Demo feedback:By Josh Davey

I have shown multiple members of the target audience, two demo scenes which we roughly created to demonstrate exactly what we was going for in the scenes.

Feedback (Positives)0The content is conventional0Use of conventional mise-en-scene – Pills, hoods.0Conventional themes: -Danger -Tension -Mind control -Government agents

Feedback (Negatives)0Sound distortion on all scenes0Lacks continuity and professionalism0Extremely long scenes could bored the viewers

Improvements0Remove sound distortion0Trim down scenes including less build-up 0 Use a wider range of locations for scene 1 to show the

pill is taken by “everyone”

OverallOverall, these scenes have the content, they just need minor improvements based on length, continuity and mise-en-scene in order for them to be fully conventional.