info.design © 2005 writing for the web workshop crafting usable content
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Writing for the Web WorkshopCrafting Usable Content
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Benefits of Content
Today content increasingly drives the “value” of the organization and the individual. By and large, those who are good at content will prosper. Those who are not will perish.
Content CriticalGerry McGovern/ Rob Norton, 2002
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To Craft Content, We Decide
We must decide what parts should be grouped and labeled
We must decide how the boundaries between these parts should be perceived.
We must argue effectively why these choices support our users.
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We can help users by:
Providing expectations Chunk and layer text Make text concise Make text clear
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We can help users by:
Providing expectations Chunk and layer text Make text concise Make text clear
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Your user wants to see the key structure in your site.
You want to put that reader “in control.”
Help Users by Incorporating Expectation-Driven Structure
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Build a “visual” structure by writing a blocks of text that that: predicts (preview of coming
attractions) controls (limits the possibilities) obligates (makes promise to the
reader)
Help Users by Incorporating Expectation-Driven Structure
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Expectation Structure:First Sentence
Use this to introduce readers to key ideas that follow.
Or write a sentence that catches readers’ eye but then leads the reader into the key ideas.
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Expectation Structure:Key Ideas
Place these in the order that you will discuss them in the following information.
Use each key idea and incorporate it as a heading.
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Expectation Structure:First sentence in headings
Place the “subheading” ideas in the order you will present them
(Lead the reader to the key ideas in the subheadings.)
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Example
Crate and Barrel Hell
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Exercise: Part 1
Envision an audience like yourselves who want content on strategies for writing for the web.
What would you want to know? Write them down.
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We can help users by:
Providing expectations
Chunk and layer text Make text concise Make text clear
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Chunk and Layer TextOur Goals
Users preprocess information in four seconds. Our goal is to help them.
As “architects of information” we can promote writing for the web from our chunking and labeling, perspective.
Our goal is to look at each piece of information we have assembled to help the user complete the task.
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Chunk and Layer Text: Process for Organizing
Shape each chunk of information so readers can “see the text” — 1.Look at each piece of information. Ask yourself, “why
does the user want this information”
2.Ask: “how does this relate to the parts of the whole?”
Shape information so users can find it and use it — share it, consider it, debate it, and act upon it.
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Chunk and Layer Text Process for Organizing
Use headings and subheadings to show hierarchy and connections For each chunk of information, identify a
heading or a subheading. It is your goal to assemble these pieces of information so your reader can “use” them.
Place only one key idea in each grouping of information.
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Chunk and Layer Text : Process for Organizing (Cont.)
If you have done your work envisioning your audience, it should be very easy to look at each chunk of information and... categorize the level of information. identify responsibility of the person writing
this piece. assemble the pieces to meet your
document’s purpose.
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Chunk and Layer Text: Incorporate Visual Strategies
Create visual page layout: indent text limit line length to approximately 10-12 words; 2-4 inches put items and sequences in bulleted lists (of no more than 8
items) use ample headings and subheadings put blank lines between paragraphs (remember rules of
proximity) NEVER make readers scroll to the right
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Chunk and Layer Text: Incorporate Visual Strategies
Incorporate usable type: bold key words (it’s easier to read) use typefaces and sizes to distinguish headings and
subheadings from base text (small images are an option)
use sans serif font faces (Arial) for headings(check out the type built specifically for web display)
AVOID ALL CAPS AT ALL TIMES BECAUSE IT’S DIFFICULT TO READ (ISN’T IT?)
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Exercise: Part 2
Based on what your audience wants to know, regroup the exercise text.
Pay special attention to the headings and subheadings you build.
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We can help users by:
Providing expectations Chunk and layer text
Make text concise Make text clear
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Make Text Concise:Use Fewer Words
Use 50% fewer words than you would in print.
Use chunks, headings, lists, subheadings to convey information. Bulleted lists might introduce a longer
discussion or provide links
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Make Text Concise:Activate the Passive
Use a character/action driven structure of writing text. Users will want to know who is doing what.
Avoid abstract nouns (such as: “A determination was made”).
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Make Text Concise:Use Simple Sentences
Use simple sentences simple does not equal “dumbed down”
Archive long texts written in a complex style enable your reader to access dense
documents
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Make Text Concise:Incorporate Heads & Blurbs
Build concise easy to understand headings and subheads
Incorporate blurbs Condense the text to provide information about the
information Be sure that if the blurb links to additional text,
there really is more to say.
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Exercise: Part 3
Based on what your audience wants to know, reshape text to help them out
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We can help users by:
Providing expectations Chunk and layer text Make text concise
Make text clear
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Make Text Clear:Follow Old/New Rule
Follow the “old/new rule” to ensure easy comprehension Put “old” information at the beginning of the sentence Put “new” information at the end
Use clear antecedents (be sure your reader knows who the character is)
Cut verbage …. TIP: Write in 4-Inch Space.
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Make Text Clear:Show Relationships
Use associative links Use links rather than words to help
your readers comprehend density in content.
Enable your readers to see relationships in content.
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Make Text Clear:Use Consistent Tone & Style
Identify a “tone” you want to incorporate on your page.
Ensure the tone supports your audience, purpose, and context
Refer to organizational style guides or CREATE ONE if you do not have a style guide.
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Make Text Clear:Incorporate Visual Cues
To ensure visual understanding, emphasize spatial organization Spatial organization can engage
readers, direct their attention, prioritize the information they see
Maintain visual interest; visual simplicity; and visual continuity
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Make Text Clear:Show Value to Readers
Relate text to what readers want to DO with the information
LAYER information that doesn’t directly support the reader, or provides more information than the reader can understand.