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Writing Scientific English
Four levels of organization:
• Word use
• Sentence structure
• Paragraph structure
• Paper/thesis organization and format
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Word Use
• Jargon• Know thy audience
• Use the simplest, most efficient wording
• Avoid the most frequent mistakes• data/datum• various/varying/variable• principle/principal• between/among• which/that• who/whom• sea water/seawater
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e.g.
the freshwater eels were transferred to sea water
the seawater eels were transferred to fresh water
hyphenation for creating adjectives:
the Na,K-ATPase was sensitive to ouabain
the ouabain-sensitive Na,K-ATPase….
The data were significantly….
A necropsy was conducted on a dolphin that washed up on the beach.
The dolphin, which had previously been tagged, was found in Beaufort.
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Sentence Structure
Voice and Person – typical of scientific papers to use passive voice and third person:
• It was hypothesized…• The authors hypothesized…
Excessive use of the passive voice should be avoided:
• It was concluded by Roer et al. that…• Roer et al. concluded …
Keep sentences reasonably short
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Paragraph Structure
• Try to limit paragraphs to a single idea
• Maintain tense in paragraph (and paper section)
• Introduction – present and past tenses• Methods and Results – past tense• Discussion – present and past tenses
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The following are quoted from:Tipton, C.M. 1991 Publishing in peer-reviewedjournals - fundamentals for new investigators.
The Physiologist 34: 275, 278-279.
“It is very difficult to publish data in peer-reviewed journalsfrom studies that are flawed by their purposes, designs, andmethodologies regardless of how well they are presented.”
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Selecting the Appropriate JournalSelecting the Appropriate Journal
“There are now well over 40,000 scientific andtechnical journals published throughout the world…most of the significant literature is published within
1,000 journals or less.”
“As a basic rule, the investigator should first considerthe journal of his/her professional society.”
“The simplest approach is for the author to ask the question,‘Who do I want to read and be influenced by my
manuscript?’”
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Format and ReviewFormat and Review
“Once the journal has been identified, it is essential that the instructions to authors be read before submitting the desired number of copies to a given address.”
“Before the two or three reviewers are selected, the corresponding editor first examines the subject area
of the study as well as the title, abstract, text, key words,and references. In addition, they check their files for
the names of individuals who have expertise in the areasidentified within the manuscript.”
“The end result is that the abstract, title, and referencesbecome extremely important considerations in the
selection of reviewers.”
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Reviewers will rate the paper and provide writtencomments on the strong and weak points of themanuscript. “This information plus comments on
the critique form is used by the corresponding editorto inform the author of the ‘fate’ of the manuscript.”
“It is most unlikely that any submitted manuscripts willbe accepted for publication without revision. Within APSjournals, the acceptance rate ranges from 52% to 72%
with the average around 60%.
…many manuscripts require two revisions and some threebefore they are accepted for publication.”
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“…the corresponding editor must balance the rigors of science, the purposes of the journal, the viewpoints of
the reviewers, and the integrity of the data with theconvictions of the investigators.”
“In the main, the reviewer’s opinions are upheld, althoughall corresponding editors are sensitive to the opinions of
authors and receptive to appeals or requests for expert input.”
“As a general rule, authors of rejected manuscripts shouldreflect on the reasons for at least four weeks before
accepting the generalization that the editors and reviewersare ignorant, insensitive, and prejudiced against them and
their research area.”
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For your publication and general formatting:For your publication and general formatting:
Use the “guide to authors” for your journal
http://www.journals.uchicago.edu/PBZ/instruct.html
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Thesis/Manuscript FormatThesis/Manuscript Format
• Title• Author(s)• Abstract (Summary)• Introduction• Methods• Results• Discussion• Acknowledgements• Literature Cited (References)
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TitleTitle
• Very important• Should be precise• Major factor in deciding who reads paper• Running Head• Key Words
Abstract or SummaryAbstract or Summary
• Most widely read• State principal objectives• Briefly describe methods• Summarize results and conclusions
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IntroductionIntroduction
• Nature and scope of problem• Review of pertinent literature• Approach to problem outlined
MethodsMethods
• Provide details for repetition• Source of chemicals• Types of equipment• Quantities and methods of preparation• Study sites• Experimental animals used
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ResultsResults
• Describe data/observations• Analysis with statistics when appropriate• Graphs and tables to:
• summarize data• increase visual impact
• Summarize data in words• Leave interpretation to discussion
DiscussionDiscussion
• Interpret results• Suggest principles, relationships, generalizations• Exceptions/unsettled questions• Compare/contrast with previous work• Show theoretical implications
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Theses and dissertations at UNCW are now all electronic.
Aside from the front matter:• Title page• Abstract• Table of contents• List of figures• List of tables
the format of the thesis or dissertation is up to you and your committee.
Information is on the Graduate School web site:http://www.uncw.edu/grad_info/index.htm
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Effective Tables and Figures
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12.2 24.7 55.6 37.2 124.7 291.3 21.4 76.8 11.9 292.3
12.224.755.637.2
124.7291.3
21.476.811.9
292.3
Which is the largest number in the series?
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