So, let me tell you a secret... You ,too, canlive in a perfect world.

What would your

perfect world be like?

What would be in it?

Who would be in it?

Where would it be?

When would it be?

Why would it be perct?

THE END

THE END

Author: Patrícia Rodrigues N. da S. Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura

Illustrator: Kelleymcmorris

Publisher: www.storybird.com

Date: II Semester - Summer 2014

A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”

CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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