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BY NGOC BACH

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In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to

work or travel for a period of time before going to university.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those

school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion.

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task

Write at least 250 words.

TOPIC

QUESTION

DÀN BÀI CHUNG

+ MỞ BÀI

+ THÂN BÀI 1

+ THÂN BÀI 2

+ KẾT LUẬN

INTRODUCTION

+ Paraphrase the keywords of the topic

+ Answer the question part of the task

Body 1: the disadvantages of taking a year off before going to university

+ the later start to a career after graduation

+ the expense of taking time off to travel

Body 2: the advantages of taking a year off before going to university

+ good chances for them to gain some valuable experience

+ young graduates can clarify their study and career future

CONCLUSION

+ Paraphrase what you wrote in your introduction

BY NGOC BACH

DÀN BÀI

CÂU TOPIC CỦA ĐỀ BÀI:

In some countries, some high school leavers are

choosing to work or travel for a period of time

before going to university

CÂU VIẾT LẠI:

After graduating from high school, some students

tend to get a job or go on a trip for some time before

university life

INTRODUCTION

CÂU THỨ 2 PHẦN INTRO :

While I accept that there are benefits and

drawbacks of this decision, I would argue that

it is better to take a gap year to work or travel.

INTRODUCTION

ĐỀ BÀI:

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of

those school leavers’ decision. Give your own

opinion

INTRODUCTION

After graduating from high school, some students tend to get

a job or go on a trip for some time before university life.

While I accept that there are benefits and drawbacks of this

decision, I would argue that it is better to take a gap year to

work or travel.

Body 1: discussed two relevant points about the disadvantages

of taking a year off before going to university

+ the later start to a career after graduation

+ the expense of taking time off to travel

The option to get a job or travel straight after school is

disadvantageous to some extent. The main shortcoming is that a

number of graduating students may start their professional careers

later than their fellows who do not choose to get a job or go on a trip

after high school. As a result, they will get promoted later . In

addition, traveling costs them a great deal. If they travel right after

high school, they will earn no money and have to ask their parents

for the expense . It is not advisable that people should take this

option.

Body 2: the advantages of taking a year off before going to

university

+ good chances for them to gain some valuable experience

+ young graduates can clarify their study and career future

On the other hand, it seems to me that high school seniors should

choose to work or travel for a period of time because of some

undeniable advantages. Firstly, working and traveling are both good

chances for them to gain some valuable experience. My brother, for

instance, travelled to London during his gap year. By spending time

in London, he was able to hear, speak, read and write the English

language constantly which gave him countless opportunities to

improve his English skills. Secondly, taking a year out helps young

graduates clarify their study and career future. They can do various

jobs without long-term commitment in this time , and discover what

might be right for them

INTRODUCTION:

After graduating from high school, some students tend to get a job or go on a

trip for some time before university life. While I accept that there are benefits

and drawbacks of this decision, I would argue that it is better to take a gap year

to work or travel.

CONCLUSION:

In conclusion, I believe that there are many advantages for young people who

start working or traveling prior to entering a university, although this decision

has some notable disadvantages.

Topic: In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion.

After graduating from high school, some students tend to get a job or go on a trip for some time before university life. While I accept that there are benefits and drawbacks of this decision, I would argue that it is better to take a gap year to work or travel.

The option to get a job or travel straight after school is disadvantageous to some extent. The main shortcoming is that a number of graduating students may start their professional careers later than their fellows who do not choose to get a job or go on a trip after high school. As a result, they will get promoted later . In addition, traveling costs them a great deal. If they travel right after high school, they will earn no money and have to ask their parents for the expense . It is not advisable that people should take this option.

On the other hand, it seems to me that high school seniors should choose to work or travel for a period of time because of some undeniable advantages. Firstly, working and traveling are both good chances for them to gain some valuable experience. My brother, for instance, travelled to London during his gap year. By spending time in London, he was able to hear, speak, read and write the English language constantly which gave him countless opportunities to improve his English skills. Secondly, taking a year out helps young graduates clarify their study and career future. They can do various jobs without long-term commitment in this time , and discover what might be right for them

In conclusion, I believe that there are many advantages for young people who start working or traveling prior to beginning their university studies, although this decision has some notable disadvantages.

294 words

Written by Ngoc Bach

+ Task response: (details)

- I answered the task question fully- stating the advantages and disadvantages of a gap year and also giving my own opinion clearly + Coherence and cohesion (details)

- I maintained my opinion consistently throughout the task (in the introduction, at the beginning of paragraph 3, and in the conclusion) + Lexical resource: (details)

- take a gap year/start their professional career later than their fellows/right after high school/gain some valuable experience/ countless opportunities/taking a year out/without long-term commitment/discover what might be right.- high school leavers -> students, graduating students , high school seniors , young graduates , young people , they+ Grammar: (details)

adverb clauses, relative clauses and a (first) conditional sentence. There are a variety of sentence structures and correct comparative forms

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