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Mrs. Reel's English Literature Portfolio.TRANSCRIPT
Table of Contents
Introduction 1College Essay 2Chaucer Character Essay 4Beowulf Compare and Contrast 5Gawain Critical Essay 7Diary Project 8Modest Proposal Essay 9Frankenstein Essay 12Prose Piece 13Literary Analysis 14
Introduction
My writing since the beginning of the year has improved greatly. This course and the
number of written assignments we have had, has allowed my writing to improve tremendously.
When I would write an essay at the beginning of the year, I would rush to get it done, not
proofread my work, and would carelessly put information together.
When I am given an assignment now, I try to fully understand what is expected of me to
write. I attempt to follow the guidelines exactly. When I use to write, I would rush my work,
which would not have a great result. My work would be confusing to understand, and would not
be the best writing that I can achieve.
I have realized the importance of proofreading work. In the midst of rushing to get my
work done, I would not proofread my work. Therefore, I had numerous mistakes, which affected
my grades. I had several grammar mistakes, which was evident that I did not look over my work
before turning it in. since I would not proofread my work, I was unable to get my thoughts out
there. I have realized, reading some of my old essays, that my works were very hard to
understand.
I would not fully understand the assignment and would write about what I wanted to
write about, and not what was assigned. This is a terrible habit to get into, because once I started
this, I would continue to do it. I would not use quotes while writing about a specific source. This
is important because quotes are a great source of information.
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Words of Wisdom – College Essay
Words of wisdom stay with people for a lifetime. The best advice I have been given is “to
get an education, and make something good of myself.” These words of wisdom come from my
two parents. They believe that an education is the one gift that I will always have, and I am
beginning to understand this concept.
To me, getting an education, means for me to make the most of my high school years,
and to always be attentive and care about school, even if I do not like it. School is not always the
place that teenagers want to be. Sometimes school can be very challenging, and when these
challenges occur, I try my hardest to overcome these obstacles. I have felt like giving up at times,
but when I get to this point, I always think of my parents, and there encouraging words. An
education can take me so many different places in life. I hope it allows me to achieve my desired
career, which is to become an educator. In order to fulfill the second part of the advice, I must
get an education to live out my dreams.
Making something good of myself simply means for me to follow my heart, and become
whatever I want to become. I have the option to do whatever I want in life, and if I want to
become the best, an education is required. My dream career is become an educator. It is
impossible for me to become a teacher without an education. This means that I cannot take the
“easy road” through life. I must be able to challenge myself in order to become all that I can be. I
feel that so far in my life, I have already learned how to challenge myself, and hopefully I will
one day become a teacher who gives the gift of education.
My parents are the two people who I look up to the most. They want me to succeed and
have a great life when I grow up. I use their advice everyday by remembering what they have
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said and applying it. They tell me at least once a week “to get an education, and make something
good of myself.” I feel that it would be disappointing to them if I did not live this motto
everyday. They are spending thousands of dollars to send me to high school. I would feel very
worthless if I did not make the most out of what my parents have provided for me. They have
faith in me that I will not let them down. I also feel that I cannot let them down either. I respect
my parents very much, and I will never forget this advice that I have been told.
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My Life Journey - Chaucer Character Essay
Greetings! My name is Rebecca. I am the type of person who loves to help others. I know
I do not physically gain anything from my good deeds, but mentally, the reward is remarkable. I
am a philosopher. I help people better understand themselves. I am a person of great wealth and
would like for others to gain from my riches. I understand that people are not all the same, and
some people are poorer than others. That is why I have decided to make this journey. This
journey is going to be a spiritual and mental awakening for others and myself. I know I can help
others by guiding them to true happiness. Another way I plan on helping is by bringing some
treasures along with me, and the people who I see to truly deserve will receive it. People who are
snobby and rude are not worthy, but people who are kind and humble are the gracious kind. I
plan on giving people life advice for free. I want everyone to be appreciative of what they have.
My role in this world is to help people better understand their faith. I decided to take this
pilgrimage to help myself learn more about people and to help teach people more about God and
their faith. Every person is different. Not all people are rich, but every single person in this world
is blessed. They are blessed because they have God on their side. That is the most important
aspect of life. God made everyone on this earth; therefore he keeps us away from harm. I hope I
can educate people on this lesson. For if people know, and understand this concept, life will be
much easier for them. I know that after these pilgrims take their pilgrimage, along with myself,
we will have enhanced our minds and souls. Along with several of my family members, I will
bring along a Bible. Bringing the bible will allow us to read daily and awaken our hearts to
accept everyone as equal.
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Beowulf vs. Grendel – Beowulf Compare and Contrast
The poem Beowulf and the novel Grendel by James Gardner are alike in ways, yet very
different at the same time. From the characters to the attacks, Grendel and Beowulf have two
very different accounts. Beowulf is an epic poem that relates to heroism and fighting. Grendel
has themes that are more focused on physical courage and strength. One of the main differences
of the two is the point of view. Beowulf is written from an outside view. Grendel is written from
Grendel’s point of view, which can have a greater affect on the novel.
The character Grendel in Beowulf has animal-like features. He victimizes Hrothgar’s
warriors in the mead-hall because he is a brutal and viscous character who seeks revenge for
Cain’s murder. In Grendel, however, Grendel is given more human characteristics, and is not
seen as a wicked person. Unlike in Beowulf, Grendel in Grendel is now able to speak, which
allows for a better understanding of his features. He is a lost creature trying to discover the world
in which he lives in. Hrothgar in Beowulf is seen more as a background character. He is not this
huge monster who destroys the entire land. He is King of the Danes, and since he has ruled for
years, he is now more aware of heroism. He understands that there are good and bad benefits to
having a powerful role. Hrothgar in Grendel is a more furious and fearful character. He is still
named King of Danes, but his prospective has changed. He is now more human-like with
features and flaws. Grendel clams in Grendel, that he and Hrothgar are having a personal battle
in which they are trying to resolve. The attacks on the mead-hall have two very different points
of views. In Beowulf, Grendel attacks the mead-hall because he is jealous of the happiness that is
taking place. In Grendel, Grendel is seeking revenge and that is why he attacks the mead-hall.
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The themes of the two are similar, but different too. In the beginning of Beowulf, the
main theme is about creating an identity for oneself. The characters are unable to speak, thus
relying on their actions to speak for them. There is also a sense of keeping the warrior culture in
Beowulf. This is made evident through their battles. Battles were the one way that they could
pronounce and make known of who they were. Being warrior means you have a strong
understanding for your land. You are able to fight with bravery. Since Beowulf is an epic poem,
heroism is an important theme. Heroism is revealed through the battles of the land. Grendel is
more centralized on Grendel’s point of view and remaining humble. Grendel is more about
fighting and realism. Grendel is more of a human-like novel, in which the characters are able to
speak and revel their true selves. Grendel is trying to relay the message, to not judge based upon
one’s outside view.
Just because Grendel is different than Beowulf, they are somewhat similar too. Just like
in Grendel, Beowulf is focused on bravery and fighting. The main differences between the two
are the way the characters go about fighting. Some go about fighting in a monster like way.
Grendel and Beowulf have similarities, but are mainly different pieces of work.
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Gawain Critical Essay
The author of the article “Hiding the Harm,” is trying to portray Gawain as one who is
full of mistakes, and not perfect. Gawain is looked as like a vicious and wicked creature. The
Green Knight has little respect for life, since he initiates the game. The game is where they take
turns hitting each other in the head with an axe.
I agree with the author about the issue of a lack of respect for life. the Green Knight lacks
a respect for life since her instigates the game in which they take blows at one another’s head.
Gawain is trying to prove himself as, “outweighing all other considerations.” This is stating that
he does not take anyone else’s own personal means in account. He only and truly cares for
himself.
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America’s Heartache – Diary Project
November 22, 1963. My mom wakes me up to tell me that my brother and me don’t have
to go to school today. I am so excited, but then I ask how come? She tells me that we are going
to see the president. Little do I know, this day will forever change America. When we get there,
my parents tell me to stay close to them so I don’t get lost. The president’s car is pulling onto
Elm Street, the street where my family is standing. All of a sudden, I hear a loud noise and see
that the president is no longer sitting in the car. Chaos begins. I can’t see Kennedy at all. My
parents immediately pack up our things to leave. When I ask them why, they start to explain that
the president was the target of an evil act. I wonder why such a great figure in our nation has
been killed, and what type of people would want him dead. A few minutes after the secret
service men out the president’s body in an ambulance, my daddy takes me, mom and brother to
our home. When we get to our home in Dallas, a few miles away from Elm Street, I turned on
the TV and see that he is being taken to Parkland Hospital. As I hear that name, I remember
that’s where my mom works. All four of us are gathered around the tv to see the updates on the
president’s condition.
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Special Treatment for Athletes – Modest Proposal Essay (Social Satire)
Athletes are what make the world a better place. Although in the past many have
criticized for special treatment of athletes, they should receive special treatment for all of the
things that they do. They are the majority of the population in high schools, admirable role
models for young children, recipients of a good education, and entertainment for fans.
Athletes are commonly called “jocks” in high school. Jocks rule most schools, whether it
is on the secondary or post-secondary level. According to Athletic Director Dave Toner at
Roncalli High School in Indianapolis, Indiana, the percentage of athletes partic ipating in just the
Indiana High School Athletic Association (IHSAA) sanctioned sports are fifty-two percent for
the 2006-2007 school year. That number is expected to rise, however, throughout the years.
Currently, the IHSAA does not allow high school athletes to be paid at all. This prohibits athletes
from getting an income whereas their non-athlete peers can get a job. An athlete’s job should be
just to be an athlete and focus on their sport and training.
A child’s dream is to grow up and be a sports figure. Therefore, athletes have many
pressures to be this big hero. At Northwestern High School in Miami, Florida, football player
Antwain Easterling, who was nineteen at the time, raped a fourteen-year-old girl in the school
bathroom. Luckily, he never received any type of punishment through the school because the
next day he led his school victoriously to a state title. Even though some think the lack of
punishment was less than honorable, Coach George Clayton said, “It’s a different world…I don’t
think you can compare apples to apples.”
Athletics receiving special entry requirements allow them20to get an education. At
Indiana University, four-two percent of football players in 2006 did not meet IU’s normal
entrance requirements. Likewise, at the University of California in 2004, ninety-five percent of
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the freshman football class on scholarship was special admits. In the same year, Texas A&M had
ninety-four percent specially admitted to its athletic program and school. These actions assure
athletes are getting a great college education and can pursue a career after sports.
Media criticizes for illegal use of substances. However, without these products such as
steroids, the fans would be disappointed by the performance, for example, a lack of homeruns
and long distance hits by a player. Fans complain when their favorite athlete is not producing
which is caused by harsh rules by the leagues.
The current proposed solutions are athletes should be seen as equal, even though they are
much greater, stronger, smarter, and richer than the average person. What the media and
criticizers do not realize, however, is by using their skills and gifts to their best potential, athletes
contribute to society much greater than the average person.
For first, it is proposed that athletes do not receive enough special treatment. Others
should take this in consideration and give them they credit that they deserve. Athletes should
have no limits in what they do or say. The use of all illegal substances should be allowed at high
school, college, and professional levels. This allows better performance for the athlete which in
turn gives better viewing pleasure to the audiences.
Secondly, there should no requirements for entrances into colleges. This saves time for
both the administrators and the student-athlete. Also, the action allows the athlete to achieve a
higher education. There should be no penalty for a student who is not meeting the requirements
while in college. If they are failing a course, their professor should understand that they are an
athlete and give the student a passing grade because the priority should be athletics.
Thirdly, there should be no consequences, which result in government or higher authority
actions. If an athlete should find himself or herself in a predicament, the coach or athletic
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department should receive funds to pay off the accuser. This assures happiness and a better
performance while playing for the athlete.
Fourthly, in high school and college, athletes should receive no school or homework
during game days. Athletes should be able to be paid for their sport, in season and out of season
because even during the off season an athlete is still training and preparing for the next season
and are not able to obtain a steady income.
This proposal is beneficial for both the athlete and the non-athlete. Special treatment of
athletes is very important to their success, which in turn helps others. This is proposed with a
sincere heart and mind with every race, gender, and religion considered. Without athletes, the
world would be a harsh place.
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Frankenstein Essay
Victor Frankenstein was very fascinated with science. Due to his love of science, he
created a vicious creature. His first creature was a male, and after awhile of roaming around, he
requested that victor create a female companion. The creature wanted a companion because he
was lonely, because he scared off everyone he saw.
Victor thought that if the creature does have a companion, then he would leave man
alone. While trying to pursue Victor, the creature tells him, “I will make peace with the whole
kind” (105). Victor could have interpreted this, as the creature will no longer kill anyone. The
creature is responsible for the murder of William, and Victor sees this statement as a promise.
Victor initially hesitated to the idea because the first creation isn’t the ideal creation, and
Victor says, “I thought of the possible consequences of my consent” (105). Victor believes that
the creature is trying to trick him, but senses that “there was some type of justice in his
argument” (105).
After Victor is done creating the female companion, he decides to destroy it. Victor
realizes that if the two mate, together they would create, “a race of devils propagated upon earth”
(121). Victor believes the creations could turn against him, and even though they promised, he
believes the two could harm him. He also takes into consideration that the two could end up
hating each other, creating even more problems.
Victor takes many things into consideration when he decides to destroy the female
creature. Victor makes the right decision because more bad than good would come from it. Even
thought the creature become very angry when he hears the news, Victor believes he is right for
destroying the monster.
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“Lady of Shalott” - Prose Piece
“The Lady of Shalott” begins with the explanation of how the river is lined with long
fields of barley and rye before it reaches the town of Camelot. The people of the town go up and
down toward the island of Shalott. The island of Shalott is covered with lilies, aspens, and
willows. The Lady of Shalott is imprisoned in “four gray walls, and four gray towers.” Heavy
barges run along the shoreline of Camelot. Lord Tennyson is questioning if anyone has seen the
Lady of Shalott. Towards the end of part one, the reaper listens to the Lady singing.
The Lady of Shalott is described as weaving a colorful magical web. She hears a whisper
telling her that a curse will be on her if she looks down to Camelot. Since she does not know
what this curse will be, she does not lift her eyes; she concentrates very steadily on weaving. As
she continues to weave she notices a mirror hanging in front of her. She sees “shadows of the
world, in which she sees the highway winding near Camelot, river whirling, and the village.
A knight comes riding through the barley field. As he is riding, the gems glitter like “the
golden Galaxy.” He gallops along the island of Shalott. The Lady sees the knight in her mirror as
he is riding by. When she sees this, she leaves her web and stops weaving. She believes that the
curse has come upon her because the mirror cracked.
As the weather begins changing, the Lady comes down from her tower, finds a boat and
floats off in it. She writes “The Lady of Shalott” on the boats bow. Through the night filled with
noise, she floats toward Camelot. While traveling to Camelot in the boat, she is singing her song,
and then dies. Her boat reaches Camelot and everyone comes to see the sight. They see “the
Lady of Shalott” written on the bow of the boat. A knight, Lancelot, squeezed in to see the lady,
and claimed she had a lovely face, and God lend her grace.
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Imagery in Lady of Shalott – Victorian piece
Alfred, Lord Tennyson’s “Lady of Shalott” uses a few literary devices that make this
poem delightful. Conflict with woman against society is made evident. Along with conflict,
Tennyson has imagery so vividly represented.
The poem first starts off by the explanation of the woman who is confined to “four grey
walls, and four grey towers” (l. 15). This is confirming her isolation of life, due to the king.
Each and everyday, she sits and weaves. She is not allowed to look out of her windows. The
King of Camelot imprisoned her. This is where the first part of woman versus society occurs.
The lady, however, has a mirror hanging in front of her. She looks through the mirror and sees
shadows of the world. Tennyson does not describe the woman very well at all. All that is known
is that a curse will be laid upon her. “…The Lady’s isolation and the conflict between the
interior and exterior worlds” (Nelson), shows that the woman truly lived a life of sadness and
loneliness.
The imagery of the poem is best described in the first two parts. They are describing the
beautiful lilies, aspens, and willows that Shalott is covered with. This plants a very vivid, and
liveliness of Shalott. The image of “four grey walls, and four grey towers” (l. 15) gives a very
sad and hopeless effect on the poem. This line gives that feeling that the woman will never and
has never seen anything but the four walls which surround her daily. When Tennyson is
describing her weaving everyday, this gives a mellow image. This is neither a happy, nor a sad
scene. It is just describing the Lady weaving. It does, however, set up the woman’s loneliness
that she experiences everyday. Sitting alone everyday in the same room, never leaving would
cause some people to go insane. Instead of going insane, she becomes very curious about the
world she never sees.
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The Lady sees a knight riding by her window, and after this, her mirror cracked. She
believes this is her curse being stowed upon her. The woman finds her boat, and paints, “The
Lady of Shalott” on the side of it. She floats to the riverside of Camelot, where the townspeople
find her. Even though Tennyson did not describe the woman, the knight that finds her, claims she
had a face of beauty. This image is very vibrant. This shows that the woman, who even though
never had any communication with the outside world, was genuinely a beautiful woman. She
may have lived a life of isolation, but her looks did not represent that life. Another image that is
clear is an image of peacefulness. When someone dies, it is normally looked at as a sad and
depressing time. The woman was not sad or sorrowful about dying, nor was the townspeople.
In conclusion, the “Lady of Shalott” has energetic imagery throughout the entire poem.
Tennyson uses sad and depressing times, and turns them into a peaceful and joyous time.
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