untitled screenplay (act one)
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Act One of screenplayTRANSCRIPT
Untitled Screenplay
By Sebastian Lena
March 2, 2015
JAKE (V.O.)
Love looks not with the eyes, but
with the mind.
FADE IN:
Close up on a bright, bluish luminescent light. A faint
buzzing in the distance.
JAKE (V.O.)
My man Shakespeare penned that line
over four centuries ago. And would
you believe it? It’s as true today
as it was back then.
The buzzing gradually grows louder.
JAKE (V.O.)
The sad reality of it all is: It’s
the ones we love--the ones we build
up the most--that tend to hurt us
the worst.
The buzzing is at its peak. Then suddenly...ZAP. Silence.
We zoom out to see-
EXT. PATIO DECK - NIGHT
A bug zapper hanging invitingly.
The now lifeless body of a bug falls into a tray beneath the
device. It joins countless other fallen comrades.
Not a second later, another bug approaches.
JAKE (V.O.)
But even though we see the scars,
even though we know what’s coming,
we just grit our teeth, wince and
move forward towards the light.
The bug drifts curiously towards the brightness. Clueless.
JAKE (V.O.)
And we do it over...and over...and
over again. Until finally...
ZAP. Another one bites the dust.
BLACK.
2.
JAKE (V.O.)
We become addicted to the pain.
EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
The doors to the building swing open.
JAKE (V.O.)
My addiction was Jenny Beckman.
Slow motion as JENNY BECKMAN (Early 20s, drop-dead gorgeous,
a designer whore) makes her way down the front steps. Her
blonde hair blows in the wind.
JAKE (V.O.)
Or as I was lucky enough to call
her...my girlfriend.
EXT. STREET - SOON AFTER
Jenny struts down the street. The sidewalk is her runway.
JAKE (V.O.)
She was the girl of my dreams.
GUYS fawn. Heads turn. Jaws drop. Even a GIRL looks her way.
Jenny is loving every second of it.
JAKE (V.O.)
And of everyone else’s, so it
seemed.
EXT. CROSSWALK - SOON AFTER
An ELDERLY COUPLE hold hands waiting to cross the street.
JAKE (V.O.)
You’d be hard-pressed to find a
sweeter girl.
The "WALK" signal flashes. Before the couple can take a
step, Jenny nudges them to the side and crosses.
By the time they regroup, the "WALK" signal is gone. Cars
beep as they’re left stranded in the middle of the walkway.
3.
INT. SHOP - SOON AFTER
Jenny rummages through shelves. Looks around suspiciously.
JAKE (V.O.)
There wasn’t a single dishonest
bone in her body.
She slides lipstick and makeup into her open purse before
quickly exiting the shop.
EXT. TOWNHOUSE - SOON AFTER
Jenny knocks at the door and waits impatiently.
JAKE (V.O.)
But as perfect as she was, she
still found time to love me
unconditionally.
She raises her hand to knock again before-
INT. TOWNHOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
A SHIRTLESS MAN, showing off a body carved by the gods
themselves, opens the door. Jenny immediately straddles him
as they begin wildly making out.
JAKE (V.O.)
There was just one problem. Teddy
six pack over there? That ain’t me.
INT. APARTMENT - BATHROOM - DAY
A medicine cabinet slams shut. Off the mirror’s reflection
we see JAKE FISCHER (Mid 20s, scruffy faced, a
decent-looking guy if he tried). He mashes a generous
serving of gel into his hair.
JAKE (V.O.)
Yeah, I was played. My "et tu,
Brute" moment, if you will.
Jake picks out a couple of gel crusts from his hair and
admires his work. He then heads into-
4.
INT. APARTMENT - JAKE’S ROOM - SOON AFTER
Jake expertly maneuvers around objects scattered across the
floor. It’s become muscle memory at this point.
He opens up the closet...nothing but hangers.
JAKE (V.O.)
But ask anyone whose ever been in
love. Sometimes, we only see what
we want to see.
Jake turns towards a massive pile of clothes in the corner.
He reaches in and grabs a--nope, that’s an empty beer
bottle. He tosses it aside, picks up a wrinkled, red plaid
button-up and throws it on.
JAKE (V.O.)
And that’s the pathetic part.
He buttons up and eyes a pair of worn-out jeans behind the
dresser. He lifts them to his nose and grimaces. Pauses.
Then again, who’s judging? Jake puts them on and moves to-
INT. APARTMENT - KITCHEN - SOON AFTER
A modernized kitchen. It’s beauty masked by empty liquor
bottles and old pizza boxes spread out across the counter.
JAKE (V.O.)
As long as Cupid’s arrow is lodged
firmly in our backs, even the worst
of people can come off as the best
for our beliefs.
POP. Jake grabs a Pop-Tart from the toaster.
JAKE (V.O.)
Ain’t love grand?
And with that, he’s out the door.
INT. OFFICE BUILDING - WORK SPACE - LATER
An endless sea of cubicles. The usual quiet and calmness of
an office environment is replaced by constant chatter from
dueling TV screens across the room. Sports, celebrity
gossip, food--you name it, a TV screen is playing it.
At the front, a SECRETARY mans a lone desk, focused on
anything but what’s going on around her.
5.
Behind her, the company name is printed in big red font
across the wall: "ClickIt." Under it, in small black
writing: "The pulse of the internet."
It’s corny. But what else would you expect from a company
whose foundation of success was built upon cat slideshows
and food listicles?
Jake makes his way into this zoo.
JAKE (V.O.)
Maybe I’m just bitter. Or maybe
love’s just a-
INTIMIDATING VOICE
Fischer. A word in my office.
It’s FRANK (Early 50s, the head honcho, wears his moustache
as if it were a badge). He motions Jake into his office.
INT. OFFICE BUILDING - FRANK’S OFFICE - SOON AFTER
A decent-sized office. Everything seems to have been
meticulously placed.
Jake and Frank sit on opposite sides of a monstrous desk.
FRANK
You’re fired.
JAKE
Seriously?
A beat. Jake is in shock. Frank stares back blankly. Then-
FRANK
(bursting out laughing)
No, but you should have seen the
look on your face.
Frank mocks Jake’s look of horror. Jake fakes amusement.
Finally, Frank settles down. His face grows serious.
FRANK
Love impedes success.
JAKE
What?
Joe looks at the corner of his desk and picks up a-
PICTURE FRAME
6.
The photo shows Frank with a familiar-looking BLONDE draped
across his arm. It’s Jenny.
FRANK
It’s no secret that I was never a
fan of you dating my daughter.
Simply put, I didn’t think you were
worthy. Still don’t.
Ouch. That one hurt.
FRANK
But I’m also not a fan of what this
breakup has done to your work
performance. You’ve been taking
dumps on my desk for the last six
months and trying to pass them off
as articles.
JAKE
That’s not entirely true.
Joe spins his computer monitor around towards Jake.
FRANK
(pointing at screen)
25 pickup lines broccoli would
totally use on you? C’mon, maan!
JAKE
I’m sorry. It’s just, my mind has
been-
FRANK
You see? Love impedes success.
JAKE
But haven’t you been happily
married for 25 years?
FRANK
Happily? Ha! Try asking me when the
last time I touched my wife was.
An awkward beat. Does he really want Jake to ask?
JAKE
(hesitantly)
When was it?
FRANK
That was a rhetorical question,
Fischer. And none of your damn
business!
7.
A knock at the door. The secretary pokes her head in.
SECRETARY
Mr. Beckman? Sorry to interrupt,
but Jenny is on line one.
Jake’s eyes light up at the mention of her name.
FRANK
Thanks, Samantha. (off Jake’s look)
What are you so giddy about?
Jake plays it off nonchalantly. Frank eyes Jake suspiciously
as he picks up the phone.
FRANK
Hello, pumpkin...I’m in the middle
of something with Jake...yes, that
Jake...can I call you back?
Jake is hopeful. Maybe his name might stir up her interest.
FRANK
Love you too, sweetie. Bye.
Frank hangs up the phone. Jake eyes Frank. Well?
FRANK
She says...ew.
Jake is heartbroken. Frank takes great pleasure in this.
FRANK
Where was I?
JAKE
Love impedes success.
FRANK
Oh, right. I’m going to give you
one more chance, Fischer.
Because--I can’t believe I’m saying
this--I see something in you.
JAKE
Thank you, sir. I promise I won’t
let you down.
FRANK
You better not. Or I’ll be forced
to become the second Beckman to cut
you loose. And you know how much I
hate following trends.
8.
INT. "THE BROKEN BRIDGE TAVERN" - NIGHT
A crowded bar. Your typical college dive.
JAKE
I think I might hate Jenny’s dad
more than her.
Jake is hunched lifelessly over the bar. A full beer sits
invitingly in front of him.
He is flanked on either side by best friends ZACK TAYLOR
(Mid 20s, the class clown, wins the battle over the last
slice more often than not) and CARTER HUTTON (Mid 20s,
dressed to the 9s, a future TIME Man of the Year).
ZACK
Hey, that’s progress. (to Carter)
Right?
Zack shoots Carter a concerned look. But he’s too busy
scanning the room. Left to right. Front to back.
Carter locks onto a potential target. Cute, but is that a
guy with her? Probably her boyfriend. Nope. Locks onto
another. One’s got the looks of a Victoria’s Secret model.
Her friend? Totally balling her eyes out. It’s a guys’ suck
kind of night. Pass. Finally...a table of THREE GIRLS, all
relatively attractive and appear to be single. JACKPOT.
He makes eye contact and smiles. Smooth as fuck.
CARTER
(back to the guys)
Forget Jenny. Forget her dad. What
do you say we go over there and
show those ladies a good night?
ZACK
Totally in!
One of the girls smile back at Carter. He tries to play it
cool, but then...Zack waves back, goofy grin and all. The
girls look away. Mission aborted.
Jake seems to be in his own little world.
JAKE
You know Monday would have been our
five-year anniversary?
9.
CARTER
Jesus. You put up with that for
four-and-a-half years? Humanity
owes you a medal.
JAKE
It just feels weird. Like a part of
me is missing.
ZACK
Let me guess. They’re round, saggy
and typically hang below a penis?
Carter grills Zack. Definitely not helping the situation.
JAKE
You wouldn’t understand.
ZACK
Jake as your best friend-
JAKE
You’re not my best friend.
ZACK
-I feel its my obligation to say
this. (beat) You guys remember my
cat Cher?
CARTER
Who could forget? I swear she was
out to make me her Sonny.
ZACK
I used to feel bad for that horny
little skank. All she did was wake
up, eat, shit on my bed and go back
to sleep before the Lord mercifully
removed her from this Earth.
CARTER
(looking up at the skies)
Bless her little soul.
JAKE
Your point?
ZACK
My point is, I think you might be
worse. You don’t eat. You don’t
sleep. For Christ’s sake, man, look
at yourself. You look like a
frickin’ lumbersexual. (to Carter)
Am I not right?
10.
Carter tries to remain neutral. But he can totally see it.
JAKE
(getting up)
You know what? I don’t need this.
He begins to walk towards the exit.
ZACK
Nice one, Carter.
Carter shoots Zack a menacing glare and gives chase to Jake.
Zack simply shrugs and slyly reaches for Jake’s beer.
A beat.
CARTER
Jake! (catching up) It’s all in
good fun, bro.
Jake turns around. Everything about him looks defeated.
JAKE
Think I’m going to call it in. Just
not feeling it tonight.
CARTER
Bro, look. I get it. Life ain’t no
picnic right now. But for one night
could we just try and forget all
the bad and just focus on the good?
JAKE
Honestly, it’s getting real hard to
tell the difference anymore.
CARTER
C’mon, man! Look around. We’re at
the Bridge. It’s Friday night, the
place is live and I could really
use my wing man right about now.
Jake looks around. Everyone is enjoying themselves. Jake
can’t resist the temptation forever.
The walls begin to come down. Carter notices.
CARTER
So I’ll tell you what you’re gonna
do. You’re gonna get your ass back
in that barstool. Chug a beer. And
then another. And another, until I
look pretty enough to take home.
11.
A beat.
JAKE
Bro, my life’s going down the
drain, not my standards.
CARTER
(laughing)
That’s my boy!
Carter puts his arm around Jake and leads him back to the
bar area. Zack sees this and excitedly grabs the BARTENDER’s
attention.
ZACK
JAGER BOMBS!
MONTAGE - VARIOUS
A). BAR - Jager bombs turn into pitchers. Pitchers turn into
shots. Shots turn into champagne bottles. The boys are
getting wild.
B). DANCE FLOOR - Everyone enjoying themselves. Carter
discretely grabs a GIRL’s ass. She smiles and begins dancing
with him. Zack attempts the same. It’s a GUY WITH A PONY
TAIL. Zack runs away before he can react.
C). VIP SECTION - The boys interrupt a Bachelorette Party.
Tyler begins grinding with the BRIDE-TO-BE. Jake grabs a
giant champagne bottle and starts chugging.
D). STAGE - The fun continues as the boys sneak up on stage.
Tyler pulls out a wad of cash and begins making it rain.
Jake does the same. Quickly realizes he can’t afford to.
Jumps off the stage recklessly to recover his money and
knocks people down.
E). DANCE FLOOR - BOUNCERS rush in and grab Jake. Zack
attempts to help. He gets grilled by a bouncer and
immediately thinks better of it.
F). OUTSIDE - Jake breaks fee and lands a punch on a bouncer
that would make Floyd Mayweather proud. Raises fist
victoriously.
Bouncer reemerges and lands the knockout blow.
BLACK.
12.
We’re looking from Jake’s P.O.V. Everything is blurry.
Suddenly, the silhoette of a woman comes into focus. It’s
AMANDA GRANGER (Early 30s, hasn’t met an ear she couldn’t
talk off).
AMANDA
Rise and shine!
We’re now looking at-
INT. AMANDA’S APARTMENT - LIVING ROOM - DAY
An unusually desolate apartment. All that’s missing is
tumble weed blowing across the floor.
Jake is laid out on a beaten-up couch. He removes a frozen
bag of peas from his face. He moans.
The hangover is upon him.
AMANDA
(off Jake’s clueless look)
Sorry, you probably don’t remember.
I’m Amanda.
She hands Jake a plate with a slightly over-toasted bagel.
It’s obvious visitors are a rare occasion for her.
Jake sits up. It’s the most difficult thing he’s ever done.
JAKE
Did we...?
AMANDA
God, no. No. No way.
JAKE
Gee, thanks. Way to turn me down
easy.
AMANDA
No, I mean...you’re not my type.
JAKE
If I had a dime for every time I
heard that.
AMANDA
Let me try again. (pause) You’ve
got a penis.
13.
JAKE
(it finally clicks)
Ohhhh.
An awkward beat.
JAKE
Do I even want to know how I got
here?
AMANDA
Well, let’s see. I was coming back
from a walk, and there you were.
Right on the steps.
JAKE
Who goes on walks at 2 a.m.?
AMANDA
Who passes out on people’s stoops?
JAKE
Touche. Continue.
AMANDA
(acting out the scene)
So, there you are, sprawled out
across the steps--probably trying
to crawl your way up. Drool is just
oozing outta your mouth. Next thing
I know, you’re slurring at the top
of your lungs, ’Jennay! Jennay!’
(beat) Figured I’d save you from
further embarrassment.
Jake looks absolutely mortified.
AMANDA
It wasn’t all bad though.
JAKE
Thank God.
AMANDA
You did manage to give me the heads
up that I have a ’cold-hearted,
man-eating, no-soul having bitch’
living two floors above me.
JAKE
Oh, no.
14.
AMANDA
But surprisingly, ’she’s the
sweetest little thing once you
really get to know her.’
JAKE
Wow. Sorry about all that.
AMANDA
(laughing)
Don’t sweat it. I could use the
entertainment these days.
A beat. Jake notices the clock.
JAKE
Shit. I better get going. Another
hour and I’m sure my friends will
have an FBI manhunt in progress.
Jake gets up and begins quickly gathering his belongings.
Among them, he’s surprised to find: a pink, bedazzled wand
with a glow-in-the-dark star at the top, furry handcuffs and
a penis straw. Memorabilia from last night’s adventure.
Jake is embarrassed and confused. Amanda chuckles.
AMANDA
You need a ride?
INT. AMANDA’S CAR - LATER
Music booms on the radio.
AMANDA
You punched him? Just like that?
JAKE
Just like that.
AMANDA
Must have felt great.
JAKE
Honestly, I couldn’t really tell
you. But I’d like to imagine that I
pictured six months of pain and
frustration plastered all over that
bouncer’s face.
Amanda notices Jake analyzing his battle wounds. His face
and hand still kill.
15.
AMANDA
And how’d that work out for ya?
JAKE
More pain plastered across mine.
Laughter overpowers the radio. A beat.
Jake notices a crumpled piece of notebook paper under his
shoe. He can barely make out some of its content.
INSERT - NOTEBOOK PAPER
13). Ride a mechanical bull
14). See Paris at least once in every season
15). Eat every flavor of cheesecake from the Cheesecake
Factory
BACK TO SCENE
Jake picks up the paper to examine it further. But before he
gets too far, Amanda snatches the paper out of his hand.
JAKE
You’re a little too young to be
putting together a bucket list,
don’t you think?
Amanda forces a smile. Some inner turmoil is visibly
building inside of her. A beat. Two beats. Suddenly-
AMANDA
I have a brain tumor. The doctors
say I’d be lucky to make it ’til
next summer.
Jake is shocked. Completely caught off guard.
AMANDA
(exhaling)
Fuck, that feels good to say out
loud!
JAKE
I’m sorry to hear that.
AMANDA
It’s okay. You didn’t know.
Jake’s eyes fixate on the paper in Amanda’s hands. He begins
to put the pieces together.
16.
Amanda sees this.
AMANDA
It’s silly, I know. You’re probably
thinking, ’Hey, look, it’s the sick
girl checking off her bucket list
before she dies. How original.’
JAKE
No. Not at all.
AMANDA
You don’t need to lie. I know it’s
stupid.
Silence. Jake scrambles for a response. Something, anything
would be good right now.
But before Jake can even open his mouth-
AMANDA
(slowing car to roll)
This you?
JAKE
Yeah. Right here is good.
Amanda pulls over to the curb. Jake wastes no time popping
open the passenger side door.
He lingers before turning towards Amanda.
JAKE
Hey, umm, thanks again for last
night. And, uh, good luck...with
everything.
Amanda nods in acknowledgment. She smiles.
AMANDA
You take care of yourself, Jake.
Jake steps out and just watches as Amanda’s car disappears
down the street. What in the fuck just happened?
INT. THE BRO PAD - SAME DAY
A beautiful apartment. High ceilings. Exposed brick. Large
windows. Spacious floors.
But that’s where the beauty ends.
17.
This is the same mess of an apartment we saw Jake stumbling
around earlier. It’s your typical bro pad.
We catch up with Zack and Carter in the middle of a heated
FIFA matchup.
FIFA ANNOUNCER
To Fernando Torres. TORRES! There
it is! The golden goal!
Zack leaps off the couch in victory. Carter slams down the
controller in frustration.
The celebrations are cut short by Jake’s arrival.
ZACK CARTER
Hey.
Jake stops dead in his tracks. Not the welcome he imagined.
JAKE
That’s it? ’Hey?’
ZACK
Would you prefer us to bow at your
feet, master?
JAKE
No, but a little concern would be
nice. I mean, I did get roughed up
by a bouncer, black out and wake up
on some random girl’s couch.
CARTER
And you’re freaking out? Sounds
like a typical Friday night to me.
ZACK
Whoa! Hold up a hot, blistering
second. You got laid last night?
(to Carter) The Jakemeister’s back!
Carter shakes his head in disbelief. He hands Zack a $20
bill.
Yep. They actually bet on whether Jake got laid or not.
JAKE
I didn’t-
GIRL (O.S.)
Carter...
18.
Suddenly, an ATTRACTIVE GIRL steps out from Carter’s
bedroom. She appears to be wearing nothing but a t-shirt.
She’s clearly hungover.
ATTRACTIVE GIRL
Come back to bed.
With that, she stumbles back into the bedroom.
There’s something oddly familiar about her.
JAKE
(whispering)
Isn’t that the bride-to-be from
last night?
CARTER
(shouting into bedroom)
Be there in a sec! (to Jake) Not
anymore.
Carter smirks and heads into the bedroom. He pauses and
turns back towards Jake and Zack.
CARTER
You guys, mind...(nodding towards
room) you know...heading out for a
bit?
JAKE
Gotcha.
CARTER
Thanks, bro.
Carter closes the door behind him. Moments later, giggling
can be heard from inside.
ZACK
Wanna listen?
Jake is creeped out. Pushes Zack forward.
JAKE
C’mon. Let’s go.
INT. CHIPOTLE - SAME DAY
It’s rush hour. Jake and Zack are at the midpoint of a line
that stretches out the door.
19.
ZACK
Did you thank her?
JAKE
For saving me from complete
humiliation?
ZACK
No, for saving your job.
Jake doesn’t follow.
ZACK
Think about it, bro. You need a
spectacular story to save your job.
And one just happened to fall into
your lap. When the universe speaks,
you listen. No questions asked.
JAKE
Is the universe also to blame for
that sweater?
Close-up on Zack’s sweater. It’s pink with a flamingo on it.
Questionable fashion choice to say the least.
ZACK
Easy, Joan Rivers. It was a gift
from Grandma Taylor. Only thing I
could grab with you hauling me out.
JAKE
If that’s your story.
The line moves. Still a ways to go.
JAKE
But nah, I couldn’t do that to
Amanda.
ZACK
Dude. You barely know her.
JAKE
Still, it’s not the kind of bad
karma I need right now. I’m trying
to better myself to convince Jenny
that she made a mistake.
Zack is dumbfounded.
20.
ZACK
Your job is in jeopardy and all you
can think about is getting back in
the drawers of the bosses daughter.
You’re something else, Jake. You
know that?
JAKE
Shut up.
ZACK
I’m just saying, this breakup has
been using you like toilet paper,
bro. And not the thick, soft kind
you pay a little bit extra for.
You’re the thin, flimsy type that
rips apart mid wipe.
Jake rolls his eyes. A beat.
ZACK
When’s the last time you spanked
the money?
JAKE
(caught off guard)
What?
ZACK
You know, clubbing the clam.
Bleeding the weed. Releasing the
kraken.
Jake looks around uncomfortably. He notices a YOUNG BOY
glued to every word coming out of Zack’s mouth.
JAKE
You really want to bring this up
here?
ZACK
You just seem like you’ve got a lot
of pent-up stress. That’s all.
Zack is unaware that he’s up to order. Jake nods towards the
waiting CREW MEMBER. She’s disgusted.
CREW MEMBER
(coldly)
What can I get ya?
21.
ZACK
I’ll take a chicken burrito bowl,
uhh, brown rice, pinto beans, corn
and guac. (to Jake) Trust me, it
helps. I always make sure to set
aside a little Zack time before
bed.
JAKE
Ah. So that explains the locked
doors and Adele on repeat.
Jake is totally judging him.
ZACK
What? Her voice is remarkably
comforting.
INT. BRO PAD - JAKE’S ROOM - NIGHT
Jake is on his hands and knees looking for something under
his bed. He reaches for and pulls out a-
SHOE BOX
On top, scribbled in permanent marker: "Jake and Jenny."
From the lack of dust buildup, it’s obvious that it wasn’t
too long ago that Jake last took a trip down memory lane.
Jake opens the box, revealing photos, letters and mementos.
The pictures detail beach trips, skating on the frog pond
and games at Fenway Park among other outings. Common in most
photos: Jake smiling from ear to ear while Jenny looks like
she wants to be anywhere but there.
Jake moves on to the letters.
They are all ordered by month. Seems to have been a
tradition between the two to write each other a letter for
their monthly anniversary.
He opens up one that he wrote; it’s a novel with both sides
of the page covered. He moves on to one of hers; it’s
nothing more than aboue two-to-three sentences.
The signs were there, Jake was just too blind to see them.
He still is.
CARTER (O.S.)
I’m surprised you didn’t keep the
first condom you two used.
22.
We see Carter leaning against the door frame.
JAKE
I’m surprised you actually know
what a condom is.
Carter laughs as he walks over to get a closer look at this
box of misery. Concern is written all over his face.
CARTER
You know, you really should throw
that thing out.
JAKE
Can’t bring myself to do it.
CARTER
Just say the word and it’ll be
done.
Jake warns off Carter with his eyes. Back the fuck up.
CARTER
Only trying to help.
A beat.
CARTER
So I hear you’re contemplating
using that girl’s story to save
your job.
JAKE
Nothing’s set it stone. We’ll see
what happens.
CARTER
You want my take? Just imagine how
you might feel if someone exploited
your misery these last six months
simply for a byline.
Jake lets that sink in. Good point.
CARTER
Just some food for thought.
Carter pats Jake on the shoulder and leaves.
A beat. Jake reaches in his desk drawer and pulls out a
notebook. He tears out a new page and begins writing.
23.
INSERT - PAPER
It reads: "Dearest Jenny".
EXT. RESIDENTIAL STREET - DAY
Jake makes his way down the sidewalk. A man on a mission. He
holds an envelope in his hand.
Suddenly, his phone vibrates. There’s a notification: "One
new voicemail."
Jake plays the message:
FRANK
Fischer. It’s Frank...or Mr.
Beckman to you. I really hope you
took what I said to heart. I fully
expect to hear a pitch worthy of my
time tomorrow morning...or else.
Jake doesn’t have much time to digest message as he
approaches his destination.
EXT. APARTMENT BUILDING - SOON AFTER
A DELIVERY DRIVER with a package in hand waits at the front
door. Seconds later, the door opens and Jenny steps out.
Jake quickly lunges behind some nearby bushes. He slowly
peeks through the leaves.
JENNY
Three-to-five business days? It’s
been six.
DELIVERY DRIVER
Sorry, m’am, but Sunday’s dont
count. (holding out e-pen) If you
could sign...
Jenny quickly signs and grabs the package.
JENNY
Ugh. You’re useless.
She slams the door shut in the driver’s face.
DELIVERY DRIVER
Bitch.
24.
Jake watches as the driver walks down the steps and gets
back in his truck. The coast is clear.
But before he can make his move-
AMANDA (O.S.)
The sweetest little thing, huh?
Jake is startled to see Amanda standing behind him. Two
large grocery bags in her arms.
JAKE
(standing up quickly)
This isn’t what it looks like.
AMANDA
And here I thought I was the only
one who enjoys a good bush.
Amanda smiles. Jake is still embarrassed.
AMANDA
Want to get the door for me?
JAKE
(motioning towards bags)
Here.
Jake grabs one of the bags from Amanda.
INT. APARTMENT BUILDING - LOBBY - MOMENTS LATER
Jake and Amanda make their way in.
JAKE
Give me a sec.
Jake places the grocery bag on the ground. He makes his way
towards the mailboxes.
He takes out the envelope and slides it in the slit directly
above Jenny’s nameplate. Amanda watches this closely.
AMANDA
You do know you should be putting
it in the slit below the
corresponding nameplate, right?
Jake’s mouth drops. He can’t believe it.
25.
JAKE
So you mean to tell me I’ve been
writing letters to a...(looks at
nameplate) Mrs. Bloomfield these
past six months?
AMANDA
Aww! She’s such a sweetheart. She
lost her husband of 65 years last
year. You’ve probably made this
process a whole lot easier for her.
A beat. Jake shakes his head in disbelief. Finally-
JAKE
(accepting his fate)
I guess it’s for the best.
They share a laugh.
INT. AMANDA’S APARTMENT - KITCHEN - LATER
Jake and Amanda unpacking the groceries.
AMANDA
That’s everything. Thanks again for
your help.
JAKE
No problem. Here’s hoping our next
run-in doesn’t come under such a
awkward pretense for once.
AMANDA
Doubtful. (laughs) Seeya, Jake.
Jake turns to leave, but stops. A beat.
JAKE
It’s not stupid, you know.
AMANDA
Excuse me.
JAKE
Your bucket list. Or whatever it
is. It’s not stupid.
Amanda isn’t too thrilled that the subject is brought up.
26.
AMANDA
Look, Jake. I appreciate your
concern, but I don’t-
JAKE
We’re always told to live like
we’re dying, right? And you, you
actually are! But instead of
curling up into the fetal position
and crying over the crap hand you
were dealt, you’re attempting to
make the best out of the situation.
And that’s more than most people
can say--myself included.
Amanda is silent. She’s a sponge. Soaking it all in.
JAKE
I just think it’s admirable, that’s
all. And I respect you for it.
And...I don’t think it’s stupid.
Jake exhales. Everything is off his chest.
He nods towards Amanda and turns to leave.
AMANDA
Jake...wait.
Amanda digs into her pocket and picks out a folded piece of
paper. She hesitates, then tosses it to Jake.
JAKE
(opening paper)
This it?
AMANDA
In all of its glory.
She looks on nervously. Vulnerably. Completely exposed.
Jake glances over the list. Examining every entry. Finally-
JAKE
So where should we start?
Amanda is stumped. She’s torn. Does she dare let him in?
A beat.
AMANDA
You got a suit?