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WRITINGQUESTION 2
EXTENDED WRITING
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The Ministry of Education’s decision to lift the ban on mobile
phones in schools has generally caused uproar. While many
thanked the government for making mobile phones legal in
school, this move has upset many.
You are of the opinion that mobile phones should not bebrought to schools. You would like to give reasons why
mobile phones should be banned in schools.
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Thesisstatement
Topicsentence 1
Topicsentence 2
Topicsentence 3
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Mobile phonesshould be banned
in schools
Topic sentence 1 Topic sentence 2 Topic sentence 3
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Mobile phones shouldbe banned in schools
Students may notconcentrate in class
when their teacher areteaching.
Students may misuse orabuse the use of the
mobile phone.
Might be made asymbol of financialstatus and cause jealousy among
students.
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PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION
Introductory
line (s)
Many argue that mobile phones have
become a necessary gadget among
young adults nowadays but its uses in
school remains debatable.Stand I am of the opinion that mobile phones
should not be brought to schools.Thesis
statement
Mobile phones should not be legalized in
schools for three obvious reasons.
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PARAGRAPH 2
Topic
sentence
Students may not concentrate in class
when their teachers are teaching.Supporting
Details
-Students will be engaged to their mobile
phones.
-Mobile phones come with a myriad of
functions and are highly addictive.
-Students play games, texting, access to
Internet, listen to songs, etc. via mobile
phones when the teaching and learningprocess takes place.
-Students do not respect their teachers.
-Students could not concentrate and
therefore did not learn anything in school.
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PARAGRAPH 3
Topic
sentence
Students may misuse or abuse the use
of the mobile phones.Supporting
Details
-Mobile phones have a wide array of
functions or applications that are easily
misused.
-Students being at a vulnerable age overlook
the conseuences of their actions.
-Students cheat during exams by taking
photos of notes to be referred.-Students send answers to their friends or
receiving answers from their friends.
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PARAGRAPH
Topic
sentence
Might be a symbol of nancial status
and cause ealousy among students.Supporting
Details
-"reate a lot of disciplinary problems
-Students like to show o# what they have to
their friends.
-Some students will hide stolen mobile
phones in $ower pots or dustbins in the
school compound
-Mobile phones might go missing or beingstolen.
-%laming and pointing &ngers at each other.
-Students who do not have mobile phones
will feel inferior to those who have.
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PARAGRAPH 5: CONCLUSION
!oncluding
line(s)
It is clear that bringing mobile phones
to school has more disadvantages.Suggestion(s) Schools to install more public phones for
students to use.
"dvice(s) 'arents should cooperate by not allowingtheir children to bring mobile phones to
school.#ope(s) Students themselves will understand why
mobile phones should not be brought to
school.$ecommendat
ion(s)
School authority especially the discipline
board to conduct more spot checks.
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!s a counselor in your school, you are asked to give a talk to
&orm i' students in the school assembly on the topic (
Mobile phones should be banned in schools), in not less
than *+ words, write out your script.
Thesis statement There are many reasons why mobile phonesshould be banned in schools.
Topic sentence 1 : Students may not concentrate in class when theirteacher are teaching.
Topic sentence 2 : Students may misuse or abuse the use of the mobilephone.
Topic sentence 3 : might be made a symbol of financial status andcause jealousy among students.
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