development of my duble page spread - peer feedback
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DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD DEVELOPMENT
Peer analysis
PEER FEEDBACK
PEER FEEDBACK- POSITIVES
“The larger image on the left is engaging and gives
the reader and idea of what the article is about”.
“The layout of the text and the amount of text is
proportionate to the images which gives the page a
balanced appearance.”
“Having a strip of images down the right hand side
works well as a reminder that although the article is
mainly about the artist on the left, the reason behind
it also features the second artist.”
PEER FEEDBACK IMPROVEMENTS
“some of the edges of images are jagged from editing, these could
be softened and made to look more professional”.
“The text could be warped around the models arm, in places where
it is harder to read because of the background colour.”
“Maybe adding a pull quote into the centre of your two main
columns of text, would engage the reader into a main focus of the
information/interview.”
“The image strip down the right hand side of the page should be
brought more into the page to avoid any missing parts of the images.”
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