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| REPORTING & WRITING
Verbal Storytelling
Headlines primary | secondary
Stories traditional feature | quick reads/infographs
Captions ID | summary | expanded
Headline | Story | Caption
< Headline
< Story
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Getting StoriesInterview every individual in school Find out what they think, feel, say, do
Uncover entertaining ways to tell stories
Interview substantial numbers of individuals for each story idea Tell the complete story
Offer differing perspectives
Interview through polls and surveys, focus groups and one-on-one inquiries
Crafting QuestionsFive W’s and H Ask who, what, when, where, why, how
Objective short answer Provide factual and numerical details
Multiple choice Offer readers a collection of details and opinion
Subjective Gain quotable, anecdotal reactions from readers
HeadlinesPrimary Captures readers’ attention with key word/phrase
Secondary Dates year with details personalizing coverage
Formats kicker | wicket | hammer | tripod
Band NoiseClass chants CostumesCheerleaders Face paintFight song Red & whiteFootball team Skits
Noise Boys Toys Joys Poise
Kicker headline | Maize South Middle School | Wichita, KS
Wicket headline | Maize South Middle School | Wichita, KS
Hammer headline | Maize South Middle School | Wichita, KS
Tripod headline | Maize South Middle School | Wichita, KS
StoriesTraditional FeatureTell the five W’s and H. Begin with catchy lead followed by short paragraphs featuring meaningful quotes and transitional paragraphs contains facts and figures.
Quick Reads/InfographsTell facts or opinions in a concise and visually engaging presentation. They’re often packed with graphics.
Traditional Feature
Lead
Quote
Transition
Quote Conclusion
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
Glenbrook South High School | Glenview, IL
CaptionsIDIdentifies individuals and offers a brief explanation of the photos’ content.
SummaryHighlights the most important aspects of the five W’s and H.
ExpandedAnswers the five W’s and H and provides additional details, often direct quotes from the individuals pictured.
CaptionsLead-in Makes a recognizable verbal/visual connection
First sentence Answers most important five W’s and H
Written in present tense
Second sentence Adds insight not obvious in photo
Written in past tense
Quotable reaction to content of photo
Ident |
FLAG FOOTBALL.Senior Mark Bellman, four-year letterman.
Summary |
FLAG FOOTBALL.To the roar of the home fans, senior Mark Bellman leads the varsity players onto the field against rival University High School in the last game of the district season. For the first time in eight years, the team advanced to regional play-offs shutting out the Tigers, 21-0.
Expanded |
FLAG FOOTBALL.To the roar of the home fans, senior Mark Bellman leads the varsity players onto the field against rival University High School in the last game of the district season. For the first time in eight years, the team advanced to regional play-offs shutting out the Tigers, 21-0. “When I was injured in the third game of the season, I just knew my senior year would be the biggest bummer ever. However, when my teammates unanimously voted to let me lead them onto the field the rest of the games, I knew I was still a part of the team and became its biggest fan and cheerleader from the sidelines,” said Bellman, a four-year letterman.
Copy EditingAvoid boring nouns and weak verbs Students, members, players
Is, are, was, were, be, being, been, appears
Keep paragraphs short
Avoid word overuse and labels, names Focus on first five-seven words; avoid a, an and the
Don’t use “this year” or overuse school name, mascot
Eliminate editorializing Delete opinionated words like busy, successful, diligent, winning, hard-working, difficult
Be objective avoiding first and second person
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