to correct or not to correct: teachers’ reaction to certain error types
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This paper reports on a study aimed to investigate feedback approaches and error noticeability of a group of writing teachers teach at two different levels of proficiency on the university foundation programme in Oman.TRANSCRIPT
To Correct or not to Correct: Teachers’ Reaction to Certain Error Types
Hashil Mohammed Al-Sadi
PhD Research Student, School of Education,
Educational Research Department,University of Sheffield, UK
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Abstract:
This paper reports on a study aimed to investigate feedback approaches and error noticeability
of a group of writing teachers teach at two different levels of proficiency on the university
foundation programme in Oman. Teachers were given a text produced by a student in a writing
class to mark. The paper makes a good account of the literature on error correction and
methods of feedback as necessary background to the study. The findings confirm those
reported in literature that teachers differ in their error noticeability and judgement of the
seriousness of certain error types. Teachers were also found to vary their feedback methods
depending on the nature of the error and students’ level of proficiency. Other feedback
techniques such as peer-editing and conferencing were reported by only a small number of
teachers.
The present study explains such observations in the light of research findings reported in
literature and proposes additional possible variables such as psychological, physical and
environmental factors which could explain why teachers vary in their error noticeability and
feedback style. Such factors have not been fully investigated. The study concludes by
stressing the importance for teachers to pay attention to their feedback methods and negotiate
these with their students allowing room for student preferences, reflection and autonomy.
Key words: feedback, writing, error correction, error noticeability, Oman.
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Introduction
No matter what shapes it takes, all students expect some kinds of feedback on their written
work. Writing teachers use a variety of coding systems when commenting on their students’
written work. Although these marking codes tend to be standardized in certain language
programmes, the inescapable fact is that feedback remains largely subjective.
Error correction and feedback has attracted a great deal of theoretical and empirical research
over the past few decades. A number of studies have put teachers’ feedback under scrutiny
and investigated the effect of certain feedback types on the overall development of students’
fluency and accuracy in writing (see for example Fathman and Whalley, 1990; Hedgcock and
Lefkowitz, 1994). However, studies investigating the mechanism and variation of teacher
feedback are seriously lacking in research. In particular, it is not yet clear if all teachers notice
(and therefore identify) the same error types on students’ scripts, what factors such as
psychological or otherwise affect this noticeability, and what specific feedback methods writing
teachers consider suitable in contexts similar to the one under study, i.e. teaching English as a
foreign language to undergraduate Omani learners. In addition, it is not yet clear if teachers
consciously and purposively vary their feedback techniques according to students’ level of
proficiency.
This paper therefore addresses this lack in research and reports on a study carried out on a
group of writing teachers on the English foundation programme at Sultan Qaboos University of
Oman. The present piece of research employed empirical means to find out i) if all teachers
notice and respond to the same error types on students’ scripts, ii) if teachers teaching the same
course and operating under the same guidelines and criteria employ the same feedback methods
when commenting on the students’ writing, and iii) if teachers vary their feedback methods
according to the students’ level of proficiency. In a nutshell, the present study investigates the
error ‘noticeability’ and feedback methods of a group of writing teachers on the English
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foundation programme in Oman. The present study contributes to the current body of
knowledge on error correction and feedback by adding a deeper understanding of the nature
and mechanism of feedback in a different teaching and learning context from those already
reported on literature. It also confirms the findings of the previous studies carried out on error
correction and feedback. Finally, the present study provides an important ground for further
research in ELT in general and the context under study in particular.
Context of study
The English foundation programme at the university is the responsibility of the Language
Centre. The Language Centre is the gateway to all freshmen who got enrolled on the university
different programmes of study. It is considered one of the largest of its kind in the Arabian
Gulf region with a student body of around 4000 each semester and more than 200 teachers from
30 different countries. Teacher qualifications range from a postgraduate diploma in
TEFL/TESL with a minimum of two years of teaching experience to a PhD. Their job is to help
students to improve their language and prepare them for the English-medium courses in their
subject areas. Students are placed at six different proficiency levels according to their
performance in a placement test administered at entry. Their level of proficiency in English at
entry is almost equivalent to IELTS band 4. The writing curriculum is set to equip students
with the skills and strategies necessary to successfully cope with the demands of the varied
academic writing tasks in their respective colleges. Students do twenty hours of intensive
English per week and have writing classes on a weekly basis. The materials used in writing
classes are mainly in-house but supplementary commercial materials are also used when
necessary. As regards marking and grading of students’ scripts, teachers at each level are
provided with specific descriptors and evaluation criteria to follow when carrying out marking.
Students’ scripts at exams are always double-marked.
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By the end of the English foundation programme, students are expected to be able to write texts
of a minimum of 250 words, showing control of layout, organisation, punctuation, spelling,
sentence structure, grammar and vocabulary and produce a written report of a minimum of 500
words showing evidence of research, notetaking, review and revision of work, paraphrasing,
summarising, use of quotations and use of references.
Study Questions
The present study seeks to answer the following three questions:
1. What specific methods of feedback do writing teachers employ in the context under study?
2. Do these feedback methods vary according to students’ level of proficiency? If so, how?
3. Do all teachers identify the same error types on students’ scripts?
Literature Review
A number of recent studies have emphasized the central role error correction plays in the
process of second language learning (e.g., Chaudron, 1983; Long, 1983; Hedgcock and;
Johnson, 1988 and Lefkowitz, 1994). The principal aim of these studies was twofold: to
identify how and when teachers should correct their learners’ errors and mistakes and how
effective error correction is. According to James (1998:235), “One of the purposes of doing
error analysis is to identify the principles which should guide effective error correction.
Principled error correction is applied error analysis”.
Three levels of correction can be identified in literature: feedback, correction and remediation.
Feedback involves teachers to simply inform the learners that there is an error and leaving them
to discover it and correct it on their own. Correction, by contrast, involves providing the
learner with the necessary information or treatment that would help them correct their errors.
Here, the teacher may specify how and where, suggest alternatives and give hints that lead to
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the correct form. At the remediation level, the teacher does not simply identify the error and
suggest ways of correcting it, but provides comprehensible information that allows learners to
revise or reject the wrong rule they had been operating under when produced the error. In other
words, remediation encourages students to reconstruct their mental representation of the target
language rules so that the error type or token does not recur.
Hammerly (1991) refers to these levels by suggesting a distinction between deep and surface
correction. For him, surface correction involves mare editing or putting right but does not
address the source of the problem. The deep correction, by contrast, addresses the source of the
error, gives students a clear picture of why a bit of language is the way it is and helps learners
to “reorganize their cognitive structures” (p.93).
The various studies that have been conducted to date have shown that error correction is
necessary and has proved useful in improving the quality of students’ writing (see for example
Fathman and Whalley, 1990). However, there are a number of principles that need to be
considered for an effective error correction. Firstly, error correction should be effective. For
an error correction to be effective, teachers, according to James (1998), need to use correction
techniques that bring about improvements in accuracy and at the same time efficient, i.e.
require less time and effort on the teacher’s part and have the desired effect on students.
Secondly, error correction should be sensitive. This is an important principle since not all
learners react similarly positive to their teacher corrections. Many authors have suggested an
individualised error correction or a whole-class correction. This would definitely ‘personalise’
the error correction process and make it a less threatening experience. Both Hammerly (1991)
and Edge (1989) emphasise the notion of a ‘humanised’ error correction. ‘Conferencing’ is
another technique to avoid a threatening error correction and to encourage student-teacher
active interaction and cooperation. Teacher-students conferencing entails both the teacher and
student discuss a piece of student writing either individually or in a group during the writing of
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a composition, and after it is finished. Although conferencing can be critiqued by some
teachers as a time-consuming activity, it is viewed by others as an effective technique which
enables learners to freely speak out their intentions and describe the difficulties they encounter
with certain aspects of the skill. This last notion of cooperation between teachers and learners
has also been emphasized by Dheram (1995). Thirdly, error correction should match students’
preferences. Studies on error correction have indicated that students’ preferences for certain
type of correction cannot be ignored. Hedgcock and Lefkowtz (1994), for instance, found that
EFL learners prefer a form-focused feedback on their writing while ESL learners prefer a
content-oriented correction. Cohen and Cavalcanti (1990) in another study noted that a clear
agreement between teacher and student as to what will be commented on and how is a missing
ingredient of a typical approach to error correction.
Studies have also shown that teachers do not respond similarly to different error types. This
can be explained on the basis of two concepts which have been widely discussed in the
literature on error analysis, namely, Error Noticeability (James, 1998) and Error Gravity
(Roberta, et al, 1984; Mattar, 1989; James, 1998). Intuitively, not all errors have the same
effect on communication and thus errors vary in terms of “seriousness”. Error gravity then is a
measure of the effect a certain error has on communication. Nevertheless, there are different
factors affecting error gravity. James (1998) suggests the following criteria for error gravity:
error frequency, error density, grammaticality, comprehensibility, communicativity and
noticeability.
Experience and observation show that teachers differ in their judgement of learners’ errors. It
is hypothesised that teachers’ error gravity judgement would tend to reflect the frequency with
which a given error occurs (Mattar, 1989). This, however, turns out to be ungereralisable since
for other teachers, particular error types are more gravy than others regardless to frequency (see
for instance Roberta et al, 1984).
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According to James (1998), some errors are unnoticeable by nature and so go unnoticed while
others occur very frequently in the text and rarely go unnoticed. He called the former type
“covert errors” and reserved the term “overt errors” for the latter. In addition, teachers view
certain error types as more serious than others and so it is worthwhile focussing students’
attention on such errors as they hinder communication and of a relatively high frequency of
occurrence in their scripts. In a similar study, Roberta et al, (1984) examined the faculty
response to the written errors of students at the sentence level. They concluded that teachers
judge the seriousness of certain errors differently.
Notwithstanding the previously discussed criteria for error gravity such as those of James
(1998), there are other factors which seem to impact teacher’s error noticeability and feedback
type but are not widely discussed in literature. These include psychological, physical and
environmental factors such as mood, fatigue and noise respectively. One could safely claim
then that teachers working under any of these factors may well miss out or deliberately decide
to not comment on certain error type. Therefore, such factors do play a role on the overall
teacher performance and hence need to be taken into account for a valid judgement of teacher
error noticeability.
As regards the effectiveness of certain feedback types, literature on error correction to date
suggests that there is no taken-for-granted way that best helps students overcome their errors
and mistakes and consequently improve their writing. Feedback types and modality such as
when, in terms of time and students’ level, to provide feedback, form/content-focussed
feedback, negative/positive feedback, marginal/terminal feedback, intensive/extensive
feedback, process/product-focussed feedback and finally implicit/explicit feedback, have no
apparent contributions to differences in overall writing quality (Hedgcock and Lefkowitz,
1994). Paradoxically, other studies, see for example Fathman and Whalley (1990), proved
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evident that form and content-focussed feedback help students improve their grammatical
accuracy and the content of their compositions respectively.
In short, error correction and feedback have gained a special interest among researchers and
practitioners alike. Studies have investigated the effect different types of feedback have on
students’ writing accuracy and proficiency while others have looked at the features of effective
feedback. Studies on error correction suggest that error correction is required by learners
themselves and is essential especially in cases where the language processing task is difficult
and so self-correction, although encouraged, is not possible. In addition, teachers themselves
have different conventions about which types of error to be identified to students and what
feedback type is most effective. Hence, error correction needs to be handled effectively and
sensitively.
Study Design
Research sample
In order to answer the three research questions, a sample of eight writing teachers were
randomly selected as respondents in the present study. They were of various nationalities native
and non-native speakers of English and all of them (except for one) have had more than six
years of experience as EFL teachers. To answer the third question (if teachers vary their
feedback methods according to the students’ level of proficiency), the eight teachers were
chosen from two different levels of proficiency on the university English foundation
programme; i.e., four of them teach level 2 students and other four teach level 6 students.
Research instrument
As mentioned earlier, the present study aims to examine how teachers notice and respond to
their students’ writing errors and if they vary their feedback methods according to the students’
level of proficiency. To achieve this, teachers were given a short questionnaire which was
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carefully designed to achieve the aims of the study. The questionnaire comprised two basic
sections. The first section was an open-ended question which required teachers to fully
describe their feedback techniques when responding to their students’ writing errors. The
second part comprised a short text randomly selected from a level-two writing class. Students
were asked to write their preference for study- whether they prefer to pursue their post-
secondary studies abroad or in Oman. In fact, the nature of the investigation predetermined the
methodology to be followed to answer the study questions. That is, since teachers were asked
to respond to a text, other data collecting techniques such as interviews or focus groups were
not possible.
Findings and Discussion
A careful analysis of the data gathered via the questionnaire revealed interesting and useful
results. As regards the general approaches available for teachers when responding to their
students’ errors in writing and if such approaches vary according to the students’ level of
proficiency (see study questions one and two above), the analysis of the responses given by the
writing teachers revealed systematic variations in the methods followed by teachers teaching at
the two different levels of proficiency chosen for the present study. For instance, level 2
teachers used more correction symbols than level 6 teachers did. In addition, level 2 teachers
did not only locate the error position on the script using marking symbols above each error, but
provided corrections for the erroneous words as well and pointed out the location of any
omissions. On the other hand, level 6 teachers appeared to provide lesser help depending on
the nature of the error and whether the students are able to self-correct their errors once these
are brought to their attention. It is also worth mentioning that only three out of the eight
teachers (two level 2 and one level 6) reported using peer-editing method as a follow-up
activity to the actual writing class. Harmer (1991) argues that student-student correction proves
useful in helping students reflect on their own errors as well as on others’. He proceeds that
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such an approach can in itself be classed as a communicative activity. Another technique
reported by the study respondents was conferencing. Three level 6 teachers and, surprisingly
enough, only one level 2 teacher reported that they sat with their students after class or invited
them to their offices to discuss their work and provide feedback. In short, teachers do not seem
consistent in the way they respond to their students’ writing errors and their approaches to
feedback do vary according to the students’ level of proficiency.
Turning to the third question of the study, the analysis showed that teachers of both levels
showed varied noticeability towards certain error types. To further explain the point under
discussion, let us consider a sample of six error types extracted from the text which was given
to the eight teachers for marking (see the table below) and see how many teachers, out of the
eight, would identify these errors.
Error type Example Number of teachers identified the error
Spelling Continu 7/8
Forgin 7/8
Contury 8/8
Fragment Because I have… 7/8
Verb omission Another reason (*) that you 6/8
Article omission in forgin contury 7/8
Will be important thing 8/8
Word misselection Another 8/8
Esteem 8/8
Collocation High university 7/8
Table 1: Teacher responses to certain error types.
The data summarised in the table above show that not all teachers noticed and identified the same
error types. There was an agreement among the eight teachers concerning only four grammatical
mistakes out of the ten listed above. The other six mistakes were not identified as deviant on the
script by all teachers. In fact, one of the mistakes, omission of the main verb in a clause, was
identified as deviant by only six teachers.
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This can be explained on the basis of the two concepts discussed earlier in the literature review
section: error noticeability and error gravity. James (1998) argues that some errors are by their
nature unnoticeable and so go unnoticed while others occur very frequently in the text and rarely go
unnoticed. Here, he makes a distinction between ‘covert’ and ‘overt’ errors. Another possible
explanation is that some teachers view certain error types as ‘less serious’ than others and so, to
theses teachers, it is worthwhile focussing the students’ attention on errors that hinder
communication and of a relatively high frequency of occurrence in their scripts. In a similar study,
Roberta et al, (1984) examined the faculty response to the written errors of students at the sentence
level. Their findings fall in agreement with those of the present study in the sense that teachers
judge the seriousness of certain errors differently. This could be one way to explain why the eight
teachers had varied judgment about the errors in general and about the verb omission error in
particular. Two of eight teachers did not point out this error for it was not considered a hindrance
to communication. The other explanation could be that the two teachers simply did not notice the
error, although an error of this type is usually classified as one of the serious errors and therefore
should have a high error noticeability rate (James, 1998). Factors mentioned earlier such as mood,
fatigue and noise could well explain such findings. Such an analytical view and observation simply
emphasise the significance of the present study as a basis for further investigations into teacher
feedback approaches and judgment of what is deviant and acceptable in the students’ written work.
Conclusions, limitations and recommendations
The role and mode of feedback in writing classes have been widely discussed in literature. The
assumption was that such data would provide useful information on how writing teachers respond
to their students’ errors in writing, which in itself provides a ground for valid evaluation of such
methods in conjunction with their effect on students’ writing proficiency and preferences to certain
feedback type and method. A number of studies have investigated teacher error correction styles
and feedback methods. However, the present study is considered unique for it is the first endeavour
in its context to explore areas such as teacher error noticeability and error gravity. Variation of
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teacher feedback style and method with learners’ level of proficiency was also not addressed in the
previous research.
The findings of the present study do not only confirm those reported by studies conducted in other
contexts as regards teacher error noticeability and error gravity, but also provides fresher insight
into how teacher feedback methods vary according to learners’ degree of proficiency in the EFL
writing class. Generally speaking, the findings suggest that teachers differ in their noticeability of
the same error type and their responses vary with the students’ level of proficiency. In addition, the
study also confirmed that errors do not have the same gravity in attracting teachers’ attention.
Errors classified as ‘overt errors’ are more likely to be ‘noticed’ by teachers and thus identified to
the students as opposed to ‘covert errors’ which often pass unnoticed. In terms of the teachers’
response to the errors after they have been noticed, the data suggest that level 2 teachers use more
correction symbols and in most cases provide the students with correct forms of the erroneous
words more than level 6 teachers do.
Turning to limitations, any small-scale research has potential limitations. The present study is no
exception. The researcher is aware of two essential limitations of the present study. The first one is
that the sample was relatively small (eight teachers). Therefore, further investigations on a larger
sample could be more informative. The other limitation is to do with the absence of the teachers’
voice. A series of follow-up focus group interviews with a sample of writing teachers teaching at
different levels would generate deeper insight into teacher choice of a certain feedback method.
Furthermore, it is particularly important to research other factors affecting teacher error
noticeability and feedback style such as psychological, physical and environmental factors, i.e., it is
not yet clear to what extend do teachers admit the influence of factors such as mood, fatigue, noise,
limitation of time, etc. on their marking. The above limitations should not however be viewed as
weak elements of the present study but more of directions for further research into this important
area of ELT. The present study initially aimed to address specific research gaps and seek answers
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to particular questions, which has been achieved. In addition, the methodology and data collection
technique had indeed served the aims set for the study.
Overall, teachers should be aware of their own methods of and approaches to feedback and
negotiate these with their students allowing room for student preferences, reflection and autonomy.
The agreed upon approach, however, should be compatible with the students’ level of proficiency,
help them become more conscious of their own errors and one which is neither demotivating by
over-correcting every single error nor deals with errors superficially so that students do not get
enough feedback on their work.
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