What are the strengths of the proposal? A strength of the proposal is that it is clear the target audience has been thought hard about. He has chosen his audience and then explained why he has chosen that specific age range which is a good thing. He has chosen quite a closed age range which again, is a good thing and he has explained why.

What are the weaknesses of the proposal?A weakness of the proposal is that is has a lot of detail, which can often cause confusion. The method he has chosen to produce his product with is good but could possibly take a lot of time as he is hand drawing them and we only have a specific amount of time to create our novels with.

What are the strengths of the generation of ideas? The mind map is very good and detailed; he has had and put in a lot of ideas, which could help him when creating the novel. He has thought about different aspects of graphic narratives and how the colours and font could help.

What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas?A weakness is that it would have been a good idea to create a mind map about the style of novel he wanted to do, so a graphic novel instead of putting both aspects on to one.