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8/10/2019 Vietnam 1.10:Loi b cc vn v chnh sa (o to chnh sa trong vit vn bn ting anh)

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o to chnh sa trong vit vn bn ting anhChnh sa cho r rang

Loi b cc vn v chnh sa

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Loi ! c"c v#n $% v% chnh sa(Eli&inate &odifier prole&s)

Cc th.;t ngZ sa _i cUn Ehi $%c `tbn cnh cc t , bn ,.-n sa _i?

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' d

Og.7n ,R.To 055E in shaE5I 5X5rcis5 is a ,.st or anathA5t5?

a _i

2n athA5t5 ,.st 5X5rcis5 to 055E in shaE5?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.dh5n an 5ngin55rI c.sto,5r satisactionsho.A6 b5 att5,Et56?

a _i

2n 5ngin55r sho.A6 att5,Et to satis7 th5c.sto,5r?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.2t5r si,.Aating a r5aA 5nviron,5ntI acons5ns.s \as r5ach56?

a _i

2t5r th5 r5s5arch5rs si,.Aat56 a r5aA5nviron,5ntI a cons5ns.s \as r5ach56?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.e5ing ra6ioactiv5I th5 t5chnician han6A56th5 ,at5riaAs \ith 5Xtr5,5 car5?

a _i

Th5 t5chnician han6A56 th5 ra6ioactiv5,at5riaAs \ith 5Xtr5,5 car5?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.5v5raA inv5stigations caAibrat56 5rrorsr5Aat56 to ca,5ra 6istortionI \hich occ.rr56

in th5 MMJs?

a _i5v5raA inv5stigations 6.ring th5 MMJscaAibrat56 5rrors r5Aat56 to ca,5ra 6istortion?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.Th5 E565strian \arn56 th5 Eassing car \ithan angr7 Aoo0?

a _i

Th5 E565strian \ith an angr7 Aoo0 \arn56th5 Eassing car?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.Th5 c5AA.Aar ,an.act.ring s7st5, has b55n incr5asingA7aEEAi56 to in6.str7I \hich is an i,Eortant gro.E t5chnoAog7aEEAication?

a _iTh5 c5AA.Aar ,an.act.ring s7st5,I an i,Eortant gro.Et5chnoAog7 aEEAicationI has b55n incr5asingA7 aEEAi56 toin6.str7?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.2 g5n5tic aAgorith, is aEEroEriat5 or th5 ,achin5fco,Eon5nt gro.Eing ErobA5, \hich is a rob.st a6aEtiv5oEti,iation ,5tho6 bas56 on ErinciEA5s o nat.raA5voA.tion?

a _i

+5n5tic aAgorith,I a rob.st a6aEtiv5 oEti,iation ,5tho6bas56 on ErinciEA5s o nat.raA 5voA.tionI is aEEroEriat5 orth5 ,achin5fco,Eon5nt gro.Eing ErobA5,?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.To 5nco.rag5 a6.At Ait5rac7I E.bAic r5a6ingroo,s hav5 b55n 5stabAish56 in th5 cit7?

a _i

To 5nco.rag5 a6.At Ait5rac7I th5 gov5rn,5nthas 5stabAish56 E.bAic r5a6ing roo,s in th5cit7?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.dh5n Aogging onto th5 nt5rn5tI co,EAicat56Erogra,,ing tas0s ar5 .nn5c5ssar7?

a _i

Co,EAicat56 Erogra,,ing tas0s ar5.nn5c5ssar7 \h5n Aogging onto th5 nt5rn5t?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.2s a chiA6I ,7 ,oth5r 5nco.rag56 ,5 tor5a6 ,an7 boo0s?

a _i

*7 ,oth5r 5nco.rag56 ,5 to r5a6 ,an7boo0s \h5n \as a chiA6?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.^nt5ring th5 aEart,5ntI th5 Aights ha6 b55nA5t on?

a _i

^nt5ring th5 aEart,5ntI notic56 that th5Aights ha6 b55n A5t on?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.e5ing ,a65 o concr5t5I th5 constr.ction \or05rha6 6iic.At7 in br5a0ing th5 Eav5,5nt?

a _iTh5 constr.ction \or05r ha6 6iic.At7 in br5a0ing

th5 concr5t5 Eav5,5nt?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.nabA5 to Ea7 th5ir ,onthA7 biAAsI th5 inanc5co,Ean7 Erovi656 soA.tions or 65btfri665n

cons.,5rs?

a _i

Th5 inanc5 co,Ean7 Erovi656 soA.tions or65btfri665n cons.,5rs .nabA5 to Ea7 th5ir,onthA7 biAAs?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.2t5r 5Xa,ining avaiAabA5 oEtionsI 5asibA5Ea7,5nt sch56.A5s \5r5 arrang56 b7 th5 inanciaA

cons.Atant?

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2t5r 5Xa,ining avaiAabA5 oEtionsI th5 inanciaAcons.Atant arrang56 5asibA5 Ea7,5nt sch56.A5s?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.j5gist5ring or th5 aAA s5,5st5rI ,an7 5A5ctiv5co.rs5s \5r5 s5A5ct56 b7 th5 st.65nt?

a _i

Th5 st.65nt s5A5ct56 ,an7 5A5ctiv5 co.rs5s \h5n

r5gist5ring or th5 aAA s5,5st5r?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.e5or5 ,oving into th5 st.65nt 6or,itor7I .AA Ea7,5ntor th5 s5,5st5r \as r5W.ir56 b7 th5 schooA?

a _iTh5 schooA r5W.ir56 .AA Ea7,5nt or th5 s5,5st5rb5or5 on5 co.A6 ,ov5 into th5 st.65nt 6or,itor7?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.2s a co,E.t5r instr.ctorI st.65nts ,.st b5cAos5A7 ,onitor56?

a _i2 co,E.t5r instr.ctor ,.st cAos5A7 ,onitor

st.65nts?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.To 5Xc5A in aca65,icsI conc5ntration s0iAAs,.st b5 65v5AoE56?

a _iTo 5Xc5A in aca65,icsI a st.65nt ,.st65v5AoE conc5ntration s0iAAs?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.To co,E5nsat5 th5 invit56 sE5a05r or hisEarticiEationI hot5A acco,,o6ations an6 ro.n6triE

airar5 \5r5 Erovi656 b7 th5 con5r5nc5 co,,itt55?a _iTo co,E5nsat5 th5 invit56 sE5a05r or hisEarticiEationI th5 con5r5nc5 co,,itt55 Erovi656hot5A acco,,o6ations an6 ro.n6triE airar5?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.dh5n aEEA7ing or gra6.at5 schooA a6,issionI,7 aca65,ic a6visor gav5 ,5 vaA.abA5 insight?

a _i*7 aca65,ic a6visor gav5 ,5 vaA.abA5 insight\h5n \as aEEA7ing or gra6.at5 schooAa6,ission?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.To ,a05 so.n6 a6,inistrativ5 65cisionsI ,an7E5rsE5ctiv5s sho.A6 b5 consi65r56?

a _i2 ,anag5r sho.A6 consi65r ,an7 E5rsE5ctiv5s to

,a05 so.n6 a6,inistrativ5 65cisions?


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' d

Og.7n ,R.dhiA5 scroAAing 6o\n th5 scr55nI th5 ,onitor 6isEAa7s.665nA7 t.rn56 o?

a _idhiA5 th5 co,E.t5r .s5r \as scroAAing 6o\n th5 scr55nIth5 ,onitor 6isEAa7 s.665nA7 t.rn56 o?


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