r&p draft 5 part 4
TRANSCRIPT
Whole film ReviewPart K
• Main actor being a Model, but she gets to much pressure in her work
place.
So the girl feels like she is fat when she is actually skinny but she think she
doesn’t get enough modelling audition because she is too fat
• All her friends try to help her, but she always says she is fine but
whenever her friends want to go out to eat and have fun she always
says no
• One day her friend asks her to go our with her but she says she needs
to go home.
• When she arrives she doesn’t feel well, eats then starts to force her self
vomiting. Then she opens the bath tap and tries to kill her self.
• Her friend keep calling her, they don’t know what is going on. They all
get scared and decide to check up on her but she doesn’t open the
door. Her mum gets home, they all get in and when they see her they
call the ambulance.
• She is in critical status but when she gets through then everyone helps
her to get into another modelling job.
What will happen in the
Opening Sequence
• Melanie leaves school with her friend Aurora.
• ,Aurora asks if she wants to grab something to eat, and Melanie says No.
• She goes home ( walks up the stairs ) Drops her stuff in her bed room and goes to the
kitchen to grab something to eat.
• Goes to her bed room, looks at magazines… Clothes off / and looks at her self in the
mirror to see how she looks compare to the magazine models. She puts a robe on.
• She goes to the toilet and makes her self feel sick ( two finger down her throat )
Then she opens the bath water tab and takes the robe off…
• Finishes showing her arms outside the bath and her feet are white..
Part K
Shot list Shot/Angles Description
1.Establishing shot/ two shot As Melane and Aurora walks out of school
2-3. Over the shoulder shot As they are talking in front of school.
4 Establishing shot Saying goodbye to each other.
5. Long shot
6. Mid shotMelane walking home.
7. Close up shot Showing her face/weak
8. Long shot Opening the 1st door
9. Tilt As walking up the stairs
10-12. Mid shot -Opening the 2nd door-entering the door-walking to room
13. Close up shot Putting bag on floor
14. Long shot Walking in the kitchen ( to go to the fridge)
15, 16, 18. Mid shot
17. Close up shot
Opening the fridge to get some food.TransitionPutting the food into microwaveLeaving the KitchenEating the food
Part L
Shot/Angles Description
19-21. Long shot Entering the roomLooking at the mirrorTaking off the clothes
22-23. Close up Of ShirtThen of feet and trousers
24. Long shot Looking in the mirror from side
25. Close up shot Of the face in the mirror
26. Long shot Runs to toilet
27. Extreme Close up shot Putting finger down her throat
28. Long shot Showing her tries to vomit
29. Low Angle Entering the bathTaking the robes down
30. Over the head Inside bath tab
31. Low angle Bath shows arm and feet
32. Close up
33. Moving from down to up (tilt)
34. Moving from down to up (tilt)
Of opened water tap
Titles
Credits
Part L
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How are we applying the
Theories of Todorov Part N
Vanessa Justino
Theories of
Todorov
How we are applying Picture Anatation of image
Equilibrium
To be Balanced
Girl goes to school to studyGood relationship with Family. Acts like a Normal Teenager even with the issue she has (Bulimia ) She is a model but doesn’t like it because of pressure putting on her
By Melanie looking sab and straight face expression on in this picture is shows that shehas lots of pressure on her and have been have difficulties in dealing with them
Disequilibrium
To be Unbalanced
Eating disorder, when friends looks down to her, looks at models pictures in magazine and feel fat
New Equilibrium The reason why we are not including New balanced its because the girl doesn't find a way to became balanced again during the opening sequence .
However at the end of the whole film, she has asked for help and continued with her career.
By Melanie smiling in this picture is shows that she is more confortable about her self and accepts the way she looks also shows that she has gone back to what she used to do and its happy with her job.