DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD DEVELOPMENT

Peer analysis

PEER FEEDBACK

PEER FEEDBACK- POSITIVES

“The larger image on the left is engaging and gives

the reader and idea of what the article is about”.

“The layout of the text and the amount of text is

proportionate to the images which gives the page a

balanced appearance.”

“Having a strip of images down the right hand side

works well as a reminder that although the article is

mainly about the artist on the left, the reason behind

it also features the second artist.”

PEER FEEDBACK IMPROVEMENTS

“some of the edges of images are jagged from editing, these could

be softened and made to look more professional”.

“The text could be warped around the models arm, in places where

it is harder to read because of the background colour.”

“Maybe adding a pull quote into the centre of your two main

columns of text, would engage the reader into a main focus of the

information/interview.”

“The image strip down the right hand side of the page should be

brought more into the page to avoid any missing parts of the images.”