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KNOWING YOUR AUDIENCE PAPER AND COMMUNICATION RELEASE
William Challenor
BCom/275
9 Apr 2012
Reinaldo Fernandez
Knowing Your Audience Paper And Communication Release
Knowing your audience is a major component of communication of
any kind. By knowing the proper type of communication to use and
the proper information to include in your message, will ensure
that the recipients will understand the message being delivered.
Knowing your audience will ensure that the message is delivered
appropriately and that the audience completely understands the
message without any misunderstandings or confusion. In the event
of a disaster or other catastrophe, knowing the audience that you
will be delivering this message to is extremely vital and
important. The communications that went out to the public and
families of the Chilean miners of the copper mine collapse in
South America will reflect the importance of knowing your
audience in this essay.
On August 5, 2010, a small copper mine in northern Chile
collapsed trapping inside of it 33 miners (Weik, 2010). The 33
miners were trapped 300 meters below ground with very little
food, oxygen or water. News of the collapse spread around the
world and many feared that the miners would all perish before
being rescued (Illiano, Wade, 2010). The world held a collective
breath when after seventeen days of drilling contact was made and
all 33 miners appeared to have survived the ordeal. Initially the
miners were told that it would take up to 4 months to pull them
up to the surface (Guardian.co.uk, 2010). A total of 69 days
after the collapse, the first miner was pulled up by s
specifically designed steel capsule (Illiano, Wade, 2010). One by
one each of the 33 miners were rescued to safety. Chilean
President Sebastian Pinera stated that he would launch an
extensive investigation into the incident (Weik, 2010). When the
miners were asked how they survived such an ordeal, they stated
that they each ate about 2 teaspoons of tuna and one
biscuit/cracker along with a sip of milk every 2 days (Time.com,
2010).
Communication to employees
The small San Jose copper mine was owned by a company called
Minera San Esteban Primera. The Minera San Esteban Primera
Company does not have a good track record over the years in
regards to safety, which have included several fatal accidents at
the worksites. The person issuing a public statement regarding
the Chilean copper mine collapse must know the audience that is
receiving the message. In a case like this, the company must be
aware that this will shed a very bleak picture of their company
to the recipients. The company should understand what their
employees might need to here from them. Employees would need to
be assured that measures will be taken to improve work
conditions, which will make for a safer work environment. The
employees would also need to hear that the company is going to
compensate the workers appropriately for working in such
dangerous conditions. The company can address these issues by
establishing some type of safety or operational risk management
(ORM) program. As for the compensation, the company could tell
the employees that a workers compensation program is being
developed, which would enable the workers to be at ease if
something like this were to happen again. This would also show
the employees that the company does actually care about them and
not just the money. Also, when communicating to the employees
the company can acknowledge or accept their failures to ensure a
safe work environment.
Communication to families
Communicating with family is the difficult part for the company.
The families will require a lot more details and for the person
delivering the message to be sensitive to the families current
state of mind. As for the details, the family will want to know
what and how this happened. They will also need to be given
information about what the company is doing to save their loved
ones. By giving this information the family will be a little
less hostile toward the company, knowing that everything possible
is being done to save their family members. Now to the part
about being sensitive, the person delivering the message must
understand that the families are in a fragile state of mind at
the moment. The company spokesman could show compassion by
staying throughout the rescue and talking to each family
individually rather than in a group setting. A group setting is
too impersonal. The tone that the spokesman will go a long way
towards showing sympathy for the families and their loved ones.
The company must also keep in mind that there will be several
precautions that they will need to take prior to delivering the
messages. One is that the company has an obligation to ensure
that the family of the victims be notified before they are made
aware of this by the media. They must also keep the family
updated as the rescue progresses. Because the family members may
be emotional and distressed over the event, every communication
to them must be delivered in a compassionate and tactful manner.
The company must also be time sensitive when delivering the
message(s) to the family members. When delivering the message to
the media, the company must ensure to provide factual information
delivered in a professional manner.
Draft Communication to the Families of the Miners
Initial Communication with Miner’s Families
It is with deep regret that I most inform you of the recent
accident at the Minera San Esteban Primera Mine. At 2:00 p.m.
today, reports came into the office stating one of our mines had
collapsed. Initially the trapped miner tried to escape through a
ventilation shaft, but was unsuccessful. Rescuers are attempting
to drill holes to locate the workers (Weik, 2010). We are doing
everything to ensure the safe return of your loved ones.
Communication with Miner’s Families August 8, 2010
I regret to inform you that our recent attempt to drill holes to
the miners has had a temporary setback. As workers were trying to
descend through the ventilation shaft another cave in blocked
their way. We have come up with a plan to bore a six inch hole to
locate the exact location of the survivors.
Communication to families on August 22, 2010
I am happy to report the rescue plan was successful; the bore
hole has reached your loved ones. They have sent a message saying
they are alive and well. Food, water, and lights are being sent
down the bore hole to the survivors. Rescuers plan to widen the
hole to enable the miners to be pulled out one by one. This will
be a long process because rescue workers will have to drill
through several layers of hard rock. We need to carve out a hole
26 inches in diameter to pull out each miner. The estimated time
for drilling this hole ranges from 30 days to four months. The
reason it will take this long is that the drill can cut through
only 50 feet of rock a day and if a drill bit breaks it will slow
down the process (Parry & Rettner, 2010). The Chilean government
is consulting with National Aeronautics and Space Administration
(NASA) on how to keep the miners mentally and physically fit
during their confinement. During their confinement the miner will
be able to send and receive messages from you through the bore
hole.
In conclusion, company must be aware of their audience. For the
employees, they must be assured that every precaution is being
made to ensure a safe work environment and that if something were
to happen to them, the company would take care of them. For the
family, they must be assured that everything is being done to
save their loved ones from this disaster. Also, the families
must be convinced that the company does not care more about money
than their employees.
Draft Communication to Employees
| Minera San Esteban Primera |
Memo
To: All Minera San Esteban Primera Employees
Date: August 9, 2010
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Re: Copper Mine Collapse
As of August 5, 2011 there has been an unfortunate accident in
one of our copper mines in San Jose, Chile. The roof of the mine
collapsed leaving 33 of our employees trapped inside.
Officials and rescue workers were notified immediately and have
been working to locate and rescue the copper miners. The 33
survivors are believed to be trapped at a depth of 670 meters
below the surface.
Initial rescue efforts were suspended for a few hours on Saturday
because of a second cave-in during rescuers attempts to descend a
ventilation shaft. The rescue workers plan to drill a hole six
inches in diameter holes to locate the 33 trapped miners.
Despite recent questions regarding the safety practices of our
mines and organization. We are still adhering to all safety
procedures, practices, and protocol set forth by both the
Federation of Chilean Mining Workers and the Confederation of
Copper Workers. We will continue to operate the mines according
to the policies and procedures of these organizations (Parry &
Rettner, 2010).
Employees will be kept up-to-date on the rescue efforts as the
information comes in. Our thoughts and prayers go out to all
miners, families, rescue workers, and employees of Minera San
Esteban Primera.
References:
Retrieved from: Weik, J. (2010, August 6). Over 30 workers
trapped after Chilean copper mine collapse. Metal Bulletin Daily,
(224), 65.
Retrieved from:
http://www.guardian.co.uk/world/2010/aug/23/miners-trapped-alive-
chile
Retrieved from: Illiano, C. and Wade, T. (2010).
http://www.reuters.com/article/2010/10/13/us-chile-miners-
idUSN0925972620101013
Retrieved from: Kraul, C. (2010).
http://articles.latimes.com/2010/oct/14/world/la-fg-chile-miner-
rescues-20101014
Retrieved from:
http://www.time.com/time/world/article/0,8599,2013137,00.html#ixz
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Parry, W., & Rettner, R. (2010). Chile Mine Collapse: Facts about
the Amazing Survival Story. Retrieved from
http://www.livescience.com