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Writing Center Mission The Writing Center is dedicated providing students with a supportive, collaborative space in which they can experiment with and improve their writing in English. Our goal is to promote the concept of World Englishes by providing tutors and learners with strategies and tools that help them take ownership of English and discover their own voices in their writing. We aim to provide tutors and teachers with the approaches necessary to combat preconceived notions about L2 learners’ capabilities in written and spoken English, and to provide them with the knowledge they need to effectively make use of available resources, both for use during their time at this institution and into their future uses of English. We aspire to help learners solidify the specific writing and speaking (presentation) skills that will benefit our learners most when they return to their home countries or proceed to schools and businesses in English-specific contexts. We strive to continuously improve our practices by drawing on the session reflections of our tutors and the feedback we receive from the writers who visit us. We acknowledge the cultural diversity of our learners and value their input as we strive to make our center a place where all learners can feel that they are respected and their ideas valued. Writing Center Handbook Developed by: Vanessa Armand

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This is a handbook for a proposed design for a peer-tutored Writing Center situated in a for-profit Business & Academic English school, in the heart of Chicago, IL USA.

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  • Writing Center Mission

    The Writing Center is dedicated providing students with a supportive,

    collaborative space in which they can experiment with and improve

    their writing in English.

    Our goal is to promote the concept of World Englishes by providing

    tutors and learners with strategies and tools that help them take

    ownership of English and discover their own voices in their writing.

    We aim to provide tutors and teachers with the approaches necessary

    to combat preconceived notions about L2 learners capabilities in

    written and spoken English, and to provide them with the knowledge

    they need to effectively make use of available resources, both for use

    during their time at this institution and into their future uses of

    English. We aspire to help learners solidify the specific writing and

    speaking (presentation) skills that will benefit our learners most when

    they return to their home countries or proceed to schools and

    businesses in English-specific contexts.

    We strive to continuously improve our practices by drawing on the

    session reflections of our tutors and the feedback we receive from the

    writers who visit us. We acknowledge the cultural diversity of our

    learners and value their input as we strive to make our center a place

    where all learners can feel that they are respected and their ideas

    valued.

    Writing

    Center

    Handbook

    Developed by: Vanessa Armand

  • Acknowledgements

    The structure of this handbook and the theory behind it was largely

    inspired by the work presented in the Writing Center Handbook

    developed and used at the University of Illinois at Chicago Writing

    Center.

    Table of Contents

    Introduction: What is peer tutoring? 1

    Chapter 1: The responsibilities of our Center 2

    Chapter 2: Spelling R-E-S-P-E-C-T 4

    Chapter 3: Authority and conversation 6

    Chapter 4: Grammar and language use 8

    Chapter 5: The purpose(s) of writing 9

    Chapter 6: Plagiarism 20

    Chapter 7: Reflections 21

    Chapter 8: Leading Group-Work 22

    Useful Resources and Links 23

    Introduction: What is peer tutoring?

    Before you read, think about

  • What is a tutor? Write your own definition.

    What is a peer? Write your own definition.

    What are the benefits of having a tutor who is your peer?

    What are the drawbacks of having a tutor who is your peer?

    The Merriam Webster Dictionary defines a tutor as someone

    who is responsible for the instruction and guidance of someone else. It

    defines a peer as someone who is of equal standing with someone

    else. So when we put the two words together to form peer tutor we

    might ask: how can someone who is responsible for someone else be

    equal to that person? To answer this question, we need to think about

    tutoring in a terms of Merriam Websters word guidance. Peer tutors

    are students who gives guidance to their fellow student writers based

    on specialized knowledge that they have gained in their training to

    become tutors. They work with these writers to clarify and develop

    the messages that those writers wish to convey in their work, and help

    them to navigate the complex system of genres and styles that often

    make writing in English difficult. Since peer tutors are students, too,

    they are still learning and improving their own English writing, which

    means that they are often able to offer helpful hints and personal

    lessons and stories that can help writers work through some of the

    same challenges that they, themselves, have encountered. Peer tutors

    are not experts in English, but they are very knowledgeable in finding

    resources to help answer questions about writing in English, and can

    offer help to writers learning how to use these resources outside of

    this school.

    Chapter 1: The responsibilities of

    our Writing Center

    THE WRITING CENTER ITSELF: As a Writing Center that

    is focused on helping learners own the English they speak

    (and write), we should encourage writers to use their own

    ideas and writing style, even if it is influenced by their native

    language(s). At the same time, learners come to the Writing

    Center to improve their English writing skills and often to

    make their writing more professional, polished, and native-

    like. To best help learners achieve these goals, the Writing

    Center should provide them with the tools they need to

    understand the conventions of writing in English, and thus be

    empowered with the ability to fully express their ideas and

    voice in their writing.

    OUR TUTORS: In our Writing Center, tutors engage writers

    in discussions about the writers work and ideas. By doing

    this, they help writers gain confidence in their ability to write,

    while also responding to what those writers need and hope to

    achieve during a session. Even though tutors are peers, and

    may even be friends, it is important for the tutor to be

    professional and directive during a session, so that the team

    can be as productive as possible.

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    2

  • OUR DIRECTORS: The role of Directors in our Writing

    Center is to train and mentor peer tutors in the conventions of

    English writing, the practices of peerness, and the

    maintenance of respect and professionalism. They serve as

    sources of knowledge that are always available to help during

    sessionsto give advice, answer questions, and even help

    clarify tutor and/or writers meaning. To do so, they must

    establish and maintain supportive relationships with tutors,

    encouraging them to reflect on how their work with different

    writers can influence and help improve their own writing.

    Practically speaking, they are the ones who coordinate with

    tutors about their schedules and work with teachers to plan

    time for classes to come to the center for group work. They

    also communicate with teachers about current writing

    assignments at the school in order to best prepare tutors for

    the writings that writers are likely to bring to the Center.

    They organize writing-related (often tutor-led) workshops and

    lectures for the school, and manage the Writing Center library

    of resources.

    Chapter 2: Spelling R-E-S-P-E-C-T

    Before you read, think about

    What is respect? How do people in your culture show respect? How is this different from the way Americans show

    respect?

    ------------------------

    Think about a time you disagreed with someone in a conversation but you were able to continue talking with

    him/her. What did you do or say to show respect and keep the

    conversation going?

    Merriam Webster defines respect as a feeling or

    understanding that someone or something is important and should

    be treated in an appropriate way. The ways that people show respect

    for others may vary from culture to culture, but in our Writing Center,

    we strive to show respect in ways that are understood by all. To do

    this, we need to constantly be aware of the ways in which we allow

    our beliefs to influence our interactions and conversations with others.

    By remaining open and sensitive to different perspectives and beliefs,

    we can engage in more constructive and informative discussions,

    which can help us, as well as our writers, grow in understanding of

    cultures that are less familiar to us, of our own native cultures, and of

    how these cultures interact on a global scale. Above all, it is important

    to acknowledge that we will not always agree, but that we can work

    together to express and negotiate our beliefs through the language of

    respect

    3 4

  • Writers come to the Writing Center seeking help with their

    work, and in doing so open themselves up to criticism and judgment.

    If you have ever had someone read your writing with you, you might

    relate to the feeling of vulnerability and pressure that writers can feel

    in tutoring sessions. It is for this reason that peer tutors must always

    show respect for writers beliefs, ideas, and English proficiency level

    in sessions. In a tutoring session, you can show respect for the writer

    by nodding and asking thoughtful questions, allowing him/her to

    speak without being interrupted, and by listening carefully and

    responding sensitively and thoughtfully to his/her questions and

    concerns.

    It can sometimes be challenging to help writers express

    themselves without doing the work for them, especially if they are

    beginning learners who may have difficulty constructing their ideas in

    English. However, by using questions, and by helping the writer to

    use his/her own words, a tutor can effectively remain respectful of that

    persons ideas and needs. If you, the tutor, disagree with a writer

    about something they are writing, you can look at a language resource

    (if it is an issue with English), and/or ask a WC administrator for help;

    always remember, however, that it is the writers choice what s/he

    decides to say in his/her writing, and you must be respectful of this

    choice. Ultimately, tutors need to avoid appropriating--taking over a

    writers workand writing it as though it were the tutors own work,

    because, in taking over, the tutor is controlling the writers ideas

    instead of showing respect for them.

    Chapter 3: Authority and Conversation

    Before you read, think about

    What is authority? Write down your ideas and look in a dictionary for more definitions.

    In what ways can conversations between a teacher and a student be different from a peer tutor and a writer? Who has

    authority in these different conversations?

    What would you expect a WC tutor to say or do in a tutoring session with you? Why would you expect this?

    The word authority can have the following meanings: a) the

    power to control someone or something, and b) the quality of knowing

    a lot about something or having expertise. In conversations between

    teachers and students, the teacher usually holds the authority (both

    kinds). However, between tutor and writer who are peers, the meaning

    of authority changes to the second definition. It is important to

    remember that no two people have the exact same knowledge in their

    minds, nor have they had the exact same experiences that have shaped

    this knowledge. You and a writer will have different levels of

    expertise with English, with the type of writing the writer is doing,

    and with the content that the writer is writing about. If a writer is

    more knowledgeable about a subject related to the writing task, that is

    OK. By having the writer explain it to you, s/he is practicing English

    and improving the clarity of his/her ideas. If you are more

    knowledgeable, share this knowledge with the writer (in a respectful

    way that helps the writer understand what you are talking about).

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  • Your knowledge will probably help the writer with the assignment

    and in future conversations s/he might have about the topic.

    Sometimes, writers will expect you to correct all the errors in

    their work, and may even expect you to write their work for them,

    since they presume that you have knowledge of writing that is far

    more advanced than their own. It is important to remember that you

    cannot read writers minds to know what they want to say in their

    writing, nor do you know exactly what their teacher wants. You and

    the writer must collaborate (work together) to produce the work that

    best represents what the writer wants to say. As for authority with the

    English language and with the conventions of writing in English, you

    are notand do not need to bean expert to be a good tutor; you

    simply need to know when to say I dont know and how to help the

    writer find the answers s/he is looking for. Not knowing an answer

    actually provides you with both an opportunity to learn and to teach.

    In working with the writer to find the answer to a question or problem,

    you not only learn the answer (and how to find it) for next time, but

    you teach the writer how and where to find it as well. This kind of

    knowledgeknowledge howis often even more helpful for a

    writer than simply stating a fact or opinion as an answer (knowledge

    that). Showing the writer where/how to find something means they

    can use this resource later on their own, and can continue to do so

    even when they are no longer at this school. Basically, you are helping

    the writer (and yourself!) become more independent and self-

    sufficient learners of English.

    Chapter 4: Grammar and language use

    Before you read, think about

    Why do you think language learners often say grammar is their biggest concern for tutoring sessions?

    In what ways could focusing on grammar make a writer uncomfortable or upset? When would grammar be an OK

    focus during a tutoring session?

    What is a voice in writing? Brainstorm some possible meanings, then look it up in a dictionary; compare your ideas

    to the definitions.

    Writing in a second language can be intimidating; you have to

    think about so many things at once: content, vocabulary, grammar,

    genre, and how you express your voice. Similar to the voice you speak

    with, a voice in writing is the expression of your personality, ideas,

    and opinions, which shows who you are through the words you

    choose and how you arrange them in your writing. It is a key element

    of any writers work, especially a writer who comes from a different

    language background. Concerned about the complex rules of English

    grammar, writers may come to the WC expecting tutors to simply find

    and fix grammatical errors in their work. However, often times,

    simply correcting grammatical mistakes does not make the writers

    message clearer, and can change the sentence into something that the

    writer does not wish to say. Focusing on errors can even frustrate and

    humiliate the writer, and can make them feel that their ideas are not

    valued. By simply correcting grammar mistakeswhether or not the

    writer wishes a tutor to do soa tutor appropriates (takes over) a

    writers work and voice. To avoid this, ask writers questions to clarify

    their ideas, then together, rewrite to best represent what they want to

    say. On the other hand, if a writers overall message is clear but it

    difficult to read because of a specific grammatical issue, the tutor can

    ask the writer about the grammatical choices s/he made and work with

    the writer to make the message clearer by changing the grammar to fit

    the message. If you are unsure of how to do this, you can always ask a

    WC administrator.

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  • Chapter 5: The purpose(s) of writing

    Before you read, think about

    In what ways are speaking and writing similar? Different?

    Look at the list on the next page. How many of these kinds of writing in English have you done in the past? Make a list.

    Describe the characteristics (pieces) of each kind of writing.

    In what ways are they similar? In what ways are they

    different?

    What kind of writing is easiest for you? Hardest? Why?

    What is your favorite/least favorite kind of writing? Why?

    When we speak and write, we create language and share our

    ideas. We usually think about speaking as having a conversation and

    interacting with others. Even when we give a presentation, we are

    participating in a conversation: we talk to our audience and expect

    them to respond in a certain way, perhaps even to talk back at the end

    with comments and questions. The same can be said about writing;

    this is especially true for cover letters, business proposals, emails, and

    presentations, but is also true for academic essays and creative

    writing. When we write, we have a conversation with our readers.

    Even if in some cases, such as academic writing, we never get to

    know their responses, but we still expectwantthese readers to

    react a certain way. To make this happen, we create a certain tone

    (mood) by using a certain register (levels of formality), certain verb

    tenses, and a certain points of view. We often think about what our

    readers will think and how they will feel when reading our writing,

    and then revise (make changes) to our writing to change this reaction.

    Of course, we dont always know who are readers will be, so it can be

    difficult to imagine how they will react. In this case, it is important to

    think about the relationship we want to create with the readers (is it

    personal? formal? instructional?), and the way we want voice (our

    personality and identity; see Chapter 4) to sound in the words we use.

    This may seem like too much to think about, but writing takes

    practice, and we often need to rewrite a piece of writing multiple

    times before it truly represents our thoughts and feelings.

    When tutoring in the Writing Center, you will often be asked

    to help a writer with a genre (kind) of writing that you have never

    written before or about a topic that you dont know anything about.

    Thats OK! The most import thing to remember during peer tutoring

    sessions is that you are notand do not need to bean expert of

    writing in English. Even most native speakers are not experts at

    writing in English! In Chapter 3, you learned about authority and

    how different people can have different kinds (and levels) of

    knowledge about different topics. The goal of a peer tutoring session

    is for you and the writer to share the different knowledge and ideas

    you have, and to use these differences to help the writer clarify and

    improve his/her writing. Dont worry. If you are not familiar with the

    type of writing that the writer is doing, use the following definitions

    (pp. 11-13) and Key Questions to help you in the session.

    Genres of writing common to our students:

    Professional: o CVs o Cover Letters (or Letter of Intent) o Personal Statements

    Business: o Proposals o Formal emails/letters o Oral presentations o Memos

    Casual: Informal emails/letters

    Academic: (Essays) o Narrative o Compare/contrast o Expository/instructions o Cause and Effect o Persuasion/argumentation

    Creative Writing: Poetry and fiction

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  • Professional: o CV or Resum: a short document that describes your

    education, work experience, etc. It uses bullet points to

    outline the experience you have that is most important

    and relevant to the job you are applying for. If you

    have room to add detailed descriptions of these

    experiences, you can, but you will often write about

    these experiences in your Cover Letter, instead.

    NOTE: It usually only 1 page long.

    Key Questions: What is the job you are applying for? What are the responsibilities of this position?

    Does the employer say what they want in a candidate? If so, what?

    What experiences have you had that relate directly to this position?

    What other experiences have you had that might relate to this job?

    o Cover Letter (or Letter of Intent): a letter that is sent with your CV to explain why you are applying for a

    position/job and to give more information the details

    of the experiences that you listed on your CV. The

    goal of this letter is to convince the employer that you

    are the best candidate for the job. It should tell him/her

    what you know/like about the company/business, and

    how you are different from other candidates (what you

    have to offer the company/business). NOTE: The ideas

    you include should flow smoothly from one to the next

    in your writing; the Cover Letter is not simply your

    CV in paragraph form. Be sure to introduce yourself

    and your purpose at the beginning, and to thank the

    reader(s) at the end.

    Key Questions: What do you know about this company/business? What do you like about it?

    Why do you want this job? How will it help you it in the future?

    What experience do you have that makes you different from other

    candidates?

    What other responsibilities have you had in the past that would be

    important for this position? What experiences have you had that

    would help you in this position?

    o Personal Statement: similar to a Cover Letter, but more personal. The purpose is to tell the employer

    about your previous experiences, current goals, and

    future ambitions (dreams). It tells about the skills and

    abilities you have that are important for the position

    you are applying for. One way that a Personal

    Statement is different from a Cover Letter is that it

    describes you as a person (your personality traits) and

    allows the readers to get to know you. NOTE: Imagine

    this writing to be a kind of pre-interview. Let your

    voice be present in this writing. If you make the

    readers laugh, they are more likely to remember you.

    Key Questions: Tell a personal story that demonstrates the

    personality trait that you want the employer to remember

    about you. This story should be relevant, interesting, and

    can be funny.

    Where are you in your career currently?

    Where do you want to be?

    What are your strengths? What are your weaknesses?

    How can you change them to sound like strengths?

    What are some of your previous experiences (that relate to

    this job)?

    How did these experiences affect who you are now?

    Business: o Proposals: a bid for business (that helps you grow

    your company). 2 types of proposals: Solicited: when a

    company is looking for a business to complete a

    project and asks businesses to compete to convince the

    company to pay them to do the project. Unsolicited:

    when a business wants to create a relationship with

    another (usually larger) business and offers ideas for

    how the two businesses would benefit from working

    together. For both, do research about the company you

    are writing to, and use words and expressions that are

    familiar to your audience and field.

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  • Key Questions: What do you know about the company you are writing to? (NOTE: the more you know, the more you will be able to

    understand the needs and wants of this company, and the more likely

    you will be to win that companys business).

    What solutions do you have for the problems this company has?

    What can the company gain from working with you?

    Have you worked with clients in this field before? What would they

    say about you?

    What samples of work do you have that show your expertise?

    o Formal email/letter: A business letter that is short and to the point; it answers who, what, where, when, why,

    and how in relation to the business topic of the email

    or letter, but does not include unnecessary details. It

    usually begins with Dear Sir or Madam, To Whom

    it May Concern if the reader is unknown, or with

    Dear + Title and Name of Reader if the reader is

    known. If the writer includes attachments, s/he should

    include a brief explanation of them (what they are and

    the purpose they serve). To end the letter, the writer

    uses Sincerely if s/he doesnt know the reader, or

    Yours truly if the writer knows the reader well.

    NOTE: The reader should sign the email with

    his/her name, followed by his/her title, business

    address, phone number, and email address (and

    website if necessary).

    Key Questions: Who are the readers and what is your

    relationship with them?

    What is the purpose of this letter? (ex. Discuss a problem,

    offer an idea/solution, discuss changes, make a request)

    What is the most important information to include?

    Of the details that you have included, which ones are the

    most/least important? Which ones can you delete?

    What do you expect the reader to do with this

    information?

    o Memo: A short letter/email used to make public announcements, discuss procedures, report on

    company activities, and inform many employees about

    important information. Anything confidential should

    not be written in a memo. The tone is informal and

    friendly, but not unprofessional.

    Key Questions: What is the purpose of the memo?

    (Discuss procedures, make an announcement, report on

    company activities, tell employees about important info)

    Is all the information in your memo new information to

    your readers? If not, you can mention that in the memo.

    What is the most important information? (put it first)

    What is the least important information? (put it last)

    o Oral presentations materials: PowerPoint slides or other types of visual aids (charts, graphs, etc) that give

    the basic points of what you are talking about. The

    font size should be large enough for your audience to

    read from the farthest part of the room where you are

    giving the presentation. They use colors and font type

    that is appropriate for the field and audience. They use

    the same format on each slide to show similar points,

    and a different format to point out a specific point.

    NOTE: Do not use a lot of long sentences or

    paragraphs on your slides because they can distract

    your audience from what you are saying (instead, they

    will be trying to read).

    Key Questions: Who is your audience and what is your

    relationship with them?

    What is the topic of your presentation?

    What is the purpose of your presentation? (What do you

    want to accomplish?) What kinds of language do you need

    to accomplish this?

    What points are similar and how are they related?

    Are some points more important than others? Why?

    (Make them look different to grab audiences attention).

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  • Academic: (Types of Essays) http://web.gccaz.edu/~mdinchak/ENG101/expository_writing.

    htm

    o Narrative: an essay that tells your reading about a personal experience that you or someone else has had.

    It tells a story, but also talks about a central idea

    (theme) and lesson that has been learned from the

    experience. It talks about what not why, uses facts

    as the basis for the story, and contains descriptive

    language that creates images in the readers mind. It

    may include dialogue. Narratives essays are usually in

    the 1st or 3rd person perspectives; they use past tense,

    action verbs, similes/metaphors, and a lot of personal

    voice.

    Key Questions: What happens to you/the main character

    in the story?

    Where does the story take place? How does this impact

    the story?

    How does the story begin/end? What is the main problem

    in the story? How is the problem solved?

    What is the theme of the story? What message do you

    want your audience to remember from your story? What

    lesson did you learn from this experience?

    o Compare/contrast: A comparison essay is an essay in which you talk about the similarities between two

    things; a contrast essay is an essay in which you talk

    about the differences. It uses cue words like: different;

    in contrast; alike; same as; on the other hand. There are 2 ways to organize comparisons/contrasts: 1) block

    arrangement of ideas where the writer talks about one

    side (block A) and then the other (block B); 2) point-by-point arrangement of ideas where the writer

    compares the two sides point by point (Point 1A, 1B;

    Point 2A, 2B). Writers usually use comparison or

    contrast to support their personal point of view.

    Key Questions: What is the topic you are writing about?

    What two points are you comparing or contrasting? (And

    how do they relate to your topic?)

    Why is this topic important to you? What is your view on

    this topic? Which point do you support? Why?

    What details are you using to support your arguments?

    How are you organizing your paper? (block or point-by-

    point)

    Why is this topic important/relevant to your readers?

    http://www.eslbee.com/compcont.htm

    o Expository: An essay that describes a process (instructions about how to do something) or a thing

    (using the 5 senses to describe it). It can also analyze

    people, objects, or events, and provide facts and ideas

    that are supported by historical and/or scientific

    evidence. It has a thesis and presents information

    without bias. It uses cue words like: first, second,

    third; next; then; finally.

    Key Questions: What topic are you writing about?

    Are you describing a process or describing a thing?

    What do you know about this topic? What do you need

    more information about?

    What is your thesis?

    What facts can you use as supporting evidence for your

    description?

    o Cause and Effect: A cause/effect essay focuses on the relationship between two [or more] experiences or

    events. It can talk about the causes, the effects, or

    both. A cause essay talks about the reasons something

    happened. An effect essay talks about the

    consequences of an event. It uses cue words like:

    reasons why/that; ifthen; because; thus; therefore; as

    a result.

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    http://web.gccaz.edu/~mdinchak/ENG101/expository_writing.htmhttp://web.gccaz.edu/~mdinchak/ENG101/expository_writing.htmhttp://www.eslbee.com/compcont.htm
  • Key Questions: What is the topic of your essay?

    Why is this topic important to you?

    Are you writing about the causes of an event, the

    consequences/effects of an event, or both the causes and

    effects of an event?

    List the causes and/or effects that you know of for this

    event. What other causes/effects might be possible?

    What facts/evidence can you use to support your claims?

    o Persuasion/argumentation: A persuasive essay tries to convince the reader to agree with the writers

    opinion and to think the same way the writer does. To

    do this, it includes facts and quotes as support for the

    writers perspective. It must have a clear conclusion if

    it is to be convincing to the reader. It is important to be

    confident in your opinion and to let this confidence

    show in your writing. NOTE: Write from the readers

    perspective; this way, you can find and fix holes in

    your argument and make it stronger and more

    effective.

    Key Questions: What is the topic of your argument?

    Why is this topic important to you? Why should the reader

    care about this topic?

    Describe how you feel about this topic. (What is your

    argument?)

    What are other possible views on this topic/argument?

    How could you answer these questions & counter

    arguments?

    Do you have a clear conclusion? If not, what is missing?

    How can you make your conclusion clearer/stronger?

    http://www.eslflow.com/Acargumentativessay.html

    Creative Writing: o Fiction: A story that contains character with specific

    personalities/identities, and descriptive language that

    creates images in the readers mind. It may include

    dialogue. It can be imaginary, factual, or both; some

    genres include: fairytales, mysteries, science fiction,

    romance, horror stories, adventure stories, and

    personal experience. Narratives are usually in the 1st

    and 3rd person perspectives; they use past tense, action

    verbs, specific nouns (oak instead of tree),

    similes/metaphors, and a lot of personal voice. They

    also help the reader imagine the world that the writer

    wants to create by using the senses; this means that

    the writer can use the following 5 senses questions

    to create detailed descriptions of characters, settings,

    mood, and experiences.

    What does it smell like?

    What can be heard?

    What can be seen?

    What does it taste like?

    What does it feel like?

    (http://ncowie.wordpress.com/2008/02/10/features-of-

    narrative-writing/)

    Key Questions: What happens in the story?

    Where does the story take place?

    Who are the main characters? Describe them.

    How does the story begin/end? What is the main problem

    in the story? How is the problem solved? What is the

    theme of the story? What message do you want your

    audience to remember from your story?

    o Poetry: Poetry is a very complex form of creative writing. There are countless types of poems, some

    with strict rules, and some with no rules (freeform).

    The main elements of poetry are: speaker (1st, 2nd, or

    3rd person), subject/topic, theme (makes an important

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  • point about the topic), and tone (writers attitude

    towards the topic). Other important elements are:

    poetic devices (allusion, hyperbole, paradox), the

    sound of the poem (alliteration, onomatopoeia), and

    the symbolism of the poem (abstract meaning made

    from of objects, things, places, etc.). In some types of

    poems, emphasis, rhyme, meter, pauses, and stops are

    important for how the poem is read (and therefore how

    it is interpreted).

    Key Questions: What kind of poem are you writing?

    Does this kind of poem have rules? If so, what are they?

    What is the topic (and theme) of your poem?

    Why is this topic/theme important to you? Why are you

    writing about it?

    Are certain sounds important for your poem? (Does your

    poem use rhymeex. Cat/hat--? Does it use

    alliterationex. big black-eyed bug--? Does it use onomatopoeiaex. Bang! Whoosh!--?)

    Are pauses or stops important in your poem?

    What symbols do you use in your poem? Why?

    What other symbols might you use instead or in addition?

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    As you can see, there are many different kinds of writing, each with

    its own rules and style. Regardless of what kind of writing you are

    doing, you will express your ideas differently than someone else who

    is writing the same paper/piece, because your experiences, native

    language, and ideas make up your distinct voice. For this reason,

    you should not be afraid to let this voice show in your writing.

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    Chapter 6: Plagiarism (this will be transformed into a workshop, perhaps ones that

    tutors can hold for our greater school population; this chapter

    will give basic information and explanation exploring the

    following questions)

    Before you read, think about

    What is plagiarism? Have you had any experiences with plagiarism? If so, what happened?

    Why is it such a big deal in the U.S.?

    Plagiarism is very common among English language students. Why do you think this is?

    Plagiarism comes from the Latin word plagiarius to kidnap.

    It refers to kidnapping someone elses words or ideas and using them

    as your own. These original words and ideas are called someones

    intellectual property. Different cultures around the world think

    about intellectual property and plagiarism in different ways. Even

    within the U.S., different groups think about these things differently;

    here are the three major groups that you will most likely encounter in

    your writing, and the ways they see plagiarism:

    1. Academic groups think that ideas, texts, inventions, and research are intellectual property. Therefore, if you find

    something that was written by someone else and that you want

    to use in your own work, you must give them credit for the

    idea/words you are using. You can do this in a few ways that

    we will discuss later.

    2. Public groups are less concerned about ownership of words and ideas because authors dont usually think about making a

    profit from the words/ideas they put into the public. If you are

    using a public work in your writing, you should make

    reference to it, but you do not need try to find the author to

    reference.

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  • 3. Business groups are very concerned about competition and making profit. Therefore, they are very protective of their

    original words/ideas. Slogans are a good example of this; you

    cannot use another business slogan without their permission.

    However, if a company uses a stock phrase (a very common

    phrase used by many similar businesses) or a newly created

    word that you want to use in your writing, you do not need to

    quote that company as the source. If you are unsure about

    whether or not you should quote a source, ask your teacher.

    Avoiding plagiarism

    So, how do you know when you have plagiarized someones

    words/ideas and when you have used them appropriately in your own

    work? This can be a difficult question, but it is a very important one.

    The consequences of plagiarism can range from failing a course to

    being expelled from school, and even (in business settings) being

    sued! So how do you avoid it? Here are some tips:

    ALWAYS DOCUMENT YOUR SOURCES FOR:

    Word-for-word (direct) quotation

    Paraphrases or summaries of someones work

    Ideas, opinions, interpretations that others have developed

    Facts or data that someone else has found

    Information that is not accepted by most people

    Illustrations, charts, graphs, photographs, interviews, etc.

    Anything that you take directly from the internet (include the website address and the date that you found it)

    YOU DO NOT NEED TO DOCUMENT YOUR SOURCES FOR:

    Ideas, opinions, interpretations that are your own

    Common knowledge

    Commonly used quotations and expressions

    For more information on HOW to document your sources, see:

    Anson, C. & Schwegler, R. (2008). The Longman Handbook for

    Writers & Readers (5th ed.). New York, NY: Longman.

    Chapter 7: Reflections

    As an EF Tutor, you are expected to write short reflection posts about

    your tutoring sessions as part of your AY course. This helps the

    Writing Center Directors ensure that the WCs objects and mission

    are being carried out thoughtfully and appropriately. This also gives

    you a chance to practice their narrative writing skills, and to sharpen

    the skills of self-reflection that will be useful for other interactions

    that involve collaborationboth in class and in your professional

    careers. This will also give you time to think about how you can

    improve your own writing using what you have learned in your

    tutoring sessions.

    Questions for tutors to think and write about:

    What did the writer want to work on?

    What kinds of questions did I ask the writer to help make the

    writers ideas clearer?

    What comments/suggestions did I give the writer? How did

    s/he respond to my comments?

    One thing I learned in this session about writing or about

    English was

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  • Chapter 8: Leading Group-Work

    1: Introduce yourselves

    2: What is the assignment/writing task that the students are working

    on? What do they think are the teachers expectations of the work? (Is

    there a rubric?)

    3: How is this writing task is similar and/or different from other

    writing tasks that the students have done for this class?

    If this is the first time they are writing for this class (or if there are new students), how is this task similar or different from other

    types of writing they have done in English?

    4: What are the features of this genre? (think about 1st vs. 2nd vs. 3rd

    person; register/tone; tense) Do students know about them and how

    they are used? Explain these features if you know them, or look them

    up in a reference book. You can also ask the teacher or WC Director.

    5: Are students writing about the same topic or different topics?

    If the same topic: What do the students know about the topic already? Have students share what they learned in class. What

    other perspectives might people have on this topic?

    If they have different topics, have each student tell the group about their topic. Ask the other students to answer these questions:

    a. Does Student As topic relate to the assignment? How? b. Do the details that s/he gives support the main idea? What works

    well? What needs improvement?

    c. What other ideas do his/her main point/supporting details make you think of? Do you have personal stories or ideas that you can

    add to this topic? Tell about them.

    d. What did you like most about this persons work? e. What advice do you have for this person to help them improve

    their writing for this task?

    6: What questions do students still have (about the assignment, topic,

    style, genre)? Can other students help answer these questions? Can

    you brainstorm with them? Ask the teacher?

    7: What are some next steps that the students can take to complete this

    task? Brainstorm with them to help them form a plan of what to do

    next in their writing process.

    Useful Resources and Links

    Dictionaries:

    http://www.learnersdictionary.com/

    Merriam-Websters Essential Learners English Dictionary: (2010). Springfield, MA: Merriam-Webster.

    Longman Dictionary of American English (4th ed..). (2008). Pearson Education ESL.

    Thesauruses (for synonyms & antonyms):

    http://thesaurus.com/

    http://www.merriam-webster.com/thesaurus/

    The Oxford Learners Thesaurus: for B2-C2. (2008). Oxford: Oxford University Press.

    Translators:

    http://wordreference.com/ Grammar:

    http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar

    Kolln, M. & Gray, L. (2009). Rhetorical Grammar: Grammatical Choices, Rhetorical Effects (6th ed.). Upper

    Saddle River, NJ: Longman Pearson.

    Murphy, R. (2003) Grammar in Use (3rd ed.). Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

    Smalzer, W. R., & Murphy, R. (2003). Basic Grammar in Use. Cambridge: Cambridge University Press.

    Academic Writing

    Graff, G., & Birkenstein, C., (2010). They Say, I Say: The Moves that Matter in Academic Writing. New York, NY: Norton & Co.

    Harris, J. (2006). Rewriting: How to do things with Texts. Logan, UT: Utah State University Press.

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