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STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM BY
SAID ABID S/O SAID TAHIR(AFGHANISTAN)
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In three weeks I will design an information poster with 10 colorful pictures created by me in English and Pashto about how the Afghan chiefs can cook cheap (Anna, 2010, Para 5) different types of spicy, sour, and hot food (Davis, 1957, Para1) to help the restaurants in Kabul to reduce the prices of the food they sell (Numbeo, 2012).
A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL
G01 Complete Student Name #01 Mr. Jaime 10-Nov-13
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM
A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]
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Problem Statement 1
Details(Numbeo, 2013)
Numbeo. (2009-2013, April 13). Food Prices in Afghanistan. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from Numbeo: http://www.numbeo.com/food- prices/country_result.jsp?
country=Afghanistan
Urgency (Anna,2010, Para 5)
Souza, A. (2010, November). Brief 51: Rising food prices and coping strategies – household level evidence from Afghanistan. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from Ifad: http://www.ifad.org/drd/agriculture/51.htm Theory
(Davis, 2013)
Divis, J. (1957, March 12). Hot Spices and Spicy Blends - Information and Spice Variations. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from The pice house:
http://www.thespicehouse.com/spices-by-list/hot-spices-and-spicy-blends
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In three weeks I will design an information poster with 5 pictures created by me in English and Pashto about three ways of enhancing children learning to enable junior high school teachers (Resource center, 2012) in Afghanistan , so that they can improve their lecture delivery (Amara,2012, Para 3) by using textbooks, photo caption, and visual strategies (Sieff, 2012).
A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS FAIL11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL
G01 Complete Student Name #02 Mr. Jaime 10-Nov-13
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM
A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]
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Problem Statement 2
Details(Save the Children, 2012)
Save the Children. (2012, March 5). Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://resourcecentre.savethechildren.se/: http://resourcecentre.savethechildren.se/start/countries/afghanistan
Urgency(Sieff , 2012)
Sieff, K. (2012, December 27). Afghan children flee homes for the chance to learn. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://www.smh.com.au/: http://www.smh.com.au/world/afghan-children-flee-homes-for-the-chance-to- learn-20121226-2bwfn.html
Theory (Amara, 2012, Para 3)
Amara, F. M. (2012, June 27). Theories and Practical Steps for Delivering Effective Lectures. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://www.omicsonline.org/:
http://www.omicsonline.org/2161-0711/2161-0711-2-158.php
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In three weeks I will design an information poster with 9 colorful pictures created by me in English to rebuild the health care system in Afghanistan (R. Acerra,, Iskyan, Qureshi,, & Sharma, 2009, Para 1) such as by improving the number of doctors, clinics, and hospitals (Hansen, et al., 2008), so that the Afghan people can easily get access to those places and can get a good treatment (BMJ, 1998) .
A* A B C PASS FAIL01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaning A* A B C PASS FAIL02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errors A* A B C PASS FAIL03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-level A* A B C PASS FAIL04. Specific Output: A clear product for grading A* A B C PASS FAIL05. Viable Output: Doable before deadline A* A B C PASS FAIL06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposal A* A B C PASS FAIL07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgent A* A B C PASS FAIL08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantified A* A B C PASS FAIL09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needs A* A B C PASS FAIL10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nouns A* A B C PASS11. Original Input: Use of elements of originality A* A B C PASS FAIL12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative support A* A B C PASS FAIL
G01 Complete Student Name #03 Mr. Jaime 10-Nov-13
ASSESSMENT RUBRIC: STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM
A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]
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Problem Statement 3
• Details• (Hansen, et al., 2008)
Hansen, P. M., Peters, D. H., Niayesh, H., P, L., Singh, Dwivedi, V., et al. (2008, April 24). Measuring and managing progress in the establishment of basic health services: the Afghanistan health sector balanced scorecard. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/: http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/hpm.931/abstract
• Urgency• (R. Acerra,, Iskyan, Qureshi,, & Sharma, 2009)
R. Acerra,, J., Iskyan, K., Qureshi,, Z. A., & Sharma, R. K. (2009). Rebuilding the health care system in Afghanistan: an overview of primary care and emergency services.
International Journal of Emergency Medicine, pp 77-82,.
• Theory• (BMJ, 1998)
BMJ. (1998). The importance of theories in health care. British Medical Journal, 1007-1010.
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See how, in APA, which titles are in quote marks and which titles are in italics.
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The in-text citations should link to the reference. The reference should show the short website address, but the hyperlink should open to the article, not to the homepage.
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