question 5 - how did you attract/address your audience?
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My AS Media Studies Evaluation Question response.TRANSCRIPT
Question 5: How did you
attract/address your
audience?
Research & Planning:
When writing my proposal I thought about how my magazine could reflect the genre in a more traditional way. I wanted to focus on the artists themselves and how they are more than ‘just music’ they are about style and presentation. This I think was important to look at my research in a way that was influenced by lifestyle and self reflection (in the mindset of my target audience) of the person who listens to music.
When I found my research I made sure I stuck to interesting points I found to show the use of genre and target audience conventions.
Photography:
When looking back at my research into shot types and mise-
en-scene (costume mostly) I had kept to the information I
had discovered for my audience representation. I started
targeting both genders by featuring a male and female
within my target demographic.
My images were how I was overall representing my target
audience and genre, so it was curtail I got them perfect. I
uploaded my images to facebook and asked people for
feedback. My most constructive commenter was my
friend Georgia who is obsessed with indie bands and
photos. I used her opinions to make sure I had selected
the photographs that would work best for an
indie/acoustic magazine.
I asked my target audience and people who were
fans of the genre what they thought when they
randomly saw the composition of my design
work. Here is a bullet point list of comments I
received throughout my collection of
photographs.•so perfect
•this one's amazing
•love it (x2)
•this one is really intense
•this one's really sweet
•just gorgeous
•really elegant
•love this one (x3)
•this one's really cute (x2)
•this one's beautiful
•this one's so dramatic
•dramatic
•this one's great
•intense
•so cute (x3)
•really cute
•this one's just amazing
•really sweet love this one
•dark atmosphere
•advert - so sweet
•this one's just so amazing -
love it so much
•love this one - so dramatic
•really cute - quirky
•dramatic lighting
•so amazing
•perfect (x2)
•just beautiful
•really intense, effective
•mysterious
•beautiful
•just perfect
•so dramatic
•model... right now...
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
THIS PRESENTATION FULL
SCREEN!
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I only
used photos with a
blank background to
make the artists stand
out more.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I used
this ‘dramatic’ effect
for the cover to grab
my target audience’s
attention.
This comment I took
into consideration
however this photo
didn’t make the final
DPS because I
thought others fitted
the target audience
better.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that
included some more
two shot on my DPS. I
didn’t choose this one
because of how
different it was to the
others and would
have affected the
consistency of my
design.
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
THIS PRESENTATION FULL
SCREEN!
This comment I took
into consideration
however I felt there
were better shot of
Kiera that met the
genre conventions.
This comment I took
into consideration
used the different eye
focuses in another
two shot to add this
element into my DPS.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I used
some shots with the
hat in to incorporate
the ‘quirky’ prop to
show costume
conventions. This comment I took into
consideration and made sure
that I used photos with this
lighting, as it picked up the
shadows on her face really
well and looked like a
professional magazine shoot.
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
THIS PRESENTATION FULL
SCREEN!
This comment I took into
consideration and made
sure that I had some shots
of Kiera that looked feisty
like this one. I’m not sure
why I didn’t use this shot,
but it was mostly likely due
to issues with enough
space.
This comment I took into
consideration and made
sure that I had some
vertical shots alongside
horizontal shots. I wanted
a two shot to have this
casual element, so I chose
a variation of the cover
image with this relaxed
feel.
This comment I
took into
consideration and
made sure that I
used a photo like
this on my DPS
(which I did).
This comment I
took into
consideration and
made sure that I
kept Kiera mostly
in the foreground.
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
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SCREEN!
This comment I took
into consideration and
tried to recreate this
mood without
disrupting the
consistency in design.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I had
included light and
dark in my photos to
create this visually
appealing blend.
This comment I took into
consideration and
because I had received
similar feedback of light
and dark, I chose this two
shot to bring comments
together to fulfil target
audience and
conventions.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I used
this pose and mise-
en-scene. I think the
shot distance works
well here, and shows
off the centre framing.
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SCREEN!
This comment I
took into
consideration and
used a similar
shot distance for
one of the photos
on my contents
and DPS.
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I only
used photos with a
blank background to
make the artists stand
out more.
This comment I took
into consideration
and made sure that I
used this dark
intensity for my front
cover to give the
same reaction. This comment I took into
consideration and made
sure that I used photos that
captured Kiera in the same
way that makes her hair
look this way and makes her
eyes look brighter.
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
THIS PRESENTATION FULL
SCREEN!
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I used
the same pose but a
better facial
expression. Apart from
that change the photos
were identical.
This comment I
took into
consideration and
made sure that I
This comment I took
into consideration
and made sure that I
used a shot that was
taken straight after
this one so only the
pose altered. Apart
from that change the
photos were
identical.
This comment I took into
consideration because it
had such a strong reaction
and it was so different from
most of my other images I
thought this one would be a
good shot to use enlarged
on my contents page. I think
the posing was strong
enough to pull it off.
THESE COMMENTS ARE
SMALL SO PLEASE MAKE
THIS PRESENTATION FULL
SCREEN!
This comment I took
into consideration and
made sure that I used
photographs that had
sense of contrast so
they stood out on the
page. They weren’t as
intense as this one, but
did incorporate the
essence.
This comment I took into
consideration and made
sure that I used shots with
active looking poses, I
didn’t want my
photographs to look static
as if they just stood
around. That’s why I used
the show of her hair
flicking for my DPS.
This comment I took into
consideration and made
sure that I had sense of
difference to my imagery
that doesn’t seem the
same as other
magazines. I think this
helped my magazine
stay original.
This comment I took into
consideration and made sure
that I used shots where Kiera
had her eyes panning down the
camera to make the magazine
personal/relevant to add a
sense of communication with
the reader. I think the way it
showed only her looking
matched other positive
feedback I had received.
Her hair is very natural, a convention in the representation of Indie
musicians, her long wavy hair shows the connotations and stereotype
fulfilled. It shows a down-to-earth tone about the magazine and how
this is about music not the perfection of an artists hair that might
occur for a pop magazine.
Both their eyes are panning down the camera lens to give a sense
of direct address and personal relevance. This gives a sense of
communication with the artist and the reader. This was important
to set up from the start as it fulfils the point interview – to
communicate to a reader about the artist. This look was mentioned
in my target audience feedback, so I thought it was important to
bring it forward on my front cover. The darkness around their eyes
also fulfils the ‘spooky’ comment about being dark and intense.
Using this allowed me to attract my target audience’s attention
because it’s so different to brightly lit front covers that’s
everywhere today.
The hat was used as a convention of the
representation of ‘Indies’ I discovered in my
Research & Planning which proved ‘quirky’ from
Target Audience feedback.
The weaving of the
masthead is
unconventional (most
opt for behind or in
front) which gave my
vertical masthead
originality. I think using
lower case was more
appropriate for the
genre than capitals. I
think capitals would
have seemed too
aggressive for my laid
back style of magazine
and visually this
appeals to my target
audience.The mise-en-scene
shows the genre and is
relevant to music. It
contrasts against the
lighter black background
in a way that isn’t
distracting.
Both their hands
are placed like a
school photo, this
link to education
and style of look
presents a preppy
edge to the artists
that fulfils the
genre and artist
representation
stereotype.
The price is really
important to show the
class of the target
audience, £2.85 may
seem expensive to a
working class reader,
however for employed
middle class people, it
isn’t far off £2.50, which
was the price fedback to
me in my research &
planning. I think this
reasonable.
The names of artists in the
magazine are underlined to
highlight the genre and attract an
indie music fan of bands that they
are likely to be interested in.
Highlighting significant people on
the cover follows some conventions
of addressing a target audience. I
think this shows the representation
of fans as people who want to be
informed of their favourite artists
not entertained. The black text
boxes makes the cover lines
standout and fulfils genre
conventions of interesting design
and features that are unique to that
brand. Continuing this onto my
contents page shows consistency
Using the baby sky blue
only once on the cover
highlights the significance
of the link to that colour
and looks visually
interesting as a pattern
amongst the cover lines.
The use of column and
lines is more noticeable
with this between the
greys,
* Pull out quote and
differences in font
slightly show magazine
conventions. This
variation used for each
cover line gives is a
more professional
quality. This was my
only quote and slight
form of plug on my
cover. I decided to use
grey because it was a
colour that worked well
in co-ordinating with the
black and white
photography which
looked slightly grey-
scale. I helps the blue
stand out between the
two greys . I didn’t use
any additional puffs,
plugs or stand out
colour choices because
I wanted to keep a
simplicity that suited the
genre conventions and
show off the background
mise-en-scene more.
This would have been
hidden if I had what
looked like stickers
slapped over my main
image to make it look
tacky.
*
The repetition of blue font and colour with black text
box shows a consistency in design and relates to the
same person highlighted on the cover. It works as a
caption to the photograph well because of the strong
image has a feisty pull quote alongside it. I used this
to relate to my feedback given from my target
audience to show how I was attracting them. The
bold font with the description underneath matches
the style of font layout on the adjacent page. Having
the caption as a pull quote looks more interesting
and appealing to the target audience because it
works similar to a plug without looking obvious or
tacky. I think the positioning isn’t too dominating over
the rest of the page but it highlighted enough to
stand out.
The repetition
of masthead
for the
contents page
title shows the
consistency in
design by
relating to the
front cover,
I’ve used the
same
technique of
overlapping
the image with
the text to give
the brand a
significant
look. This
fulfilment of
convention
makes the
magazine look
more
professional
but also sticks
to the
convention of
a quirky indie
magazine.
The repetition of mise-en-scene as the photography set to show it’s a music
magazine, fulfilling the conventions of the genre as well. The use of black and white
photography throughout matches the front cover and represents the conventions of
attracting target audience I looked at during my research and planning. The
consistency of design adds professionalism and the look of a real media product.
The repetition of
background colour
throughout keeps the
consistency of design and
colour scheme. It attracts
the target audience by
keeping a constant theme
and showing the
conventions of the genre
through connotations of
colour. Grey can be seen
as thoughtful, something
that reflects the indie
music and artists.
The use of social
media represents the
target audience
through age. It attracts
them through interest
and lifestyle, this
matches my research
and planning. It
appeals to their other
past times, so by
combining both music
and other ways to
spend time it conveys
and link and feel of
attraction and
The layout of text matches the caption on the
photograph, showing a consistency in design layout. It
shows the conventions of a music magazine which
should appeal to a music fan. The contents include the
cover lines on the front cover linking with what’s
advertised on the front cover to what’s actually inside.
The descriptions appeal to the target audience by giving
them a hint into what they want to read about and use
forms of features that they would expect to see (article,
interview, biography etc.) in a music magazine. Not
labelling every page shows the conventions of a real
magazine, I have used short amounts of text appeal to a
young demographic and represent an image focused
target audience (links to instagram/twitter/tumblr) who
use social media sites that focus on using images rather
than blocks of text.
The repetition of black text boxes to highlight headings
matches the design on the front cover to keep the
consistency, The use of the blue font colour uses the key
colour of the issue and looks visual. It connotates to the
indie genre to attract and appeal to the target audience.
The repetition mise-en-scene shows the genre and is
relevant to music. It contrasts against the lighter
black background to stand out and show the
representation of a modern music scene. It keeps
the consistency of design throughout the front
cover, contents and DPS.
The one column of text
looks really obviously
placed and adds a sense
of importance to what is
said. The consistent use
of one grey background
keeps the genre colour
conventions throughout. It
co-ordinates well with the
black and white
photographs.
The youthful and
energetic image
shows my inclusion of
feedback and how I
have used movement
to represent the young
target audience and
appealed to what they
find stimulating to find
in a music magazine.
It adds a sense of life
to the stereotyped
indie music which
conventionally is very
thoughtful. I have
included this to blend
with the stereotype
and not seem two
dimensional.
The use of a two shot
in a casual manner
was something that
was positively fedback
to me, I wanted to
include the thoughts I
was given and having
a similar image to the
cover keeps design
consistency and style.
It features the mise-
en-scene to attract
and appeal to the
target audience and
shows off the genre
conventions.
This is an image that was well received amongst my target audience,
the red edit over it adds a moodiness and attitude to the image and
uses the conventions of how youths are seen in today’s media. I have
kept my male artist in a hat throughout because it shows the quirky
conventions of the style of artists and their representations, target
audience and genre.
The repetition of blue
colour scheme and black
text box highlights the
subtitle and design
consistency that is kept
throughout my three
elements. It stands out
because it has only been
used once. It uses chatty
language to give the style
of the feature and relates
to the young target
audience, which should
attract and appeal to
them. It’s an informal
address that adds a
relevant sense of
communication. The
vocabulary is fairly basic,
but guides the audience
into the feature with ease.
The repetition of including an internet association keeps the target
audience in mind and shows the representation of the younger
generation of today’s western culture. It relates back to the contents
page, with the representation fulfilling the stereotype that connotates
to how indie music is seen and communicated with it’s target
audience. It communicates the ideology that indie musicians promote
online and get their word of mouth through videos and web
association. It also matches the youtube nation and how the 16-26
demographic use and consume the media. The idea of exclusivity
and content only they will know about is something that will attract
the target audience and appeal to their want to be individual and
treated like a members only club (links to the jacket fashion).
This look and pose was
commented on in my
target audience
feedback and I think this
shot was the best one to
attract and appeal to
that. The purple edit is
calming, which contrasts
to the harsh tone this
image could portray but
now looks soft and
relevant to the genre.
The use of age brackets
fulfils the conventions of a
real media product but
also points out the target
audience is young. Being
in the middle (roughly) of
the 16-26 bracket shows
it’s not just for teenagers
it’s for early adults. The
font choice is like a
newspaper, or a novel
which stereotypically fits
the ideology of their
lifestyle choice. This link
to other lifestyle aspects
should attract and appeal
to them because it shows
a connection and
understanding of them
which gives the magazine
a sense of personal
communication. Which
adds another appeal.
The use of blog style of writing with catchy sounds and
play on words is presented in an intellectual way to
attract and appeal to the target audience’s interest in
education and internet use (communication and relaxing
past time). It gives the article an upbeat tone which
would relate to the style young adults would want to
read and keeps it fresh and modern, The language isn’t
too colloquial that it couldn’t be appreciated by other
audience's but it keeps it middle class and entertaining.
The description and factual information keeps to the
conventions of a magazine and homes in on the genre
through what is being discussed.
*The turquoise edit
adds visual appeal to
this well received
image that I wanted to
include because of
audience response.
The image’s style
looks professional.
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