJOR MOVEMENTS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR DISASTERS:

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MAJOR EVENTS:

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MAJOR ERAS:

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MAJOR CULTURES:

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MAJOR WARS/CONFLICTS:

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MAJOR ALLIANCES:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR POLARISATIONS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR LEADERS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: ____________________

MAJOR REGRESSIONS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DISCERNIBLE PATTERNS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR ADVANCES:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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PEOPLE & HISTORY STORY: ____________________

IS HISTORICAL KNOWLEDGE AVAILABLE TO EVERYONE?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW SERIOUSLY DO CULTURES TAKE THE STUDY OF HISTORY?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW BIASED ARE DIFFERENT CULTURES' HISTORICAL ACCOUNTS?

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HOW IS HISTORY RECORDED?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW FAR BACK DO RECORDS DATE?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS ANY HISTORY LOST & FORGOTTEN?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ARE THERE "NATURAL" HISTORICAL RECORDS?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS CONSIDERED THE PURPOSE OF RECORDING OR STUDYING HISTORY?

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT ARE SOME POINTS OF CONTENTION?

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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GEOGRAPHY

MAJOR RESOURCES:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR BOUNDARIES:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR LANDSCAPES:

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MAJOR GEOGRAPHICAL FEATURES:

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MAJOR GEOGRAPHICAL EVENTS :

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MAJOR CLIMATE / FLORA ZONES:

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT LIES OUTSIDE THE BOUNDARIES OF THE WORLD?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ARE THERE UNEXPLAINEDGEOGRAPHICAL PHENOMENA?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THE GEOGRAPHY CHANGE OVER TIME?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _________________________________

HOW DOES GEOGRAPHY AFFECT TRANSPORT?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ARE THERE CYCLES OF CHANGE?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

MAJOR ROUTES:

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GEOGRAPHY

HOW WELL DO PEOPLE KNOW THE GEOGRAPHY OF THEIR WORLD?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT ARE SOME MISCONCEPTIONS ABOUTTHEIR LANDSCAPES?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DO PEOPLE STUDY AND RECORD THEIR WORLD'S GEOGRAPHY?

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HOW DO PEOPLE INTERACT WITH THE LANDSCAPE?

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HOW DO THEIR ACTIVITIES ALTER THE LANDSCAPE?

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HOW WELL ARE PEOPLE ADAPTED TO THE LANDSCAPE?

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THE LANDSCAPE CHANGE PEOPLE?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ARE THERE UNREACHABLE OR UNEXPLORED PLACES?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES THE LANDSCAPE PROVIDE ENOUGH RESOURCES?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _________________________________

HOW DOES GEOGRAPHY INFORM SCIENCE?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES GEOGRAPHY INFORM ART?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DO PEOPLE FEEL ABOUT THE LANDSCAPE?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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GEOGRAPHY

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SETTLEMENT RESOURCES FEATURES BORDERS

GEOGRAPHICALFEATURE

HOW WAS IT FORMED?

WHEN WAS IT FORMED?

HOW DO PEOPLE USE IT?

STORY: _________________________________

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GEOGRAPHY

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STORY: _________________________________

DRAW A MAP OF YOUR WORLD OR OF A SETTLEMENT:

DOODLE A LANDSCAPE:

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BRAINSTORM 20 WAYS TO TELL THIS SCENE:

1. ______________________________________________2. ______________________________________________3. ______________________________________________4. ______________________________________________5. ______________________________________________6. ______________________________________________7. ______________________________________________8. ______________________________________________9. ______________________________________________10.______________________________________________11.______________________________________________12.______________________________________________13.______________________________________________14.______________________________________________15.______________________________________________16.______________________________________________17.______________________________________________18.______________________________________________19.______________________________________________20.______________________________________________

SCENE WRITING

CHARACTERS' EXTERNAL STATE(S) AT START:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTERS' EXTERNAL STATE(S) AT END:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT NEEDS TO TAKE PLACE?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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INTERESTING SETTINGS:

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: ____________________________

CHARACTERS' INTERNAL STATE(S) AT START:

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTERS' INTERNAL STATE(S) AT END:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

INTERESTING PEOPLE:

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

INTERESTING OBJECTS:

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GENRE CONSIDERATIONS:

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REVELATIONS:

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CLIMAX:

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CLUES:

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DIALOGUE:

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SUBTEXT:

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LIST A FEW THINGS FROM PREVIOUS SCENES:

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CAN YOU EXPAND ON THEIR MEANING OR IMPORTANCE?

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HOW DOES THIS SCENE BUILD ON THE PREVIOUS ONE?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LIST A FEW THINGS YOU'LL NEED IN UPCOMING SCENES:

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CAN YOU INTRODUCE ANY OF THEM IN THIS SCENE?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THIS SCENE SET THE STORY UP FOR THE NEXT ONE?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

SCENE WRITING STORY: ____________________________

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GOOD DIALOGUE

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STORY: _________________________

CHARACTER:_______________

CHARACTER:_______________

CHARACTER:_______________

WHAT DO THEY NEED TO COMMUNICATE?

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

WHAT DO THEY NEED TO KEEP SECRET?

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

HOW DO THEY NEED TO COMMUNICATE IT?

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________� _____________

ARGUMENTS

TONE

EMOTIONS

BODY LANGUAGE

SPEECH TAGS

NOTES

SCENE: _______________________________ POV: ___________________________

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GO THROUGH YOUR DIALOGUE LINE BY LINE AND CHECK THAT…

� It's always clear who's speaking.� The conversation develops the story.� The conversation develops the characters.� The conversation introduces new information.� The conversation achieves its purpose.�What the character is saying actually makes sense and means something.� The character speaks for a reason.� The reader can understand what the character is trying to communicate.� The characters speak in a way that is appropriate to their role.� The characters use vocabulary appropriate to their role. � The character is using the correct form of address.� You use a variety of speech tags.� The speech tags make sense, and don't sound contrived.� The speech tags aren't repetitious.� The speech tags are appropriate to your chosen point of view.� The speech tags are in the correct tense.� The formatting of direct speech is consistent.� The formatting of indirect speech is consistent.� The formatting of thoughts is consistent.� The characters use (appropriate) body language.� The characters convey subtext through word choice.� The characters convey subtext through pauses, hesitations and interruptions.� The characters convey subtext through rhetoric.� The characters are purposeful in the way they stay on topic, or change the subject.� The characters hint at things left unsaid.� The characters convey the full extent of their emotions.� The characters react to each other's tone and delivery.� The characters always react to what was said before.� The arguments are convincing.� It's clear what each character is arguing.� The outcome of the argument is clear (even if a consensus is deferred).� Both the characters and the reader remain aware of the setting of the conversation.� Both the characters and the reader remain aware of the context of the conversation.� The characters get equal time to speak, unless there is a reason for an imbalance.� It's possible to determine the characters' relations to each other through their speech.� It's clear to the reader if characters misunderstand each other or talk at cross purposes.� The pace of the conversation is appropriate to the scene.� The conversation contains something memorable.

GOOD DIALOGUE STORY: _________________________

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WRITING ASYNOPSIS

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WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE THING ABOUT YOUR MAIN CHARACTER(S)?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _____________________________________________MAIN CHARACTER(S): ________________________________SYNOPSIS LENGTH: __________

WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE THING ABOUT YOUR WORLD?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT INFORMATION DO YOU NEED TO PROVIDE?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT QUESTIONS DOES THE SYNOPSIS POSE THE READER?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

KEYWORDS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT DOES THE SYNOPSIS PROMISE THE READER?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW CAN THE SYNOPSIS INFORM THE READER BEFORE THEY EVEN BEGIN READING?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WORDS OR PHRASES THAT DESCRIBE THE MAIN CHARACTER(S):

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

GENRE INDICATORS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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WRITING ASYNOPSIS

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LIST THE MAIN PLOT POINTS:

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT ARE THE BIG REVELATIONS?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW CAN YOU TEASE OR MISLEAD READERS ABOUT THESE REVELATIONS?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DO YOU NEED TO WARN THE READER ABOUT ANYTHING?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT WORDS / IDEAS /THEMES WOULD APPEAL TO THESE READERS?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT STYLE OF WRITING WOULD APPEAL TO THESE READERS?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT SORT OF READERS DO YOU WANT TO READ YOUR STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT METHODS DO BOOKSIN YOUR GENRE EMPLOY IN THEIR SYNOPSES?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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WRITING ASYNOPSIS

Try writing a few drafts of your synopsis, using your answers on the previous pages as checklists.You may also want to consider formatting; where to place paragraph breaks, what to emphasise, etc.

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NAMING CHARACTERSWHAT LANGUAGE DO THE CHARACTERS SPEAK?

______________________________________________

HOW ARE NAMES USED IN THE LANGUAGE?

______________________________________________

SOCIAL INFLUENCES:

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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CULTURAL INFLUENCES:

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LINGUISTIC INFLUENCES:

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DO NAMES CHANGE? IF SO, HOW AND WHY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

TITLES / HONORIFICS:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

NOTES ON PRONUNCIATION:

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NAMES & THE LAW:

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NAMES & THE FAMILY:

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NAMES & OCCUPATIONS:

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW ARE FIRST NAMES GIVEN?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW ARE SECONDARY NAMES GIVEN?

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NAMING CHARACTERS

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FIRST NAMES MEANING ORCONNOTATION SURNAMES MEANING OR

CONNOTATION NICKNAMES

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YOUR READERSHIPHOW WOULD YOU LIKE YOUR STORY TO HELP ITS READERS?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW CAN YOU USE THESE IN YOUR STORY, IN ORDER TO PLEASE YOUR READERS?

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT TONE WOULD WORK BEST FOR YOUR READERS?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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WHAT ARE THEIR CULTURAL INFLUENCES?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT DO THEY SPEND THEIR TIME DOING?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT CHARACTERISES THEIR VOCABULARY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT OTHER STORIES DO THEY ENJOY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT ARE SOME THINGS YOUʼD LIKE TO BRING TO THEIR ATTENTION?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT ISSUES ARE IMPORTANT TO THEM?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHO WOULD MOST BENEFIT FROM READING YOUR STORY?

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHO WOULD YOU MOST LIKE TO REACH?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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NARRATOR

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WHY DID YOU CHOOSE THIS NARRATOR?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THE NARRATOR A CHARACTER IN THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS THE NARRATORʼS PURPOSE IN TELLING THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHICH CHARACTERSʼ THOUGHTS CAN THE NARRATOR ACCESS?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES THE NARRATOR HAVEACCESS TO INFORMATION THAT THE CHARACTERS DONʼT?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES THE NARRATOR AFFECT OR INTERACT WITH THE CHARACTERS?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS THE NARRATORʼS RELATIONSHIP TO THE PROTAGONIST?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHO IS THE NARRATOR ADDRESSING?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THE NARRATOR FEEL TOWARDS THE ADDRESSEE?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THE NARRATORʼS CHARACTER EMERGE?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DO THE NARRATORʼS OPINIONS AND JUDGEMENTS EMERGE?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ARE THERE ANY FACTORS THAT MAKE THE NARRATOR UNRELIABLE?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: ___________________________________________NARRATOR: _______________________________________PERSON & TENSE: _________________________________

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NARRATIVE TIME & VOICE

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HOW CURRENT IS THE NARRATORʼS STORY?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DOES THIS TIMING AFFECT THE TELLING OF THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

THROUGH WHAT MEDIUM IS THE STORY TOLD?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THERE A FRAMING NARRATIVE?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THE NARRATIVE OBJECTIFIED WITHIN THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THERE A SENSE THAT THE NARRATIVE OUTLASTS THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

IS THE NARRATIVE LINEAR AND CHRONOLOGICAL?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW LONG DOES THE NARRATION TAKE?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES THE NARRATION TAKE UP TIME IN THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS THE NARRATORʼS TONE? HOW DOES IT AFFECT THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DOES THE NARRATOR OR THEIR TONE CHANGE AS THE STORY PROGRESSES?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT HAPPENS TO THE NARRATOR AFTER THE END OF THE STORY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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EDITING CHECKLIST (STORY)

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NOTES:

� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________

CHECK FOR... CHAPTER/PAGE NO.

� weak opening

� weak ending

� lack of story development

� lack of character development

� lack of world development

� too much information

� missing or insufficient information

� pacing problems - too slow

� pacing problems - too fast

� illogical / unconvincing behaviour

� lack of character motivation

� confusing description of action

� confusing description of thoughts / emotions

� confusing description of setting

� timeline errors / anachronisms

� world / setting errors

� inconsistencies in character appearance

� unresolved plot threads

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EDITING CHECKLIST (TEXT)

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WORDS / PHRASES THAT I FREQUENTLY REPEAT:

� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________

WORDS / PHRASES THAT I FREQUENTLY MISSPELL:

� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________� ______________________

CHECK FOR... CHAPTER/PAGE NO.

� unnecessary repetition of words or phrases

� misspelt words or phrases

� repetitive sentence length

� repetitive sentence structure

� unclear sentences / passages

� inconsistencies in tense

� ambiguous pronouns

� inconsistencies in use of names and titles

� ambiguous dialogue tags

� inconsistencies in formatting dialogue

� inconsistencies in formatting thoughts

� inconsistencies in capitalisation

� missing sections

� inconsistencies in voice and tone

� inconsistencies in settings

� inconsistencies in point of view

� awkward sentences

� misused words

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CHOOSE A GENRE

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WHICH GENRES DO YOU READ MOST & WHY?

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHICH GENRES DO YOU FIND EASY TO WRITE & WHY?

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHOOSE YOUR TOP 2:

1. _______________________2. _______________________

ARE THERE ANY SUBGENRES THAT MIGHT HELP YOU COMBINE THEM?

__________________________________________________

THEMES ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #1:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

THEMES ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #2:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

PLOT CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #1:

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

PLOT CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #2:

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTER CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #1:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

CHARACTER CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #2:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WORLD / SETTING CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #1:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WORLD / SETTING CONVENTIONS ASSOCIATED WITH GENRE #2:

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

STORY: _________________________

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CHOOSE A GENRE

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WHY ARE YOU WRITING THIS STORY?

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HOW CAN GENRE #1 HELP TO TELL YOUR STORY?

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HOW CAN GENRE #2 HELP TO TELL YOUR STORY?

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HOW CAN SUBVERTING GENRE #1ʼS CONVENTIONS HELP TO TELL YOUR STORY?

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HOW CAN SUBVERTING GENRE #2ʼS CONVENTIONS HELP TO TELL YOUR STORY?

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STORY: _________________________

LIMITATIONS OF GENRE #1:

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LIMITATIONS OF GENRE #2:

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HOW MIGHT THE ENDING CHANGE DEPENDING ON THE GENRE?

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THINGS YOU LOVE ABOUT GENRE #1:

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THINGS YOU LOVE ABOUT GENRE #2:

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HOW WILL READER EXPECTATIONS CHANGE DEPENDING ON THE GENRE?

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DECISION MAKING

CHARACTER 1: _________

SKILLS:

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MOTIVATIONS:

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TEMPERAMENT:

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JUSTIFICATIONS FOR:

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JUSTIFICATIONS AGAINST:

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Decision-making will become too complicated for you and your readers to grasp if there are more than 3 characters involved. Even if you have a group of characters debating, try to have no more than 3 clear factions.

CHARACTERS INVOLVED IN MAKING THE DECISION

CHARACTER 2: _________

SKILLS:

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MOTIVATIONS:

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TEMPERAMENT:

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JUSTIFICATIONS FOR:

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JUSTIFICATIONS AGAINST:

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CHARACTER 3: _________

SKILLS:

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MOTIVATIONS:

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TEMPERAMENT:

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JUSTIFICATIONS FOR:

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JUSTIFICATIONS AGAINST:

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CHOICE 1:________________

CHOICE 2:________________

CHOICE 3:________________

ACTIONSNECESSARY

SKILLSNECESSARY

POSITIVECONSEQUENCES

NEGATIVECONSEQUENCES

ASSUMPTIONS

DECISION MAKING

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PICK THE CHOICE THAT CREATES THE MOST CONFLICT, AND THAT BEST ALLOWS CHARACTERS TO USE THEIR SKILL-SET AND DEMONSTRATE THEIR PERSONALITY.

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EXPRESSING EMOTIONS

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HOW EMOTIONAL IS THE CHARACTER?

WHAT IS THEIR PRIMARY EMOTION?

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HOW DO THEY EXPRESS IT?

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ARE THEIR EMOTIONS CHANGEABLE?

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DO THEY HAVE DIFFICULTY EXPRESSING THEIR EMOTIONS?

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ARE THEIR EMOTIONS CLEAR OR CONFUSED?

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ARE THEIR EMOTIONS SIMPLE OR COMPLICATED/LAYERED?

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IS THERE A CONFLICT BETWEEN THEIR EMOTIONS AND THEIR INTELLECT?

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HOW ARE EMOTIONS EXPRESSED IN THEIR FAMILY/SOCIETY?

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ARE THERE EMOTIONS THEYʼRE EXPECTED TO FEEL?

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STORY: ____________________________ CHARACTER: ____________________________

DOES THE READER HEAR THE CHARACTERʼS THOUGHTS? DIRECTLY OR INDIRECTLY?

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WHAT WORDS DO THEY USE TO DESCRIBE THEIR EMOTIONS?

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HOW DO THEIR EMOTIONS VARY IN INTENSITY AS THE STORY PROGRESSES?

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EXPRESSING EMOTIONS

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DO THEY TRY TO CONTROL THEIR EMOTIONS?

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DO THEY TRY TO HIDE THEIR EMOTIONS?

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DO THEY TRY TO DENY/SUPPRESS THEIR EMOTIONS?

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HOW DO THEIR EMOTIONS INFLUENCE THEIR ACTIONS?

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HOW DO THEIR EMOTIONS INFLUENCE THEIR THOUGHTS?

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HOW DO THEIR EMOTIONS INFLUENCE THEIR RELATIONSHIPS?

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ARE THERE EMOTIONS OF WHICH THEY ARE UNAWARE?

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HOW DO THESE MANIFEST?

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HOW DO THEY BECOME AWARE OF THEM?

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HOW DO OTHER CHARACTERS REACT TO THEIR EMOTIONS?

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CAN OTHER CHARACTERS CORRECTLY INTERPRET THEIR EMOTIONS?

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WHAT EMOTIONS ARE THEY INCAPABLE OF FEELING?

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CREATE CONFLICT

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WHO OR WHAT IS OPPOSING YOUR CHARACTER?

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WHY ARE THEY AT ODDS?

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WHO OR WHAT ELSE IS INVOLVED?

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HOW DOES THE CHARACTER REACT INTERNALLY?

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HOW DOES THE CHARACTER REACT EXTERNALLY?

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WHAT GOVERNS THE CHARACTERʼS REACTIONS?

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IS THE CHARACTER MOTIVATED TO RESOLVE THE CONFLICT?

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HOW LONG DOES THE CONFLICT LAST?

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HOW & WHEN SHOULD THE CONFLICT BE RESOLVED?

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HOW DOES THE CHARACTER DEVELOP THROUGH THIS CONFLICT?

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HOW DO THE OTHER (OPPOSING) CHARACTERSDEVELOP THROUGH THIS CONFLICT?

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HOW DOES THE STORY DEVELOP THROUGH THIS CONFLICT?

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COMPOUND OR RESOLVE A CONFLICT

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Conversation: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Violence: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Threats:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Supplication:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Complaints:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Apologies:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Punishment:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Questions:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Empathy:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Requests:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Persuasion:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Honesty:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Dishonesty:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Incentives:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT IS THE CONFLICT? ________________________________________________________

DO YOU NEED TO MAKE IT WORSE OR RESOLVE IT? _________________________________

BRAINSTORM SOME WAYS TO COMPOUND OR RESOLVE IT THROUGH…

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COMPOUND OR RESOLVE A CONFLICT

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Outside help:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Advice:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Inaction:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Orders:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Haste:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Leadership:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Departure:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Rank:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Death:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Inattention:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Information:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Error:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Discovery:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Deflection:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Other:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Other:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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THEEND

WHERE DID THE STORY BEGIN?

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OPTION 1WHAT IS THE ENDING THE MAIN CHARACTER WOULD LIKE?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

OPTION 2WHAT IS THE ENDING THE ANTAGONIST WOULD LIKE?

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OPTION 3WHAT WOULD BE AN UNEXPECTED ENDING?

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WHAT DID YOU WANT THE STORY TO CONVEY TO THE READER?

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HOW HAS THE MAIN CHARACTER CHANGED?

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WHAT WAS THE MAIN CHARACTER'S STATE AT THE BEGINNING OF THE STORY?

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WHAT HAS BEEN SYMBOLIC OF THE CHANGE?

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WHY DOES THE STORY END NOW?

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WHAT DO YOU NEED TO REMIND THE READER ABOUT?

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WHAT IS THE FINAL FEELING YOU WANT THE READER TO LEAVE WITH?

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WHERE SHOULD THE STORY END?

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WHAT IS IN THE CHARACTER'S FUTURE?

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WHO IS WITH THE CHARACTER & WHY?

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START A FIGHT

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WHO GETS INVOLVED IN THE FIGHT?

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WHY DO THEY START FIGHTING? WHO STARTS?

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WHAT IS AT STAKE FOR EACH PARTY?

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WHAT IS THE AIM OF THE FIGHT FOR EACH PARTY?

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DO ALL PARTIES FIGHT FAIR?

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WHY COULDNʼT THE PROBLEM BE SOLVED WITHOUT FIGHTING?

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ARE THERE ANY ONLOOKERS OR ARBITERS?

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IS THE FIGHT PRE-PLANNED OR SPONTANEOUS?

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DOES ANYONE TRY TO FLEE? WHY OR WHY NOT?

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HOW DOES THE FIGHT END? IS THERE A CLEAR WINNER?

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WHAT DO THEY DO AFTER THE FIGHT? HOW DO THEY FEEL?

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DOES THE FIGHT END THE CONFLICT BETWEEN THEM?

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START A FIGHT: PHYSICAL

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DO THEY HAVE WEAPONS?

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HOW DOES THE METHOD/CHOICE OF WEAPON INFLUENCE THE FIGHT?

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IS THE FIGHT PART OF A RITUAL OR RITE OF PASSAGE?

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WHERE DO THEY FIGHT?

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DOES THE FIGHTING GROUND PLAY A ROLE IN THE OUTCOME?

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IS ANYONE INJURED OR KILLED?

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ARE THEY EVENLY MATCHED IN SKILL?

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ARE THEY EVENLY MATCHED IN STRENGTH & STAMINA?

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ARE THEY EVENLY MATCHED IN RESOURCES?

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HOW DOES THE FIGHT PLAY OUT?

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DO ANY OTHER FACTORS COME INTO PLAY?

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A PERFECT VILLAINDEFINING CHARACTERISTICS:

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MOTIVATION:

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DO THEY CONSIDER THEMSELVES A VILLAIN?

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WHAT IS THEIR AIM?

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HOW DOES THIS CAUSE CONFLICT WITH THE PROTAGONIST?

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WHY DOES THE PROTAGONIST DISLIKE THEM?

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GENERAL MOOD / DISPOSITION / OUTLOOK:

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DO THEY FEEL MISTREATED?

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HOW DO THEY PLAN TO ACHIEVE IT?

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WHY DO THEY DISLIKE THE PROTAGONIST?

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DO THEY HAVE HENCHMEN?

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HOW DO THEY TREAT THEIR SUBORDINATES?

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ARE THEY ISOLATED?

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WHO OR WHAT DO THEY BLAME?

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WHAT ADVANTAGES DO THEY HAVE?

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A PERFECT VILLAINHOW DO THEY TRY TO UNNERVE OTHERS?

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HOW DO THEY TRY TO MANIPULATE OTHERS?

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HOW DO THEY TRY TO HURT OTHERS?

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DO THEY PURSUE THEIR VICTIMS OR WAIT FOR THEM?

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A PERSON?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

HOW DO THEY CREATE A CONTRAST WITH THE PROTAGONIST?

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HOW DO THEY CHANGE THE COURSE OF THE STORY?

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HOW DO THEY TRY TO ANTAGONISE OTHERS?

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AN EVENT?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

SOMETHING ELSE?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

A BELIEF/WORLD VIEW?

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THEIR ENVIRONMENT?

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WHAT MADE THEM A VILLAIN? WAS IT…

HOW DO THEY CREATE DRAMA & SUSPENSE?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DO THEY CHANGE?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

DO THEY SUCCEED?

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OCCUPATIONS

IS THE WORK FULFILLING FOR THE CHARACTER?

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IS THE CHARACTER GOOD AT WHAT THEY DO?

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STORY: _______________________________CHARACTER: __________________________

WHERE DOES THE CHARACTER WORK? DO THEY LIKE IT THERE?

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DO THEY HAVE TO COMMUTE?

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WHAT WORK DOES THE CHARACTER DO?

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IS THE WORK BENEFICIAL TO OTHERS?

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DO THEY WORK OVERTIME?

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DO THEY HAVE DAYS OFF?

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IS THIS THEIR DREAM JOB?

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HOW LONG HAVE THEY BEEN DOING THIS WORK?

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WHY DOES THE CHARACTER DO THIS WORK?

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WHAT HOURS DO THEY WORK?

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IS THERE A HIERARCHY?

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HOW MUCH INFLUENCE DOES THE CHARACTER HAVE AT WORK?

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IS THERE A SUPERVISOR / BOSS?

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HOW RESPONSIBLE ARE THEY?

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DO THEY STEAL RESOURCES OR TIME?

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DO THEY BREAK ANY RULES?

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DO THEY LIKE THEIR COLLEAGUES?

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DO THEY SEE THEIR COLLEAGUES OUTSIDE OF WORK?

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WHO ELSE WORKS THERE?

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IS THE WORK DANGEROUS?

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WHAT ARE THEIR FUTURE WORK PLANS / HOPES?

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IS IT SOLITARY OR SOCIAL WORK?

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OCCUPATIONS STORY: _______________________________CHARACTER: __________________________

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THOUGHTS

HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS REVEAL THEIR WORLDVIEW?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS REVEAL THEIR TRUE MOTIVES?

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STORY: _______________________________CHARACTER: __________________________

DO THEY ARGUE IN THEIR OWN HEADS?

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DO THEY QUESTION THEMSELVES?

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WHAT THOUGHTS OCCUPY THIS CHARACTERʼS MIND?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS REVEAL THEIR CHARACTER?

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WHAT THOUGHTS DO THEY REPRESS?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS CREATE MORE CONFLICT?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS SHAPE THEIR INTERPRETATIONS OF EVENTS?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS REVEAL THEIR EMOTIONS?

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WHAT THOUGHTS COME EASILY INTO THEIR MIND?

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WHAT WORDS OR PHRASES DO THEY USE OFTEN?

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HOW WILL YOU INDICATE THEIR INDIRECT THINKING?

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HOW DO THEY SOLVE PROBLEMS IN THEIR HEAD?

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HOW WILL YOU INDICATE THEIR DIRECT THOUGHTS?

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WHAT IS THE DOMINANT TONE OF THEIR THOUGHTS?

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HOW IS THE TONE OF THEIR THOUGHTS DISTINCTIVE?

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HOW IS THEIR THINKING VOICE SIMILAR TO THEIR SPEAKING VOICE?

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ARE THEIR THOUGHTS IN ALIGNMENT WITH THEIR ACTIONS?

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HOW OFTEN DO THEY EXPRESS THEIR THOUGHTS?

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HOW LONG DO THEY SPEND THINKING VS. ACTING?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS MISLEAD OR MISINFORM THE READER?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS INTEREST THE READER?

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HOW DO THEIR THOUGHTS LEAD OR INFORM THE READER?

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THOUGHTS STORY: _______________________________CHARACTER: __________________________

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SET THE SCENE

HOW DOES THE SPACE AFFECT THEIR THOUGHTS?

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HOW DOES THE SPACE AFFECT THEIR INTERACTIONS?

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STORY: ____________________________CHARACTER: _______________________

IS THE SPACE IT LIGHT OR DARK?

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IS THE SPACE LARGE OR SMALL?

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DOES THE SCENE TAKE PLACE INDOORS OR OUT?

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HOW DOES THE SPACE AFFECT THE CHARACTERSʼ MOVEMENTS?

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HOW DO THEY PERCEIVE THE SPACE DIFFERENTLY?

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HOW DOES THE SPACE CREATE OR RESOLVE CONFLICT?

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HOW ARE THE CHARACTERS POSITIONED IN THE SPACE?

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WHAT THEMES ARE REPRESENTED BY THE SPACE?

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WHAT ROLE DOES THE SPACE PLAY IN THE STORY?

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WHAT OBJECTS ARE REPRESENTATIVE OF THE SPACE?

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WHAT LIMITATIONS DOES THE SPACE CAUSE?

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LIST SOME WORDS THAT DESCRIBE THE SPACE…

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WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS TOUCH?

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WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS SEE?

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WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS FEEL?

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SET THE SCENE STORY: ____________________________CHARACTER: _______________________

HOW DO THESE INFLUENCE THE SCENE?

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WHAT LIBERTIES DOES THE SPACE PROVIDE?

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WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS SMELL?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS HEAR?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

WHAT DO THE CHARACTERS TASTE?

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