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 Daily Writing 7/16/15 So far in my writing career I’ve had all the types of criticism. ne e!ample stic"s o#t more than others$ for my senior pro%ect I had two di&erent st#dents help me revise and edit my paper . 'hen they (oth came (ac" to say that my paper was good and didn’t need any changes. Instantly I "new that they were wrong and that they pro(a(ly didn’t loo" at it$ I "new this (eca#se I was never a good writer. )nowing this I went to my teacher and as"ed him to review my paper$ so he did. *y paper came (ac" with red mar"s everywhere. +e said that he normally doesn’t go too in depth for st#dents papers (#t (eca#se I already went to two di&erent people that I deserved to get one good revise.

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Daily Writing 7/16/15So far in my writing career Ive had all the types of criticism. One example sticks out more than others, for my senior project I had two different students help me revise and edit my paper. Then they both came back to say that my paper was good and didnt need any changes. Instantly I knew that they were wrong and that they probably didnt look at it, I knew this because I was never a good writer. Knowing this I went to my teacher and asked him to review my paper, so he did. My paper came back with red marks everywhere. He said that he normally doesnt go too in depth for students papers but because I already went to two different people that I deserved to get one good revise.