Designs Suggested improvments

The feedback I got on my draft said that colours work well for the design and the quotes were also appropriate for the design because they thought it was funny. They thought that the font could be better for the quote parts of shirt.

I got feedback again on the redesign and they thought that I should change the quote on the shirt to “I will take away everything you love” as it would be funnier for the balloon shirt and keep the balloon hand drawn. They also said I should make sure that the black shirt is for the right audi-ence, or it might cause problems for me.

The feedback I recieved on the wallpaper, was that the blue balloon compliments the orange background well, and that the composition worked well for it, but thought that I should give the text a bit more and that I should give it a drop shadow and change thext text colour to a blue, andthat I should also and some red to compliment the green balloon.

The feedback I got on the redesign was that the text was still a bit hard to see so I should make and thought that I should make the orange background a bit lighter and to make the wallpaper smaller, so it can repeat more.

I got feedback on my initial design, saying that I should make the look cleaner and that I should make it a vector and saying that I should take the text out, and give the it more room for other bits of the icon.

The feedback for the second design was that the colors need to be more complimentory and that the character should be more central in the icon and and should make the colours brighter.