answer key -grammar #2 singapore and freedom
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Language Exercise #2 - Editing (Singapore and Freedom – The Guardian)
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ADDITIONAL LANGUAGE EXERCISES #2: EDITING(Answer key)
Instructions:
Read the following article (which will be useful for students specializing in media/ censorship or Crime
and Punishment.). Spot the errors and correct them in the column on the right. These can be both
grammar and spelling errors. There are altogether 30 errors – attempt to edit them all.
Once again, note: Do attempt this exercise without looking up answers. For further explanation of rules,
drop me a message (email/ text) and let’s make use of the September holidays to work on grammar/
spelling issues!
Topic: Freedom of Press/ Capital Punishment in Singapore
Article 2: Singapore & Freedom
17 November 2010, The Guardian
Article (with errors) Edits
Singapore is proud of it’s place near the top of many international rankings.
Its school system is by some measures the world's best. The island state
promotes itself as diverse, competative and cultured – an exciting global
hub. But there are two league tables which shame Singapore. The first,
compelled by the campaigning group Reporters Without Borders, place the
country 136th in the world for press freedom– below Iraq and Zimbabwe.
The second is the rate in which Singapore executes convicted criminals:
argueablyhigher, per capita, than any other country in the world.
Singapore presents itself as a modern liberal democracy: it had a parliament,
elections, courts, a constitutionally right to free speech and the consumerist
gloss of capitalism. Its citizens are free to become rich and to travel. Much
do both. The country has by any measure succeeded since independance. But
it’s autocratic political culture – overseen by the country's founding father
and current official Minister Mentor Lee Kuan Yew– is highly and
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Language Exercise #2 - Editing (Singapore and Freedom – The Guardian)
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needlessly restrictive. The media is largely state-owned. Defame and
contempt laws threatens dissent. The latest victim of these is Alan Shadrake,
a British-born writer sentenced yesterday to six weeks imprison and a large
fine after being found guilty in contempt of court. His book Once a Jolly
Hangman questioned the independance of Singapore's legal system, and its
use of the death penalty.
It is depressing that a country as successful as Singapore should feels the
need of such restrictions in free speech. Singapore argues that, without them,
the balance between the country's Chinese, Malay and Indian populations
would be upset. But the reality is that other successful part of Asia – Hong
Kong and Taiwan, for instance – have thrive by extending free speech.
Singapore is doing herself an injust by refusing to grant its people the sorts
of freedoms that are routineelse where.
On a practical level, the decision to prosecute Mr Shadrake was also foolish.
His book haveattracted far greater attention because of it, and Singapore's
reputation have been harmed. Mr Shadrake is quite right to attack a criminal
justice system in which victims are often improverishedmigrant workers. His
book was legitimate and – despite the court's claim in the contrary – largely
accurate. The suspicion is that the Singapore government resented the
exposure of a squalid system of routine executions which sit uneasily with
the image it likes to present to the world. Singapore wants to be judge as a
firstworldnation. To do so, Singapore must seek the confidence to allow
citizens the freedom of speech; reppression is certainly not the route.
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