Magazine Double Page Spread Feedback

By Evie Theodore

First Draft

First Draft Feedback- By Ezreen

• You have used the appropriate A4 dimensions for the front cover. You have thought about your colour scheme and kept it consistent with your front cover.

• You need to think about the camera angles of the model

• You have included the key elements needed for the contents page.

• Start thinking about the content e.g what the text says, colours, style etc.

• Include speech marks in the pull quote.

Changes I made

• I changed the layout of the text- instead of three columns I did one.

• I put the picture on the right side of the page instead of the left to conform to the eye flow theory

Second Draft

Second Draft Feedback- By Ezreen• You have chosen clear and bold fonts that stand out to

the reader. • The colour scheme you have chosen is clear and

consistent with your front cover and contents page. They are a good blend of bright and dark. The white was a good choice as it contrasts the black and gives the page ‘breath’.

• The eye flow is good but could be improved by moving the information to the left and the picture to the right.

• Mise en scene:• The costume the model is wearing is good as it’s black

and neutral to appeal to any individual with any rock music sub-genre

• There are no spelling mistakes.

Changes I made

• I added the graffiti background from my front cover to have some consistency and link to the front cover.

• I added a red outline to the image to make it stand out more

• Yellow shape boxes were included to be consistent with the house style colour scheme of black, red, yellow and white. The shapes also made information such as the exclusivity of the article stand out.

• The pull quote is now smaller to make room for the small paragraph explaining what the article is about.

Final Version