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YCN Concept board presentation feedback. OUGD203.TRANSCRIPT
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FEEDBACK
PROBLEM ANALYSISHas the brief been analysedappropriately in order to identify andclarify the range of problems posed.Does the evidence presentedsuggest that the brief/problems havebeen fully explored and understood.
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