The problems caused by

population aging

Structure problems

-overlapping -disorder

Overlapping sample 1

Ii. Problems 1. labor shortage 2. burden on the family 3. social stress on society to take care of

Overlapping sample 2

Problems 1. higher burden on working adults. 2. increasing burden on society 3. families face with challenges about

providing for the aged

Disorder sample1

Ii.problems 1. burden in family support, welfare and med

icine expenditure 2. deficient defense due to less young men

enrolled 3. labor shortage

Common structure i. Intro Ii. Problems A, B,C Iii. Solutions To A, to B, to C Iv. ending 1. clear cut division between points within one

paragraph 2. avoid one solution for both problems

body outline sample 1 Problems 1. burden on the younger—no time and energy 2. financial pressure on society---for pension and medicine 3. labor shortage

Solutions 1. support from the government and society 2. saving habit, donation; perfect the welfare system and

community medical service 3. immigrate , raise retirement age, boost productivity

Body outline 2 Problems For the elderly themselves: psychological problems: loneliess, sense

of uselessness ---influence the families

For the younger---burden: no time, no enough money, no energy

For society: labor shortage, pension burden, insufficient medical service for the old.

Solutions ----ageing industry, diversified entertainment forms universities for the

aged

----favor to the double income family with the elderly: like paid leave, professional day care

language

With the advance of society, family and social structure has changed dramatically.

At first, the labor shortage is the main problem since the labor supply depends on the working adult population.

Nowadays, with the development of medical science, the average life standard all over the world is going up. Many countries and cities are facing the population aging.

Key words stand out

Not outstanding 1

For old people themselves, there are also some troubles. With the diminished number of younger generation to accompany them, the deficiency of mental demand seems to be biggest problem.

In the first place, because of the dependency of older person with different community resources required to support young people, burden is much heavier.

Specific / concrete key words

Government can encourage companies to take more social responsibility.

--by tax favor, with favourable policies, wit h certain priviledges

Secondly, we should make full use of the people