short film analysis – the date
TRANSCRIPT
Ahmed Khan
The film opening title text “The Date” is used with a simple text similarly to our short film. This is used to give the film a basic look, a storyline which will not be complicated.
The title is placed on top a pan with boiling water which foreshadows the film to have some form of cooking. Meals are one of the most common types of dates, this connotes that there will be a date taking place which will be done while having a meal.
Following the title we see the opening
scene where the protagonist of the film
is preparing a meal. The music syncs
with the cutting of the vegetables. With
the hasty sounds of the knife and
music combine it emphasises the
protagonists comprehension of the
arrival of his date. However the scene
feels calm due to the visuals of the
kitchen and the actors clothing. The
clothing is casual and the lighting of
the kitchen gives us a placid feeling.
Here the audience know for sure
why the protagonist was cooking a
meal as he sets the table. The
director continuously uses
establishing shots which
emphasises the importance of this
date and where the main course of
action will take place.
The non diegetic music‟s tempo
increases gradually as the film
progresses, this connotes the
protagonists is becoming more
rushed as he comes closer for the
arrival of his date.
In these scenes the director does well
to reach the conventions of a
romantic film with the use of; flowers,
candles, wine and wine glasses. The
various shots connotes how much this
date means to the protagonist as we
him carefully placing objects on the
table with precise perfection. This is
also shown with the characters
positioning and how his whole body‟s
drawn towards certain objects as he
places them on the table,
emphasising the importance for this
date to go perfectly.
In this scene we see the character
cleaning himself up in the bathroom, this
scene builds up the humour through the
way the character behaves for example
in the shower he mimes to himself as if
his singing in his thoughts, we also see
him doing gruesome things such as using
the same cotton bud stick for his nose
and ears. His facial expressions when he
struggles to cleans certain bits adds to
the comical approach to this film. The
audience often find the discomfort of
others and struggling to do things with
ease quite humorous, the film does well
to exaggerate this and also used extreme
close ups to create a focal point on the
screen
The scene swiftly moves on and here
we see the use of the establishing shot
to create the awareness to the
audience that the character is now in a
bedroom. We see the character still in
excitement as he idiotically teases
himself in front of the mirror. This again
builds up the comical approach to this
film. We also see the stereotypical
setting of a males room as it is quite
cluttered. We also see a blue being
quite prominent in this scene
emphasising the stereotype of a males
room as blue is overseen as a male
colour.
The director in collaboration with editor uses
the effect of jump cut to shows quick
changes between to scenes. This is used to
show the character trying on different attires
as he wants to look perfect. We start to see
that his date should arrive any moment as
the character takes a look at his watch and
is fully dressed for his date. His generally
attitude changes in these shots which
connotes he has calmed down either
because his nervous or he generally wants
to act mature in front of his date.
In this scene the whole atmosphere
and changes with the pace of the
music slowing down. This
automatically makes the audiences
generally mood change as they
know something has gone wrong
just by the sound. With the visuals
the director uses a clock as an
overlay faded upon another shot
showing how the character is
making phone calls while laying on a
bed which connotes his been doing
it for so long that he cannot be
bothered to sit up and make the
phone call.
Non-diegetic sound is used to
connote to the audience that no one
is answering the phone as we here
the following, „the number your
trying to call cannot be recognised‟
this connotes that his date is
completely ignoring him and by now
the audience feel sympathetic
towards the character.
The director builds up the sad atmosphere
even further by adding more upsetting
scenes. Close up is used to shows the
despair and disappointment the characters
feeling as there's a focal point towards his
face. The director also emphasises the
characters feeling of loneliness as his been
stood up for a date by having him sit alone
at the dinner table while he stares at the
other end which is completely empty. This
makes the audience keep feeling
sympathetic towards the character.
The atmosphere drastically changes with the upbeat tempo increasing in the non diegetic score music. We also see quite a lot of aggression shown as the character eats, from the way he holds his knife and folk tightly to how quick each shot changes which connotes the character is eating expeditiously. Even through the aggression we see glimpses of humour when the character finishes his food he goes to the food that he prepared for his date, which connotes the stereotypical view of men being greedy and eat much more than women.
The characters aggression continues as he quickly consumes a bottle of wine often related to a symbol of a romantic date. This connotes the character doesn‟t want to see anything which keeps reminding him of the date which he has been stood up for. We see various shots in a matter of few seconds again showing us the pace in which he consumed the wine which can be overseen with his feelings as he quickly wants the pain to go away. A mid shot has been shown to us by the director in order to show us how the loneliness has left him upset and depressed. The lighting as changed with only one lamp on in the background giving it a touch of darkness which is down excellently to show us the feeling his feeling deep down.
We see the character receive a text,
which creates an enigma to who
might this be as a close up shows the
character also deeply thinking who
this may be. At this point of time the
music is at a steady pace and hasn‟t
changed tempo which takes away
the feeling from the audience that it
may be his date texting him. A clever
technique used by the editor to
disguise the end and shock the
audience.
The shocking truth is revealed to us and the tempo of the non diegetic score music drastically becomes upbeat almost reflecting on the heartbeat of the character who has be the creator of his own downfall for his date. The close up emphasises the shock to the character. The director also shows us the clock which shows us the character has two minutes till his date arrives and he has ate everything which was set for the date. The conventions of a date going wrong in the comedy genre often has someone coming late and the other foolishly devouring all the food.
Towards the end the director keeps the upbeat tempo going however the sound level slowly fades out as the characters date is close by. We get a final look at the character who is presented to be in distress that he has no time to undo his wrongs. The film ends there with a blank screen leaving the audience to imagine what his fate is with his date and leaving the whole conclusion as a cliff hanger with film ending on the sound of a doorbell. The credits are shown but the font and colours are not to extravagant instead there straight forward, similar to the general fluency of the whole film in terms of storyline and editing.