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1. NVC
2. Congo Prompt Revision Activity
3. Return and Revise Congo Prompt
Essential Question: How do we improve our writing skills?Homework: Revise Congo Prompt
Congo Prompt Debrief
Directions• Read and evaluate each paper using the rubric• FOR EACH PAPER write– 2 things you think are good– 2 things you think could be improved– Score it (Advanced, Proficient, Basic)and write
TWO sentences explaining why
Advanced• Thesis: Answers ALL aspects of
the prompt (motive + treatment) in a clear and specific way
• Evidence– Pulls evidence from AT
LEAST TWO documents – Addresses the source– Evidence is well-chosen and
strongly supports the thesis• Analysis
– Analysis fully explains the evidence
– Analysis gives specific reasons how the evidence proves the thesis
– Analysis uses academic language
Proficient• Thesis: Answers ALL aspects of the prompt,
but might be short and not specific• Evidence
– Pulls Evidence from AT LEAST TWO documents
– Evidence is short and the source may not fully addressed
– Evidence supports thesis, but not the best evidence
• Analysis– Analysis explains the evidence, but is
shorter, less specific, or simply repeats what the evidence says
Basic• Thesis: Restates the question and does
make a claim about the prompt• Evidence: Evidence is partially missing,
not from the documents, or does not support the thesis
• Analysis: Little or no explanation of the evidence.
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